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Opti IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 20 March 2011 at 8:03pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by simi91

yippe geet is preggDancing
the three parts
super duper mindblowing
cant to see maan taking of
his pregg wifey oh feel sorry
for anie i hope she successed
to bring down arjun & get free
of him oh geet so shock but
she doesnt know the real reason
anie did it pls cont soonnnnnnn
wow pinky & adi are proud parent
a girl thank yu opti happy holi
sorry i know late wish
thanks pm
congrats & many more threads
Thanks Simi. Its baby time for the Khuranas and their near and dear ones. Anwesha has a definite plan which will be spelt out after a couple of updates.

Opti IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 20 March 2011 at 8:06pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by panchjun5

Opti....I finally caught up....Big smile...Whoopppiieeee!!!!

Well now that I'm done cheering for myself....let me just say WOW!!!! You my dear friend are an excellent storyteller.....I finished almost 25 parts of your story in 2 days....and that too reading in the night.....What can I say ....mere words cannot describe how well you have written the story....It is so real and so full of details that I just can't stop being amazed at your talent...Each and every character and their nuances have been brilliantly etched out by you....Every scene and its subtleties have been awesomely highlighted by you....When I am reading your story ...I feel that I'm able to visualize, all the characters and their sequences picturesquely.....You have a gift dear and I think you should try this professionally.....

Maan and Geet's story is carving out excellently....I'm liking the way Dev and Sameera's story is headed.....I'm happy for the new addition in Adi and Pinky's life and am eagerly waiting for Arjun's downfall and Anwesha's role in it.....And the best part is Geet is pregnant.....I loved how you have shown Maan caing for his wife during her morning sickness and am curious to read about how he will handle all her cravings and mood swings.....I'm sure you will add a comic touch to it.....Basically I'm restless for the next part......Tongue
Let me first congratulate you for catching up on so many updates. That must have been some marathon reading you indulged in.Adinky are proud parents now and Maaneet are expecting their own little one. Maan will be caring for her throughout this pregnancy.
Opti IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 20 March 2011 at 8:07pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by myedward12

both updates are awesome......
Arjun is a jerk, he should go to hell......
Thanks. Yes, Arjun is a jerk of the highest order and more is to come.
Opti IF-Stunnerz

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Posts: 29113

Posted: 20 March 2011 at 8:10pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by SapphireFlames

just caught up since i dont remember what part. i did not realise that u had stopped sending PM's. But i did read all of it. Glad to know that Geet is in the family way now. Also, by the looks of it, i'm hating Arjun more and more with each passing update. how despicable a man can get really! Want to know the motive behind Anwesha's behavior. What downfall is she planning? Continue soon. Smile
I should have PMed about my previous thread but got busy and forgot. When I saw so many of my readers respond, I thought people were aware of the existence of the thread because I had posted the link in the previous thread and also said I'll update everyday. Anyway better late than never. You'll get your answers to Anwesha's plan after a couple of updates.
ajenn IF-Rockerz

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Posts: 6449

Posted: 20 March 2011 at 8:11pm | IP Logged
Congrats for the new thread!!!

Finnaly Geet is pregnant.
I hope twins on d way.
At first i really felt sad for him
thou geet wasnt at false.
But sad for maan;s misunderstanding n his dilemma

Problem Solve. Maaneet back to norm
really hapi for him being so understanding
Adi-Pinky parents for a baby gal..
Baba is recovering back.

Part LXX
SInce when maan got contact wif local goons!!!
feel sad for geet. more for it was caused by anwesha.
thou is was jst an act by anwesha. geet truly hurt by d words.
wonder wat she had planned for arjun.
Its better for her to stay alone rather den staying wif a cheap creature like arjun.

Opti IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 20 March 2011 at 8:12pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by serialwatcher16


caught two updates together.

Maan and geet finally had their conversation. I like that.

And anwesha has a bigger plan for Arjun's downfall. What? 

Waiting for the next, Hope next will have something about Sameera. I know I am in minority but Sameera's story has caught my fancy and i want to see how that progresses as well.
Thanks Usha. Yes, Anwesha has a bigger plan for Arjun's downfall which will unfold a couple of updates from now.  The next update will be about Maaneet and Adi-inky. Will go on to Sam-Dev track after that and also bring in Anwesha's plan in it.

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Opti IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 20 March 2011 at 8:14pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by janu_2006

gr8 part,,
thanks janu
Opti IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 20 March 2011 at 8:15pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Swaatii

Great going dear
Thanks Swaati

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