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Posted: 14 April 2011 at 11:24am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -jaee-

 What do you mean by straight from my heart?Shocked


straight from your heart means seeedhaaa dil se Embarrassed and well i live in your heart..so i know what comes from your heart..Embarrassed


Edited by -Mehak - 14 April 2011 at 11:25am

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Posted: 14 April 2011 at 12:39pm | IP Logged
reserved!!

*edited*

I really don't have words now. I feel bad for Chris, he's being tricked, his love is being mocked at, and he doesn't even know. He is living in a world of delusion that will come crashing down soon. I hope he has the strength to bear it. As for Anna, she did the right thing to stand by her dad, but she has to know that its not Chris' fault. Misunderstandings are the biggest enemies of love. I hope they come out of it.

Saba should have foreseen this when she knew she had fallen in love with a person like Ali. The world is too cruel to give a second chance to people like him, and it doesn't hold any mercy for those like her too. This is was coming, and I was not surprised. but now, my hopes for a bright future has risen, because already they have passed a lot of hardships, which Chris and Anna has just begun with.

Wonderfully written Jaee

God Bless You

~jiya~

P.S. knowing that my reserved posts make you smile, brings a bigger smile on my face. Keep smiling always Jaee.


Edited by jiya_angel - 15 April 2011 at 4:54am

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Posted: 14 April 2011 at 2:24pm | IP Logged
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god!! poor saba....no body heard her.....evn if they wer against it,they cud hav talked calmly...but poor soul..locked n all...Ouch
n chris-anna...gosh..they r right in thr places..parents' respct is d biggest...but Chris doesnt kno..his parents r just mockin his feelin n using his love fr them to trick..:(
jaee awesome update..do cont soon..Embarrassed wonderfully written as usual..:)
tc keep smiling:)Embarrassed


Edited by Nikita-Sharma - 15 April 2011 at 4:15am

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Posted: 14 April 2011 at 2:28pm | IP Logged
awesome update
loved it lots
cant wait 4 da next part
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
muahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
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Posted: 14 April 2011 at 2:57pm | IP Logged
Oops Chris parents played the game n they succeeded in it
Chris shuld hav listened to her but nop
Anger always spoil relations
Here same happend
Ali n Saba
Parents they are always a big barrier in love
No offence but if we c history its always parents who oppose the love more
In Ali n Saba's case mana Ali wasnt that gud but they culd atleast talk
Par nahi
Lets c wats aage

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Posted: 14 April 2011 at 8:22pm | IP Logged
awesome updt jaee
thanks for the pm

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Posted: 14 April 2011 at 9:30pm | IP Logged
edited on pg 33 Smile

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Posted: 15 April 2011 at 4:02am | IP Logged
Originally posted by drmaha

FOR CHAP 10 
tht was too beautiful/......

days are passing slowly but the thgs r going to change towards misearable path...........Unhappy 
hope tht in future sum posotive aspects will come............

beautiful update........

Originally posted by -afsha-

Both the side hav senti update
Ali gav gud news but the world isnt good
Wat he is thnking it cant happen in the world he had stayed for so long
Good that Cgris got that his mum is back of all this
Anna is nt liking this
Looks lik she is taking Chris also wrong
Lets c wats aage

Originally posted by drfizaahmed

oh man.....so i knew it ...u cant just leave tht line...u cant .....
 
n ana...wht she is doing now.....i hope crisi cum back soon ....n will able to save his love....else bth the lovestory are gonna.....
 
wonderful part

Originally posted by vampire_girl

hey jaee...!!
i am really sorry for being so irregular..!..but truly i am realy busy ..thts why..but i am not missing any part at all..just dont get enough time..and dil se sorry for thatEmbarrassed

ok now comig to this FF and this part
it was beautifully written
you know you are my one of fav writer in IFHug
just too good..
loved every bit of it

love
tasfia


Originally posted by kashndsel4eva

awesome update
loved it lots
cant wait 4 da next part
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
muahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

Originally posted by gopi06

awesome updt jaee
thanks for the pm

Thank you guys, every comment of your is precious and I always get so happy when I read your comments ... Thank you so much :)

Originally posted by princez_94

Okay I know I reserved somewhere...But I'm to lazy to find it right now... Tongue It's okay :D

 
Chapter: 9
Promises... They break equally easily as their made. Saba-Ali a hope for a future together & Anna-Chris kitne bhi door na ho, phir bhi nazdeek hai... Only the future will tell whats in store for them... This is true, promises break really easily ... Chris and Anna's distances have begun ...
 
Chapter: 10
 
That was heart breaking, Chris's emotions flowing out... What happened to Anna, I'm very curious to know what could have happened. They loved each other so much how can they drift apart so easily... All they need is to trust their love for each other ...
 
For Saba-Ali what can I say, Ali was on the wrong path and Saba showed him the right way. But Ali's past will not let him live... I'm very curious to know how they parted. Their alive because of each other, thinking the other is no more... But seriously how? As per Ali he will never let any thing come near Saba then how did this happen... So many question still no answer... No one can control circumstances - not even Ali, no matter how much he wants to ...
Beautiful Jaee, continue soon...
 
Thank you so much Laiba :)


Originally posted by -Mehak

reserved! Approve

EDITED:

OH MY GOD!!..this wasn't suppose to happen..poor chris, he has been tricked soo badly!! Parents making use of their children's love for them..nothing can be ridiculous than this.

and for Saba..well girl why did u even try??.. no one was suppose to listen to you..

anticipating the future now..cont. soon..God Bless..



People don't understand the value of love and also don't understand that no matter what happens, once in love - always in love ... And they cannot remove them from each other's heart ...

Thank you so much Di - your reserved posts always make me smile :)

Originally posted by Nikita-Sharma

resEmbarrassed
+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
god!! poor saba....no body heard her.....evn if they wer against it,they cud hav talked calmly...but poor soul..locked n all...Ouch
n chris-anna...gosh..they r right in thr places..parents' respct is d biggest...but Chris doesnt kno..his parents r just mockin his feelin n using his love fr them to trick..:(
jaee awesome update..do cont soon..Embarrassed wonderfully written as usual..:)
tc keep smiling:)Embarrassed

Originally posted by -afsha-

Oops Chris parents played the game n they succeeded in it
Chris shuld hav listened to her but nop
Anger always spoil relations
Here same happend
Ali n Saba
Parents they are always a big barrier in love
No offence but if we c history its always parents who oppose the love more
In Ali n Saba's case mana Ali wasnt that gud but they culd atleast talk
Par nahi
Lets c wats aage

Guys, just wait and watch as with the progression in the story - everyone would get a chance to fight for their love ... :)
Thank you so much guys for your wonderful comments :)




Edited by -jaee- - 15 April 2011 at 4:42am

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