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Posted: 20 March 2011 at 2:31pm | IP Logged



17th JUNE 2011

The incident which dealt with the team last month was so horrible and terrible…. every ones FAMILY involved with the situation handled by their loved ones… FREDDIE'S wife called to ABHIJEET and in crying told him that her HUBBY was dealing the hard part of his life… he dreamt about bad on every night and always talking about BLOOD RAIN…. whispering about sum SOUND…. she was very disturbed about her HUBBY mental and physical health…. and wanted a BREAK for her HUBBY…. here KAJAL brother also distracted to take the issue of her sister…. she scared with almost everything… a SOUND… a ROOM and specially about FIRE even she felt ASH on her whole body every time…. she did not enter on any place where she felt a minimum tone of FIRE…. VIVEK family contacted to ACP and told that their young CHAMP was mostly murmuring about SNEAKS and BLOOD and always tried to remove the STAINS of BLOOD from his cloths, body and mind….. SACHIN member's complaints that due to any MISSION… SACHIN lost his all focus now… he was mostly checking the walls searching something…  DAYA tried a painful effort to cope with his mental and physical state… his body got almost much WOUNDs in these THREE months as compared to 13 years of dedication in CID…. he tried hard BUT!!!… he always wanted that every team member was in contact with him.... he did not leave ABHIJEET either for a second…. even when he took showers… DAYA was at the doorstep… and when ABHIJEET missing just for a moment… he screamed and took his NAME madly and need his presence on the moment at any cost…. his SLEEP timings was at the minimum level…. ABHIJEET naturally a tough GUY but it did not mean that he was so much tough… he was on MEDICATION…. On other hand ACP himself came on normal state by the help of sum strong YOGA exercise…. HIGHER AUTHORIES had lots of complaints about the careless HANDLING of cases…. Media and People had many problems and they concluded that CID solved cases with determination in earlier days but lose interest now a day's… all team were totally diminished… KAJAL applied to HIGHER AUTHORIES for posting her in some other city…. while SACHIN, FREDDIE and VIVEK sent the application for few days holiday….. ABHIJEET be backed because of ACP…. he knew that if HE be missing ACP shattered…. while DAYA obviously did not leave anywhere without ABHIJEET….. so TRIO will be at their original position but this time really not in good sense of physical and mental approach…. this time NO team member took any interest to find out something or dig out any CLUE about the CULPRIT…. either they did not had any CLUE about… the BLOOD samples found on their torn fabrics were of ANIMALS… made bit DILUTED and STICKY with the help of adding SALINE on it… the HANDCUFFS had NO PRINTS…. even on those 4 PASSWORDs…  ABHIJEET forgot the LAST one… while the THREE (United, Kunal, Killed) was not fulfilled any CRITERIA from the PRESENT as well PAST CULPRIT of CID…   ACP after 2 days…. called ABHIJEET…. and discussed him that might be team ABSENCE created some changes in both forms although on mentality of OFFICERS or may be CULPRIT will take any step and it will go WRONG…. so he ordered that DUO moved to GOA… and VIVEK n FREDDIE will take a trip to KHANDALA…. while SACHIN and KAJAL be at MUMBAI with him…. ABHIJEET did not agree coz he wanted ACP also moved with them…. BUT ACP did not take any interest on his idea… he also ordered to all team to again change their MOBILE SET… SIM…. EMAIL ID… and HOUSE for few weeks… NO entrance of any NEW Issues… Friends…. Backups… also MINIMIZE to contact with their INFORMERS as well… although he knew that all was totally a waste and NOTHING!!!

17th June 2011

18th JUNE 2011

At evening… both pairs of DUO were prepared to fly out of town…. suddenly got ACP call… who called them to be at his house… where HE and DCP will want to discuss something…. they all moved at ACP house… where saw KAJAL n SACHIN also at door…. ABHIJEET rang the bell… ACP servant came out…. took them at DRAWING ROOM and moved back to call to ACP about their arrival…. they chat with themselves…. servant came again and called VIVEK… FREDDIE and SACHIN…. that DCP wanted to talk them in PERSONAL… so THRICE moved at upstairs where DCP waited for them…. after few minutes… servant again came and called rest to move at ACP room…. they entered…. say GOOD EVENING to ACP and on REPLIED…. heard SOUND!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ACP watched himself in a BIG room… very clean with totally WHITE MARBLED texture…. room contained THREE PLASMA SCREENS on his front wall….. ACP was tied with a CHAIN on a very comfortable chair…. there was a simple BLACK color WOODEN table placed on his RIGHT side…. ACP hairs one by one stood up… the table contained a 36 bore GUN was placed upside of a 2 by 4 WHITE color CARD…. he tried to move his hands and foots…. but unable to displace any of his instruments….. at once SHINNY light turned off…. and BLANK SCREENS played some FRAMES….

They woke up with some VOICES heard from intervals…. sum unusual VOICES but their MINDs recognized those VOICE…. sometimes from FAR that their EAR DRUMS only felt the VIBRATION…. and sometimes very NEAR that they felt the SLIVA on their SKINS with the initiation of VOICE….  after the fought between MIND and EYES…. suddenly MIND clicked and EYES opened…. pushed back and stroked with HIGH PEAK scream out from THREE THROATS which created the effects of DOULBE STEREO sound……  the room was COLD…. very much…. their OUTFITS were not enough to do any special task and  save them from that extreme… even their GOOSEBUMPS were in SLEEP condition due to COLD weather…. tied in a CIRCLE with backside… only felt each others presence with the TOUCH factor… hands with CUFS and foots with CHAINS… body and fabrics were totally wetted with BLOOD tone and tacky touch and because of MOISTURE on environment…. and MILLIONS of SLEPT GOOSEBUMPS awoke at the similar minute felt by all THREE…. when watched THREE BULL DOGS tied by ROPES with biting NAILS and hungry TONGUES waited to PLAY with them…..

ACP screamed….. he tried hard to release himself…. but not successful….. he called…. gave voices…. asked…. BUT!!!!

The person was lying on the WOODEN panel…. sound slept…. very calmed and quite….. the other one opened eyes…. sat on floor…. very HOT…. contained BLOOD…. which were simply bubble up… but in very LOW amount… the sticky combination of BURN and SMELL told to stand up… did not understand anything… tried to move but after SIX steps… be backed on the spot…. got a CHAIN on FOOT….. there was a SHARP DAGGER placed on RIGHT way….. while watching…. another person woke up…. lying on WOODEN bench… and felt a HOT touch came out beneath the bench… which lightly roasted the body HAIRS…… even his SMELL opening felt that BURNT… turned HEAD and moved eye balls and focused when watched the other one…. tried to stood BUT…. FEET were totally tied with CHAIN…. and the LEFT hand on CUFF…. saw a GUN behind and a SHARP CUTTER on the HEAD….. the focus point was all PEOPLE have NO FOOTWARE…..  

ACP again SHOUTED in extreme…. he wanted to hear that SOUND….. which irritated him ALOT…..

SOUND: kesa lug raha hay VIVEK??? FREDDIE tum ro rahay ho??? aur SACHIN kesa hay tumhara zakam???

SOUND: arry bhae…. kuch bolnay ka irada nahi hay aaj…. kyun SACHIN!!!!

SOUND: dekho bhae…. ye meray baray WAFADAR KUTTY hain…. magar becharay BHOOKY hain…. kafi dino say mujhay keh rahay thay kay kisi CID walay ko khanay ka mann ker raha hay!!! ab bhae KUTTY hain tou kya hua…. dil tou kisi ka bhi chah sakta hay na…..

SOUND(after pause): chalo acha ek GAME kheeltay hain…. tum teenu in say laro…. jo jeeta…. wo SIKANDER…. hahahha…… tum sub ki hathkari ki CHABI tum sub kay pass aur CHAMBER ki in ki GARDAN mein hay…. NIKALO aur NIKAL jao….. JALDI…. sirf 10 minutes mein…. waqt kum hay….. buhat kum!!! ACP Sir ko bachana hay….. hain na….. FREDDIE dear…. yaad hain ACP Sir…. hahaha…. aur haan…. shayed phir AASMAN dekhna naseeb na ho…. tou MAARO ya MAR jao…. magar yahan say ZINDA nikal jao…. agar mery KUTTY tum logun ko janay ki ijazat dein tou…. aur SUNO…. un ko SHOR pasand nahi hay….. khayal rakhna….. haan!!!

SOUND: lets START….. come on….. CID…. KUTTUN kay shikanjay mein…. hahahhaha!!!!

FREDDIE shivered body felt by other TWO…. they even did not know what to do this time…. the DOGS looked so HUNGRY…. they all tied with ROPES which maximized the space although they easily took their meal in good mood ….

FREDDIE(in cry): mujhay KUTTUN say buhat darr lagta hay…… VIVEK ab kya hoga!!!

VIVEK: FREDDIE Sir…. aap pareshan na hun…. main(tears in voice) kuch karta hun…. Sir main in KUTTUN ko apni taraf karta hun…. aap CHABI nikalnay ki koshish kijyey ga…..

SACHIN: theek hay…. magar buhat dihaan say…. Sirf 9 minute bachay hain……

VIVEK calmed his mind and body…. he knew… these were NOT those SNEAKS which had already with FULL TUMMIES…. these were HUNGRY DOGS…. and their HUNGER saw in their every attitude… he bit moved… and the DOG attacked… a scream came out from FREDDIE'S mouth…. the THRICE moved coz they tied with each other…. VIVEK bit slipped……..

ACP screamed with high volume VVVVVIVVVVEEEEKKK….. FRRRREDDDDDDIIIIE…. SSSSACCCCHIIIIINNNNNNN…………………

SOUND: ACP…. Ceekho mut……. meray sar mein dard hay…..

ACP(in rash): kaun ho TUM??? kya chahtay ho….. saamnay aaooo!!!!

SOUND: hmmmmm…. kaun hun MAIN!!! aur kya chahta hun??? arry ACP main AAWAAZ hun aur tum ko ek KAHANI sunana chahta hun…..

ACP(harsh): mujhay tumhari koi kahani nahi sunni… KHOLO mujhay… phir dekho…. main kya karta hun!!!

SOUND: hahahha….. haan ACP khool dunga…. jaldi kya hay!!! pehlay KAHANI tou sun lo…..

ACP did not want to hear any SYMPATHASIZE STORY especially rite now…. his all focus point was his SOLDIERS…. but there was no other way out for his EARS except to hear the story…..

SOUND: aaj say 20 saal pehaly…. meray saamnay walay ghar mein ek FAMILY rehti thi…. un ka aik BETA tha…. buhat pyara…. buhat acha….. MAA tou thi nahi… aur BAAP jo subha say jata tou raat mein aata… aur kabhi kabhi tou raat mein bhi nahi aata tha….

 VIVEK screamed…. the COLD weather really played with them… his hand hit the floor with force while… he was just hit the HAIRY body of the ANIMAL bounced back and in response his punched which he used to stop the animal to attack on him got some slimy HAIRS …. the ANIMAL in rash HOWLED and an unusual TERM came out from his mouth….

VIVEK: BHERIYA……. ye WOLF hay…… KUTTA nahi…..

SOUND: hahahha…. tou main nay kub kaha kay ye DOG hay…. main nay tou kaha tha kay ye meray WAFADAR KUTTY hain….. hahahha….

Due to that initial attempt…. the WOLVES felt that the RING FIGHT would begin now…. they moved around and now attempting their attacks with less time difference…..

SOUND: haan…. tou us bacchy say meri DOSTI ho gayii…. kafi akela feel karta tha wo khud ko…. main nay ek do baar hee us kay BAAP ko dekha tha… ek bari JEEP mein aatay jatay…. jub main yahan aata tou wo baccha hee mera wahid DOST hota….. arry ACP tum bore tou nahi ho rahay…… acha chalo…..

ACP EYES totally fixed on the PLASMA SCREEN which showed THRICE struggling and his EARS on SOUND story….

 SACHIN took his step…. his body started shivering…. he tried to attract the WOLF on his part but the WOLF showed that at that time they were much interested in VIVEK…. coz he hit them earlier and initiated the BUZZER… and took NO REVENGE… was not the TRADITION of WOLVARIANS….. their extreme struggling showed THRICE that the ROPES now did not play the role of any barrier between them….

SACHIN calculated the time…. very minimum…. VIVEK at last took out his SNEAKER with the movement of his heal… and tried to throw it far…. his AMULET created an issue so he tried to threw it on his BACKSIDE…. Now he again made a MOVE… with bit ROOM and forcefully threw the SNEAKER far from their LAP…. the WOLF moved with the flash of his eye toward that spot and at that second… VIVEK attacked on one of them… but another WOLF easily felt that his BUDDY was in danger… signaled the 3RD one and all THREE rushed there…. the FIRST WOLF caught by VIVEK pierced his TEETH on his NECK…. the scream came out from SACHIN and FREDDIE…. SACHIN slightly turned his body and tried to hit his body weight to one of the WOLF…. FREDDIE after watching VIVEK situation…. pierced his TEETH on VIVEK shirt to bring him back to the original position……

ACP body was shivered…. his total attention was lost from the story and glued on the conflict handled by his brave men…..  SOUND did not take any interest and continued his STORYLINE…..

SOUND: wo baccha aahista aahista meray qareeb aata gaya…. aur main usay apnay saaray GUR sikhata gaya…. yahan tak kay wo buhat zabardast KHILARI ban gaya….. aik aisa KHILARI jis ki mujhay buhat zarurat thi….. jeedaar….. zaheen…. aur sub say ihem jigar wala…..

The WOLF which was hit by SACHIN body turned back… and in that hustle bustle…. his ROPE was broken and he totally jumped on SACHIN…. In fear and tension…. FREDDIE also weighted his body weight towards SACHIN…. his TEETH got VIVEK shirt piece…. VIVEK tried hard to take out his NECK from the WOLF mouth…. here the SACHIN body was tasted by the WOLF and at the next moment… another WARM dish came up on table as the shape of FREDDIE…. WOLF placed his FOOT on SACHIN chest… SACHIN eye caught something FAMILIER and his mind CONFIRMED him about that thing…. BUT… the WOLF signaled him NOT to move although he will be responsible about any weird output…. SACHIN was totally helpless….  WOLF sketched a LINE on FREDDIE's NECK… FREDDIE was standstill…. the warm BLOOD showed its PICTURE…. WOLF licked that YUMMY BLOOD from its COLD TONGUE and liked tonight MENU…  FREDDIE screamed did not change the MOOD of the ANIMAL…. the surrounding became all SIX bodies DROWSY… and the RESISTANCE of HUMAN bodies were LOWERING down… the BLOOD stains and smell mad the WOLVES… the fear… scare…. body temperature….. everything going on behalf of WOLVARIAN court… starting EXCORIATED …. the all THREE WOLVES prepared their TASTE BUDS of TONGUES as NAPKINS and sharp NAILS as FORKS…. and watching each other with CUNNING eyes and pierced TEETH and enjoyed the MEAL…. the LIGHT went out…. the whole chamber was shaking with the THREE THROATS screams and the floor carpet turned its color tone from BROWN to RED…. and this time with HUMAN BLOOD….

ACP throat was highly came out with NAHIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII with its maximum speed…. the first PLASMA SCREEN turned off…. SOUND still involved with the STORY…. the 2ND SCREEN started with the NEW clips…..

 SOUND: hello DUO!!!! Kesay ho??? arry DAYA zyada JALA tou nahi tha na….. acha chalo…. main zara ACP kay sath busy hun… tou jaldi say GAME bata dun…. DAYA ABHIJEET kay pair ki CHAIN ki CHABI tumharay RIGHT HAND kay ander hay…. aur us kay HATH ki tumharay SHOULDER kay… aur ABHIJEET DAYA kay CHAIN ki CHABI tumharay LEFT PALM kay ander hay…. aur KAJAL kay PAIR ki tumharay PAIR mein… OK…  tum DAYA ko GOLI maaro gay aur SHOULDER say CHABI nikalo gay…. isi tarah DAYA tumhara HATH katay ga aur CHABI nikaal lay ga…. aur chamber ki CHABI,  KAJAL ki GARDAN kay ander hay…. dekho aaraam say nikalna…. wo SO rahi hay… us ki neend na kharab ker dena…. aur haan sirf 10 minutes hain….  warna ye SHARPER….. chalo jaldi……

ABHIJEET: TUM!!!!!!!!!!!!!! tumhara dimagh tou nahi kharab hay…. main DAYA ko kabhi GOLI nahi marun ga…..

SOUND: tou mut maro…. main kub tumharay pairun mein gir raha hun kay MAARO…. Yehein MARNA hay tou yahein saheh….. chalo… ACP is waiting for ME….. tum tou ab shayed ACP say mulaqat ka armaan liyey chalay jao gay…. main usay bata dunga kay tum usay bilkul YAAD nahi ker rahay thay….. aur tumhein us becharay ki zara bhi parwah nahi hay…. aur DAYA tum…. Kya tumharay dil mein bhi ACP kay liyey jagah kum par gayii hay!!! chalo jaldi… aur haan… GUN mein sirf AIK hee GOLI hay…  ek GHALAT qadam….. sub kuch KHATAM!!!!  wesay kya hoga… tumhari KAHANI ka anjaam….. hahha… kya CID kay DO janbaaz bacha paayein gay…. KAJAL ko… aur nikal paayein gay is PHANDAY say…. hahaha…. CID…. SHUKERWAAR aur SHANIWAAR….. hahahhahhhahha……

ABHIJEET(in complete rash): tu!!!!!!!!!

DUO did not hear the SOUND…  ABHIJEET in anger…. but he knew RASH was NOT the answer…. his body HAIRS felt the BURN touch… which irritated him to stand up as early as fast…..

DAYA: koi faida nahi hay boss…. tum mujhay GOLI maaro… acha RUKO…..

DAYA took a DAGGER from his RIGHT way and up his shirt sleeve…. after few seconds… he putted out his shirt and tore its sleeve…. tied it on his hand upper side ligament…. he had convinced himself prior… abt what he was doing…. the bubble up FLOOR also got messy scare…. ABHIJEET EYE BALLS came out from their orbits…. he totally insane what he was seeing was a REAL shoot or a REEL shoots!!! he tried to stand… but FAILED…. he screamed…. but DAYA shut his EARS… he looked on his hand… did not move his HEAD up… coz he knew if his EYES caught the FLASH of ABHIJEET FIERY EYES…. he never ever done his job… he calmed himself… felt tense….heard ABHIJEET VOICE…. remembered abt ACP and for instance remembered that TEAR which was always stored as a precious DROP in his heart which had fallen from ABHIJEET eye when he wanted to quit CID…. suddenly a tear from his eye fell and he sharply cut his hand……  

ABHIJEET and ACP throats infected with the DEEP BLOODY fluid came out from DAYA's hand…. he dig out the KEY with the SHARP POINT of DAGGER….

SOUND: good….  haan tou ACP…. hum kahan thay…. us bacchy per…..

ACP(in tension): chup ho jao…….  mujhay kuch nahi sunna…. agar tumhari MUJH say dushmani hay tou mujhay maro… meray BACCHUN ko kyun maar rahay ho…..

SOUND(murmuring): Dushmani…… haan tou wo baccha….. meray buhat nazdeek aa gaya…. aur phir wo wohi karnay laga jo main nay us say kaha….. jo main nay us say karwaya…..

ACP wanted to close his EARS and MIND…. but the RASH GRUMPY voice entered in his opening without fulfilling his wish and without any barrier…..

 DAYA brutally dig out his WOUND…. but his CUT was not given any GLIMPSE of the KEY…. it meant he CUT the WRONG side… the SOUND only said RIGHT HAND…. not clarify any specific point….. he again drawn a LINE on his hand…. ABHIJEET again screamed in anger and pain…. he did not move up his HEAD…. ABHIJEET in anger tried to stop him… but he did an EXTRA attempt…. and this time… he got success… he took out the KEY… wrapped his hand tightly…. moved ahead…. after SIX steps… he opened the LOCK of ABHIJEET foot chain….. ABHIJEET sat on WOODEN desk…. still had a difficulty to stand up…. he felt the KEY on his LEFT PALM SLIMY skin…. which was tied in CUFF…. ABHIJEET fastly CUT his LEG… DAYA moved his EYES downward… he did not have any wish to HURT his already INJURED heart with that scene….  ABHIJEET took out the KEY of KAJAL FOOT chain….. KAJAL still slept….

 ACP: tum ko jo chahyey MUJH say lay lo… magar un ko chor do…. kya chahyey tum ko???…..

SOUND: jo mujhay chahyey ACP…. tum wo mujhay nahi day saktay….. haan tou phir wo baccha yahan per ek GANGSTER ban ker ubhra… log us say dartay…. us kay ghar ki izzat tou mitti mein mil gayii… 

DAYA's blood came out at very HIGH amount… due to CUT on any NERVE…. he tried to stand up… the WARM texture of floor really had a problem…. the chamber turned into HOT MINE with the passage of time…. he signaled ABHIJEET to take the GUN and SHOOT on his SHOULDER…. he knew about ABHIJEET EXACT focus point…. ABHIJEET felt his body had a high STRAIN…. he took the GUN on his RIGHT hand… his hand started shivering and his head getting wet with the minute movements…..

ABHIJEET(in tears): DAYA ye mujh say nahi hoga…..

DAYA: ABHI….. plz…..  

ACP eye balls totally gummed on the PLASMA… even his eyelids did not working with the normal amount of shuttering….

SOUND: haan phir main LONDON chala gaya…. aur wo yahan ka kaam sanbhalnay laga…. aik do baar wo LONDON bhi aaya… main nay socha tha kay is baar wo aayeyga… tou main us ko apna RIGHT HAND declear ker dunga….

ABHIJEET took the AIM… but DAYA HIMSELF was a BIG barrier…. he again PUTTED down his hand with the GUN…. DAYA after watching his disturbance and tears in eyes…. tied that shirt which he had out from his body and placed on floor on his whole FACE…. ABHIJEET initial TEAR was fallen…. DAYA sat on KNEES in front of ABHIJEET FIRE focus point… his KNEES felt the HOT tone of fire…. DAYA's BEAT was in high speed and volume…. he knew abt the SHARP and ACCURATE AIM of ABHIJEET… but the ACCURACY was ONLY for CULPRITS not for his BEST BUDDY…. DAYA told ABHIJEET to do it fast… DAYA standstill… ONE BULLET was also a peak point of stress on nerves…. ABHIJEET body sweat turned into BOILING vapors…. he took AIM of his BEST BUDDY SHOULDER..… his FINGER was at TRIGGER…. bit shivered… the HEAT…. tension… emotions… he calmed his mind and body and especially tried to calm his HEART… and when tried to BANG…..

KAJAL(in high scream): Sirrrrrrrrrrr………….

ABHIJEET hand movement deviated from the ACCURATE angle…. and the TRIGGER pressed…. the BULLET sliced DAYA's CHEST into pieces…..

ACP: DAYAAAAAAAAAAAA….. ABHIJETTTTTTTTTTTTTT….. ye kya kiya….. ?/!!!!!

SOUND: haan tou…. jub wo LONDON aaya…. tou main nay usay apna RIGHT HAND bana diya…. ACP tum ko tou pata hoga RIGHT HAND kiya hota hay….. main nay usay INDIA ek MISSION per depute kiya… wo INDIA aa gaya….

 ACP all intentions started to break down….…. his HEART felt a HIGH pain… his all SOLDIERS gave their LIVES just ONLY for the CULPRIT satisfaction…..

SOUND (sad tone): arry ABHIJEET….. MAAR diya TUM nay DAYA ko….. ahaahhhhhaaa…. ab kya karo gay!!!!…. bechara DAYA…. abhi tou shadi bhi nahi hui thi….. hhhhhaaaaaaaaaaa……

The GUN was fallen from ABHIJEET hand…. he was stunned… DAYA fell on his LEFT wing…. the BLOOD burst out like a FOUNTAIN…. KAJAL rushed there but fell down hardly by the CHAIN on her FOOT which was reversed her on her back position…. her body felt a WARM effect from the floor… she stood up….

ACP(in tears): kaun ho TUM!!!! Kyun ker rahy ho ye sub????   

SOUND:  arry main… main KUNAL hun bhae…. suno tou aagay… haan tou jub wo yahan MISSION per aaya…. tou ek BEWAKOOF say us ka paala par gaya…. us BEWAKOOF ko us nay kuch aisa bata diya… jo agar tum logun tak pohanch jata tou hum phanse jaatay….. isi liyey us bacchy yani meray RIGHT HAND nay us GHADDAR ko maarwa diya….. 

The GHHHHRRRRR voice brought the LIFE inside the THREE bodies on the chamber…. the SHARPER started and moving downward… where ABHIJEET was ready for changing into PIECES…. a SCREAM came out from KAJAL mouth…. she did not understand anything…. her mind was stucked…  DAYA's body bit moved with her scream…. with much effort he be backed on sitting position…. his face was still covered…. he tried to out that cover but it was really difficult for him…. the BLOOD and PAIN was created a problem to move his upper body on correct direction….. he was totally BLIND at that moment….. he called ABHIJEET… but NO reply…. he screamed and calling his NAME unintentionally…. KAJAL stopped him and told that ABHIJEET was on SHELLSHOCK while the SHARPER was moving downward to CUT him… DAYA again tried BUT failed… KAJAL screamed again and told DAYA that her WOODEN panel got the FIRE…. DAYA totally confused… the FIRE really HEAT up the chamber…. KAJAL unhesitately screamed really disturbed him a lot… he constantly calling ABHIJEET…. he told KAJAL to be relaxed and try extreme at least to pull the shirt from his mouth…. the SHARPER voice really created a PANIC inside the chamber… KAJAL tried in crying but the attempt was NOT successful… the BLOOD and FIRE both irritated them…. the smoke filled up in air… coughing started… DAYA bit deviated his body and fell his HEAD on her way… the LEFT sleeve was placed on her LAP...  she grabbed it and pulled it with extreme GRIP…  the SHIRT came out from the face of DAYA…. for a second… he was in complete DARK…. but after a minute… his EYES turned ON its flash…. unemotionally a SCARY VOICE came out from his mouth….

DAYA: ABHIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII……

He forgot for a moment abt anything so rushed again to pull back his BRO…. BUT… that BLOODY CHAIN was the ANCHOR on his way……wat to do NOW!!!!

SOUND: halankay hum us BEWAKOOF ki jaan nahi leena chatay thay…. MAGAR….. phir meray RIGHT HAND kay peechay CID parr gayii… us becharay nay 3 goliyaan bhi khayein… bhaag bhaag kay aur chup chup kay wo thak gaya…. buhat zyada…..

DAYA tried hard… but how could he be with ABHIJEET was a BIG query…. he tried much to take out his FOOT from that chain….… after watching SHARPER cache movement…. he told KAJAL to hit that shirt towards ABHIJEET…  might be he backed his mind on the main event…  her FEET started burning now…. she hopped around…. and DAYA took a LAST chance…. he again took the DAGGER from ABHIJEET foot side….…. first he tried to open the CHAIIN…. BUT failed…. the next idea was so horrible……. BUT!!!  for saving ABHIJEET every horrible tuned into PLEASURE for him….. he started scratching and tried to remove some SKIN from the OUTERMOST layer of his FOOT …..

ACP shattered…. stunned…. his EYES saw and MIND strucked…. his EMOTION and THROAT failed to show any motion….

SOUND: phr mujhay malum hua…. kay chupaty aur bhagtay huaty wo apnay BAAP kay hath lug gaya… aur us kay BAAP nay ………………

SOUND(again whisper): DAYA……. TIME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

The SHARPER motion hammered on his NERVES….. and his hand shivering….. the tension… scare… KAJAL eyes were sticked on the FLESH and BLOOD came out from his FOOT… her THROAT OPENING was not related with the SIZE of her SCREAM… so opening was CLOSED…. ABHIJEET came out after hitting that shirt…. he screamed and tried to move…. DAYA FOOT came out from the CHAIN…. his SOALS felt a HOT carpet…. ABHIJEET lower body was much HEAT UP now…. his body SKIN felt it was on STOVE and obviously STOVE was ON…. DAYA rushed towards ABHIJEET…. and tried to help his body and moved him from the angle of SHARPER BLADE…. ABHIJEET threw the KEY towards KAJAL and told her to open her FOOT chain with that…. the slimy SMOKE dazzled the visibility…. KAJAL opened the KEY and moved fast from the spot… her cloths started burning now…. but not got a HEAVY FIRE… she asked about the chamber KEY… DUO saw on each other eye…  DAYA tried fast…. ABHIJEET told KAJAL that the KEY was in her NECK… she shocked… spread the PALM… her EYE caught the attention on DAGGER…. BUT!!! she was not DAYA and ABHIJEET…. even thought to HURT herself was beyond her expectation…. the SHAPER BLADE pierced its TEETH on DAYA's shoulder…. KAJAL scream was not shut by her small throat opening this time…. ABHIJEET placed his RIGHT PALM on DAYA's SHOULDER to protect him from the CANINES of SHARPER…. his LEFT still in CUFF and due to try more n more times to take out his hand his LEFT WRIST had lots of CUTS…. DAYA's all systems undergone on STRIKE… the FIRE really spread on whole chamber… the SHARPER TEETH after crossed the hurdle of ABHIJEET PALM started brutally hurting DAYA's SHOULDER…  ABHIJEET tried to push back his body… but now its IMPOSSIBLE…. the extreme HEAT… sweating…  DAYA's BLOOD mixed with ABHIJEET BLOOD and that MIXTURE flowing from ABHIJEET body to the WOODEN bench….the weight of SHARPER pushed DAYA's body upon ABHIEET…. both bodies looked ALIKE and got prepared for converting into different sizes of MEAT…. the BLOOD solution…. the fear… FIRE flames… TEARS…. SCREAMED…. created a situation of HELL inside the CHAMBER…. KAJAL took the DAGGER instantly… placed it on her NECK…  ABHIJEET teary eyes moved in pain towards KAJAL… NERVE pressure….. ABHIJEET screamed and on hustle bustle…  KAJAL placed a SHARP point of DAGGER on her NECK… in much crying and coughing… her fingers weighted a bit… DAGGER entered… the BLOOD drop fell and with screamed and pain…. the DAGGER fell from her hand and the LIGHT BLAST by the FIRE FLAME and with the madly SCREAM of BOTH……

PLASMA SCREEN turned off…  ACP awakened and shaked in rash… anger…. pain and fell down with his CHAIR on the floor… the table which was on his RIGHT side also displaced from its position…. as a result the GUN was laid in front of his eyes with that CARD…. a 2 by 4 WHITE CARD which now turned and showed its FRONT posture…. very CLOSE to ACP…. a young smiley FACE…. his eyes all tears wet the FACE…. but still he LOVES that FACE a lot…. It was ONE of his whole lives SECRET ASSET….. none other than…. NAKUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!      

SOUND: haan ACP tumhein wo BAAP thay… jis nay apnay iklotay betay NAKUL ko maar diya… (in rash) khud apnay hathun say…. us waqt tou tumharay hath nahi kaanpay thay…. tou aaj kya hua…. kyun kaanp rahay ho…. arry BACCHUN kay marnay per kaun rota hay…. kyun ACP!!!

Suddenly ACP felt that a hand brought him with the smiley FACE back on his previous origin….. his all tears SOAKED by NAKUL…  so much clear vision… saw a MAN…. shocked to see him on WHEELCHAIR…. wrapped in BLACK cloth had RED shade…. LOWER portion of FACE covered with OXYGEN MASK…. only SHARP, SHINY, CUNNING EYES proudly presented their appearance… grabbed a LAPTOP….. ACP did not recognize the FACE but when he initiated the VOICE…. his mind easily caught HIM….. the 3RD PLASMA SCREEN opened now… with SLIDES of NAKUL…..

SOUND: haan ACP…. main nay hee NAKUL ko wo sub banaya… jis say tum usay bacha saktay thay…..

ACP(in rash): main usay kesay bachata… jub wo banna hee yehi chahta tha…..

SOUND: nahi ACP… TUM us ko bachany ki koshish tou kartay… acha batao… kya kiya tha TUM nay usay is raastay say roknay kay liyey…. TUM chahtay tou DAYA say keh ker do chaar jhanper usay lagwa detay… ya pakar ker apnay bearue ki JAIL mein daal detay… kisi BOARDING bhijwa detay… BAHAR parhnay… check rakhtay… arry poori FORCE use ker kay… usay roktay tou!!! MAGAR…. jo cheez usay TUM say chahyey thi… wo mujh say mil gayii… ATTENTION…. kya kabhi TUM nay us per nazar rakkhi…  kay wo kahan jata hay???  kis say milta hay??? kaun us kay DOST hain??? NAHI ACP…. doosrun ko bhashan denay say pehlay… kuch tou soch leetay hain…..TUM nay apni DUTY nibhai… RISHTA nahi!!!

SOUND(again): wahan LONDON mein jub mujhay malum hua kay TUM nay apnay BETAY ko khud apny hee hathun say maar diya hay… tou main herut mein aa gaya… bhala koi BAAP….. aisa bhi ker sakta hay….

ACP(in anger): meray liyey mera MULK sub say ihem hay… samjhy….

SOUND: haan haan… ye DESH BHAGTI humein mut sikhao…. Jub main wahan say wapus aa raha tha tou mera PLANE crash ho gaya….. meri BACKBONE toot gayii aur main bed per aa gaya…. NAKUL kay janay kay baad aur meri is health condition per gang khatam ho gaya…. paisay ki tou koi kami nahi thi meray pass… magar meray business ko khatam karnay ki wajah TUM thay ACP…. sirf TUM!!!

Tum kya samjhtay ho…. jo aadmi NAKUL ko trap ker sakta tha… us kay BAAP kay naak kay neechay say… jis say poora MUMBAI kaanpta hay… wo kya….. koi choti mooti CHEEZ hoga…. hahaha…. arry ACP…. kahein TUM nay mujhay COL BANJARA tou nahi samjha tha na…. ya phir…  wo JOHRI …. ya DARAGI type koi cheez…  arry… yaad aaya…. ACP kahein tum mujhay HD jesa bewakoof tou nahi samjh rahay thy….. hahaha…. ya phir…. wo JOKER….. kya gaata tha…. haan!!!

Machli jal ki raani hay

Jeevan us ka paani hay

Hath lagao gay tou darr jayey gi

Paani say nikalo gay tou mar jayey gi……

Hahahah…. wesay ACP… mujhay ye NAZAM buhat pasand hay…. dekho tum CID kay JAL kay RAJA ho…. tumhara poora JEEVAN…. ye CID aur is say mili IZZAT hay…. tum DARR jao gay… is liyey main nay tumhein hath nahi lagaya…. balkay tumharay BACCHUN ko hath lagaya….. ab chahay wo NAKUL ho… ya DAYA…  ABHIJEET ho ya FREDDIE….. hahaha…. aur kiya…. haan…. dekho main nay tumhein paani yani CID say nahi nakala…. kyunkay phir tou tum MAR jatay na….. hahahha…..

Machli jal ki raani hay

Jeevan us ka paani hay…..

(laughing at) main nay 5 saal… tum sub per kari mehnut ki…. tum sub ki aik aik harkut per…. chaan been ki… nazar rakkhi…. Jub DAYA ko GOLI lagi thi… tou tum log kitna royey thay… jub FREDDIE ki jail hui body mili thi… tou kitna dukh hua tha… tum sub ko… DAYA ki FAKE SHADI kay pheray bhi main nay ginay thay…. aur wo kya… haan… jub ABHIJEET CID ko chor raha tha…. tou kya halat thi….. aur jub tum log us kay ghar gayey thay… tou kya darwaza khula hua tha ya band!!! I knew EVERYTHING….. tum kya samjhtay ho… ye AMIT aur MAYA jesay chotay motay log…. jo samjhtay hain CID ko khatam karna bus… chutkiyun ka kaam hay… main un ki PLANNING per amal karunga….ya tumharay ander say DAKSH jesay kisi GHADDAR ko khareedun ga….  hahha…. arry ACP… main buhat BARA aur SHATIR KHILARI hun…. mera HOMEWORK hamesha complete hota hay….. main nay ye GAME banaya…. 5 saal mujhay is GAME ko bananay mein lagay…. paisay say aadmi hire kiyey… tumharay in zaheen officers ki nigraani ki…. main chahta tou TUM sub ko usi din maar deta… khas ker TUM ko…. MAGAR!!! wesay ACP mila hay tum ko aaj tak koi aisa… jis nay poori CID team ko pagal bana kay rukh diya…. magar mujhay yaqeen hay tum aur tumhari poori team mujhay kabhi nahi bhool payii gi…. Hain na!!! (he closed his eyes relaxly said) ahhhahhh…. Ye PAL meri zindagi ka sub say khoobsurat pal hay….

Main nay socha agar main tumhari poori TEAM ko maar daalun tou kya hoga…. kuch nahi…. TUM ro dho ker phir DESH ki sewa mein lug jao gay…. magar TUMHEIN tarpanay ka apna hee maza hay ACP….. apnay bacchun ki tarah hee tum ko apni TEAM say pyaar hay na… In bacchun ki TRAINING TUM nay ki hay na … jabhi aisay hain…. main nay pichlay LEVEL mein tum logun ko apnay baaray mein bataya bhi tha…. magar tum log… arry KUNAL ko thora shuffle kartay tou NAKUL ban jata…. aur wo tumhara SHARP SHOOTER…. jisy SHORT TERM MEMORY LOSS ki beemaari bhi hay… wo LAST PASSWORD bhi bhool gaya…. wo tha KINGDOM….  hahahha…  ACP tum us ka ilaaj kyun nahi karwatay ho!!! haan hay magar wo buhat SHARP aur PEACEFUL….. (murmuring) agar mujhay pehlay mil jata…  khair… wesay NAKUL bhi tha…. SHAIR…. ek dum…. (smirk tone) NAKUL tumhein yaad tou aata hee hoga ACP…. Hain na!!

ACP standstill and in shellshock condition… his eyes fixed on CULPRIT CUNNING retina… the LAST PLASMA SCREEN was also tune off….. and NOW all THREE PLASMA SCREENS had the SAME SLIDES…..

A flame of LIGHT entered inside the room… CHAINS and CUFFS opened automatically…. NO signs of presence of any WOLVARIAN…. the COLD texture HEATING up slightly with the minutes movements…  VIVEK eye shutter opened… after relaxed to felt… EVERYTHING UNDER CONTROL…. he stood up fast…. his whole body with torn fabrics got BITING marks with BLOOD stains…. he remembered that if he took more time… the chamber automatically LOCKED again… and he did not want to LOSE the GOLDEN chance…. he madly shaked FREDDIE and SACHIN… SACHIN came out earlier…. he also had a same situation… both tried to wake up FREDDIE… but FREDDIE body was so cold as well calmed… so they got him and empty the BLOODY CELL as early as they could!!!!

ABHIJEET felt something… very COLD…. very SLIMY and SHINNY…. his ROASTED SKIN felt the SOFT touch of that THING… the THING which always changed his mood and moved him beyond the world… he liked that THING a lot… BUT WHAT was THAT!!! his senses still not awakened… suddenly that THING tried to spread its flow on his face…. and now his SEVEN senses played its role…. his FIERY EYES felt relaxing and opened their DOORS slowly…… DIM light showed MILLIONS of small and large COLD COLORLESS and ODORLESS DROPS sprayed from the roof…. his mind DOUBLE clicked…. RAIN…. It was really given a relaxing effect on his mind and body too…. BUT when he tried to move upside… saw DAYA's BODY on resting position upon his body and the WARM BLOOD still slowly flowed on his NECK and THORASIC region… DAYA's SHOULDER got the TEETH marks of SHARPER…. BUT there was NO sharper on his head…. the CHAINS and CUFFS opened automatically … he sat and easily placed DAYA's body on floor with his INJURED hands and foot…. KAJAL was unconscious… he moved on her side… tried to pour some drops of water on his palm and sprinkled it on KAJAL face with bit high speed… KAJAL woke up with the scream…. ABHIJEET placed his hand on her mouth and after complete conscious…. pulled back his hand… he again tried to wake DAYA…. but DAYA was totally insane…. due to water splash… DAYA's wound again opened and the BLOOD mingled with the rain droplets with speed…. BOTH pulled him with their REST force…. and evacuated the chamber instantly which was few time back HELL for them…..      

BOTH parties watched each other…. DAYA be backed on that pulling procedure…. VIVEK putted out his torn shirt and ABHIJEET tied it on his SHOULDER and CHEST joint… and some part on his PALM too… they all saw a same scene at the same second in LOW SOFTONE light…. THREE PLASMA SCREENS and that SAME GAME OVER slide had watched by DUO every time on that CD and a LAUGH heard in HIGH peaks….. but NEW for the rest…. they also saw a BODY on WHEELCHAIR totally wrapped on FIRE and the ACID spilled drop by drop from the FRONT corners of room floor… and moved toward ACP chair… and its every drop dead the thing which came on its way…. they all SCREMED and rushed towards ACP…. ACP sat on CHAIR and LOCKED as well…. he was standstill…. his eye balls were just focused on that FIRE….. while his mind replicated those sentences….. the BODY was dreaded second after second… the TEAM did not try to open ACP lock… ABHIJEET, VIVEK and SACHIN pulled the chair on their hands and ran as fast with the speed of ACID flowing…. all moved out… anybody have NO idea… what was going on… and what will be…. DAYA who was there with KAJAL…. BUT his eye balls….he intentionally tried to grab that LAPTOP…. he tried his best and by any means took that LAPTOP…. ACP eye bit moved on his attempt and then again glued on that FIRY FEAR WHEELCHAIR… DAYA backed but his TOE and hand was mildly fired up with the acid… ABHIJEET throat did not shut…. and to save himself…. he lost the LAPTOP on that ACID…. there was NO second chance…. the exaggerated LAUGHING voice hammered on all heads came out from the SCREENS…. that LAUGHING voice followed them after they came out from the house… the house was fired up…. ACP was totally absent minded….

They saw their DEARY QUALLIS on the front of house…. the OUTLOOK of house in that FIRE also showed that it felt very PROUD on its BUILT…. they all sat on QUALLIS had KEYS…. FREDDIE was still unconscious…. while DAYA now again undergone on bad phase of his life…. VIVEK drove the quallis like bullet… they were amazed that this time they were not far from their origins… even they were at MUMBAI…. on way they tried to take anyone help by asking people to give them their CELL for an emergency CALL…. but their PHYSICAL APPEARANCE was not filled the form as they were any FORCE members…. at last SACHIN snatched a CELL from a GUY…. the team called SALUNKHY and DCP both…. and returned the CELL to its owner…. they reached the MAJOR Hospital of the CITY…. DCP and SALUNKHY already present with SECURITIES….. Hospital staff rushed all of them to EMERGENCY and now it's the TIME to pull the chain of WILL by everyone….

How many HOURS they cut off from the activity of world BUT now they were coming out and prepared themselves to share their active participation…. TEAM members FAMILIES be on spot to give their LOVE, CARE and SUPPORT to their dear ones…. ABHIJEET came back earlier… coz his NERVES and BEAT still had some issue's about DAYA's recovery…. DR placed something on his PALM which had STECHES like another one… he just saw that thing and rite now took it in his POCKET…. DR told him about everyone… all were in good state of HEALTH… he HIMSELF and KAJAL were mildly BURNT… but their SOLES really absorbed much HEAT so MOVING ability would be disturbed for few weeks…. the THREE members attacked by DOGS but DOGS only checked them through their NAILS not with their TEETHS…. the people thought they had bitten by WOLVES…. so their MENTAL level!!!…. still in struggling phase…. everyone had some kind of STRAIN… but ACP mind was very much in pressure so they were using MEDICINE to CALM his mind otherwise he had a HAMBRADGE…. while DAYA was at RISK level… the BULLET ruptured its RIBS but not hit any ORGAN… the WOUND be better due to using of some SALIVA…. the BURNT and BRUIRS also made the body a mess… he lost so much BLOOD although the ACID blocked his CELLS which created problems in CIRCULATION of BLOOD inside of his body UPPER section….

Those CRITICAL 48 HOURS were not only CRUCIAL for ABHIJEET and the TEAM but it was also CRITICAL for every person related or not related to CID… MEDIA at regular intervals gave BREAKING NEWS about ACP and Ins DAYA health condition…. those who handled CID in past for their cases and those who did not have any SIGNS both PRAYED for the OFFICERs… PUBLIC did not have any OFFENCE with FORCES…. they knew HOW important these OFFICERS for them and their homeland…. 

DAYA opened his eyes…. saw unfamiliar face… tried to get up BUT!!! the staff rushed towards outside… the DR came out and behind him everyone…. after checking his PULSES and SINUS…. DR allowed the team to talk and meet BUT with care and caution…. he asked about ACP and when FREDDIE gave him the LATEST news… he sat on his bed with the help of pillows… he enquired with everyone about their HEALTH condition and all satisfied him… at the END he asked the same query to ABHIJEET and on replied got a PUNCH on his face by ABHIJEET… everyone stunned except DAYA…. his INSTICINTS had a feel that something very bad came from ABHIJEET part…. he wiped the blood drop came out as a result of rupture of his lip and strongly pulled him and hugged him tightly… the HUG which badly needed by ABHIJEET…. his TEARS absorbed by DAYA's shoulder…  the TOUCH which slept his worries… relaxed his tensions…. Soothes his emotions… and he felt the most happy and precious moment around his ARMS…..

ABHIJEET told DAYA about that thing which gave by the DR to him… it was a SMALL SPY CAMERA coming out from his LEFT PALM…. they took out the MEMORY CHIP and invaded it on a MOBILE SET took for some time from SALUNKHY Sir…. the SAME BLACK SCREEN with that DIFFICULT type of SOUND with LAUGHING……

SOUND: hahahahha….. chalo SHUKERWAAR tou nikaal liya tha… SHANIWAAR bhi nikaal hee lo gay…. mujhay malum tha DAYA is kay liyey buhat pareshan hoga… ab becharay nay MERAY itnay ZULM sahein hain tou thora buhat HAQ tou us ka banta hee hay…. hain…. DAYA agar ABHIJEET tum ko GOLI maar bhi deta tou kabhi bhi tumharay us ZAKHAM say CHABI nahi nikaal pata…. kyunkay wahan koi CHABI thi hee nahi…. aur TUM…. tum tou kabhi bhi us ka HATH nahi kaattay…. chahay MAR bhi jatay…. tou is CAMERA kay milnay ka sawal he nahi hota… hahahha…. mujhay umeed thi is baar tum log GHALATI kuch kum karogay… MAGAR!!! arry BEWAKOOF JAANBAZUN kahein main nay kaha tha kay us CHABI say CHAMBER nahi khulay ga…. jo DAYA kay hath aur ABHIJEET kay pair say niklay gi…. DIMAGH hazir rakhtay hain… jub kisi SHATIR say khelna parta hay…. samjhay….

They saw FREDDIE, VIVEK and SACHIN struggling against DOGS cum WOLVES… the scratches imprints in their bodies…. the fear… scare… scream… helpless situation…..         

FREDDIE aur SACHIN ki GHARI aur VIVEK kay AMULET mein CHABIYAAN theen…. magar wo itnay pareshan ho gayey thay kay meri poori baat saheh tarah DECODE hee nahi ker saky…. wo tou meray pyaray nanhay munnay KUTTUN say DARR gayey… wo tou bus un ko CAKH hee rahay thay….. khanay ka irada THORI tha… wesay bhi meray KUTTUN ka TASTE itna bura nahi hay kay wo CID kay BEWAKOOFUN ko khayein…. hahahha…. baray MEHNGAY KUTTAY hain….. un ka taste bhi MEHANGA hee hay…..

Chalo…. aaraam karo…. khao…. piyooo… jaan banao….. aur DUA karo… kay kahein phir koi meray jesa PAGAL na mil jayey…. Kahein bhi… kabhi bhi!!!!

DUO had tears on their eyes…. they did not know wat to xpress…. both had a FEAR sparked on their HEART at the same second…..  this time NO GAME OVER SLIDE and SOUND were there… with the SUGGESTION of any kind of PREPRATION….. they LOCKED that CLIP in their MINDS and HEARTS to never ever OPEN that LOCK again……

ACP was coming back at NIGHT…. he looked much HAPPY after seeing his SOLDIERS backed on ground and lined up with him to fight against BAD…. he asked an unexpected question to ABHIJEET that where was that LAPTOP and on explanation from ABHIJEET…. a REVEALED sound came from his MIND… MOUTH and HEART simultaneously…..  when DUO moved…. he asked!!!

ACP: ABHIJEET tum log ja rahy ho???

DUO saw on each one eye…. they had NO idea why ACP Sir popped up that query…. DAYA speedly replied…..

DAYA: Nahi Sir…. hum yahein hain…..

The ignition for all TEAM members NORMAL mode of LIFE starting up now…. they backed on their ORIGINAL position…. the DUO wanted to discuss about the CULPRIT and his MOTIVE with ACP…. BUT ACP always avoids the TOPIC and tuned into OFF MODE…. DUO did not force him because of DR advice… FREDDIE wanted to erase that WINE taste…. BLOOD rain… WOLVES and SCRATCH everything!!!.… KAJAL wanted to hide those FIRE and BURN marks…. there was NO KEY on her neck… the CULPRIT only played with them!!!….. SACHIN tried to rub that WOUND, BULLET hole and TEETH of the ANIMAL!!!… VIVEK tried to lose every grip of those event HAIRY and SLIMY bodies and also BLOODY POOL!!!….  ABHIJEET PALM had that CANINE traces while his LEG also got a STRAIGHT line…. ABHIJEET moved forward to new roads and putted out every MIRROR, LOCK, KEYS, BLOOD, FIRE and CHAMBERS from his mind and life…. he had requested the DR to give that BULLET which found from DAYA's body fired by ABHIJEET and STORED it in his HEART which also contained pools of his BEST BUDDY LOVE, AFFECTION and FRIENDSHIP!!!… while DAYA tried extremely hard to vanish all that MASS, BLOOD, HEAD, FIRE  and especially that SOUND which hit his heart very sharply…. his CHEST, SHOULDER, HAND, LEG even every INCH of his whole body had many BITS and CHUNKS of that weird GAME…. whenever he grabbed his QUALLIS KEYS… his FINGERS bit shivered…. he came very close to ABHIJEET…. DUO did not want to leave each one ALONE so live TOGETHER…. DAYA and ACP have always terrible reminisces of that experience…. only THREE EVIDANCES confirmed them that what they all HANDLED were NOT a DREAM… it was a TRUE story…. THREE CD's and ONE SPY CAMERA and NAKUL smiley FACE which had given by SALUNKHY when ACP came out from that horrible sleep…. The whole CID team wanted to forget the horrible traces so try to avoid every single matter of that to be in their minds and hearts….

WHO the CULPRIT was???

WHY he left all of them ALIVE???

WHAT was his MOTIVE???

EXCEPT ACP nobody knew the ANSWERS…. BUT ACP never ever talked about the CULPRIT and the whole scenario he had faced…. he did not want the REBOUNCE of those dialogues…. he became much QUIET… he mentally turned STRONG although his HEART had lots of PAIN holes…..

That was the FIRST time in history of CID where they only remembered the CULPRIT with the SCARY… GRUMPY…. HARSHED… DIFFICULT type of "SOUND"….  The SOUND which still moving with everyone and stammering on their MINDs… WHO and WHAT…. WHY and WHOME… LOTS of QUESTIONS still in air!!! but some QUERIES will always be UN-ANSWERABLE…. and it would be better not to ARISE and RE-OPEN it again….!!!!

 

 

 

SOME CLARIFICATIONS 

I want to CLARIFY some POINTs about my STORY SERIES from the FIRST to the LAST levels…..

The CULPRIT used the ANIMAL BLOOD except that which came out from any CHARACTER by himself/herself…..

To differentiate between HUMAN and ANIMAL blood was not possible with NAKED eyes….

To DILUTE the blood to spread or showed it at high amount by adding some SALINE, maintained its STICKY tone….

The KEYS were JAMMED when used on CHAMBERS…. and never came out again…. and the CHAMBERS automatically LOCKED after the PLAYER exit (cleared in level 2ND)…..

TRAVEL GUIDE of INDIA….. the LONAVALA district was 100 KM far from MUMBAI…. ROTTAN was a FAKE name….

MORES CODES supports JAVA programming…. using in AMETURE RADIO ….. also programmed in CELLULAR PHONES on limited basis …..

The SAARLOOSWOLFHOND (Saarloos Wolfdog) and the CZESLOVAKIAN WOLFDOG are the TWO ORIGINAL breeds that really do look like WOLVES……

WOLF also BARK like DOGS but at minimum and of short range… but famous for his HOWLS…. DOGS also HOWL as well….

Some ANIMALS especially Dogs, Cats SALIVA HEAL sum WOUNDS but on some xtent…. People reported that so research is in progress… but never ever tried it at HOME….

SPY CAMERAS inserted inside the HUMAN bodies and recorded MOVIE CLIPS about the thing….



SOME EXPLAINATIONS

I want to share something READERS…. the CULPRIT was always CLEAR in my mind…. his MOTIVE and all…. but after my TWO LEVELS…. my READERS turned my HEAD towards DCP and DIG…. I was really shocked…. I thought DCP was a CALM person…. and DIG…. a big NO came from my mind….. he is not as much sharp…. he has PROFESSIONAL ISSUES and CONFLICS with ACP and his TEAM…. but he has NO PERSONAL contradiction with ACP…. in TRAIL IN LONDON episode DIG said in presence of TEAM and ACP PRITHVIRAAJ…. that  " APNAY BETAY PER GOLI CHALANA BUHAT JIGAR WALA KAAM HAY AUR ACP TUMHARAY PASS WO JIGAR HAY…."  that cleared that he had NO NEGITIVITY with ACP about PERSONAL matters….  

Why the CID team was caught very easily..... after FIRST level… they were lost cz that was the FIRST TIME that weird kind of experience they handled…. On LEVEL 2ND…. they did not had any CLUE…. except that CD without FINGERPRINT…. after 3RD LEVEL they SCANNED themselves, their every PERSONNELS but found nothing…. they did not HIRED any SECURITIES for themselves…. if a CULPRIT himself called at bearue or ABHIJEET Sir... or ACP!!! or anyone....abt any CRIME..... they rushed there... without a second thought.....  they were not very SOCIAL.... there movements were very LIMITED etc..... (but I MUST ACCEPT that somehow I handled this POINT carelessly…  for that I m EXCUSING…. hope not to repeat it again in my FUTURE stories)    

I took all the NEGITIVE CHARACTERS after 2005 era EXCEPT COL BANJARA…. coz COL BANJARA was the main CLUE about DAKASH as TRAITER in CID…  CODE NAME BANJARA (aired on 1st July 2005)…. TRAIL IN LONDON in which ACP Sir killed NAKUL was aired on 18th Nov 2006… I took all other VILLAINS after that YEAR…. JOHRI took from RETUN OF JEWEL THIEF (aired on 10th March 2006)…. JOKER took from RETURN OF CLOWN (aired on 17th Aug 2007)… HD from AC SERIES (aired on 24th Sep 2010)…. DARAGI from DAYA KI DULHAN KA RAAZ (aired on 27th Nov 2010) and last but not least AMIT and MAYA from ABHIJEET KAY ATEET KA RAAZ (aired on 24th Dec 2010) episodes….. 

Why DAYA Sir wanted to grab that LAPTOP…. either in his mind there was some kind of thought that may be it got something related to the whole storyline…. he knew abt the CD…. CD always burn in PC's…. so his INSTINCTS had that idea…. Its an human nature….. In 3rd level I also cleared that when DAYA Sir came back from unconscious state… his first query was about CD!!!  

Why DAYA Sir was much brutally hurt… because ACP Sir always searched NAKUL in his personality… even in DAYA KI DULHAN KA RAAZ…. When DARAGI told ACP that if he killed DAYA who is just like his son…. then ACP felt hurt…. the REACTION of ACP Sir cleared that DARAGI was absolutely correct……

SALUNKHY Sir did not tell and ask anything about that PICTURE of NAKUL coz it was NATURAL that a FATHER misses his SON a lot especially that one killed by HIMSELF… so NO need of QUERY at that moment….

CULPRIT took the REVENGE on LOGIC and VALED MOTIVE…. but he had NO conflicts with FORENSIC team… so INCLUSION of them in that weird were totally MEANINGLESS….

Why the CULPRIT leave them ALIVE!!!! I think as being a READER U all have GOOD and LOGICAL IDEAS on that matter….. BUT as being a WRITER…. I also DUNT know abt that… although at that POINT my CULPRIT did not share his EMMOTION to me…. so I m BLANK at that point!!!



THANKSGIVING

I say, send and give my PURE…. HUMBLE…. and HEARTIEST bundles, tons, loads, stacks, cartons, buckets, bunches of THANK YOU to all my ACTIVE and SILENT READERS…. CLASSICAL WRITERS and all IF MEMBERS for their PRICELESS FEEDBACK from the bottom of my HEART….

Some of MY READERS shared their CLASSICAL IDEAS specially POOJA, AANDROMEDA DII, RASHIDA, SHIVANI and all…. I used some CHUNKS in my 3RD level given by POOJA and AANDROMEDA DII….. some PMed their PRECIOUS WISHES and BEST LUCK to me like MOONLIGHT, RASHIDA, NOTEPAD, NISHA, POOJA, AANDROMEDA DII, CHICK, NEEME DII, SHREELA, DARKNIGHT, MALLIKABALU, NIMI, TWINKLE DII, SHIVANI and all…. I m really OBLIGED to all of them…. Some BADLY WAITIN for my LEVELS like RASHIDA, SHIVANI, POOJA, NOTEPAD, NEEME DII, SHREELA etc….. I really APPRECIATE their WAITIN and EXCUSE them about POSTING my STORIES in LATE sittings…. I give my BALLONS of THANK YOU to VISROM DII, BHAVNAB DII, NEEME DII, TWINKLE SIS, SAADRITA DII, AADRIKA DII, STAR571, YMANJUSHREE, MALLIKABALU, DARKNIGHT, NOTEPAD, NIMI, ASTONISH, ZULAIKHA, DEEBASHREE, CHICK, PRINCESS, SNEHAL, POOJA, AANDROMEDA DII, RASHIDA and SHIVANI… I try to MENTION every ACTIVE MEMBER NAME but if ANYONE slipped from my MIND… I really APPOLOGIZE to HER/HIM…..

I knew many READERS had PROBLEMS with my LANGUISTIC SKILLS and GRAMMATICAL and TENSES MISTAKES….. I really EXCUSE to all of them…. because my ENGLISH and HINDI both are TOO BAD…. I APPOLOGIZE to EVERYONE about BLUNDERS, MISTAKES, ERRORS, DIFFERENCE of VIEW/OPINIONS, ISSUES/CONFLICTS/CONTRADICTIONS…. my any ALPHABET, WORDS, SENTENCES, THOUGHTS, IDEAS,BITS, CHUNKS, STORYLINE, SCENES, CHARACTERS, SITUATIONS which HURT the HEART of any READER or MEMBER intentionally/unintentionally PROFESSIONALLY or PERSONALLY both….

ONE more SORRY which I also say to all my READERS if they felt that my STORY SERIES any LEVEL or the whole SERIES was NOT up to the mark and NOT fulfill the EXPECTATION bar…. only WASTE their IMPOTANT MINUTES  and EMMOTIONS and HOPES….. it will be a BIG REGRET for me as I did a LOW LEVEL work…..   

I really THANKED to WWW.GOOGLE.COM , sum VIDEO GAMES to HELP me a lot for the HOMEWORK of my STORY SERIES…. also give a BIG THANK YOU to BENTO, her UPLOADS really UPDATED my CULPRIT… a BIG BAG of THANKS to all my CHARACTERS specially ACP Sir (who did not scold me once about what I had done with his TEAM), ABHIJEET Sir (who permitted me to do xtra BAD with his BEST BUDDY), DAYA Sir (who allowed me to do what I want with his character without any REGRETS), FREDDIE Sir, VIVEK, SACHIN and KAJAL…… I also shared my THANKS to FIRE WORKS PRODUCTION (not to SUE me that without their PERMIISSION I took their CHARACTERS and used them without any CHARGES as well) and ONE more THANKS to INDIA FORUM which really gives me the ROASTERM where I just come and give my VIEWS/REVIEWS…. CREATIVITY/TALENTS…. and sharp my SKILLS without any OFFENCE…..     

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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awesome story...........a really great ending..............great idea of the past......but was so sad to see abhi and daya hurt......overall great story........do start on your next story fast.Big smile

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Posted: 20 March 2011 at 3:05pm | IP Logged
fabulous ending.....................loved d concept of bringing in nakul's clips and d gangster as main culprit here................thrill was increasing gradually as d story was progressing...............
felt really bad for our lovely duo............great work done gadhadadaClapClapClapClapClapClapClap

but i really wished dat d team should have nabbed d criminal...............otherwise everything was Star

waiting 4 ur next story..........Smile



Edited by pooja83 - 21 March 2011 at 10:12am
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Gadhadada, Overall Nice StorySmile...Very Very Nice Attempt....Concept was superb!Big smile The reason behind the whole game was good...But i want to say about the End, it can be better more than this........Well, Ur idea was mindblowing....It was more than typically Story.......So, Over All Very Nice Job!Thumbs Up...........I m really Expecting More Good Stories from u Very soon..........



Edited by neeme - 22 March 2011 at 12:42pm
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OMG........m still in shocked state. while reading m exicted  to known who's the culprit, who gave such critical conditions to cid team..........marvellous climax......its none othe than ACP'S neighbour KUNAL. m saying from my heart, if u send dis SERIES STORY to cid production,,,CID TRP RANK goes to heighest........super duper hit series...........wowwwww what a idea to bring NAKUL's past in climaxClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClap

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little bit feel sad for NAKUL's condition explained by KUNAL........if ACP SIR also give his attention towards NAKUL than he not became a spy....u also shown ur kind heartiest feelings to NAKUL, FW production never explained such situation...for dis i give u a big

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now about VIVEK SACHIN nd FREDDIE condition......me tooo afraid of dogs..... while drive scooty if any dog came than m feel shiver in my body. hats of vivek how he managed from wolf after he realized.......on duo's condition, m shocked nd feel pressured on my mind.......
a standing ovation for uuuuuuu............
u have a grear writing skill in ur mind hands heart........hats off uuuuuuuuuuuuuuClap
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great, marvellous awesome super story..


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Edited by Shivani24 - 21 March 2011 at 8:00am
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Wow!!! What was this!!!! I'm still a bit shell-shocvked!!! Well, you've certainly used a very good idea of relating the whole thing Nakul!!! Well, really, while reading, I could myself feel a pressure as to what would happen the next moment!! Just the thing I wanted to feel!!!
 
And yes, you've accomplished what I wanted you to accomplish!!! Well done boss!!! The story was interesting, though it got a bit confusing at times, but still a very very good effort on your side, and I must say, you've passed it out with flying colours!!! Well, only if can, since it might clear more confusion, just specify and try and make an edit in the story and try and specify more on the main culprit if possible, because all we can know is that the culprit was very close to Nakul...... But on the whole, beautifully written dear!!! Keep it up!!!!
 
Well, now since the deflective shades are over, I'm soon waititng for your next story.... all the best and good luck!!!
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mast yaar gadha
wat a mind boggling end to a mind boggling series......

when i heard the name of DOGS in d starting paras,, my heart missed a beat...! 
but as usual u describe it all very beautifully...
This tym u keep a team of 3 in each chamber,,,,, lyked it!!
CULPRIT N MOTIVE : am really impressed..! ryt brain applied here 
this is definitely d best part from you.

All the best 4 u future stories


Edited by chick16. - 21 March 2011 at 5:05am
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WOW EXCELLENT WHAT A FINISHING Clap
Related to Nakul.....great idea......ur description is sooooo good as in previous level...I dnt comment about Kunal's homework but I must say ur homework is outstanding.....day by day u improve lot & lot & lot. One thing I like the most in ur story that there is a mindblowing thriller with a combination of our CID bondage...specially duo....when I read it I just imagine the whole scenario & I am Cry 4 my fav team.......... HOPE THIS KIND OF FABULOUS EPISODE WILL BE SEEN ON TV FROM OUR FW.....HAHAHA IS IT SO IMPOSSIBLE???LOLLOL
Keep it up boss Thumbs Up .....waiting for ur next story take ur time koi jaldi nahi hai & never think that ur writing is not good grammatically or any kind of error is there.....If it is there then also it is not bothered when coming to this kind of story Big smileBig smileBig smile


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