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Posted: 19 March 2011 at 7:00pm | IP Logged
Hi Kajal Im Sofna...n i 2nd wat Payal said..thmk u for strting this FF.....waiting for the nxt part...tc

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Posted: 19 March 2011 at 7:24pm | IP Logged
Hi Kajal. Welcome to the forum and thank u so much for thinking to write an FF for us.. The introductory chapter is quite exciting. Waiting to see what this witty Viren is upto now..

Really glad that ur FF Viren has not gone into a shell like the show VirenWink

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Posted: 19 March 2011 at 7:32pm | IP Logged
Hi I am Vidya. Thanks a ton fr starting the FF.HugLovely start Kajal. I'm glad Viren is not tongue tied in your story unlike the show.
Let me just warn you we are greedy bunch of girls here - jiska dil maange moreBig smile So may we ask if you don't mind when is the next update due.Wink

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Posted: 19 March 2011 at 7:43pm | IP Logged
PART-2

viren smiles and all of them are confused....Confused
viren: dadaji aap log mujhe aisey kyu dekh rahey hai...

dadaji: tu karney kya waala hai...

viren: dadaji aap chinta mat kijye..aap ka yeh pota kya kamal karta hai bas dekhtey jaaiye...

sid:dadaji hum sabko milkar yeh koshish karni hai ki nivi kisi terha wapas is ghar mey aa jaaye...

diya:nivi ko kaisey is ghar mey wapas lekar aana hai merey pass ek plan hai...

all of them gather around and speak to themselves.... {sounds blurrr...ConfusedConfused}

Yash comes running to nivi...nivi feels nervous... yash start crying....
nivi: yash tu ro kyu raha hai....kya hua...bol kuch toh bol...

yash:di woh woh...mera ek dost tha, uski behan ke pati ne khudkhushi kar li....

nivi: kya kaun dost aur kaun behan...mujhe toh kuch samaj nahi aa raha hai...

yash:didi merey dost ki ek behan hai...uski behan kuch dino ke liye apney maa baba ke ghar aayi thi aur uske pati ney uski judaai mey khudkhushi kar li...{yash again start cryingCryCryCry...

nivi console yash and thinks agar viren ney bi koi aisa kadam utha liya toh...yash sees nivi and smilesWink....

viren kisi bachey peth thapthpatey huey....SmileSmileSmile...
viren: shabash mujhe tujse aisi hi umeed thi..{its none other than yash..he smiles}...bahut achey "mission return"...

divya: yash ab tu dhayan rakhna ki nivi aagey kya kya karti hai aur sari info humhey detey rehna theek hai...{divya gives mobile phone to yash}..yeh le tera gift aur ha kisi ko batana mat ki hum sab miley huey hai...ok

yash: ok divya di...

dadi and nivi are talking...nivi brings tea for dadi...dadi is drinking tea...

dadi: ab aagey kya socha hai tuney....

nivi:dadi mey soch rahi hu ki mey koi radio station join kar lu...waisey bi agar mey apaney aap ko vyast rakhungi tabi in buri yaado sey bahar nikal paaungi...

dadi:pahad jaisi lambi zindagi hai...isey akeley gujaar degi...

nivi:mey akeley kaha hu dadi aap sab toh hai merey sath...

dadi: meri bacchi dukho ka toh jaisa saaya tera picha chodney ka naam hi nahi leta...mey bas bhagwan sey prathana karungi ki sab theek ho jaaye...

nivi smiles...Smile.....{aww nivi you are so brave and strong...} sid comes to meet dadi...dadi smiles and welcome him...
dadi: aur sid beta kaisey ho...

sid: sab theek hai dadi baaki aap sab toh janti hi hai...mey yaha nivedita sey milney aaya hu...

dadi:woh apney kamrey mey hai....

sid goes to nivi room and knocks the door...nivi tells to come in..sid comes and nivi sees sid..sid comes and sits on chair..
sid:kaisi ho...

nivi:mey theek hu...viren ji kaisey hai..

sid: woh kaisa ho sakta hai tumarey jaaney ke baad...

nivi: koi baat nahi kuch time ke baad woh theek ho jaayengey...

sid:tum ghar kyu chodhkar aa gayi nivedita...ek taraf tum humarey ghar mey khushiya lekar aayi aur dusri taraf apney jaaney ka dukh bi...koi kaisey khush reh sakta hai...

nivi: sidharath yeh toh ek din hona hi tha na..woh ghar toh mera kabhi tha hi nahi...bas mey toh tumarey pariwaar ko milwaney ka ek zariya tha..jo kaam pura ho chuka hai...

sid: tum usey kaam kehti ho...kya hum sab tumarey kuch nahi lagtey they...

nivi: please sidharath meri mushkilo aur mat badhao..bahut mushkil sey mainey apney aap ko sambhala hai..please tum chaley jao yaha sey...

sidharath goes from there..he is very angry and nivedita is in tearsCry..and sees sid going...



Edited by stary_kajal - 19 March 2011 at 8:44pm

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Posted: 19 March 2011 at 8:26pm | IP Logged
Next part-3

School scene:

nivedita is sitting with a manger..manger is smiling and seeing nivedita file..she sees nivedita...

manger:Well nivedita congrats, aap kal sey radio station join kar sakti hai..lakin mey aapko ek baat kehna chahti hu..humarey radio station ke kuch rules and regulations hai jo aapko follow karney hongey... It will be okay with 

nivedita smiles: yes sir i will...

manger: okay then this jobs is yours....

Sood house:
viren is sitting and thinking something...dadaji comes and sees viren..

dadaji:viren beta kya soch rahey ho beta, nivedita ki yaad aa rahi hai...

viren nodes his head : dadaji mey bas chahta hu ki woh jaldi sey ghar wapas aa jaaye... {viren feels sad and goes from there}

Viren goes in a garden and sits there...he is lost in his thoughts.. a girl watching him.. she is playing with kids there.. a girl comes to her...

Gal: listen'why are you so upset'(viren looks up at her)

Viren: I m sorry i was just...

gal: wanna talk

viren:what

gal:apni problem ke baarey mey baat karna chahtey ho?

viren:thanks but'ek ajnabi ke saath apne problems share karna'its weird (the girl sits on the bench in front of viren}

Gal: iska matlab yes'aur rahi baat ajnabi hone ki'tho main itna keh sakti hoon ki tum kisi cheez ko lekar pareshan ho...kya hua girlfrnd sey jagada hua...mummy papa ney daanta kya? mujhe toh lagta hai ki girlfrnd sey jagada hua hai issi liye udaas ho??

viren:nahin'actually mere apney aap sey pareshan hu..

gal: woh kyu?

viren: ab tumhey kya batau woh mujse bahut pyar karti thi, lakin mey hi samaj nahi saka, bahut takleef di hai usey mainey...lakin mey yeh bi jaanta hu ki mey uske bina ji nahi sakta...

gal:baat toh samaj aa rahi hai lakin yeh woh kaun hai...

viren: woh meri biwi nivedita...

gal:a hmmm nice name...ha toh kya hua...

Viren tells everything to that gal and gal listens that very carefully...
gal: boss galti toh hui hai tumsey par sudharana bi tumhey hi padega.. jaakar usey maafi maang lo woh tumhey zarur maaf kardegi...kyunki maafi mangney sey koi insaan chota nahi ho jaata....

viren: its not the first time...mainey bahut baar usey hurt kiya hai...

gal: so what's the big deal? galti insaano sey hi hoti hai aur jab tumhey apni galti ka pachatwa hai...toh kyu nahi... See dude itne choti choti baton ke liye apni life ki best moments spoil nahin karni chahiye.. i mean you love her to kehney sey kyu dartey ho...

viren:koi stupidity ho gayi toh...

gal: arey jab pyar kiya toh darna kya....

viren:i  think unhe bura lagega...aur mey usey aur hurt nahi karna chahta..

gal:aur aaj tak tumhe jaise feel hua hai uska kya?...jab tak tum bataoge nahin voh kabhi samajh nahin paayegi...ki tumhey apni galti ka pachtawa hai...

viren: yes you are right, i will not loose hope...

gal: yeh hui na baat...

viren:waisey tumara naam kya hai...

gal:woh kyu batau mey...

viren:arey ab hum ajnabi sey dost jo ban gaye hai....

gal:dude, badey tez ho mainey ungali pakdai tumney toh hath hi pakad liya..phir milengey tab bata dungi...

viren smiles: jaisey tumari marzi....

Viren goes to home and tell sid about the girl and their convo.... sid is happy that viren is thinking positive...

viren: now more plans and more action time.....


Edited by stary_kajal - 19 March 2011 at 8:43pm

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Heyyyy kajal I am shamima. Loved your FF. Can't wait for the next chapter. Mwahzzzz

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NEXT PART-4

Viren goes to nivedita and apologise but nivedita doesnt agree..Viren feels defeated and goes into a shock...Viren decided to let nivi live her life and he will also do the same...but he returns to home...chanchal sees his son and could feel that he is not the real viren...they shift to mumbai...nivi doesnt know that sood family is also there...

After 5 years
nivi went to mumabi and now she is working in a magzine and radio industry...viren is a famous business taycoon.. sid and divya are happily married couple they have a kid {his name is abhik}..chanchal and jawahar are changed now..dadaji is dead and so as nivi dadi...even yashdora also...vandhana is same... chanchal sister {died in car accident} son and daughter is living with them...Viren had made him busy and he miss nivedita... 

nivedita viren sood:Also known as Nivi and married to viren. She is very beautiful, shy and different by nature, but a responsible person with great moral strength. Family is her priority and she does her best to keep them happy. Having lost her mother at a tender age, she is brought up by her grandmother. she is now living in mumbai, left home to comeout from the world of sadness. she is living with karan oberoi...her best frnd..

karan wahi {karan oberoi}:27 years old.nivedita's best friend. They grew up together and know each other better than anyone else and better than they know themselves. They both live together in Mumbai ..Karan is a very successful business man and has a very good reputation and image for being so successful in his young age. Karan is a very modern handsome guy, tall with brown chocolate eyes a quite fit body but like Khanak he has his Indian values. Every girl he knows has a crush on him but he does not give any attention to any of them, not because he thinks he is too good for them but because he has a reason behind. He loves Kahank very much and can do anything to keep her happy.

gautam sharma {kunaal kpoor}: 24 years old chanchal nephew..very talented he is like to be viren..everyone says him "viren-2"..he copys him and like to be him in any cost..he is very talented, but he always mistakes and it becomes a prank...but he is very sweet and close to viren..he is childish, innocent

raunaq sharma {ashnoor kaur}: 9 years old and she is very cute loved by all..gautam sister...everyone take care of her...she is damm smart...she is very close to sid..she is very naughty...

Its morning and nivedita is makin breakfast for her and karan who is still getting ready for office.

 

nivi: KARAN!! Jaldi karo baba aur kitni der karoge breakfast ke liye! (he was still in his room)

Karan: haan bas do min mein aa raha hoon yaar

nivi to herself: do min my foot! Dus se kum nahin lagega (and exactly after 10 mins he comes downstairs)

Karan: goodmorning sunshine! (nivi looks at him and he was looking dashin as usual)

nivi: coffee

Karan: thanks

nivi: tumhe pata hai tum duniya ki pehle ladke ho jo ek ladki se bhi ziada time lagate ho tayaar hone mein! Ab mujhe dekho main tayaar bhi ho gaayi hoon aur breakfast bhi bana liya

Karan: nivi'ab itni kum umar mein main itna successful ho gaaya hoon aur logon ne meri ek image banaayi hai'tho uska khial tho rakhna hoga naa (nivi laughs)

nivi: acha chalo yeh baat theek hai'lekin unn saari ladkiyon ka kya jo tumhe dekh ke khud ko bhool jaati hai'aur tum ho ki unko koi attention hi nahin dete

Karan: plzz yaar tum subah subah phir iss ladkiyon ka topic lekar shuru mat ho jao'ab main todi kehta hoon ki aao bhai mujhe dekho

nivi: haan par main ab aunty se aur jooth nahin bol sakti yaar'ek ko tho pasand karni hi hogi naa'I mean ek ladki jo tumse pyaar kare tumhara khial rakhe aur tum bhi pyaar karo (he gave her a faint smile)

Karan: ab nahin''(nivi knew why he was sayin this and karan changed the topic) aur vaise bhi'mere pass already ek aisi ladki hai tho koi teesri ki kaun si zaroorat hai? (he puts his arm around her neck and pulls her closer)

nivi: u mean'main??

Karan: of course! Ab dekh we are best friends aur hum ek doosre se pyaar bhi karte hain'aur tum mera bohut khial bhi rakhti ho (nivi smiles)

nivi: haan haan theek hai maska mat lagao'kam pe jao aur mujhe bhi late ho rahi hai

Karan: yes m'am! (he kisses her forehead and leaves for office nivi keep looking at him smiling)

nivi: stupid!

 

 

 

 

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At sood mansion, chanchal, divya, sid, jawahar, dadi and vandana were having breakfast.

 

divya: chachi ji apko voh neckless yaad hai jo apko ek magazine mein pasand aayi thi?

chanchal:off course divya'main tho aaj bhi uss neckless ka intezaar kar rahi hoon

divya: chachi ji intezaar khatam!...aaj jewellery shop mein naaya collection aane vaala hai aur uss mein voh neckless bhi hai

chanchal: OMG!! Tho phir hum yahan kya kar rahe hain?? Jaldi se breakfast khatam kar aur mall chalte hain! (jawahar and sid laugh)

jawahar: sid beta aaj tum factory jaa rahe ho?

sid: jee dad shaam ko jaa raha hoon'aur main soch raha tha kyun naa gautam ko bhi saath le jaoun usko bhi tho factory dekh leni chahiye naa..waisey viren kaha hai...

vandana:woh toh subah hi office chala gaya...

chanchal: kitna badal gaya hai woh in paanch saalo mey, na jaaney usey kiski nazar lag gayi hai uski khushiyo ko...na hasta hai na kuch bolta hai..bas kaam kaam...

sid: chachi ji aap chinta mat kjiye sab theek ho jaayega...

jawahar: Viren toh theek ho hi jaayega waisey humarey "viren-2" kaha hai kahi nazar nahi aa rahey hai..."

dadaji: tabhi toh ghar mey shor nahi hai..lagta hai janab so rahey hai..

jawahar: aahey hai badey viren-2 banney...koi inti der tak koi sota hai..isey achey toh humarey abhik aur ranauq hai...kam sey kam har kaam time pe toh kartey hai...

dadaji: baat tho sahi hai beta'lekin tum toh gautam ko achey sey jante ho'voh sirf vahin deals ko samhalta hai jo uske liye interesting ho (just then gautam joins them for breakfast and confirms what his mausa ji said)

gautam: exactly dadaji!...aur mere pass ek bohut hi interesting deal hai'so thanks but main apke saath factory nahin jaounga

sid: ok mat chal mere bhai! Maine tho bas shocha ki shayad tumhe yeh naayi project pasand aaye (gautam sits next to sid and eats his breakfast)

gautam: how sweet bhaya aap mere bare mein kitna shochte hain'ya apna kam bhi mujhe dena chahte hain'(jawahar laughs at gautam's joke)

sid: chote'itne saalon tak company main hi samhalta aaya hoon dad ke saath'tum tho bas do teen saal se kam kar rahe ho

gautam: haan'par bhaya'inn do teen saalon mein humare company ko best deals maine hi dilaaya hai'kyun dad?

chanchal: of course!...par ab tum dono breakfast khatam karo kam pe bhi jaana hai'

 

 

 

 

 

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nivedita was in her cabin'today her show was not airing so was busy reading her letters and reply to them. She took one of her letters and read it

 

 

"Dear nivedita,

Congratulations for your promotion and your new talk show. You are doing a great job so far and I really love watching it so all the best. I am really happy that you are not ending your love advice column because we really need your help aur sab se ziada main

I am in love with a guy in my college for the past 4 years but I am very scared to confess my feelings.

I really don't know what to do and how to talk to him'soo plzzz help me yaar"

 

 

Love,

Hopeless gal

 

 

niveidita smiles reading the letter and after thinking for a sec she starts typing on her keyboard.

 

"Dear Hopeless gal,

First of all thank you soo much for your wishes im really glad you guys love my show. But you guys don't worry because as long as im goin to work here im not stopping my love advice column because that's with what I've started my career and now it's a part of my life.

Now back to your problem.

Sab se pehle tho stop calling yourself hopeless gal'and as far as I know we are in the

21st century tho yeh sharmili types girls do not exist anymore'if you really love him then you should tell him'kyunki agar tum kahogi nahin tho usse pata nahin chalege aur phir koi aur ladki uss se kahegi aur tab tumhare liye bohut der hoga'so forget your fear aur apni sharam ko side mein rakh aur uss se baat kar'tab hi baat baanegi!"

 

Lots of love,

nivedita

 

 

The whole morning passes for nivedita typing the replies when for her surprise Karan opens the door of her cabin.

 

Karan: lunch?? (nivi smiles)

nivi: sure! (she takes her bag and when they step out of the cabin two of khanak's female colleagues stop them just to spend some time with Karan'Mona and Rosa)

Both ladies: hi Karannn'(he smiles sarcastically)

Karan: hello girls'

Mona: you're lookin soooo handsome in black (she runs her finger on his chest n nivi was enjoyin the whole scenario) the way your suit is embracing you body'I wish'(in a very sensual voice) tumhari yeh suit main hi hoti'(karan whispers to nivi)

Karan: tab tho main isko pehenta hi nahin'(nivi just laughs)

Rosa: tum dono kahin jaa rahe ho?

nivi: yeah'lunch ke liye jaa rahe hain

Rosa: wow! Humara bhi lunch break hai'kyun naa hum saath mein chalein?? Right Mona?

Mona: yeah babes'soo Karan'need some company?? (karan looks at nivi desperate but nivi was enjoyin his state'he then gets an idea and puts his hand around nivi's waist pulling her a lil closer)

Karan: voh'actually girls aaj meri aur nivi ki first lunch as a couple hai'so we need some privacy (nivi looks at him surprised and whispers)

nivi: couple'? (karan winks at her adn the girls were shocked on hearin this)

Rosa: couple??!!

Karan: yeah'(looking at nivi) sunshine'tumne inko bataaya nahin??

Mona: sunshine? (karan looks at her noticing her disappointed ton)

Karan: haan'main pyaar se khanak ko sunshine bulata hoon'heuu I hope you guys will understand that we need some privacy'(then he looks at khanak with a big smile on his face) chalein'sunshine?

 

Karan leaves from there still holdin nivi's waist very proud of himself and nivi was trying her best to not laugh out loud. They reach the parking lot and karan happily opens the door.

 

nivi: karan tujhe pata hai ab voh log mujhe pagaal karenge naa! Ab main kya bataoungi unhe?

Karan: c'mon yaar tu tho master hai inn sab cheezon mein'koi story bana lena

nivi: par kuch aur nahin bol sakte the?? Apni girlfriend banana zaroori tha kya? Meri reputation ka kuch tho sochte'

Karan: oohh hello! Ladkiyan naa mujhpe maarti hai'khush ho ki tumhe itna handsome boyfriend mila hai'main tho kehta hoon tu humesha sab ke samne meri girlfriend baan jaa'at least mujhe chain se jeene denge log (nivi laughs)

nivi: ok darling now lets go! (they both laugh n karan drives away)

 

 

 

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gautam was in viren's cabin talking about his latest deal he will sign tonight during a party thrown for this occasion.

 

viren: I think yeh party ek achi idea hai humare company ke image ke liye'

gautam: jee bhaiya and im sure yeh deal sab se best hoga'kyunki vaise bhi humara parter kafi young hai so im sure its goin to be great working with him

viren: voh tho hai'aur jahan tak maine suna hai he is one of the best businessman in Mumbai'so gautam  main chahta hoon ki iss deal mein koi bhi galati naa ho

gautam: don't worry bhaiya'aisa kuch bhi nahin hoga'aur maine bhi suna hai hai ki voh kafi successful hai'lekin maine yeh bhi suna hai ki voh bohut cool ladka hai'and that's why im sure I will enjoy working with Karan Oberoi''

 

 

 

 

 

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nivi and Karan at restaurant:

 

nivi: NO WAY! Main kahin nahin jaa rahi karan! You know i just hate those parties!

Karan: haan I know'but I promise hum ziada der tak nahin rahenge

nivi: jooth mat bolo! Yeh party tumhare liye hai tho tum kaise jaldi chor kar jaa sakte ho'

Karan: c'mon yaar sunshine! ek shaam ki hi tho baat hai'tum itna bhi nahin kar sakti mere liye?

nivi: dude don't you remember last time kya hua tha aisi party mein'tum kisi aur ke saath bhi jaa sakte ho naa

Karan: jaa sakta hoon'par yeh deal mere liye bohut important hai aur main yeh pal apni family ke saath hona chahta hoon (trying to make his best innocent sad face ever) aur yahan tho sirf tum hi meri family ho'(nivi gets annoyed coz he knew how to convince her)

nivi: karan this is cheating yaar! Tum mujhe humesha yeh family ka topic laa kar blackmail karte ho! (karan smiles)

Karan: so you're coming??

nivi: haan!...but agar main vahan bore hui naa tho sab ke samne teri pitaayi karungi

Karan: koi baat nahin'main media vaalon ko bolunga ke you're a very violent wife

nivi: wife my foot! Jaa kar uss Rosa Mona ko apni wife bana lo

Karan: I rather die!

nivi: karan main jaa tho rahi hoon par mere pass kuch pehen ne ke liye nahin hai

Karan: well'(he looks at his watch) ek kam karte hain abhi sirf do baje hain aur party 7 baje shuru hone vaali hai tho tab tak hum mall chalte hain'

nivi: yeah that's a good idea

 

 

 

 

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nivi and Karan were trying to find a dress for nivi for the past two hours. Every dresses they could find in shops khanak disliked them'

 

Karan: nivi yaar maarwaogi kya? Poora maal ghooma lekin ek bhi dress pasand nahin aaya'teri shaadi nahin hai bas ek choti party hai deal sign karne ke liye

nivi: listen this is really not the right moment for your jokes ok! Ek tho mujhe apne saath aane pe majboor kar rahe ho aur upar se mujhe hi itna kuch suna rahe ho!

Karan: theek hai meri maa im sorry'par yahan kuch mil nahin raha kahin aur chalte hain

 

They leave the shop to check another one. On their way karan saw a shop in which he got interested.

 

Karan: sunshine main yahan ek shop pe jaata hoon do mins ke liye

nivi: theek hai main tab tak yahan dekhti hoon

 

Karan headed towards the shop he found while nivi walked towards the one where she noticed a dress she may like. chanchal and divya were coming from the other side and while walking a guy accidentally pushes chanchal who loses her balance and was about to fall when nivi catches her holding her hand.

 

nivi to the guy: are you bloody blind?!!!

The guy: sorry'im in hurry (he runs from there without lookin back)

nivi: bloody idiot! 

chanchal gets shocked to see niviShockedShockedShocked

divya: excuz me tum'nivi ho right?

nivi turns to divya and she also gets shockedShockedShockedShocked

divya: nivi tum aur yaha pe...she hugs her tightly and crysCryCry

nivi sees divya: yeh lijye samaan kuch logo ke pass aankhey hai lakin log uska istemaal nahi kartey..please excuse me...nivi goes..



 

 

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Karan was in a jewellery shop looking some necklaces. He wanted to buy something to nivi to thank her for going with him. He looked at bracelets rings but the most beautiful jewellery he found was that necklace. So he bought it and when he step out of the shop he bumped to a guy who was not looking where he was going.

 

karan: im sorry I was'(when he looks at the guy he founds viren) viren sood? (viren looks at karan and gets surprised)

viren: karan? Tum yahan kya kar rahe ho?

Karan: kuch nahin main kisi ke saath aaya tha'and I think she is goin to kill me (viren laughs)

viren: ohhh'tho ladki ka chakkar hai'(karan smiles)

Karan: haan ladki ka hai par voh meri'(his phones rings and it was nivi. He looks at viren) ek sec'(then he answered his phone) hello

nivi: where the hell are you??!!! Main yahan kab se tumhara wait kar rahi hoon!

Karan: haan baba main bas do mins mein aa raha hoon

nivi: Karannn!!!

Karan: fine'main dus sec mein aa raha hoon (nivi disconnects the phone and karan looks at viren) sorry dude par mujhe jaana hoga'shaam ko milte hain (then he rushes towards the shop. viren was amused looking at him then he looks at the shop where karan was)


 

 

 


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NEXT PART-4

Viren goes to nivedita and apologise but nivedita doesnt agree..Viren feels defeated and goes into a shock...Viren decided to let nivi live her life and he will also do the same...but he returns to home...chanchal sees his son and could feel that he is not the real viren...they shift to mumbai...nivi doesnt know that sood family is also there...

After 5 years
nivi went to mumabi and now she is working in a magzine and radio industry...viren is a famous business taycoon.. sid and divya are happily married couple they have a kid {his name is abhik}..chanchal and jawahar are changed now..dadaji is dead and so as nivi dadi...even yashdora also...vandhana is same... chanchal sister {died in car accident} son and daughter is living with them...Viren had made him busy and he miss nivedita... 

nivedita viren sood:Also known as Nivi and married to viren. She is very beautiful, shy and different by nature, but a responsible person with great moral strength. Family is her priority and she does her best to keep them happy. Having lost her mother at a tender age, she is brought up by her grandmother. she is now living in mumbai, left home to comeout from the world of sadness. she is living with karan oberoi...her best frnd..

karan wahi {karan oberoi}:27 years old.nivedita's best friend. They grew up together and know each other better than anyone else and better than they know themselves. They both live together in Mumbai ..Karan is a very successful business man and has a very good reputation and image for being so successful in his young age. Karan is a very modern handsome guy, tall with brown chocolate eyes a quite fit body but like Khanak he has his Indian values. Every girl he knows has a crush on him but he does not give any attention to any of them, not because he thinks he is too good for them but because he has a reason behind. He loves Kahank very much and can do anything to keep her happy.

gautam sharma {kunaal kpoor}: 24 years old chanchal nephew..very talented he is like to be viren..everyone says him "viren-2"..he copys him and like to be him in any cost..he is very talented, but he always mistakes and it becomes a prank...but he is very sweet and close to viren..he is childish, innocent

raunaq sharma {ashnoor kaur}: 9 years old and she is very cute loved by all..gautam sister...everyone take care of her...she is damm smart...she is very close to sid..she is very naughty...

Its morning and nivedita is makin breakfast for her and karan who is still getting ready for office.

 

nivi: KARAN!! Jaldi karo baba aur kitni der karoge breakfast ke liye! (he was still in his room)

Karan: haan bas do min mein aa raha hoon yaar

nivi to herself: do min my foot! Dus se kum nahin lagega (and exactly after 10 mins he comes downstairs)

Karan: goodmorning sunshine! (nivi looks at him and he was looking dashin as usual)

nivi: coffee

Karan: thanks

nivi: tumhe pata hai tum duniya ki pehle ladke ho jo ek ladki se bhi ziada time lagate ho tayaar hone mein! Ab mujhe dekho main tayaar bhi ho gaayi hoon aur breakfast bhi bana liya

Karan: nivi'ab itni kum umar mein main itna successful ho gaaya hoon aur logon ne meri ek image banaayi hai'tho uska khial tho rakhna hoga naa (nivi laughs)

nivi: acha chalo yeh baat theek hai'lekin unn saari ladkiyon ka kya jo tumhe dekh ke khud ko bhool jaati hai'aur tum ho ki unko koi attention hi nahin dete

Karan: plzz yaar tum subah subah phir iss ladkiyon ka topic lekar shuru mat ho jao'ab main todi kehta hoon ki aao bhai mujhe dekho

nivi: haan par main ab aunty se aur jooth nahin bol sakti yaar'ek ko tho pasand karni hi hogi naa'I mean ek ladki jo tumse pyaar kare tumhara khial rakhe aur tum bhi pyaar karo (he gave her a faint smile)

Karan: ab nahin''(nivi knew why he was sayin this and karan changed the topic) aur vaise bhi'mere pass already ek aisi ladki hai tho koi teesri ki kaun si zaroorat hai? (he puts his arm around her neck and pulls her closer)

nivi: u mean'main??

Karan: of course! Ab dekh we are best friends aur hum ek doosre se pyaar bhi karte hain'aur tum mera bohut khial bhi rakhti ho (nivi smiles)

nivi: haan haan theek hai maska mat lagao'kam pe jao aur mujhe bhi late ho rahi hai

Karan: yes m'am! (he kisses her forehead and leaves for office nivi keep looking at him smiling)

nivi: stupid!

 

 

 

 

***

 

 

 

 

At sood mansion, chanchal, divya, sid, jawahar, dadi and vandana were having breakfast.

 

divya: chachi ji apko voh neckless yaad hai jo apko ek magazine mein pasand aayi thi?

chanchal:off course divya'main tho aaj bhi uss neckless ka intezaar kar rahi hoon

divya: chachi ji intezaar khatam!...aaj jewellery shop mein naaya collection aane vaala hai aur uss mein voh neckless bhi hai

chanchal: OMG!! Tho phir hum yahan kya kar rahe hain?? Jaldi se breakfast khatam kar aur mall chalte hain! (jawahar and sid laugh)

jawahar: sid beta aaj tum factory jaa rahe ho?

sid: jee dad shaam ko jaa raha hoon'aur main soch raha tha kyun naa gautam ko bhi saath le jaoun usko bhi tho factory dekh leni chahiye naa..waisey viren kaha hai...

vandana:woh toh subah hi office chala gaya...

chanchal: kitna badal gaya hai woh in paanch saalo mey, na jaaney usey kiski nazar lag gayi hai uski khushiyo ko...na hasta hai na kuch bolta hai..bas kaam kaam...

sid: chachi ji aap chinta mat kjiye sab theek ho jaayega...

jawahar: Viren toh theek ho hi jaayega waisey humarey "viren-2" kaha hai kahi nazar nahi aa rahey hai..."

dadaji: tabhi toh ghar mey shor nahi hai..lagta hai janab so rahey hai..

jawahar: aahey hai badey viren-2 banney...koi inti der tak koi sota hai..isey achey toh humarey abhik aur ranauq hai...kam sey kam har kaam time pe toh kartey hai...

dadaji: baat tho sahi hai beta'lekin tum toh gautam ko achey sey jante ho'voh sirf vahin deals ko samhalta hai jo uske liye interesting ho (just then gautam joins them for breakfast and confirms what his mausa ji said)

gautam: exactly dadaji!...aur mere pass ek bohut hi interesting deal hai'so thanks but main apke saath factory nahin jaounga

sid: ok mat chal mere bhai! Maine tho bas shocha ki shayad tumhe yeh naayi project pasand aaye (gautam sits next to sid and eats his breakfast)

gautam: how sweet bhaya aap mere bare mein kitna shochte hain'ya apna kam bhi mujhe dena chahte hain'(jawahar laughs at gautam's joke)

sid: chote'itne saalon tak company main hi samhalta aaya hoon dad ke saath'tum tho bas do teen saal se kam kar rahe ho

gautam: haan'par bhaya'inn do teen saalon mein humare company ko best deals maine hi dilaaya hai'kyun dad?

chanchal: of course!...par ab tum dono breakfast khatam karo kam pe bhi jaana hai'

 

 

 

 

 

***

 

 

 

 

nivedita was in her cabin'today her show was not airing so was busy reading her letters and reply to them. She took one of her letters and read it

 

 

"Dear nivedita,

Congratulations for your promotion and your new talk show. You are doing a great job so far and I really love watching it so all the best. I am really happy that you are not ending your love advice column because we really need your help aur sab se ziada main

I am in love with a guy in my college for the past 4 years but I am very scared to confess my feelings.

I really don't know what to do and how to talk to him'soo plzzz help me yaar"

 

 

Love,

Hopeless gal

 

 

niveidita smiles reading the letter and after thinking for a sec she starts typing on her keyboard.

 

"Dear Hopeless gal,

First of all thank you soo much for your wishes im really glad you guys love my show. But you guys don't worry because as long as im goin to work here im not stopping my love advice column because that's with what I've started my career and now it's a part of my life.

Now back to your problem.

Sab se pehle tho stop calling yourself hopeless gal'and as far as I know we are in the

21st century tho yeh sharmili types girls do not exist anymore'if you really love him then you should tell him'kyunki agar tum kahogi nahin tho usse pata nahin chalege aur phir koi aur ladki uss se kahegi aur tab tumhare liye bohut der hoga'so forget your fear aur apni sharam ko side mein rakh aur uss se baat kar'tab hi baat baanegi!"

 

Lots of love,

nivedita

 

 

The whole morning passes for nivedita typing the replies when for her surprise Karan opens the door of her cabin.

 

Karan: lunch?? (nivi smiles)

nivi: sure! (she takes her bag and when they step out of the cabin two of khanak's female colleagues stop them just to spend some time with Karan'Mona and Rosa)

Both ladies: hi Karannn'(he smiles sarcastically)

Karan: hello girls'

Mona: you're lookin soooo handsome in black (she runs her finger on his chest n nivi was enjoyin the whole scenario) the way your suit is embracing you body'I wish'(in a very sensual voice) tumhari yeh suit main hi hoti'(karan whispers to nivi)

Karan: tab tho main isko pehenta hi nahin'(nivi just laughs)

Rosa: tum dono kahin jaa rahe ho?

nivi: yeah'lunch ke liye jaa rahe hain

Rosa: wow! Humara bhi lunch break hai'kyun naa hum saath mein chalein?? Right Mona?

Mona: yeah babes'soo Karan'need some company?? (karan looks at nivi desperate but nivi was enjoyin his state'he then gets an idea and puts his hand around nivi's waist pulling her a lil closer)

Karan: voh'actually girls aaj meri aur nivi ki first lunch as a couple hai'so we need some privacy (nivi looks at him surprised and whispers)

nivi: couple'? (karan winks at her adn the girls were shocked on hearin this)

Rosa: couple??!!

Karan: yeah'(looking at nivi) sunshine'tumne inko bataaya nahin??

Mona: sunshine? (karan looks at her noticing her disappointed ton)

Karan: haan'main pyaar se khanak ko sunshine bulata hoon'heuu I hope you guys will understand that we need some privacy'(then he looks at khanak with a big smile on his face) chalein'sunshine?

 

Karan leaves from there still holdin nivi's waist very proud of himself and nivi was trying her best to not laugh out loud. They reach the parking lot and karan happily opens the door.

 

nivi: karan tujhe pata hai ab voh log mujhe pagaal karenge naa! Ab main kya bataoungi unhe?

Karan: c'mon yaar tu tho master hai inn sab cheezon mein'koi story bana lena

nivi: par kuch aur nahin bol sakte the?? Apni girlfriend banana zaroori tha kya? Meri reputation ka kuch tho sochte'

Karan: oohh hello! Ladkiyan naa mujhpe maarti hai'khush ho ki tumhe itna handsome boyfriend mila hai'main tho kehta hoon tu humesha sab ke samne meri girlfriend baan jaa'at least mujhe chain se jeene denge log (nivi laughs)

nivi: ok darling now lets go! (they both laugh n karan drives away)

 

 

 

***

 

 

 

 

gautam was in viren's cabin talking about his latest deal he will sign tonight during a party thrown for this occasion.

 

viren: I think yeh party ek achi idea hai humare company ke image ke liye'

gautam: jee bhaiya and im sure yeh deal sab se best hoga'kyunki vaise bhi humara parter kafi young hai so im sure its goin to be great working with him

viren: voh tho hai'aur jahan tak maine suna hai he is one of the best businessman in Mumbai'so gautam  main chahta hoon ki iss deal mein koi bhi galati naa ho

gautam: don't worry bhaiya'aisa kuch bhi nahin hoga'aur maine bhi suna hai hai ki voh kafi successful hai'lekin maine yeh bhi suna hai ki voh bohut cool ladka hai'and that's why im sure I will enjoy working with Karan Oberoi''

 

 

 

 

 

***

 

 

nivi and Karan at restaurant:

 

nivi: NO WAY! Main kahin nahin jaa rahi karan! You know i just hate those parties!

Karan: haan I know'but I promise hum ziada der tak nahin rahenge

nivi: jooth mat bolo! Yeh party tumhare liye hai tho tum kaise jaldi chor kar jaa sakte ho'

Karan: c'mon yaar sunshine! ek shaam ki hi tho baat hai'tum itna bhi nahin kar sakti mere liye?

nivi: dude don't you remember last time kya hua tha aisi party mein'tum kisi aur ke saath bhi jaa sakte ho naa

Karan: jaa sakta hoon'par yeh deal mere liye bohut important hai aur main yeh pal apni family ke saath hona chahta hoon (trying to make his best innocent sad face ever) aur yahan tho sirf tum hi meri family ho'(nivi gets annoyed coz he knew how to convince her)

nivi: karan this is cheating yaar! Tum mujhe humesha yeh family ka topic laa kar blackmail karte ho! (karan smiles)

Karan: so you're coming??

nivi: haan!...but agar main vahan bore hui naa tho sab ke samne teri pitaayi karungi

Karan: koi baat nahin'main media vaalon ko bolunga ke you're a very violent wife

nivi: wife my foot! Jaa kar uss Rosa Mona ko apni wife bana lo

Karan: I rather die!

nivi: karan main jaa tho rahi hoon par mere pass kuch pehen ne ke liye nahin hai

Karan: well'(he looks at his watch) ek kam karte hain abhi sirf do baje hain aur party 7 baje shuru hone vaali hai tho tab tak hum mall chalte hain'

nivi: yeah that's a good idea

 

 

 

 

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nivi and Karan were trying to find a dress for nivi for the past two hours. Every dresses they could find in shops khanak disliked them'

 

Karan: nivi yaar maarwaogi kya? Poora maal ghooma lekin ek bhi dress pasand nahin aaya'teri shaadi nahin hai bas ek choti party hai deal sign karne ke liye

nivi: listen this is really not the right moment for your jokes ok! Ek tho mujhe apne saath aane pe majboor kar rahe ho aur upar se mujhe hi itna kuch suna rahe ho!

Karan: theek hai meri maa im sorry'par yahan kuch mil nahin raha kahin aur chalte hain

 

They leave the shop to check another one. On their way karan saw a shop in which he got interested.

 

Karan: sunshine main yahan ek shop pe jaata hoon do mins ke liye

nivi: theek hai main tab tak yahan dekhti hoon

 

Karan headed towards the shop he found while nivi walked towards the one where she noticed a dress she may like. chanchal and divya were coming from the other side and while walking a guy accidentally pushes chanchal who loses her balance and was about to fall when nivi catches her holding her hand.

 

nivi to the guy: are you bloody blind?!!!

The guy: sorry'im in hurry (he runs from there without lookin back)

nivi: bloody idiot! 

chanchal gets shocked to see niviShockedShockedShocked

divya: excuz me tum'nivi ho right?

nivi turns to divya and she also gets shockedShockedShockedShocked

divya: nivi tum aur yaha pe...she hugs her tightly and crysCryCry

nivi sees divya: yeh lijye samaan kuch logo ke pass aankhey hai lakin log uska istemaal nahi kartey..please excuse me...nivi goes..



 

 

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Karan was in a jewellery shop looking some necklaces. He wanted to buy something to nivi to thank her for going with him. He looked at bracelets rings but the most beautiful jewellery he found was that necklace. So he bought it and when he step out of the shop he bumped to a guy who was not looking where he was going.

 

karan: im sorry I was'(when he looks at the guy he founds viren) viren sood? (viren looks at karan and gets surprised)

viren: karan? Tum yahan kya kar rahe ho?

Karan: kuch nahin main kisi ke saath aaya tha'and I think she is goin to kill me (viren laughs)

viren: ohhh'tho ladki ka chakkar hai'(karan smiles)

Karan: haan ladki ka hai par voh meri'(his phones rings and it was nivi. He looks at viren) ek sec'(then he answered his phone) hello

nivi: where the hell are you??!!! Main yahan kab se tumhara wait kar rahi hoon!

Karan: haan baba main bas do mins mein aa raha hoon

nivi: Karannn!!!

Karan: fine'main dus sec mein aa raha hoon (nivi disconnects the phone and karan looks at viren) sorry dude par mujhe jaana hoga'shaam ko milte hain (then he rushes towards the shop. viren was amused looking at him then he looks at the shop where karan was)


 

 

 


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