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cutiepie12 Goldie

Joined: 15 March 2010
Posts: 2461

Posted: 22 March 2011 at 12:08pm | IP Logged
feeling literally really bad for saba n ali....dey r living a soulless life.....yet deir better halves r still alive unknown of da fact......n chris n anna....awww soo cuteSmile

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SujaLuvsMayur IF-Rockerz

Joined: 27 May 2010
Posts: 6714

Posted: 22 March 2011 at 1:10pm | IP Logged
grt update.
its beautiful.
update soon.
thanks for the pm.

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felicitysmoak. IF-Stunnerz

Joined: 05 November 2007
Posts: 44357

Posted: 22 March 2011 at 2:26pm | IP Logged
awesome updates
loved them all
cant wait 4 da next part
con soon
thanks 4 da pm

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DhanakZ IF-Dazzler

Joined: 18 June 2010
Posts: 3583

Posted: 22 March 2011 at 3:56pm | IP Logged
so different Piece of work dear
Feel so bad for saba and Ali
hope the will meat soon
thanks for Pm

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.SilentPrincess IF-Rockerz

Joined: 31 March 2009
Posts: 7495

Posted: 22 March 2011 at 4:46pm | IP Logged
Jaee, I don't know what to say... Firstly I love all ur titles of ur ffs, they are unique... And i'm in love with this one too... Coming to the story or stories, i absolutely loved them, how 2 stories very different yet common...
Chapter 1
The first one seems like a really sad one, about betrayel, true love...betrayed by everyone... It's seem sreally intense...
for the other one, it seem like a fairytale come true, a romantic entry a dreamy world of Anna & Chris a very sweet start... Embarrassed
Cahpter 2
Itni dardanak kahani... they are not together still their hearts are connected, there eyes might betray them but there hearts can they only know one thing... If one is alive then the other must also be... Embarrassed
There first meet was very strange one, not at all a normal one...But a very nice one, it looked like their hearts connected at the first sight... The last lines said by Saba was Clap... Beautiful Jaee....
Saba & Ali two starngers met under strange circumstances, not a word exchanged just the volume of their eyes spoke... And a year later everything is changed...both of them hoping that the breath their breathing every second would be the last so that they could re-unite... But the world is cruel...2 lovers not destined to meet as of yet...
The past flashbacks are really sweet, how he  so strong that he can protect her from the worlds evil eyes but still loose hi senses by once looking into her eyes...Embarrassed 
And on the other side Anna-Chris so lost in each other, not caring about the world around them... such sweet love... the way he runs after her just to give her a rose was really cute....Embarrassed
The most beautiful stories i ever read... Really beautifully written, u describe the emotions so well from a happilly in love couple to a dardanak couple who world parted...Clap Jaee this is truly one of ur best piece of writing...Embarrassed
Out of the both I feel more connected to Saba & Ali... Not to be very biased on the very start but it something about them... I read both but how u described the characters of Saba & Ali... just wow...Clap
I'm already in love with this...This beautiful Jaee...Hug
Thanks a lot for the PM...HugI know you just updated today but when is next update???Ermm 

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-Samira- IF-Rockerz

Joined: 08 August 2008
Posts: 5430

Posted: 22 March 2011 at 6:12pm | IP Logged
hi Jaee so sorry i didn't comment last part
but both part was fabulous
beautiful story hun
thanks for the pm

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gopi06 IF-Dazzler

Joined: 29 January 2010
Posts: 4231

Posted: 22 March 2011 at 8:46pm | IP Logged
awesome part jaee
thanks for the pm

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JaeeDevRathore Goldie

Joined: 21 September 2010
Posts: 1046

Posted: 23 March 2011 at 12:27am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Mehak



the story is moving in different time frames, when u present that the future is painful, the beautiful, mesmerizing past also haunts.

Ali and saba - two normal people met in the most abnormal conditions, they are in pain one year later the day they met - the feelings are clear, but the reason is unclear - waiting for it.

well the other two are innocence personified..

extra-ordinary writing..

cont. soon..God Bless..

Thank you so much Di ... the pains have just started - as the story unfolds there are a lot of pains for all of them because the path of love is never a rose-bed and life is certainly not a fairytale ...
Ali and Saba personify passion and Chris and Anna personify innocence - thank you so much for your comments ... You always bring a huge smile on my face Big smile

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