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Raindrops - A Story || Last Chapter : Page 50 (Page 54)

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Posted: 23 April 2011 at 10:09am | IP Logged
Jaeee

I was so happy for Anna-Chris but after reading Ali-Saba's story all my happiness drowned

beautiful ending

Chris-Anna were lucky to be strong

but Ali-Saba were even more lucky as in heaven no one will separate them

each story had it's own beauty

do write more

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Posted: 23 April 2011 at 10:15am | IP Logged
Excellent part jaee...ClapClap

Dnt know whether i should be happy or sad...The marriage ws blissful...Every word, every smiles just reached through my heart...And the vows...Cant praise enough as the words felt short...
But the death ws terrible...My hands wr trembling when they wr running to escape...They already suffered a lot...I never wanted this ending for them...Tears wr on the way in the ending part...U wrote sooo beautifully that i cudnt resist them to flow down...But as u said their love became eternal...
Even loved the 'colors of love'...Dnt know why but the Arabic thought touched me the most...Specially this two stages-ibadat and junoon...

Thnxx for this brilliant piece...Though i cudnt cmnt in every part but i've read all the parts and this ws really a wonderful journey...
God bless u dear...Write more...Hug

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Posted: 23 April 2011 at 10:22am | IP Logged
1 got love n their living happily
While other got love but got death also
Sumwhr happy for Anna n Chris n Sumwhr sad for Saba n Ali
Loved the way u showed the emotions n 2 stories at the same tym
On part happy n one sad
Hats off to u

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Posted: 23 April 2011 at 2:59pm | IP Logged
Really that Was so Beautiful story a perfect ending
Thanks for pm 
write more

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Posted: 23 April 2011 at 3:30pm | IP Logged
These were such beautiful stories. Anna and Chris & Ali and Saba all had their shares of pain and separation, but in the end, their love triumphed and they became one, whether through marriage or through death. Their ultimate goals were to become one and that is what they achieved. 


I absolutely LOVED these two stories Heart  I really liked the stages of love you added at the end to describe the journey of each couple SmileYou're an amazing writer and I hope you continue to write such profound stories! 

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Posted: 28 April 2011 at 4:29am | IP Logged
part 11...
OMG.. i feel soo bad 4 chris .. he has been trappd by his parents...n saba as well...i felt soo bad 4 her also!
dunno wt wil happen next,...
rush 2 read it!

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Posted: 28 April 2011 at 4:35am | IP Logged
part 12...
heart wrenching...
aww... saba ali.. gonna get attacked...
ab kya hoga!!!
rush 2 read d next update!

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Posted: 28 April 2011 at 4:41am | IP Logged
part 13...
omg.. i'm soo happy.. saba got 2 know dat ali is alive...
but d flashbacks of dem wr sooo terrible... n painful...
now anna gonna marry sum1 else... par chris?

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