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Part 2


Brijj came and said that the function is over.

Brijj : Maan can I ask you something?πŸ˜•πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†

Maan : yes.πŸ˜†πŸ˜•

Brijj: what made you fall for her?❓

 Maan : (dramatically) it's a long story. When she was 7 and me 😍


Before Maan could complete his sentence Brij shouted in between.


Brijj: KYA??? You loved my sister when she was 7?πŸ˜•

 

Maan : no...mere baat tho sunoo. Its like...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Maan was about to open his mouth again to say about his never-ending love story but Brijj thought it is better to escape now than late.

 

Brijj : well Maan I don't have time to hear this Mahabharat.. So no need to tell me.πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

 

Maan : arre listen yaar. I was not in love that time its just..πŸ˜†(B4 completing Brij cut him in)


Brijj saw Sameera walking near by them .

Brijj : Haan Sameera. Meih abi aayi. Maan Sam is calling me, got to go.πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

 

Maan : But I didn't hear her calling you..πŸ˜•

 

Brijj : how can you hear? She called me naa.πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

 

Maan : but πŸ˜•(Confused)

 

Brijj : no but, I will listen to you later. Now got to go.πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

 

Sam heard this conversation and got confused.

 

Sam : But I didn't call you Brijj bhai.πŸ˜•πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

 

Brijj : chup. Do you have partial amnesia?😑  just now you called me, now come lets go and do work what Mom assigned before you forget my name.πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†(brijj thinking: Thank You Babaji for saving me from hearing maan's never ending Love story.)

 

Maan : Hmm... don't worry Brijj I will tell you later.πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†(Brij escaping from Maan)

 

Brijj : ok Maan.πŸ˜†πŸ˜†  (Brijj thinking: Babaji save me from this Maan. No wonder Geet runs away from him.)

 

Sam : Brijj Bhai kaam kya hai?πŸ˜†

 

Brijj : err.. well. I forgot.πŸ˜†

 

Sam : kya??? How can you forget?😑

 

Brijj : kyun? Can't I forget? I'm a human. And human sometime forget. Understand you dumb-Sam. I'm going, if I stay with you here, I will become mad. πŸ˜†

 

Poor Sam didn't understand anything and saw Brijj leaving her behind.

 

Brijj : thank you Babaji. Now I have to be careful of not be in front of Maan. πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

 

Maan was walking through the Handa Mansion and saw Geet laughing and talking with Tasha, Sasha, Vicky and Rajji. He was lost in that smile. He loved to see her small cute expressions and gestures. He remembered hoew he used to do something stupid when he is around Geet.

 

Flashback (one incident)

 

Maan : 21

 

Geet : 18

 

Geet was crying because she was soon to join college and she was scared. Brijj was consoling her and Tito was giving her tissue paper to wipe her tears. Maan was waliking inside Handa Mansion to see Brijj, well actually to meet his princess, Geet. Maan saw Geet crying and asked what is the matter and Tito said the reason behind her cry. Maan went near Geet and started consoling her and said it is not big deal and she will find new friends and said wonderful thinks which made Geet happy. She smiled at him. His heart skipped a beat seeing her smile at him and he was on cloud nine. πŸ˜ƒ

 

Maan to himself: well done Maan, now she is giving you attention. Grab this opportunity to go closer to her. πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

 

Brijj : (thinking) wow, first time Geet listening to Maan. I wish he does not do anything stupid this time.πŸ˜‰

 

Maan : But Geet you should be careful.πŸ˜†

 

Geet : kyun?😭

 

Maan : Because there may be Ragging. And I don't think anyone can escape from it.πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

 

Geet : Raaggiinnng??(Stammers)🀣

 

Maan : yes Geet. You should be brave to face it. You should not cry, but should face it.πŸ˜†

 

Maan was advicing Geet as if she is going to World-war. How to fight and be brave was the main ingredient. Maan was telling about ragging, many incidents related and how seniors make fresher's life HELL. Geet was shivering like a leaf. Maan was pleased when he saw Geet listening to him and he continued the stories. 🀣

 

Brijj : (thinking) this idiot is making her more scared. Hell, no wonder Geet runs away from him. Before he make Geet more scare, I should stop him.πŸ˜²πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

 

Brijj :  err...Maan.πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

 

Maan : Shut up Brijj. Geet suno... Another incident is that, in our college one Girl got hurt...πŸ˜†

 

Before he could finish his sentence, Geet fainted. Before she falls down, Brijj caught her. It took 3 hours for her to regain her consciousness. She was crying more, Maan came near her to CONSOLE her again but Brijj dragged him from her room.

 

Maan : Brijj leave me, let me go and console her. She needs me. πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

 

Brijj : (thinking) If Maan console Geet again she will next be in ICU. πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

 

Brijj : Maan, Dr told she need rest. That means she should be left alone. Come tomorrow.πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

 

Maan : but how can I leave her like this?🀣

 

Brijj : (thinking) if you didn't leave the Mansion, Geet will leave the world hearing your stupid nonsense.😑

 

Brijj : Maan... I told naa. Meet her tomorrow. She needs rest. See she is here and you can talk tomorrow. πŸ˜†

 

Maan : ok. Brijj. I'm leaving. 😭

 

Brijj : ok bye.

 

Maan : but before I leave I must say bye to her or else she will bad naa.πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

 

Brijj : Nahiii😲

 

Maan : why are you shouting?😑😑😑

 

Brijj : I will tell her, you go.πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

 

Maan : you will say naa. Pakka?πŸ˜†

 

Brijj : haan meri MAA tu chal.😑

 

Maan : I'm not Maa, its Maan.πŸ˜†

 

Brijj : haa yaar,. Ab chal naa.πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

 

Maan : ok bye.😭

 

He left and went to his Mansion. He called Brijj Every 5 mins to enquire about Geet. Poor Brijj never got a minute sleep due to Maan's call. πŸ˜†

 

 

 

Flashback end

 

Sam saw Maan again ogling at Geet and showed it to NT and Dev.

 

NT : How romantic???😍

 

Dev: what romantic? There is nothing romantic in it. 😑😑

 

NT : uff... duffer see how maan bro looks at Geet.πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

 

Sam : like Fox looking at Hen.πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†(Ohh Sam calling Geet Chicken?Sam u'll be chicken fry if Maan hears this)πŸ˜†

 

NT : you both are not romantic. You will not understand this. 😑😑😑

 

Dev : well, I don't want to understand this stupidity.😑

 

NT : So you think this is stupid?😑

 

Dev : yesπŸ˜†

 

NT : You think his feeling is stupid? 😑

 

Dev : yesπŸ˜†

 

NT : You think love is stupid?😑

 

Dev : yes (he was saying yes to everything without hearing properly)πŸ˜†

 

NT : Next you will say I'm stupid to love you.😑😑😑

 

Dev : yesπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

 

NT : KYA??? I'm stupid you asshole. 😑

 

Dev : no, no NT I didn't mean that. I was about to say..πŸ˜†

 

NT : SHUT UP. I HATE YOU, YOU MORON. 😑😑😑

 

She left from there and Dev following her trying to ease her.πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

 

Dev : listen Sweetie.πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

 

NT : shut up...😑

 

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Edited by Ash534 - 12 years ago
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loved it n god plz give maan some sense he is advicing geet or scaring her
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rofl.....my stomach is aching....🀣
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great part
con't soon
more maaneet scenes please:)
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love it
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oh maan so dumb
amazing update
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