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Destiny's Play-LXXXVIII,LXXXIX,XC-129,135,140-27/3 (Page 22)

Opti IF-Stunnerz

Joined: 14 October 2006
Posts: 29113

Posted: 20 March 2011 at 10:55am | IP Logged
Originally posted by swan20

lovely parts.....glad Geet came to know of Arjun's intentions....he's seriously a sick man...Ouch

So Anwesha has planned something for Arjun's downfall.....good for her. For a minute there i though she was really siding with her happy she's not behaving like a doormat....Big smile
He is a dangerous man. Yes, she is planning his downfall.

Opti IF-Stunnerz

Joined: 14 October 2006
Posts: 29113

Posted: 20 March 2011 at 10:55am | IP Logged
Originally posted by millie_maaneet

awesome update dear
Thanks millie
Limerance Goldie

Joined: 28 February 2011
Posts: 1987

Posted: 20 March 2011 at 11:46am | IP Logged

Great updates!  I feel bad for both Geet and Annie. 

All these problems they have to face because of an irresponsible brother/husband. I hope all turns out well in the end especially for Annie. Arjun really needs to be taught a good lesson. Continue soon…

-Deepzz- Moderator

Joined: 01 May 2009
Posts: 15357

Posted: 20 March 2011 at 12:20pm | IP Logged
Congrats Opti....on a new thread....

Good news all around......Adinky proud parents to a baby girl.., Maneet finally succeeded in baby making......

Thank goodness ..Geet-Maan are on the  same page...Geet connected the dots of Bansal and her brother pretty fast....I feel bad for Geet...Poor Anwesha had to hurt Geet for her survival....I hope she brings down Arjun soon....
-afsha- IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 24 June 2008
Posts: 22746

Posted: 20 March 2011 at 1:19pm | IP Logged
U said ull always PM wenevr u open a new thread but u didnt
Well cuming to update
Liked all parts
Baapre Maan kya kya sochta hai
She dosent love im not attractive n all
The worst was she puked because i kissed
Maan bhi na
Atlast Geet's wish came true
She is having a family wit Maan
Loved how all the thgs abt Bhansal n video got solved
Annie knws sumthg abt Arjun tabhi she acted lik that wit Geet
I wish she tells Geet all thgs than act
Geet is hurted by Annie' words
hop this dosent cause sum prob to her
simi91 IF-Rockerz

Joined: 01 January 2011
Posts: 6794

Posted: 20 March 2011 at 1:24pm | IP Logged
yippe geet is preggDancing
the three parts
super duper mindblowing
cant to see maan taking of
his pregg wifey oh feel sorry
for anie i hope she successed
to bring down arjun & get free
of him oh geet so shock but
she doesnt know the real reason
anie did it pls cont soonnnnnnn
wow pinky & adi are proud parent
a girl thank yu opti happy holi
sorry i know late wish
thanks pm
congrats & many more threads
panchjun5 IF-Rockerz

Joined: 15 June 2006
Posts: 6447

Posted: 20 March 2011 at 1:30pm | IP Logged
Opti....I finally caught up....Big smile...Whoopppiieeee!!!!

Well now that I'm done cheering for myself....let me just say WOW!!!! You my dear friend are an excellent storyteller.....I finished almost 25 parts of your story in 2 days....and that too reading in the night.....What can I say ....mere words cannot describe how well you have written the story....It is so real and so full of details that I just can't stop being amazed at your talent...Each and every character and their nuances have been brilliantly etched out by you....Every scene and its subtleties have been awesomely highlighted by you....When I am reading your story ...I feel that I'm able to visualize, all the characters and their sequences picturesquely.....You have a gift dear and I think you should try this professionally.....

Maan and Geet's story is carving out excellently....I'm liking the way Dev and Sameera's story is headed.....I'm happy for the new addition in Adi and Pinky's life and am eagerly waiting for Arjun's downfall and Anwesha's role in it.....And the best part is Geet is pregnant.....I loved how you have shown Maan caing for his wife during her morning sickness and am curious to read about how he will handle all her cravings and mood swings.....I'm sure you will add a comic touch to it.....Basically I'm restless for the next part......Tongue
myedward12 Goldie

Joined: 22 September 2010
Posts: 1081

Posted: 20 March 2011 at 1:30pm | IP Logged
both updates are awesome......
Arjun is a jerk, he should go to hell......

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