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Guddu & Runjhun FF:U R MyWorld, My Love (C) (Page 16)

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Posted: 22 April 2011 at 5:14am | IP Logged
Dear amazing work and the precap was great. Day by day u r making us more exicited. Great Job.

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Posted: 22 April 2011 at 9:08am | IP Logged
superb!

Doctor, you have another patient to treat Wink

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Posted: 22 April 2011 at 2:53pm | IP Logged
Honeslty I'm running out of words to explain my feelings regarding your evergreen FF. Awesome,
Wonderful, Amazing, BeautfiulBig smileBig smileBig smileBig smileBig smileBig smile
 
Loved  the button scene, just way too cute Claploved the way u wrote their emotions
 
awww can't wait to hear them say I LOVE ULOLLOLLOL
 
Update soon my sweet heart EmbarrassedSmile

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Posted: 22 April 2011 at 5:25pm | IP Logged

Ur ff is truly a masterpiece!! i read and enjoyed alll the parts and u certainly had me hooked!! m so happy that i came across this!

luving teh way the story is going so far and i hope u keep writing like thsi and updating often since i really CANNOT wait to read whats next!! Keep up the work... ur an amazing ff writer!!

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Posted: 23 April 2011 at 1:04am | IP Logged
Chapter 20...The college was slowly being filled by the families and students coming to see the exhibition...Guddu wasn't enjoying being there...he found it too boring...he was looking handsome in a black check shirt with denims...girls who were commuting through the fair ground were shamelessly oggling at him...Rj who was standing beside him was getting irritated by the minute...she felt like covering Guddu up with a sheet...she was already edgy about seeing her family...to add fuel to fire..these shameless gits were n't looking ready to backoff...#whats with these girls ...can't they leave a married man ...now now why does that botheryou Rhunjhun...her inner voice almost mocked...i am not bothered girls should know better than to oggle at a married man its disgraceful...yeah right you don't care...aaarrrgh the irritating voice#...Guddu was watching Rj's face for a long time...she had been nervously twirling her white saree's pallu at first...but when she started noticing the girls oggling at him her fists had unconsciously balled up...she was looking workedup...#Awww she looks so cute... G thought...she is looking stuning in white...but now she is angry she's looking cute#...G chuckled bringing RJ out of her reverie.."What?" she snapped irritatedly "Why are you smirking?" "Just wondering why are you giving those poor souls such killing looks...they are doing no harm...its hard to resist Guddu Shukla's charm"G said giving one such girl a dazzling smile...this got his wife even more irritated..."Just because they are staring at you doesn't make you the most handsome man on earth" saying this Rj stormed off to the end of the corridor they were standing at...she went and stood at a corner and pretende to ignore him while actually watching him out of the corner of her eyes...A man who came from somewhere to Rj's left dropped his mobile near her accidentally...Rj bend and picked it up and her hand brushed against his while giving it back..."Thankyou beautiful lady...mayi have the pleasure of knowing your name...i am Rohan Arora by the way" he smiled charmingly and extended his handto shake...Now it was G's turn to get workedup...R gave a sidelong look to G and was pleased as punch to see him looking daggers at Rohan...but she didn't shake hands with the stranger...she just folded her hand & said "Pranamm i am Rhunjhun Shukla"..."Lovely name for equally lovely lady" Rohan said...Rhunjhun smiled brightly at him...G had started walking towards her#What the hell...when did she start chit chatting with random strangers#..."So ma'am are you a student here or came to visit the fair with someone" Rohan had noticed G heading theit way and by the look he was giving Rohan he looked very much ready to punch him...jealousy was written all over his handsome features..."Actually i am here with my husband...Guddu Shukla"she introduced G who was now right beside her staring hard at Rohan.."Pleasure to meet you Guddu...you have a very beautiful wife herr" Rohan extended his hand and got a very rough hand shake"I better headoff tothe exhibition ground...i am here to inaugrateit" he smiled at R who smiled back...Rohan hile turning to go bumped into Mahadevi who as she was already in a foul mood almost screeched "Dekh nahi chal sakthe kya" before looking at his face...she was momentarily lost in his handsome face and deep brown eyes before being snapped back by his "You could do the same too" he said tauntingly"Oh please...find another excuse" she said irritatedly moving towards Rj..."Di...Amma and others areon their way...we better head to the exhibition ground...don't know what is keeping the great Mr.Arora who has to do the inaugration...hazaar baar request kiya tha princy se ki Shaanti ma'am se inaugration karwayenge...she is retiring this year...but mo he is smitten by this Arors guy...he was sn old favourite of princy and now runs a successful investigation agency..." Maha ended rolling her eyes.."Hope that idiot doesn't showup...that way Ma'm can do the honour"Maha ended with wicked smile...R all thr while had been trying to watn her with eyes while G was controllinghis laughter...Rohan was amusedly listening to the girl berating him...she was beautiful just like her elder sister but ..."The idiot Arora is at your serbice ma'am "Rohan bowed to Mahadevi...Maha looked thunderstruck while G burstout laughing at his SIL look...R too was supressing a laugh..."Why don't we head to the ground"G said"Its getting late"Maha recovered from her shock and scurried past Rohan...?while Rj and G followed her..."Amma"Rj almost ran towards her grandma and hugged her..."Meri bechi...kaise ho tum...pata hain mein kitnikhush hu aaj...lagta hain aarso baat tumse mulaqat hui hain"Amma said while continuing to hug Rj...Diamond and Babli were pleased as punches to see their Badi Di...they had missed her very much...Maha was also tearful...G had taken Amma's blessing and was standing a little back from everyone...M&M's were least bit pleased to find her...they could definitely see the changes in R...she looked healthier and happier...G was also looking relaxed and happy...Vishnu had earlier found out about R's whereabouts...for quiet a few says now they had been discussing of ways to get R back to Pandey Niwaas...they had been counting verymuchon the fact that there would be attachment between R and G...G had told them on the fatal morning when R found out about her relatives that nothing had happened between them on the previous night and nothing ever would...they had been baffled why G had taken R away with him...Vishnu once heard his mother telling Mahadevi about the bankpapers she gave R...thats when they understood that he might have taken her away to get the money...but they were still confused as tl why he had gone through tne drama ofBidaai...now they wereonly bothered about getting their Bhagonwali back...but it looked like there was a change i n her relation with G...Rj just smiled at her uncles and aunts...she still couldn't digest their betrayal..."Aye hai bhojarani...bahut khush lag rahi hon...jindagi khushi khushi guzar rahi hain ka?"Mittho tauntingly asked her.."To mittho jiji...now when she is with Guddu she will be happy ,kyun Rhunjhun?"added Billo..."Heroin ko apna hero jab mil hi gaya toh...khushi hikhushi hogi..."Kalsanwali said gritting her teeth...Amma was intently watching her granddaughter...she looked better and happier but sadness lingering in her eyes couldn't be ignored...everything was surely not okay...But she wasn't going to quesion R...Maha had informedher that R was safe and happy in G's house...she had also told about Dinanth Shukla...Amma was happy to know that an elderwas there in the house...R was feeling hurt while wanted nothing better than to snap off their heads...#Witches you better stop hurting her or i will...# G angrily thought...Out of the corner off his eyes he saw Vishnu P beckoning to hi brothers and three headin off to somewherr...out of curiosity he decided to follow the...The Pandeys found an empty classroom and wentin..."Mein kahta hoon Vishnu ab kya kare...it looks like thesetoo are close now"Rajju said sittingon a bench...G was listeningfrom besides the window..."I noticed that Rajju bhaiyya...i so damn want tokick myself for taking Guddu's help...i was planning to go to Rhunjhun and force he to register a case against G for taking her money forcefully...but now?" Vishnu looked at sea..."Don't do anything like that last timeyou told me you made her file a rape charge against him ...and he married her for revenge...do anything like that now and he moght as well finish her off"Rajju did an action of cutting his throat...Guddu stood there shocked...#so i punished her for no mistake of hers...hey bhagvaan# G felt his heart sink...but soon it was replaced boiling seething anger...he stormed into the class and grabbed a surprisedVishnu by his collar and slammed him to the wall..."You lying lowly monster...you filed the case against me and framed it on an innocent girl...now you'll know what my anger is you"...Rajju and Buntu were trying to stop Guddu..."You arr the worst kind i have seen...you stab your own relatives in the back" G continued raving angrily while hitting Vishnu..."You are no better Guddu ji" came an angry voice from the doorway...G turned to see Rj standingtherr lookibg angrily at him..."Leave chote mama...if he deserves to be punished so do you...you realise now that you did a mistake what punishment are you going to give yourself Gudduji?...moreover theres no use punishinganyone when the damage is done" Rj was in tears now..."Leave them and lets go home ...Bauji is alone there"

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Posted: 23 April 2011 at 2:37am | IP Logged
Loved it as usual

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Posted: 23 April 2011 at 2:54am | IP Logged
Cool dear it is great reading ur story continue soon.

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Posted: 23 April 2011 at 3:34am | IP Logged
Nidh...do I need to say what I felt...I will show What I felt
 
just loved it ...what an update...muah...to you for making my happygolucky...Jealous Runjhun...O teri...Runjhun ji jaliye nahi...hum logo ke saath dohraiye...Tera jara sa bhi dola jo imaan ...Tu saala kaam se gaya...Back ke raha na meri jaan...tu saala kaam se gaya...
 
Now what...why will she leave the houser?? Where he will find her...Will shout like Romeo or Sing like Baiju Bawra...for knowing this stick to the topic and recite with me...
 
Nidh...tu jaldi se kar update...tera allah kher kareWinkLOL

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