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Guddu & Runjhun FF:U R MyWorld, My Love (C) (Page 18)

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Posted: 24 April 2011 at 12:35pm | IP Logged
Arrey...waah...Nidha Rani...tum to kamaale kar di...hum to ee nahi soch paa rahe hain...ki guddua gadahwa ke jaise itna soch kahe raha hai...kah deai jo dil me hai...Accha rahe diyo ...hamri Mahadevi hai na...aisan jagah chot ki hai ...ki wuho mathwa nochega aur jabtak samjhaiga hamre Pandey ji kahin koi planning na kar le...Tumra FFwa padh ke to hamra hirdaye parvartit ho gaya...maan gaye tumko...
                      Rani bitiya aab ...hamra hirday parivartit hoye gaya hai to jaldi se Guddua aur bojharani ka confessionwo  dikha do...hum kuch nahi kahenge...pakka wala promise
 
Nidh...tere liye meri jaan
 
Tere naam...humne kiya hai
Regards apna sara sanam
Tere FF ne banaya humko
Tera deewana sanam
Ab na humko tarpaana
O nidha Rani
Jaldi se  next part
ke darshan karwana
 
O nidha Rani
Jaldi se  next part
ke darshan karwan
 
Ab humko lagta hai tum samajhiye gayi hogi ki sur ka kah rahi...tohre aar tohar FF ke pyaar me baawri hue ja rahi haiWinkLOL
 
Love ya

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Posted: 24 April 2011 at 5:00pm | IP Logged
amazing. Waiting to know how'll both of them will unite!

Continue soon...

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Posted: 24 April 2011 at 11:21pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by niya2121

OMG...OMG...OMG...The last sentence was just purely fantastic Big smile...It was like a punch in the stomach...My eyes actually opened to their maximum capacity and I was like "Bravo Maha Bravo"Shocked...This chapter truly analyzed their conficting emotions in a beautiful manner...Their longing for each other,,,their ego blocking them from confessing their love...it was all there in a subtle manner...I loved it ...Nidha I wish one day I would be able to meet you...for that I don't know when I will be able to come to India but hopefully one day i will...And the first thing I will do is hug u for giving me a true pleasure by writing such depthful and wonderful FFHug

Niya you are generous with your words and i love you for your support...yes the last part was my favourite part too...i love to give G punches on his brain to get the guy thinking...well Mahadevi is my 2nd favourite after GunJun...so I made her do it...yes one day i wish to see you all brilliant ladies of this forum...and i will sure give you a bone breaking hug for giving us your wonderful ff..love you hunSmile

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Posted: 24 April 2011 at 11:26pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by tehzeeb25

nidha meri jaaanu maaanu ...
d last line was awwwedum ...
Ur mahadevi is defo better than d shows ..
It was realyyy saaad she left Cry
Get them bck togather sooon plezzz
update sooon eagerlyyy waiting pezzz...
Tehzeeb meri pyaari pyaari jaan...thanku for your immense support...yes my Mahadevi loves her sister and respects her relationships...the separation is only temporary to make them realise that they feel for each other...she'll be back sooon...love youSmile

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Posted: 24 April 2011 at 11:29pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by xxDaydreameRxx

OMG... that was an AWESOME updatee!!! u higlighted all of their emotions so clearly... really wondering how RG are gonna meet next..
loved thsi part and esp. the last part with Maha... feel like shes gonna play cupid for themm
Greatt job and plz keep updating this often! Big smileluv ur ff!!!
Thankyou daydream for the praise...happy to know that you enjoyed reading it...last partis mypersonal favourite too...Mahadevi cupid?...haven't thought along that line...lets see...love youSmile
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Posted: 24 April 2011 at 11:36pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sur001

Arrey...waah...Nidha Rani...tum to kamaale kar di...hum to ee nahi soch paa rahe hain...ki guddua gadahwa ke jaise itna soch kahe raha hai...kah deai jo dil me hai...Accha rahe diyo ...hamri Mahadevi hai na...aisan jagah chot ki hai ...ki wuho mathwa nochega aur jabtak samjhaiga hamre Pandey ji kahin koi planning na kar le...Tumra FFwa padh ke to hamra hirdaye parvartit ho gaya...maan gaye tumko...
Rani bitiya aab ...hamra hirday parivartit hoye gaya hai to jaldi se Guddua aur bojharani ka confessionwo dikha do...hum kuch nahi kahenge...pakka wala promise
Nidh...tere liye meri jaan
Tere naam...humne kiya hai
Regards apna sara sanam
Tere FF ne banaya humko
Tera deewana sanam
Ab na humko tarpaana
O nidha Rani
Jaldi se next part
ke darshan karwana
O nidha Rani
Jaldi se next part
ke darshan karwan
Ab humko lagta hai tum samajhiye gayi hogi ki sur ka kah rahi...tohre aar tohar FF ke pyaar me baawri hue ja rahi haiWinkLOL
Love ya
Aye Hai suro Rani...hamaar Guddua gadhwa thodi na hain...ee baat hain ki aapan gamand ke aage usse kucho dikhayi nahi deata...ee liye apne dil khol bhi nahi raha...par bhojarani chod kar gayi hain...aur aapki Mahadevi aisan jhatka diyo hain...toh aawenge hi na line par...eb dekh lena mazaa...Suro rani tumri dedication ne to humra dil khish kar diyo...aur humta pyaa aur bhi bad gaya hain...love youSmile

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Posted: 24 April 2011 at 11:39pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by newfoundlove

amazing. Waiting to know how'll both of them will unite!

Continue soon...
Thankyou dear...well the reunion is gonna take some serious effort as these two are tough nuts to crack...but thats makes it all the more fun...love youSmile

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Posted: 25 April 2011 at 12:11pm | IP Logged
Chapter 22...*Guddu was standing on a road...moonlight highlighting his disturbed features...where is she...his eyes were craving to get a sight of his angel,his life Rhunjhun...then she came breaking the darkness around him...looking serene and beautiful in white saree...he rushed towards her...Rhunjhun I...she placed a delicate finger on his lips...looking into his eyes through them into his soul which was now alive...you don't need to say it...I can feel your love...his face broke into a dazzling smile*...G jerked up from his dream at the noise from the kitchen...cursing under his breath andstill reeling from the shockof seeing her so close in his dream...he headed to the kitchen...he found his father fumbling for something..."Bauji youshould havejust woken me up...what are you searching for"..."Oh its okay Guddu was trying to make something to ease this acidity...you were sleeping peacefully thought not to disturb you...well i guess i'll do somethingin the morning...the kitchen is a mess ever since..."Dinanth caught himself on time...mentioning R's name lately had unpredictable effects on his son...sometimes he raged up,...but mostly he just walked out of the house...which was not good at this hour...butwhat his son said next surprised him.."You miss her right?" G asked his father calmly..."don't you beta...its like there is a deep hole in our life...after your mother left...this house was never the same...but when Rhunjunwas here it was back to being that old Shukla Niwaas...her smile in the morning was enough to brighten the day...if anything i miss that the most"Dinanth sighed heavily...Guddu was lost for words...he didn't want to stand there being scrutinised by his father so he asked his father what to make torelieve acidity and proceeded to make it...all through the process his mind was fixed on Rj and his latest dream...his condition was worse than Dinanth's because his wife had an irritating habbit of visiting his dreams...from the time she left almost all his dreams contained her...he gave his father the medicine..."You didn't answer my question son?"...questions,questions and even morr questions...he was slowly going mad with finding answers for them...his SIL's question was the prime among them#Would you be able to go alone?# it just kept hovering in his thoughts..."I don't know Bauji...she's left a hole as you said...but why should that bother me so much...what does she mean to me?"...again question..."Look withon your heart son"Dinanth said placing his hand over G's chest for a moment...G headed back to his room...he decided to take a shower to clear his hea...and maybe he'll be able to sleep better...he opened his closetto take out a towel in the process came across a saree which she had left behind...he gently lifted it as if he was lifting her...he remembered how fragile she seemed in his hand after he brought here from the bus stand incident ,the smell of her hair when she was in his arms after falling from the stool,always wanting to hug her,protect her,kiss her,love her...love her...thats it...he loved her...beyond reason beyond measure ...the intensity with which this fact struck him had him reeling for a few moment...he was in a bliss for sometime...but then the bubble broke she is gone...forever...and now i realise that I love her...Its been almost two months since Rj left...Mahadevi missed her sister sorely but never spoke about it to Amma...they had decided not to tell Amma...she called Rj on daily basis...her sister was well off it seemed from her voice but something was amiss in her voice...she was surely not fully happy...Maha got her answer when she met Guddu...or rather he came to meet her at college...Guddu din't have the faintest idea how to ask Mahadevi for help...to make matters worse his nervousness was obvious...he was afraid that his firecracker SIL would probably blast him when he asked her to give her sisters address...but was surprised by her calm response..."Why do you want to meet her?...she gave you the money you needed right?...she told me about the deal...so then whats your problem now"...Mahadevi had noticed her jeeju's agitation...something was eating him.."I just wanted to see if she was fine"he managed to say staring at a wall..."You could just call her i will give you tge number"Mahadevi said taking out her phone..."Mahadevi i want to meet her to bring her back...i need her in my life...i just need her "he blurted out...Mahadevi supressed a smile...her jeeju was lovestruck...she was happy for her Di but still not ready yo go easy on him "Why to hurt her more?...to treat her like you always have...afterall she lodged a rape charge on you" sarcasm was evident in Maha's tone..."I know that i have done wrong and ready to correct them...am just asking for a second chance with my wife"...the conviction in his eyes and voice were unmistakable...he really wanted a chance..."Well i will give you her address...but remember hurt her and you will have hell to pay..." she threatened him...G smiled at his SIL...the girl was polar opposite to her sister...but her devotion to her sister was unquestionable...he knew that she meant what she said..."You miss her too right?" he asked..."Like hell,but i am not risking hurting her again...she never knew happiness in her life...now wherever she is atleast she has a peaceful life...i don't want that to change"she glared at G but gave him the address..."I know and am never going to change it either...i'll just share her peace"he smiled...Rhunjhun was peaceful yet restls,satisfied yet not so...she was loved by one and all in the otphanage...everyone wanted her attention...but yet she felt lonely sometimes...like a piece of her was missing...her thoughts were always wandering towards him...his last words#You are free to go Rhunjhun Mishra# ...he had said it easily,he was giving her freedom,but yet she couldn't enjoy it...she didn't know what love was...but if having someone occupy every second ofyour thoughts was love...then yes she was in love...if missing someone terribly was love...then yes she was in love...she loved her now never to return husband Guddu Shukla...maybe that was the reasonshe never was fully happy...she knew not what to think...she wanted to see him once then maybe her mind could rest...but she also knew this was a wasted wish...they had no future together...he didn't love her...and it didn't matter to him if she loved him...but still Rhunjhun loved Guddu

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