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GUNS AND ROSES thread 2 part 25 (Page 58)

shah10 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 24 March 2011 at 7:36pm | IP Logged
great update

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RukhluvMaan  i read your comment on page 57 it needs guts to come up in a public forum and speak about these things hats of to you dearClapClapClapthis part is dedicated to you....sorry I don't know your nameEmbarrassed



un hazaron ke naam mera salaam


   Next morning Geet carried her laptop and the Dvd of the footage to the hospital'and yes yellow roses'Geet wondered if yrllow was his favourite color she also wore a yellow kurti'she peeped into his room and saw him chatting with Ravi'OMG he's smiling Geet control OMG kaise control karu yaar ye ACP mujhe pagal kar dega'.Gggood Morning..Geet since when do you stammer? He asked in his usual 'I don't care attitude'..and then he saw the yellow roses in her hand'.oh Geet you never forget these roses right and flashed a smile' Emm ACP are you okay? I mean she gestured mentally'why Geet what's wrong? Oh I am smiling is it so? Geet Ravi nabbed the prime suspect of the blast this morning and look at you tumhe pata bhi nehi you are covering crime beat right?

   No I am back to entertainment beat actually crime beat ke lie I had to fulfill a condition and I failed'and what was it? Asked Maan amused'I had to get your interview''but Geet you could show them the candid talk at the caf na? 'I could have ACP I also know you consider me to be dumb but I have ethics left in me'..Maan was bowled over this time'.oh this girl is interesting'.

      They watched the entire footage in silence'.Maan was stuck upon one face..he knew this guy'.he knew this terrorist'..Ravi I know this b******'.. Ravi go call the doctor now mujhe abhi plaster remove kar na hai I know where we'll get him'.Ravi I want him dead now''Maan had become hysteric' he removed the saline chords'..he had to move out'.

   Ravi rushed to get the doctor and nurse'..Maan tried to get of the bed'his wound still raw'.OOO God'he slumped on the ground'..even before the doctor or the nurse could reach Geet rushed to him'ap pagal ho kya? Apke bine Matribhoomi chal nehi sakti?? Maan looked at her wide eyed'..she was in tears'.bohut darad ho raha hai? Geet its okay I am used to all this'.he gestured the doctor to help him settle down on the bed'.ACP saab you need to be more careful'the wound needs to heal up or else infection spread ho jaega'.the nurse shot him a pain killer injection and left'Ravi also realized Maan needed some time alone with Geet and took his leave'..

    Geet stop crying this is not the first bullet that has hit me'..she was all cranked up'.Maan smiled at her and said Geet I keep on getting hurt every now and then if you start getting me flowers and caring for me this way tumhe apni job chhorke meri nurse ban na parega'.Geet whispered I wish I could'.Kya? nothing'

   She stayed for the whole visiting hour and left'.Maan was in dilemma'this girl was so delicate and soft he felt like protecting her..he liked her presence he smile'.Maan ye tu kya soch raha hai you are a married man what if your wife comes back and demands her right? Rights my foot she is one makkar aurat I'll never ever forgive her'.Maan but that doesn't change the fact that you are married'.he again drifted to her thoughts in the last 13 years he had been hurt a number of times'bullet injuries accidents daggers splinters people had prayed for him cared but what she did today was different'.Maan you are changing yes you are'he smiled

       Geet came with  roses for the next couple of days  he was so busy he didn't even say hello..she would smile and leave'she came in that morning hoping he would be alone but no he was with 3 of his junior officers analyzing something related to the attacks' Maan had a grim face'.Geet kept the flowers and stood looking at him wondering if he even noticed her'Geet said Maan stop giving me those lovey dovey looks dear a I am really busy I'll call you tonight'. Geet turned red and so did the 3 officers..they wondered what happened to this metamorphosed rock'.Geet was slowly leaving when he said Geet you look good in blue'.she was in a blue suit she blushed and left the spot'

   Officers now we need to look at these CCTV footages closely'no response'officers'.he looked up and saw the bewildered expressions on their faces'Now if you stop analyzing my feelings for Geet can we get back to work?


Geet had least expected he'd really call'she was half asleep when her phone rang...she said a sleepy hello..Geet tum to so gayi'she jumped up..he called..Geet I thought you'd wait for my call'I never expected you'll call'.why?...ap itne khadus jo ho'he laughed..khadus wow you have very high regards for me'Mr.Khurana you are ill you should be asleep by now'Geet you really love being my nurse it seems'.are you flirting with me Mr.Khurana? '.not at all Geet he laughed again'Mr. Khurana do you have a girlfriend?...Maan knew that was coming and he had no wish to give her any wrong signals'no Geet I don't I mean I can't have a girlfriend because I am married'..beep beep beep Maan's phone goes dead'..



Precap; Married you must be kidding may be he's gay


Edited by DILIBADAAT - 25 March 2011 at 2:34am

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..hinal.. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 24 March 2011 at 11:44pm | IP Logged
loved it n thank god maan told geet that he is married but i hope now atleast they get to know the truth that they are married to each other n reading the precap i think geet is talking to her

n yaaaaaaaaaa first one to commentPartyParty

Edited by hinal_maaneet - 24 March 2011 at 11:54pm

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sree12 Groupbie

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Posted: 24 March 2011 at 11:46pm | IP Logged
Plz ab sachchai ko samne ane do. Geet ko yeh pata lagna chahiye ke Maan uska pati hai. By the way awesome update. Totally loved it. Continue soon. Thumbs Up

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Posted: 24 March 2011 at 11:49pm | IP Logged
oh god !!now geet ll be so sad !!

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bono_jostna Senior Member

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aw!! Bad timing....waiting to see their reaction after knowing the truth!!

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geet now knows that he is married........................nice part.....................the officers r so baffled seeing maan's interaction with geet.....................

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