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Raindrops - A Story || Last Chapter : Page 50 (Page 8)

mulan. IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 21 March 2011 at 8:40am | IP Logged
wow jaee!!!!!!!! ur a fabulous writer!!!!! ClapClapClap
i just read both the parts and i was smiling at the cuteness of daniel, anna, chris and thn suddenly ali and saba!!!!!! wow!!!!!! beautifully wirtten and i could feel a shiver whne it came to Saba's adn Ali's story... the last sentence was so heart wrenching!!! i loved the name of the story too and the way u gave a brief intro to the story and love in general!!!
looking forward to an amazing experience through this story!!! Smile
thanks for the pm and do continue soon!! Smile

P.S. i simply love ur signature!!!!!!!! Embarrassed



Edited by mulan. - 21 March 2011 at 8:46am

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Posted: 21 March 2011 at 9:05am | IP Logged
aw it's amzing i can feel it

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Posted: 21 March 2011 at 9:38am | IP Logged
Liked how one couple is strting to fall in love
N enjoying this newly found feeling
Felt bad for the other couple who was being separted by this society
Its hard to get ur true love

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Posted: 21 March 2011 at 9:42am | IP Logged
again beautiful..well u re-define this word.

i love where contrast prevails, this is the only reality of world in my opinion, we see contrast in every phase of life , if one is blushing, then the other one is trembling in fear. If anna is slowly whispering chris's name, then ali is making his heart believe that he won't be able to address saba again.

They say that fear and love leave their impact in a moment, and the two people meeting in train went through both these emotion, so i can imagine the combined effect.

cont. soon..it is one of its kind..

God Bless..

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Posted: 21 March 2011 at 9:53am | IP Logged
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omg jaee...firstly again i wud say ur just awesome!! like seriously......
the two stories....both diff but yet on d path of love.....one ,d love is bloomin...Anna n Chris r really very cute..!! n the other-seperated, dont evn kno they r still alive....wow/....waitin fr d part3 ...do cont asap hun!
just loving this one too!Embarrassed thnx fr sharing! its a pleasure readin ur stuff!!Big smile


Edited by Nikita-Sharma - 22 March 2011 at 6:34am

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Posted: 21 March 2011 at 10:48am | IP Logged
beautiful update!!
thanks 4 the pm

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Posted: 21 March 2011 at 10:59am | IP Logged
feeling soo sad for ali n saba....n ali ws being tortured jus afetr dat acident...so sad......n anna n chris....jus too cute....EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

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Posted: 21 March 2011 at 11:39am | IP Logged
Anna and Chris... where love is beginning to spread its petals
Ali and Saba.... where love has been ruthlessly butchered

You have beautifully entwined the two diametrically opposite stories beautifully

Thanks for letting me be a witness to it
Thanks for the pm 

~jiya~

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