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- P.S- i luv u -a pkyek FF (Page 2)

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Posted: 20 March 2011 at 9:35am | IP Logged
love  all charact.....
i love the most piya misha relation
and also that shaurya is big bro of panchi and he is not gay
continue ur ff
 

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Sanugr8fan

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Posted: 20 March 2011 at 10:46am | IP Logged
Wouaouu it's a very nice post Big smile

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Sanugr8fan

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Posted: 20 March 2011 at 11:30am | IP Logged
Gr8 Characters.. Mish-Piya r sister brilliant.. Do Continue soon..n add me 2 ur pm list..

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Posted: 20 March 2011 at 1:02pm | IP Logged
Nice Start.
Glad another FF has been started.Pm me its link so I can add it in the fanfiction list.
And I like the character sketch how you made Piya and Misha sisters.
And Shaurya and Panchi brothers.Really cute.
Are Abhay & Sid brothers?ConfusedLOLI hope not.LOLIt should be Abhiya only.Big smile

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Posted: 20 March 2011 at 1:12pm | IP Logged
it looks really nice...u should continue..Smile

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Posted: 20 March 2011 at 7:26pm | IP Logged
Heya sweetheart nice idea :) continue soon :)

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Sanugr8fan

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Posted: 21 March 2011 at 12:11am | IP Logged
nice!

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Posted: 22 March 2011 at 8:21am | IP Logged
well i m not happy with the response i got.. i know dis show has gott mannny fans
anywayzz....for dose who commented and liked - a bigggg thnx HugLOL
m updating the first part today!
plzz oforgive me if u dont like it!
n i hope dat u will like it!SmileLOL
feeel freeee to commentTongue
 
 
PART ONE:  NEW BEGINING

*tring* *tring*...*tring* *tring*

The alarm is ringing constantly.. its 5 a.m ...two girls r sleeping on d bed ...d room is verrry smalll...n some packed bags r lying on d floor....

1 gal: chalo yyyaar uth jao....

2 gal: sone do na ...itnee jaldi kyu..

1 gal: bhul gayi kya....aaj hume dehradun jjane he...thoda to jaldi uthna hi padega...chalo ab uth jao...

2 gal:huh!...dehradun ke liye bus to dopeher ki he na!!...abhise kyu!!

1 gal: (thinks of something) misha dii!!....utho na!

misha: (sits up immedietely) piya!!..mene tumse kitnii barr kaha he mujhe dii mat bulaya karo....ajeeeb lagta he!!

piya: hehe...yahin ek tarika he tumhe uthane ka! chalo ab jaldi se naha lo...me nashta banane jati hu!

misha: thik he meri maa!

This was d everyday schedule of misha and piya...both used to live a verry normal n sweet life...everyday piya used to cook for dem n den dey would have their breakfast and den go to college ...after coming back home...both used to spend some time with each other discussing the happenenigs of college...den again misha used to help piya for making dinner and den both used to watch tv...n go to sleep!..

but today something was different...dey were goin to dehradun! to tk admission in new college...dey had got d permission ..

(in dehradun)

1 gal: bhaaiiiyaaaaaa!! aap hamesha itna ghussa kyu rehte ho ye din pe!

"dekh mene tujhe pehle hi bola he panchi..mujhse ye sawal mat kar...mujhe iske bareme bolna pasand nahi!

panchi: par....

"par var kuch nahi ..me ja raha hu college mein...kal se college shuru hone wala he

panchi: ( really angry) ha ha..jao sirf naaam hi shaurya he....batane se darte ho mujhe !!

shaurya: panchi!!...i m tired of this argument..once i tell you i dont want to answer this y cant you understand it

panchi: bhaiyya...m sorry mene rudely baat ki apse..par aap hi bolo..kya me jaanna nahi chahungi..ajj hamare parents ke death anniversary he ...tum kyu is din ghusse me hote ho????

shaurya: aisa....aisa kuch nahi he!

panchi: thik mat batana he to mat bolo...me apse baat nahi karne wali hu ...

shaurya was reallly surprised to c d usuallly quiet and polite panchi talk so rudely

"tumhe achanak se kya hua he"?

*no answer*

"bolo bhi panchi"

*still no answer*

shaurya is reallly tensed....he cant c his sis soo quite and sad...finaallly he decides to tell her d thing which he had been hiding from yearsss!!

"achhha thik he me tumhe aaj raat ko ghar pe aane ke baad bataunga"

"pakkkka??"

"ha baba ekdam pakka....ab jau??"

pachi hugs her bro and says she also needs to go to office

shaurya in his mind

"ab me kya bataunga panchi ko...kaise bataunga k uske parents ne ek ..."

"jaane de shaurya ab vo bhi badi ho gayi he..usse bhi janne ka haq he uske parents ki harkat ko"

saying this he goes...

(other side misha and piya are ready with der bags )

misha: ahh! atlast ho gaya! chalo ab

piya: i m soo excited misha ..me bohot excited hu....par bura bhi lag raha he...ye sheher chodke jaane me....yaha k doston ko chodke jaane me

misha: bas ho gaya rona dhona piya..mujhe bhi bura lagta he..par "new life is waiting for us "

piya; right.. our new life is going to start!...

misha: dehradun...here we come!!

~~btw- jus hav a look @ d name of d FF i gave it just now~~


Edited by Sanugr8fan - 22 March 2011 at 8:32am

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