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Posted: 25 March 2011 at 7:31pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ashred12

Wen i read initial part, i thot karan is her new hero.. Its just my pov dat i didnt want any1 between nivren.. :)
but after reading latest part, i understood its not wat i thot it to be :)

Good so now atleast you are happy...and please in future give your suggestions and comments...

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Posted: 25 March 2011 at 10:48pm | IP Logged

                    As promised here you go with the new partSmileSmileSmile

              I am sorry for being soooooo late again

         I will try to work on the next part sooner


 

 

PART-6

 

When nivi woke up the next morning she was confused to hear some noises from downstairs. So she gets up to check what was going on and was almost shocked to see Karan ready in the kitchen and making breakfast for both of them. Seeing her Karan takes a cup of coffee and offers to her.....

 

Karan: good morning

Nivi: what is going on here??...am I dreaming?? (karan smiles)

Karan: should I pinch you? (nivi takes the cup from his hand and sits around the table)

nivi sees karan and have a sip of coffee: karan i wanna say you something....

karan looks at nivi:Agar tum kal raat ke baarey mey kuch kehna chahti ho toh please yaar mey baat bhul chuka hu...aur please aaj naya din hai dont spoil your mood....

nivi smiles: okay....

karan:chalo jaldi karo you dont wanna go to office...

nivi looks at watch: oh gosh i am running late...aaj boss ke sath meeting hai...

nivi runs to bathroom have shower and gets ready...and meanwhile karan is also ready and waiting for nivi to come....she comes and both goes for office in a car...

 

Scene shifts:

karan drops nivi at office and leaves to his work where gautam {kunaal kapoor} and viren is waiting for them...

boss: where were you nivi, we were waiting for you…

nivi: sorry boss, actually woh…

boss: come on lets go now and start work…

Scene shift:

Karan, gautam are discussing their project and viren is thinking something and he is standing in front of window of his cabin…karan sees this and comes to him…

Karan: viren ji kya soch rahey hai aap?

Viren: nothing as usual life ke baarey mey…

Karan: mujhe pata hai ki aap sunshine ke baarey mey soch rahey ho…

Viren: who toh tumari sunshine hai ,meri toh nivi hai…

Karan: aap ne aisa kyu kiya viren ji, uski zindagi ke saarey rang kyu chin liye aapney..

Gautam: hey hey dude what are you saying this and please merey bhaiya kisi ke rang nahi chin saktey…he can never do wrong…

Karan sees viren and smiles and viren lower his eyes down….karan goes from there..gautam founds to be fishy something and sees viren and then karan..

Scene shifts:

Boss tell nivi to take interview of a business personality and it will be live on 

our radio… nivi ask boss that who is our guest. Boss takes viren sood name and 

nivi is shocked to listen this and he is in upset mode and goes out from press 

conference…gautam is in thinking mode and suddenly he had a clash with 

sid..gautam comes to his senses and sees up...Sid smiles... 

gautam:areu badey bhaiya aap, ohh yeh mey kaha hu..

sid: hogaya phir sey shuru teri nataunki, acha yeh bata kya soch raha tha tu...

gautam seer khujaltey huey: bhaiya yeh nivi, sunshine or putal yeh sab ek hi 

ladkhi ke naam hai yaha teen teen alag alag ladhkiya hai...

nivi ka naam suntey hi sid ki aankhoey ke saamney nivi ka hasta chehra saamney 

aa jaata hai and for a min he start thinking about her..Gautam sees this

gautam: yar is nivi ka naam suntey hi sab sochney lagtey hai ya phir gum ho 

jaatey hai..akhir yeh nivi, sunshine ka kya relation hai hum sabsey..."mission

nivi" pata lagana hoga....

gautam: bhaiya... sid bhaiya kya hua kaha kho gaye..

sid:ahh...hm kahi nahi, waisey tum kyu puch rahey ho...

gautam: woh aisey hi you know yeh ladkhi sabko shock treatment de rahi hai..

sid: shock treatment.. ??????????

gautam:arey bhaiya shaukiye mat, sabko shock dekar chali jaati hai na islye...

sid smiles and then worried... gautam goes from there.. sid goes to meet viren...sid comes to viren...

sid:viren yeh mey kya sun raha hu tum nivedita sey miley they...

viren:ji bhaiya woh mujhe nahi pata tha ki woh aur karan dost hai..

sid:lakin batana toh chahiye tha na...

viren:bhaiya mey kya bolta aapko, mujhe us waqt mujhe kuch samaj nahi aaya...

sid: kya samjhana chahtey ho tum, 5 saal aur laga do gey kya samjhney mey.. 

aur nivedita sey apney dil ki baat keh do jo is 5 saalo mey tum usey bolna

chatey ho...

viren: bhaiya lakin yeh kaisey ho sakta hai...aur mey toh ab yeh bi nahi jaanta 

ki woh mujse pyar bi karti hai ki nahi..

sid: pyar karti hai islye toh bhagwan ne tumhey aur usey ek aur mauka diya hai..

warna tum log kabhi nahi mil paata...

viren sees sid and suddenly his phone rings... viren picks up the call...viren

agrees to come... and leaves from there and he opens the door... he didnt

notice that karan is standing there and he comes in...Sid sees karan... sid 

leaves...but karan stops him...

karan: please wait sid i wanna talk to you...

sid:how do you know about me...

karan: nivi told me about you and everyone.. and i am here to take your help...

sid: what help?

karan: to unite nivi and viren forever...5 saal sey mainey nivi ko kabhi bi dil sey

hastey hue nahi dekha, woh aaj bi sirf viren ke liye hi apni zindagi jee rahi hai.

aur mey apni sunshine ko aisey jeetey nahi dekh sakta, mey chahta hu ki woh

khush rahey....pyar khoney ka kya dard hota hai mujse achey sey kaub ja sakta 

hai aur shayad aap bi........?

sid: mey samaj raha hu lakin hum kya kar saktey hai...

karan:merey pass ek plan hai agar aap mera sath they toh shayad mey apni

sunshine aur aap apney bhai ko milwaney mey kamyaab ho jaaye...

sid smiles and worried on face and nodes his head... karan and sid shakehand..

gautam is listening from behind...sid sees him and shockedShocked...

 


 

 

 

 

 

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Posted: 26 March 2011 at 12:33am | IP Logged
hello my name is neetika. Your story is really good and interesting........nice updateClap
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Posted: 26 March 2011 at 1:20am | IP Logged
Nice chapter.. So we r gonna 've cupid pair or trio? Smile
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Posted: 26 March 2011 at 2:14am | IP Logged
                           hey frnds i am back..........
                         Part-7

The scene starts from the gautam, sid sees gautam and he knows that gautam ney sab sun liya hai jo picheley 5 saalo sey chupa hua tha sabsey... sid comes to gautam... sid puts hand on his shoulder...

gautam: bhaiya mey aapke sath hu, mey viren bhai ko khush dekhna chahta hu..mujhe nahi pata tha ki unke is hastey huey chehrey ke pichey itni udaasi hai..

sid smiles: gautam mujhe tumsey yahi umeed thi...bas mey sirf yahi chahta hu ki yeh baat sirf merey, karan aur tumarey bich mey hi rehni chahiye...yeh baat kisi ko bi pata nahi chaley...tum samaj rahey ho na...

gautam: ji bhaiya fikar not, yeh raaz kisi ko pata nahi chalega........

In Night:
karan is lost and upset about nivi and he is remembering his own wounds.. he has tears in his eyes and he is very sad...he take out an album from the drawz and opens it.. There is a pic of karan and sunshine...and more frnds... then a photo comes karan is kissing on someone forehead.. karan sees pic and a tear drop on it..he wipes it... 

Flashback:
a playground is there... a crowd is cheering for karan........karan.....karan... karan is in black ganji...and black track... he puts ball in a basket and crowd shouts yeah......karan is a champ..........girls are running behind him... he is standing with the basketball and rolling on fingure....

Suddenly alarm on...Its 5 o clock.... karan sees it and sleeps again...

Scene shifts:

The next day karan woke up later than usual as he spent her whole night thinking about his meeting with sid. So she first gets ready for work and then goes downstairs to make the breakfast but he  surprise it was already ready. He finds nivi on the couch with his eyes closed but what caught his attention was her clothes.She wasn't ready for office yet....

nivi: karan? (karan opens his eyes and looks at her direction)

Karan: hi...tum aaj late uth gaayi...(she sits besides him on the couch)

nivi: yeah'I was tired but..why aren't you ready for office? Late jaa rahe ho?

Karan: heuu actually...maine socha main aaj ghar pe hi rehta hoon...kam pe jaane ka bilkul maan nahin kar

nivi: hello Ria?...listen i am not coming today so if u wanna take your day u can okay? Bye (karan looks at her confused when she hangs up)

Karan: tum kyun nahin jaa rahi ho? (nivi crossed her legs and rests her head on his shoulder)

nivi: I wanna spend my day doing nothing with my stupid buddy (karan smiles and wraps his arm around her)

He drops a kiss on her head and then rests his cheek on it. They stayed like that for a while not saying anything. nivi's presence was more than enough for karan to feel better. There was no need for her or even him to say anything. Being just by his side during these not so easy days was what he needed most in life....

nivi: kahi gumney chaltey hai....

karan: okay but kaha jaana hai......

nivi: shopping.......

karan: o god yar... please pichley week hi toh shopping ki thi and now you want more...

nivi: chalo na yar please mood spoil mat karo.......

karan: okay baba okay...lets go and be ready now...

nivi: okay...{nivi goes}

karan sees nivi and he immediately goes and pick up the phone and he make call to sid and tell him that they are coming to mall please bring viren... sid agress

SOOD HOUSE:

Everyone is sitting and having his breakfast...All of them is sitting... gautam sees sid and sid gautam... 

chanchal: gautam tu kha kyu nahi raha hai...

gautam: woh aaj bas mood nahi hai kuch khaali khaali sa lag raha hai...

chanchal: lo ji ab iske nakhrey suno...kya khaali khaali lag raha hai tujhe ab...

gautam: bas choti maa kuch kuch hota hai aap nahi samjhegi.....

divya: lagta hai devar ji ko ishq hogaya hai...

gautam: oh bhabi aap bi yeh ishq vishq ki baatey mujse mat kijye...

divya: ohh waah ji waah...

gautam: yes bhabhi...

Suddenly rauanq comes crying to divya...divya sees raunaq....

divya: { kisses on her cheeks} arey raunaq beta ro kyu rahey ho... kya hua aapko.. {she puts raunaq in her lap}

raunaq {ashnoor kaur}: bhabi maa,bhabi maa mujhe abhik ne maara {Cry}

divya: abhik kyu maara aapney usey....

abhik: no mumma mainey nahi maara...

gautam: hey baby come here {he calls raunaq} and my champ {he calls abhik}.. see agar aap dono aisey ladhai karogey... toh aapko sab gandey bachey bolonegey.. aap toh sab achey ho na...

raunaq: dada {sid} mujheee ghumi jaana hai....

sid smiles: ok baby hum sab chaltey hai....

gautam: what a fanatstoc idea? yeah!!! viren bhaiya aap bi chalegey...

viren: but...

abhik: chachu plzzzzzzz chalo na plzzzz

raunq: dude bhaiya chaloooo naaaa......

viren: ok ok...

abhik and viren: yooooooooooo.....

divya: chalo bacho hum tayaar hotey hai... {divya goes with abhik and raunq}

chanchal smiles and viren also goes to get ready.... gautam and sid shows thumb ups to each other and smiles....karan and nivi reaches mall and karan looks here and there...nivi sees karan...

nivi: kya baat hai karan...kaha dekh rahey ho...

karan:arey kuch tum jara ruko...mey abhi aata hu...

nivi: lakin kaha ja rahey ho...

karan: aa raha hu sunshine bas 2 min...

nivi: aur agar nahi aaye toh....

karan: toh tum ghar chali jaana theek hai...waisey bi merey paisey bachengey...

nivi:karaannnnn..........

karan: ok baba i will...

here sood family... comes to the mall... and they move here and there.. raunaq and abhik goes to toy store with divya and sid... sid told gautam to be alert and message him and be there with viren... gautam agrees...viren and gautam goes there... here nivi is standing alone and waiting for karan...karan sees gautam and message him to come down and make excuse to viren for 2 min.. gautam does the same and after both of them message to viren and nivi to come down in lift.. lift opens and a man comes out which was hiding viren so nivi enter's inside.. When she looks up and finds viren she froze at her place. viren's gaze was blocked at her and the moment she could react and wanted to get out of there it was too late and the door closed.Clap

Karan and gautam were watching the whole scene from distance hoping none of them will ruin the plan by getting out. And as the door closed they get very happy and run for the next step of the plan.Clap....

nivi went to stand in a corner to keep as much distance as she could avoiding any eye contact with viren. All she hoped was to reach the groundfloor so she can get out of there before viren says something which will hurt her badly again.

He wanted to apologize but something was holding him back so he waited just like her for his destination.

The day before gautam convinced the technician to help them. So before viren and nivi could reach the groundfloor he stops the lift abruptly and turns off the lights.

karan: nahin lights off mat kijiye nivi hates that..usse dar lagta hai

gautam: really? Yaar that's even better...

karan: what?

gautam: trust me...(to the technician) ab yahan vahan ghoom ke dus paandra mins ke baad hi wapis lift ko chalu karna (he agrees and both karan and gautam leave feeling very proud) 

Here in the lift, when it stopped nivi tightly holds her purse as she was afraid. viren knew she didn't like dark places but what caught his attention was something else. It was indeed dark in here but enough visible for him to notice that she was sweating. Forgetting the awkwardness between them viren talked to her.

viren: are you alright? (she was breathing deeply)

nivi: im...im fine..(viren wasn't convinced so he takes few steps towards her)

viren:  what's wrong? Tumhe tho andhere se aisa dar nahin tha pehle

nivi: no..it's nothing to do with darkness...voh kuch waqt pehle delhi mein bhi main lift mein akeli phas gaayi thi for almost three hours...tab se mujhe band kamre se thoda problem hoti hai...(not even aware of it tears were rolling down her cheeks and it was getting hard for her to breath. viren cups her face trying to distract her)

viren: nivi look at me..don't worry tum yahan akeli nahin ho...im here with you aur main tumhe kuch hone nahin dunga alright...(she nods still nervous) just forget where you are okay...(she takes a deep breath closing her eyes for a sec to calm down. viren wipes her tears and she slowly looks up at him) ek kam karo yahan baith jao you'll feel better (they both sit on the ground beside each other)

nivi: thanks...(he smiles)

viren: vaise tumhe ab andhere se dar nahin lagta hai?

nivi: lagta hai...kyun?

viren: nahin kyunki usually jab suddenly andhera ho jaati hai tho tum kisi na kisi pe chipak jaati ho..par abhi tumne ziada react bhi nahin kiya (she feels embarassed coz he was right. she always used to grab his arm almost scratching with her nails...)

nivi: bas I didn't want to look stupid so I tortured by purse this time (viren knew the real reason but didn't say anything and instead he offers his hand and nivi looks at him confused)

viren: you never looked stupid

 

nivi slowly rests her hand on his palm and he tightens his grip. They get lost into each other's eyes. viren didn't remember that they are in lift..all he knew was that she needed him that moment. 

viren soon realised that he was loosing track of what he was actually trying to do so moves his gaze.

 

viren: btw tum yahan kya kar rahi ho? I mean mall mein?

nivi: voh...karan ka mood upset tha toh mainey socha ki mall chal kar aatey hai.

viren: par voh hai kahan?

nivi : I dont know...usne mujhe niche wait karne ko kaha aur khud gaayab ho gaaya

viren: yeh karan bhi naa! i am sure kuch na kuch kaam aa gaya hoga...

nivi: that's karan naa

viren: you're feeling better?

nivi: how couldn't I when you're around...(he was taken aback and nivi realised what she said) I mean...you distracted me...so I feel much better (he managed a smile) thanks...

viren: nivi...I think I owe you a sorry (she looks at him confused) voh...uss din party mey mom ney jo kuch bi tumhey kaha nahi kehna chaiye that but she lost her temper and said those things im...im sorry

nivi: plz don't be...tumhe sorry guilty ya kuch bhi feel karne ki koi zaroorat nahin hai...

Its okay viren I completely understand she  don't like my presence. am i saying rite or not?

 

viren didn't know what to say on this. He was confused..he himself didn't know what he actually felt. when he knows that nivi hated him then why he was so worried and tried his best to distract her from her fear...if his presence disturbed her then why since they were stuck here she didn't show a glimpse of anger towards him...nivi was waiting for a yes or no but he couldn't give her an answer. She didn't know what the silence meant...did the person she loved the most hate her in return?...that question was hauting her now and she badly wanted his answer.

nivi: viren...if you...(but before she could finish her sentence the lift's door opens.karan and gautam were standing in front of them with some other people watching them. nivi moves her gaze from viren to the other two and nervously was about to stand up when viren's grip on her hand pulls her back. They both move their gaze to their hands to realise viren was still tightly holding hers. They look at each other surprised and feeling embarassed viren frees her hand. Karan and gautam were secretly smiling to each other happy that their plan somewhere worked. 

karan: arey viren tum yaha kar rahey ho?

gautam: bhaiya kaha chale gaye they aap, aur mey aapko kaha kaha dhund raha tha..kaha they aap?

karan: aur tum sunshine kaha gayab ho gayi thi tum, hadh karti ho sunshine...

nivi and viren comes out...

nivi: meri baat toh suno karan...actually woh lift band hogayi thi...

Itney mey sid aur divya bi waha pahunch jaatey hai abhik aur raunaq ke saath.. divya sees nivi and she had tears in her eyes...

divya: nivi kaisi hai tu...

nivi: mey theek hu di....

abhik and raunaq sees nivi...abhik divya ki saree ka pallu khichta hai...

abhik: mamma yeh aunty kaun hai...

divya: beta yeh aapki chachi mera matlab aapki maasi hai...

nivi: di yeh tumara beta hai...

divya:ha nivi yeh mera beta hai...{nivi hugs abhik and kisses her}

nivi: karan chalo chaltey hai...

sid:arey aisi kaisey tum itney dino baad humhey mili ho chalo kahi sath lunch kartey hai...

nivi: nahi woh...

divya: nahi kya nivi, mujhe kuch nahi sunna hai..

nivi:di mujhe office ke kuch kaam sey jaana hai...phir kabhi...

viren:bhabhi agar woh humarey sath lunch nahi karna chahti toh dnt force her...let her go...

divya says nothing.....

nivi and karan goes from there and sid and gautam are standing behind viren and smiles to eachother..viren sees nivi going..........






Edited by stary_kajal - 26 March 2011 at 2:28am

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Posted: 26 March 2011 at 2:29am | IP Logged
Originally posted by edwardcullen19

hello my name is neetika. Your story is really good and interesting........nice updateClap

well thank you so much neetika for your lovely comment.......
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Posted: 26 March 2011 at 2:30am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ashred12

Nice chapter.. So we r gonna 've cupid pair or trio? Smile

thanks ashred for your comment...just wanna tell u soon there will be an entry of one new character...
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Posted: 26 March 2011 at 2:33am | IP Logged
hey kaajal...thanx a lot for the updates...i love the way u shaping up the story.....it's really nice to see more cupids to reunite nivren....!!!!!thank u so much dear...!!!!

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