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Posted: 20 March 2011 at 11:50pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by wadi..doll

 we love ff so it will be nice to read them lovely
keep it up

hey thanks doll....such a sweetheart....

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Posted: 20 March 2011 at 11:50pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by aysha1989

Thanks Kajal I love reading ff's specially Nivrens ff's please continue...

Ur welcome frnd...i will continue...

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Posted: 20 March 2011 at 11:52pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by vids08

Hi I am Vidya. Thanks a ton fr starting the FF.HugLovely start Kajal. I'm glad Viren is not tongue tied in your story unlike the show.
Let me just warn you we are greedy bunch of girls here - jiska dil maange moreBig smile So may we ask if you don't mind when is the next update due.Wink

hey thanks vids...yeah yeh dil maange more...........i will update soon...

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Originally posted by vids08

Hi I am Vidya. Thanks a ton fr starting the FF.HugLovely start Kajal. I'm glad Viren is not tongue tied in your story unlike the show.
Let me just warn you we are greedy bunch of girls here - jiska dil maange moreBig smile So may we ask if you don't mind when is the next update due.Wink

thanks vids... yeah.....yeh dil maangey more.....i will update soon...dear
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Posted: 20 March 2011 at 11:54pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by SnehaNivRenFan

Hi Kajal. Welcome to the forum and thank u so much for thinking to write an FF for us.. The introductory chapter is quite exciting. Waiting to see what this witty Viren is upto now..

Really glad that ur FF Viren has not gone into a shell like the show VirenWink

hey thanks snesha.. i loved your comment yar...i will try my best that i will make the viren as you want.. 
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Posted: 20 March 2011 at 11:55pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Sofna

Hi Kajal Im Sofna...n i 2nd wat Payal said..thmk u for strting this FF.....waiting for the nxt part...tc

thanks sofana. so much dear....
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Posted: 20 March 2011 at 11:56pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by dyhardfan

Heyyyy kajal I am shamima. Loved your FF. Can't wait for the next chapter. Mwahzzzz

thanks shamima...i will update soon dear...
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Posted: 21 March 2011 at 1:40am | IP Logged
Cry                                                               Hello guysSmile        
                            first of all thank you so much for your love & support
                                      I am back with the next part-5ClapClapClap
                           
[There is a short part in red its Karan's flashbackEmbarrassed]
  


Karan and Nivi reached the party {karan is in brown gucci suit and nivi is in dark pink saree both of them looking like cute couple} and were very well welcomed by gautam and his friends. Karan introduced nivi to some business partners and nivi sees chanchal and divyain the crowd. She is shocked see them...Shocked.....

 

Karan: hey sunshine, meet gautam my businees partner

gautam: sunshine! nice name...

nivi: thanks by the way only karan calls mey sunshine, myy name is nivedita...

gautam: toh mey aapko pyar sey nivi bulaa lu...

nivi: hearing this name form gautam, nivi goes into flashback....

flashback:

{nivi dadi calls her dadi, her brother di...her father calls her putul, sidharath first meet and married to viren {its just happened in few seconds}

karan: sunshine.....hello sunshine...karan puts hand on her shoulder...sunshine..

nivi {comes to her senses}: ahh...hmmm

karan: where were you lost sweetheart...? u r oka na?

nivi smilesSmile: yes i am fine karan you dont worry...

karan: thank god you are okay... nahi hoti toh mushbit padh jaati....

nivi sees karan with angryAngry looks: kaun mushbit...ha...who...kisey keh rahey ho...

karan:arey nahi nahi mey toh bas mazaak kar raha tha...

nivi:tumarey mazak mey achey sey jaanti hu....

gautam: hey hey guys dont fight atleast not here...come on i wanna introduce to my family....

karan and nivi goes....In a black suit, his back can be seen...talking to someone...karan and nivi are standing just back of him....

gautam: bhaiya...bhaiya.......

a man turns.......nivi gets shockShockedand karan is smilingSmile...

{"its none other than...viren guys..... he is in a black armaani suit and having specs... oh my god he is looking dam dashing... he sees nivi and suddenly his smile disppears off..."}

a song starts: {sad song of hum tum}

{party song stops....BG is silent and a song starts}

bolti rahi aankhey meri, inko jo padta tu agar,

hota nahi yuh bekhabar, hota tu mera humsafar,

ruk ja jo kehta tu agar,

tanha na gujarta apna yeh safar,

lamho ki guzaarish thi yeh pass aa jaaye

hummm....hum tumm

gautam and karan sees nivi and viren..........

gautam: hmm shocked my bhaiya is too smart, dashing and intelligent... grls have crush on him...

karan: you are rite...he is good looking...

gautam: bhaiya...{waving hand}...bhaiya...

viren: ha....{come to his senses}.....

gautam: kaha kho gaye they aap...meet them he is karan oberoi...our business partner...and she sunshine....nahi nahi...nivi...nahi nahi nivedita....arey yar tumarey kitney naam hai....bahut confusion hai....

ranauq{ashnoor kaur}:bhaiya...bhaiya...

gautam: coming sweetheart....just excuse me my jaan is caling me..i will be rite back...

viren: smilesSmile sees nivi: okay....

karan: so viren, dont mind i can call you viren na....

viren: ya sure you can....

karan: nice party....wow girls....yar tum itney dashing ho yaha ki har ek ladhki tumpe marti hai...koi pasand aayi ki nahi....

viren smilesSmile: no dude smart toh tum ho, girls should have crush on you...by the way i love someone {he sees nivi}

nivi looks up with moist eyes....she is escaping her tears....and looking here and there....

karan: i like your style...lagta hai hum dono ki khub jamegi....

viren: well yeh to waqt hi batayega...{he calls waiter and have a glass of wine in his hand offers to karan, karan take it}.... waisey aapki sathi kaafi chup khadi hai lagta hai she is not enjoying the party....{viren looks at nivi, nivi can see pain in his eyes}...

karan: sunshine! what happened to you yar... itni chup kyu ho...waisey toh itna bolti ho ab kya hua tumhey....

viren: lagta hai kuch yaad aa gaya hoga aapko...{nivi sees viren with teary eyes}

nivi: excuse me..please...

{viren sees nivi running to bath room and locks the door, and start crying in washbasin by opening tap...she sees mirror and saw viren image...he is smiling.. giving flying kiss to nivi...she puts water on her face....she sits on a floor...and start crying a small kid...crys and hides her face on her arms}

After sometine nivi come out from the bathroom...viren and karan is there only..

karan: hey sunshine what happened?

nivi: karan i am not found to be well.. shall we leave...

karan takes nivi sides: nivi agar tum bahana kar rahi ho toh this is not rite..you know that party had just begin now and i have to sign the papers also...

nivi: theek hai tum yahi ruko mey ghar chali jaati hu... but i am saying truth i am not feeling well..

karan: okay we will go but after sometime....

karan returns to viren and viren: so everything is fine na...

karan:oh yes yes....hmm if you dont mind can we make a announcment of our deal....

viren: yeah yeah sure sure.... 

viren goes to stage and had an announcment

" ladies and gentleman may i have your attention please.. today i am signing a very big deal with a very reowned business man Mr. karan oberoi... Gautam opens a shampion and they drink... karan signs paper.. nivi is standing and chanchal come to her...

chanchal: small world ...maine kabhi nahin socha tha ki life mein main ek hi din mein do baar milungi (nivi is sad)

nivi: mumi ji...yeh jo party hai yeh mere dost ke liye rakhi hui hai, mujhe nahi pata tha ki aap log mumbai shift ho chuke hai....

chanchal: OMGG! Tum Karan Oberoi ki dost ho, i dont belive this merey betey ko is terha akela chodhkar jaaney ki himaat kasiey hui aur ab yeh dosti ka naya natak????

nivi sees chanchal with teary eyesCryCryCry....

chanchal takes nivi outside: kyu bahut rona aa raha hai na, mujhe bi aisey hi rona aata tha jab mey apney betey ko aisi haalat mey dekhti thi.... maana ki tumney humara viren humhey wapas loutaya hai lakin ek pal ki hasi dekhar tumney humhey zindagi bhar ka rona diya hai niviedita...

nivi cries and sees chanchal: mummi ji yeh aap....

chanchal: abhi meri baat khatam nahi hui hai...woh bechara toh tumsey maafi maangney aaye tha aur tumarey sath ek nayi zindagi shuru karna chahta tha lakin tumney kya kiya uske saarey sapno ko todh daala...janti hu viren ne tumhe divorce dekar bahut bada paap kiya tha.. lakin kya tumari nazroo mey uski koi maafi ki koi kimat nahi thi... bolo chup kyu ho nivedita....

nivi is just cryingCry....

chanchal: chup kyu ho koi jawab nahi hai na...tumney merey betey ko bhaley hi roshini dikhai hai lakin apna sath dekar phir sey andhero mey dakhel diya hai... bolo chup kyu ho nivedita....

karan: jawab mey deta hu....

chanchal turns and sees karan {he is very angryAngry}

karan: kyu degi meri sunshine aapki baat ka jawab....kyunki aapka beta takleef mey hai...aapko apney betey ki takleef dikhayi deti hai...{karan goes to nivi} lakin aapko iski takleef nahi dikhayi deti....

chanchal is shockedShockedShockedShocked....

chanchal: tum kaun hotey ho humare aapsi maamley mey dakhal deney waaley.. business partner ho wahi bankar raho....

karan sees chanchal....

karan trys to say something......nivedita stops....

nivi: bas kijye aap log agar mey chup hu toh iska matlab yeh nahi hai ki aap merey sabar ki pariksha letey rahengey....mey apni zindagi mey jaisi bi hu theek hu...isey aur mat uljaaiye... sab meri hi galti hai... pehali galti sidharath sey pyar liya woh meri galti thi... sid chala gaya woh meri galti thi... phir viren aaye woh mey meri galti thi....unhoney apney maksad ke liye mujhe istey maal kiya woh meri galti thi....mainey unsey sacha pyar kiya woh meri galti thi....sab meri galti hai...its all time....karan please mujhe yaha sey ley chalo...bhagwan ke liye...{ she bends down}

karan comes to nivi he makes her stand and take her with him...karan brings nivi home as she slept in the car only... karan opens the door and picks her up and take her to bedroom..he puts him down and give blenket to her..and switch off the lights and close the door...

karan changes his dress and comes in front of window and start thinking

Karan: ek baar pyaar kiya uska zakham abhi bhi theek se bhara nahin hai...bohut mushkil se maine khud ko samhal liya hai aur life jeene ki koshish kar raha hoon...mujhe phir se yeh galti nahin karni hai..nivi ke elava pehli baar maine kisi se itna pyaar kiya...apni poori zindagi uske saath jeena chahta tha...lekin humara safar shuru hone se pehle hi usne mera saath chor diya.....I hope tum jo chahti thi life se tumhe mil gaaya ho....

 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Love and Luck to All
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Edited by stary_kajal - 21 March 2011 at 1:42am

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