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~deewangi~ maaneet ff thread 11 NEW LINK ADDED (Page 47)

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Posted: 21 March 2011 at 10:51pm | IP Logged
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He saw her standing in a white suit hiding her face, feeling very conscious  because some one else mistake. Maan went & stood next to her, folding & resting one leg on the wall.
Maan took out a chocolate bar from his pocket & nibbled it -
kya huwa? (Wow mera hero, kya andaz hain)
she was too embarrassed to show her face. she kept quite he offered her a bite from the chocolate he was nibbling. she just shook her head
he forcefully fed her..trust me u will feel better. She immediately raised her head to look at him.

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he looked at her & probably just kept looking at her. she was feeling conscious with that stare ..he parted his lips still keeping her capacitive of his eyes
Maan -
I love u
Geet looked at him in awe

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Maan - I really love u
geet fluttered his eyes in disbelief this is was the first ever time he said it...she forgot to breath. his eyes looked so sincere filled only with her..in them... She felt so vulnerable to even look back at him.  she immediately looked down.

he moved closer to her. she inched back looking at his juti stepping towards her. She was cornered to the wall he raised his hand around her face & cupped it. He patted a kiss on her lips very softly & said I love u a lot.

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she closed her eyes tight as tight she could. her hand was cold & she felt shaken from her soul. she for the first time felt some thing like this in her entire life... his love in whole..
he smiled, excited enthu, like he have found what he desired the most in his life. he kissed & bounced back & jumped almost the way she jumped the first time she saw him..oh its u, its really u he held her arms & kept shaking her along with him. she opened her eyes one at time, he was delighted..filled with trust & passion.


He was crazily kissing her love u love love a lot. The whole media rushed to them. He cocoon her & took her into house. Reps don't u want her open the locker for us.

Maan looked at Geet.. no I don't want her to.
Reps asked Geet don't u want to open the treasure
I have already opened my treasure
she whispered as he carried her to the room. 

 
superb part especially the pink lines

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Posted: 21 March 2011 at 11:02pm | IP Logged
muski!!!!!!!!i love i love u i love u iluv u i luv a lottttt!!!!!!!!muahhhhhhhHeart

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Posted: 21 March 2011 at 11:08pm | IP Logged
Awh! No more Deewangi? Unhappy Nahiiiii...I loved this FF, well actually I loved and love all your FF's LOL
Great ending though...Finally Maan said he loved her Big smile
After all these years..Embarrassed


Thanks for this wonderful, spectacular FF Di..enjoyed it to the fullest!
Hopefully you'll be making another new FF very soon Wink

Great Work! Hug

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Posted: 21 March 2011 at 11:39pm | IP Logged
it was awesome update........plz dont end deewangi.....but i guess all good things come to an end....it was an mind blowing ff.....i thoroughly enjoyed reading it and waiting 4 updates...u r a superb writer...i wish there would be more parts.....will be waiting 4 ur next ff

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Posted: 21 March 2011 at 11:40pm | IP Logged
oh it is the end....but it is happy ending...I am glad Smile

but great ending must say, as they all say Love is blind but true love finds its way, and Maan and Geet found there.  Maan knew that Rimi was not Geet...

Tx Muski for the wonderful ff

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Posted: 21 March 2011 at 11:44pm | IP Logged
muski u r d best. am so in luv wif Deewangi
NOOOOOOOOO dont end deewangi.
we would really luv to hear more of maaneet's deewangi
Amazing.. D way he confess his luv to geet. d exact way how geet did to him.
So smart of maan. he caught d exact word of Rimi.
woo d  last part by
Rano - main ne kaha tha na..aaten hain honeymoon main jayen ge
am surprised.. i wouldn't hav if it was by Daadi LOL
I cant imagine Brij condition afta d attack by maan. poor man. played wif fire.
thx for ending Rimi's part. so sick of her.
Muski ccan u include their scene marrige symbol scene.. whr it is now..
n whr r her frens as well.. all went missing..
I wuld really luv to read if dis FF goes till 100th... lil too much aah.. Confused
How cute it would be if geet is being pregnant.. cutie pie geet is pregnant...
okok me goin overboard... will keep in pace.. wateva is it.. ill luv wats ur storyline goin to be..Wink

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Posted: 21 March 2011 at 11:49pm | IP Logged
very very nice....we need some epilogue updates....at least 2, pls

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Posted: 21 March 2011 at 11:52pm | IP Logged

Hey nice update r u planning to end this FF , if u have such plans pls come up with new FF ...i am demaning too much i guessWink..but i will miss this

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