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Guddu & Runjhun FF:U R MyWorld, My Love (C) (Page 11)

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Chapter 16........................................................................................................ "SO where do you plan to go"Guddu asked RJ as he stashed the money she gave into his bag........RJ was completely at sea ......she had decided to go to some orphanage and work there......the orphans could really use her luck.......but she didn't know where to find one...."Well you are not planing to come with me right"G asked again seeing her confused......just say yes Rhunjhun her heat said......no way her mind retaliated.....you hate him remember....no i don't her heart replied promptly...he snapped his fingers in front of her......she jerked"What...oh um.....i am going to an orphanage somewhere away from here.....i want to work for the orphans"she said hastily hidingher confusion....It was nearing night and the bus stand was almost emptying.....he didn't like the idea of leaving her alone.."Decide where you want to go...i'll be back after giving this to my friends....."....he walked away before she could quiz him......Why would he come back does he care for me she wondered.....RJ sat on a nearby bench and was soon lost in thought........she flashed back toall the incidents with Guddu....he had always kept awayfrom hatming her physically atleast...emotionally he had tormented her for sure....but he never once harmed her physically doesthis show that he had a caring side? or did he only care about himself?...she had once seen him muttering in sleep about his Amma...his face showed intense grief at the time....did he really love her so much to show such intense grief?.....RJ was baffled....she was sure that there was more to Gudduthan he let out.....his eyes spoke volumes.....but she was afraid to have anyother feelings other than hatred for him........afraid that he might break her heart.....afterall hewas a devil most of the times............................. Guddu meanwhile was heading to his home after many years.......he had seen his father two days back.....hewas a broken man now.....he regreted his deeds.......he wanted his son back......Guddu had downright refused at first......but when he knew that his father has been taken ill......and was asking for him constantly....he decided to meet him.....afterall his Amma would want that...........he was sadened to see his fathers state....the once proud Dinanth Shukla was now so broken and lonely......he was happy to see Guddu.....Guddu stayed with him for long and left when he slept.....he asked the doctor about the treatment.....Doctor said it would require 4 lakhs....thats when he decided to speedup matters at Pandey Niwaas......but now all he could think was of Rhunjhun....what was the girl planing to do with her life?Wherr wouldshe go?Will she be safe?....he didm't know why he cated so much but he did......From the time he had spent at Pandey Niwaas he had understood her to be a selfless being atleast to her own blood.....she loved her Amma and siblings deeply.....she was willing to sacrifice her home for its happiness........would she behave that way with me ifshe loved me.....probably not she considers me as a disgusting animal...................................he went home kept the money there and returned to the standonly to find her gone.......................................................................RJ was so immersed in thought that she didn't see the thugsapproaching her..."Hey sweety what are you doing here alone at this time"one of the four thugs leered at her......RJ looked at them with fright....all of them were so meaty that she had no chance against them.."I am waiting for my husband"she answered in a defensive tone....."Oooooh...your husband what husband would leave his wife here at this hour....don't lie and comewith us sweets......we will treat you better than him" another one jeered...."Dekhiye mere pati abhi ayenge...aap log chale jaaeye"she said sternly even though she was shivering inside.......One of them dragged her to her feet..."leave me now...let me go"she screamed.....she couldn't find anyone nearby to call for help.....she saw a driver and called outbut he walked away as if he didn't see....they muffled her mouth and dragged her away....RJ was sittingin lonelier part of the stand so the goons didn't face anyone at that hour......she was struggling trying to kick them..........Guddu had seen the scuffle in the far corner.....but thought that it might be some local goons...he didn't want to involve so he turned away thats when"Aaaaaaaaaaah..."Rj screamed as one of them twisted her arms........Guddu felt his heart stop........he ran to the spot without wasting much time.....the site he saw would stay with him till death........Two ofthe goons were trying to pin down Rj who was fighting back tearfully.....the other two was enjoyinn her torment......He rored like a lion and threw himself at them......those two were easy to handle...they were meaty but not strong....he stood between them and herwho was looking at him and them fearfully.....she was afraid hewould get hurt......."Leave now she is my wife and how dare you filthy oafs touch her" he bellowed.....but they weren't budging....they moved forwards menacingly glaring at their prey......In the fight that followed Guddu got hurtin the forehead which made RJ scream"Gudduuuu".....meanwhile his freinds had come searching gor him.....they knew that he had gone with RJ to the bank and he had told them thathe would be at home......they had come searching for him as a neighbour had seen him in the stand earlier......Kukkan heard RJ scream Guddu's name and rushed there.......RJ was trying to stop the Goons from hitting Guddu in the process one of them grabbed her and slammed her head against a wall.....Guddu again roared and gave the man a well aimed kick in the stomach....His freinds rushed in and tackled therest.....Guddu rushed to Rhunjhun whose head was bleeding and as she was loosing consciousness she uttered his name faintly.......he picked her up and headed home...........he was not letting her out of his site again......he accepted the fact that he cared too much for her.......wether she hated him or not............................................."Gudduuuu"she screeched again waking him from his slumber...he was annoyed at first but then saw that she was awake and was holding her head in pain........he immediately moved to her side........they were in his room at his house.......he had brought her there as it was the nearest place........the doctor had checked and said that she was bruised but was fine...."Are you okay"he asked placing his arm gently on her shoulders...shr wipped her head and was looking bewildered at him.."You are alive"she whispered....he saw fear in her beautiful eyes which was soon replaced by relief at finding him alive...he smiled and gave her a glass of water...she drank it in one gulp and again stared at him,......then she looked at her surrounding it was dustybut furnitures were well organised.....she was lyingon a medium sized bed...therewas an almirah,atable with some books..and a dressing table.."Where are we"sheasked cautiously...."At my home"he was watching her crefully.....she seemed okay apart from the bruise on her arm and the wince she gave out when her head hurt.............."You shou.ld rest now....you had a rough evening......the head will hurt ifyou stay up more"he saidin a voice filled with concern.."she nodded and lied down obediently....her head was thumping and she knew she couldn't walk in this condition.....he covered her and switched ofthe lights....again sat on the chair on which he was sleeping earlier....she decided to think about her future in the morning

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Chapter 17............................................................................................... Dinanth Shukla was really happy to have his son back.....he owed him a lot for destroying his future and sending him on a wrong path in life.......but his son was back now and was also paying to treat him.....this time he didn't ask where the money came from........he didn't know how much more time he had in life....but he was determined to change his sons life.....better late than never he thought.........but he didn't know where to begin......thats when he heard the conversation between Guddu and the girl he had brought in last night..................................... "How does your head feel now"he asked her.....Dinanth heard concern in his sons voice...."It's fine now....thankyou for saving me....." the girl said in a melodious voice...."I did what was right" Guddu said shrugging his broad shoulders.........why was his son lying.....he had seen Guddu's face last night when he brought her home unconscious......he was genuinely stricken by the girls condition.....now why is he showing a carefree attitude......Rhunjhun looked disappointed ......she had thought that she saw concern for her in his eyes...but now he was saying he just did the right thing........Guddu was busy avoiding her eyes......he couldn't show his concern for her......afterall she was moving out of his life...."Are you alone in this house"she asked..."No my father is therr in the other room....he is not well.....so I came here to take care of him" Guddu explained.....RJ was surprised......not because he had a family but because he said he was taking care of his father......so he actually cared for someone........she was smiling at the thought..."What are you smiling at"he asked in an annoyed tone......."Nothing.....i guess i should just get ready and get going" she said....This was the part he feared ....Guddu didn't want her going away untill she was absolutely right.....but how to stop her.."Umm listen......I think it would be better if you stayed for a few more days....untill you are fully okay"he said cautiously.....Rj had her back to him.....so he didn't see her surprise mixed withjoy expression...."What would you say to your father about keeping a girl herr....he wouldn't approve"she said tentetively......"Why would he disapprove...you are my wife and I am keeping you here....whats wrong in that"he said in an exasperated voice.......So thats why he was so stricken...this girl is his wife Dinanth thought......so his son had a family.."But for how long.....we are not going to be together for long....how will you explain that to your father....no its better i leave now before he sees me....this way you won't have to do an explanation"she said in a firm voice....RJ didn't want to stay longer than necessary she didn't trust her heart which was already starting to feel something for Guddu.....she had decided last night that she didn't hate him anymore....she cared for him....but she had a strange feeling that if she stayed it would go beyond that.........Guddu was irritated by her stubborness...fine if she wanted to go he wasn't about to stop her........after all she was nothing to him.....he felt a pang in his heart at this thought...okay he did care for her...but she seemed determined not to take his help......"Okay then have your way....get ready andi will leave you at the bus stand"saying this he stormed out.....Dinanth noticed his sons expression...he was angry but also hurt.........he didn't know why his son and wife where going separate when it was evident from tneir faces that they cared too much for each other....he could see the girls beautiful face was disappointed....maybe she had thought that her husband would stop her.........Dinanth saw this as an opportunity to mend his deeds......"Bitiya "he called gently....making RJ jump......"I didn't mean to eavesdrop but i just heard your conversation......so you both have decided to go separate ways"he didn't ask as a question but just stated...RJ understood that this old man must be Guddu's father......now how does she explain to anill old man why his son and wife were separating......she mentally kicked Guddu for placing her in this fix......she went and touched his feet.."Sukhi raho.......I didn't come to stop you....I do not want to interfer in your personal life....but I would suggest you to stay here a little longer....it would do you no harm dear....Guddu is right in saying that you should be fully well before you leave....if something happens to you on the wayyou will be all alone right.......also it would give my old heart a little peace knowing thatyou left the house in a fit statewere you are able to take care of yourself..............becoz you are my DIL right?"he smiled kindly at her......he was right about her being all alone.......she would have to fend for herself.......her present state was not that good.........also therr was something about this old man that made hwantto agree.....maybe because he reminded her of Amma.....Dinanth knew that the girl would agreeto his request......she may have denied his son......but she looked like the kind of girl who respecyed elder's wishes.........he didn't want to force her into a relationship with his son......but he was trying to buy them sometime........maybe if they stayed together they could work out their differences........it was evident they cared for each other......maybe their care just needed to change into love.............................................................Guddu was relieved that she had agreed to stay back on his fathers request...............though he was surprised why his father was not quizzing him............she seemed to blend into his household very well......when he returnedafter storming off he found her in the kitchen preparing tea for his father.....she just glanced up and smiled at him.........he hadn't asked for tea but anyways she gave it to him.........she asked about the cut on his forehead wether it hurts or not......he was damn sure he heard concern in her voice.......she wasmore badly injured than him yet she showed him concern........only a few hours before she wanted to go away yet here she was asking about his well being..........she amazed him with her nature which closely resembled his Amma's......he was begining to feel something else for her....but he didn't want to acknowledge it....not when she was planing to go away soon......................Dinanth was successfully operated on.....but the doctors had given strict instruction that he shouldn't work......he needed atmost care and someoneshould be by him 24/7...............Guddu had thought of hiring a home nurse when Rhunjhun had volunteered for the job......RJ had stayed there for a week....she had really grown close to Dinanthwhom she called Bauji now......she couldn't leave him in this condition.........it would be really good to see him back healthy and then go knowing that she had done atleast one good deed for her family................Dinanth was overjoyed.......for the last one week he had crefully observed them...though they were at each others neck most of the time.......they had tried to be freindly with each other as well.......a littile more time would be good for them he thought.....he really didn't want his DIL gone.....she seemed to bring light to his house...........her smile just brightened the day....he never had a daughter but now he knew what it would be like to have one..................................................................Rhunjhun wad searching for some book her Bauji had asked....he told that he had stashed some away in the almirah in Guddus room.........rJ didn't no thay Guddu was in the bathroom.....so she was stunned to see him walking out of the bath topless andwearing only a towel....shewas standing on stool andsearching for the book in the top part of the almirah.......when she saw him her hands stopped searchingshe atred at his well toned body for afew minutes before gazing away blushing beetroot red.........he had noticed her blushand it made him smile crookedly....for some reason it gave him pleasure to know that his wife had reaction to him......he just loved to see her blush like that........she looked all the more beautiful......he moved to the cupboard next to her to retrieve his clothing.....when he had brushed against her side he felt her shiver....she was purposefully avoiding looking at him.....but her blush was stillvisible........when he moved away he accidentally pushed her stool making her land in his arms squarely........she had her eyes tightly shut.....her one arm was placed across his bare shouldersthe other one resting on his chest.......her head was placed in the crook of his neck .....he could feel her breathing heavily........his manly scent was tantalising her already haywire senses..............he was breathingin her sweet scent which was senting his senses on an overdrive........his fingers touching the exposed part of her waist were on fire...........she felt her whole body getting ignited......she slowly raised her head....to look into his eyes......and this time both could see unmasked longing in each other.......their trance was broken by his father suddenly calling for her..........he placed her down gently and she scurried away......he leaned against the almirah with his pulse raising........

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