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Raindrops - A Story || Last Chapter : Page 50 (Page 29)

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Posted: 12 April 2011 at 4:17am | IP Logged
nice parts jaee....
sorry for the late reply......Smile

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Posted: 12 April 2011 at 5:50am | IP Logged
sorry jaee.. cudnt comment on ur updates....due 2 exms!
part 7...
interestin...
now wt ws chris doin... is der any danger 2 anna's lyf!
but felt really bad 4 saba & ali.......
rush 2 read d next updates...
& haan take ur own tym 4 anjaane & no road towards u... bt pls dont discard dem...

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Posted: 12 April 2011 at 5:57am | IP Logged
part 8 ws fab!
i luvd saba ali's part... it sum how reminded me of MN... i know i'm hopeless!!!LOL
but d mystery behind chris's mother... is makin me think...
rush 2 read d next update

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Posted: 12 April 2011 at 6:10am | IP Logged
dat ws an awesum update jaee...
i hope everthng gonna b alright...
poor saba i felt bad 4 her...
& d chris' s bdlg collapsin ws an accident or it is sumthng else?
ahh... cant wait...
continue soon!

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Posted: 12 April 2011 at 6:32am | IP Logged
Part 7:

amazing

It had every element

feeling very bad for Ali n Saba

but now I'm scared for Anna n Chris!!

Cont soon

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Posted: 12 April 2011 at 6:39am | IP Logged
Part 8

fabulous

such innocent love stories which r unaware of d future

loved it

cont soon

p..s:I love ur signature

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Posted: 12 April 2011 at 6:43am | IP Logged
Part 9:

oh man

I just can't see them in pain

hope it won't be tht painful at d end

cont soon

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Posted: 12 April 2011 at 7:54am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Mehak

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this is turning out to be too painful pearl..we already know the future.. the past is so filled with hopes and love..this is a havoc..but u have written in an extra-ordinary way. 

cont. soon..God Bless


Thank you so much Di!! The pains are just going to increase and dreams are going to shatter .. I love your reserved posts - thank you so much :)

Originally posted by jiya_angel

That was a lovely chapter Jaee... the way Chris and Anna ended their conversation, brought a smile on my face, but the very next moment I got scared of what awaited them in near future... the building did not collapse by accident, isn't it?

Ali was confident about his love, but fate betrayed them, and Saba's fear came true. They were physically alive, but their souls had already died because of the separation.

Waiting anxiously for the next part

God Bless You

~jiya~

Thank you so much Jiya - Chris and Anna's test of love has begun - yes you are right, the building collapsing was not an accident ... The truths are going to open soon about Ali and Saba's fears ... thanks Jiya for always commenting :)

Originally posted by -Sajjal-

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Jaee, it was beatiful no other word to describe what i feel about reading this chapter, saba and alis heartwrenching seperation and that same fear blooming over chris and anna today, its very painful to see. I loved chris and anna in the begining but how u ended it..made me scared abt them.
 
amazing part, thank you for the pm.

Thank you so much Sajjal - There is a lot in store and they have to go through all of it - their destinies are sealed and they have nothing in their hands and yet they are going to fight because love has that strength to fight all the obstacles and come out with flying colours .... Thanks Sajjal :)

Originally posted by Ishita16

First of all I love the title!!! Raindrops - what a beautiful title for a story, which I'm sure would be one of the best I will read on IF or anywhere for that matter!!! I just had some time today to read the first chapter and wow!! U are such an amazing writer!

One couple just separated and other have just met!!! The beginning - the hospital scene it was very captivating. So the father is separating the two lovers. How cruel!!

 

The first meeting itself was nice!! 

 
Can't wait to read the other parts and I don't need to, coz I know part 2- 9 are already upLOL 

Oh god Ishita, you flattered me literally -  even I love the rain ... Thank you so much for reading it ... do read all the chapters :D I am glad you are liking it ...

Originally posted by Nikita-Sharma

finally i read part8 n 9 jaee.....!.....srry fr d delay though.......
 
jaee the way u write...i just get so involved in the story....Ali n Saba...their past was beautiful....but present is cruel on them...just wish future brings happiness fr them...
n i fear for chris n Anna..now wat they havto undergo...the other 2..toh we already kno r in pain...wish these 2 dint havto...but thats life...
anyways beautifully written..i loved it..seriously!! waitin fr d nxt part...u already made me curious abt it...lol....update soon:)
keep writing..:D..tc..keep smiling:)
n thnx fr d pmEmbarrassed

It's okay Nikita, no need to say sorry ... Life is a package of some pains and some joys - Four of them have to go through all of it ... Thank you so much for your wonderful comments :)

Originally posted by drmaha

oh God....is sharon his step mom......?cant believe she will ruined their lives.........Unhappy

res for nxt part.......

painful phase seems to cuming in their lives...........
God bless thm..all i can say tht........Cry

Originally posted by drfizaahmed

hmm...lets us flow in the moment of love n chersih whtevr it holds right here right now.....
 
beautiful part....a fear of losing each other...moreover losing urself....beautiful dear

Originally posted by -afsha-

That was shweet part
Loved how his eyes was jus wet there but she had tears here
Ali said he wnt let it happen but fate had sumthg else for them
Lets c how next 4 mnths of Chris n Anna goes
N how Ali keeps his words

Originally posted by mahakmev

wow fabulous lovedddd it

Originally posted by DhanakZ

Great update dear
cont soon

Originally posted by kashndsel4eva

awesome update
loved it loadzz
cant wait 4 da next part
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
muahhhhhhhhhhhh
Xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

Originally posted by samiralovemayur

beautiful update Jaee
waiting wat will en next
thanks for the pm

Originally posted by Riddss

nice part
continue soon

Originally posted by cutiepie12

 short bt lovely update jaee.......m damn scared for wht da future awaits for chris n anna..i knw it had to b sumthng related to chris's parents dat led to da falling of da building.......Ouch 

n saba n ali...i loved da way ali assured saba......Embarrassed Clap Star
bt looking at da future.........my heart cries seeing dem apart.......Cry Ouch

waitng for da next part jaee....
tczzz
loads of love sweety..Smile

Originally posted by ammuakhi

nice parts jaee....
sorry for the late reply......Smile

Originally posted by -SupriyaluvsMN-

dat ws an awesum update jaee...
i hope everthng gonna b alright...
poor saba i felt bad 4 her... 
& d chris' s bdlg collapsin ws an accident or it is sumthng else?
ahh... cant wait...
continue soon!

Originally posted by sariska_mnarti

Part 9:

oh man

I just can't see them in pain

hope it won't be tht painful at d end

cont soon

Thank you so much guys, each comment of yours is really important and makes my day ... you guys are so sweet :)



Edited by -jaee- - 13 April 2011 at 9:58am

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