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Raindrops - A Story || Last Chapter : Page 50 (Page 13)

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Posted: 22 March 2011 at 6:12pm | IP Logged
hi Jaee so sorry i didn't comment last part
but both part was fabulous
beautiful story hun
thanks for the pm

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Posted: 22 March 2011 at 8:46pm | IP Logged
awesome part jaee
thanks for the pm

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Posted: 23 March 2011 at 12:27am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Mehak

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the story is moving in different time frames, when u present that the future is painful, the beautiful, mesmerizing past also haunts.

Ali and saba - two normal people met in the most abnormal conditions, they are in pain one year later the day they met - the feelings are clear, but the reason is unclear - waiting for it.

well the other two are innocence personified..

extra-ordinary writing..

cont. soon..God Bless..


Thank you so much Di ... the pains have just started - as the story unfolds there are a lot of pains for all of them because the path of love is never a rose-bed and life is certainly not a fairytale ...
Ali and Saba personify passion and Chris and Anna personify innocence - thank you so much for your comments ... You always bring a huge smile on my face Big smile

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Posted: 23 March 2011 at 12:29am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Nikita-Sharma

wow jaee agn an awesome part! n a wonderful piece of ur wrk!....i feel so bad fr saba n ali...gosh lifez cruel on them!! hope they get their happiness...that is each other....their first meetin was a cute one....

on d other hand , chris n anna r really adorable..cute love bloomin all d way!
 
thnx fr d pm!! m really lovin this story too n waitin to read ahead!!Embarrassed

Hey Nikita, your comments are always so adorable - thank you so much ... you are really very sweet ...Smile 

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Posted: 23 March 2011 at 12:30am | IP Logged
Originally posted by achoose

great update dear..............

Originally posted by mahakmev

osommmmmmmmmmmm uff no words i can feel every bit of it

Originally posted by Riddss

heyyy dear,
nice part
continue soon



love
Riddss

Thank you so much guys ... your comments always are encouraging ...
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Posted: 23 March 2011 at 12:36am | IP Logged
Originally posted by jiya_angel

My heart bled seeing the state Ali and Saba were in....
Physical pain meant nothing to them now...
I know how it feels when one lives every moment praying for death...

The blooming love of Chris and Anna, the innocence, the thought of being in love... it all felt so blissful...

I agree... life is full of contrasts

Thanks for the pm

~jiya~




Originally posted by -afsha-

Haaye Update was fab
Saba n Ali's past moments was so awesum
Jus loved their sweet shy n concern filled talk
Anna n Chris
Chris action haaye mar gaya was awesumest awesum
Jus loved it Di

Originally posted by cutiepie12

feeling literally really bad for saba n ali....dey r living a soulless life.....yet deir better halves r still alive unknown of da fact......n chris n anna....awww soo cuteSmile

@Jiya Rightly said by you - it's bleeding love for Ali and Saba ... Chris and Anna have a lot in store for them - they are walking on the lines of the former couple ... Thank you so much dear ...

@Afsha Thank you so much dear - yes Ali and Saba had their share of innocent romance but it's Chris and Anna who had a fairytale beginning ...

@cutiepie12 Thank you dear ... there is a long way for all of them ...Wink

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Posted: 23 March 2011 at 12:36am | IP Logged
awesome update
do continue soon
thanks 4 the pm

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Posted: 23 March 2011 at 12:38am | IP Logged
Originally posted by SujaLuvsMayur

grt update.
its beautiful.
update soon.
thanks for the pm.

Originally posted by kashndsel4eva

awesome updates
loved them all
cant wait 4 da next part
con soon
thanks 4 da pm

Originally posted by DhanakZ

so different Piece of work dear
Feel so bad for saba and Ali
hope the will meat soon
thanks for Pm

Originally posted by samiralovemayur

hi Jaee so sorry i didn't comment last part
but both part was fabulous
beautiful story hun
thanks for the pm

Originally posted by gopi06

 awesome part jaee
thanks for the pm


Thank you so much guys for your lovely comments - they literally flatter me ...Smile
 


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