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Raindrops - A Story || Last Chapter : Page 50 (Page 12)

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Posted: 22 March 2011 at 11:27am | IP Logged
My heart bled seeing the state Ali and Saba were in....
Physical pain meant nothing to them now...
I know how it feels when one lives every moment praying for death...

The blooming love of Chris and Anna, the innocence, the thought of being in love... it all felt so blissful...

I agree... life is full of contrasts

Thanks for the pm

~jiya~



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Posted: 22 March 2011 at 11:29am | IP Logged
GR8 part jaee!!!
i am so loving this storyBig smile
continue soon..


Edited by shivangi278 - 23 March 2011 at 10:02am

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Posted: 22 March 2011 at 11:55am | IP Logged
Haaye Update was fab
Saba n Ali's past moments was so awesum
Jus loved their sweet shy n concern filled talk
Anna n Chris
Chris action haaye mar gaya was awesumest awesum
Jus loved it Di

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Posted: 22 March 2011 at 12:08pm | IP Logged
feeling literally really bad for saba n ali....dey r living a soulless life.....yet deir better halves r still alive unknown of da fact......n chris n anna....awww soo cuteSmile

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Posted: 22 March 2011 at 1:10pm | IP Logged
grt update.
its beautiful.
update soon.
thanks for the pm.

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Posted: 22 March 2011 at 2:26pm | IP Logged
awesome updates
loved them all
cant wait 4 da next part
con soon
thanks 4 da pm

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Posted: 22 March 2011 at 3:56pm | IP Logged
so different Piece of work dear
Feel so bad for saba and Ali
hope the will meat soon
thanks for Pm

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Posted: 22 March 2011 at 4:46pm | IP Logged
Jaee, I don't know what to say... Firstly I love all ur titles of ur ffs, they are unique... And i'm in love with this one too... Coming to the story or stories, i absolutely loved them, how 2 stories very different yet common...
 
Chapter 1
The first one seems like a really sad one, about betrayel, true love...betrayed by everyone... It's seem sreally intense...
for the other one, it seem like a fairytale come true, a romantic entry a dreamy world of Anna & Chris a very sweet start... Embarrassed
 
Cahpter 2
Itni dardanak kahani... they are not together still their hearts are connected, there eyes might betray them but there hearts can they only know one thing... If one is alive then the other must also be... Embarrassed
 
There first meet was very strange one, not at all a normal one...But a very nice one, it looked like their hearts connected at the first sight... The last lines said by Saba was Clap... Beautiful Jaee....
 
Saba & Ali two starngers met under strange circumstances, not a word exchanged just the volume of their eyes spoke... And a year later everything is changed...both of them hoping that the breath their breathing every second would be the last so that they could re-unite... But the world is cruel...2 lovers not destined to meet as of yet...
The past flashbacks are really sweet, how he  so strong that he can protect her from the worlds evil eyes but still loose hi senses by once looking into her eyes...Embarrassed 
 
And on the other side Anna-Chris so lost in each other, not caring about the world around them... such sweet love... the way he runs after her just to give her a rose was really cute....Embarrassed
 
The most beautiful stories i ever read... Really beautifully written, u describe the emotions so well from a happilly in love couple to a dardanak couple who world parted...Clap Jaee this is truly one of ur best piece of writing...Embarrassed
 
Out of the both I feel more connected to Saba & Ali... Not to be very biased on the very start but it something about them... I read both but how u described the characters of Saba & Ali... just wow...Clap
 
I'm already in love with this...This beautiful Jaee...Hug
Thanks a lot for the PM...HugI know you just updated today but when is next update???Ermm 
 
-Laiba

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