ff-milan abhi adhura hai

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Posted: 13 years ago
hey frnds this is kajal, i am starting a new ff

FF: Milan abhi aadha adhura hai...

hope you will all like this ff, please give me your support and comments with your suggestions...its a request from me to all the fans of nivi-viren, sid-divya....

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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi Kajal
We love ffs.We would be only too happy to read one. Eagerly waiting to read urs.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi Kajal, as Vidya said, we love FFs, more the better. Eagerly waiting for your FF.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Part-1

Nivi comes to home with her luggage, dadi is worried about nivi and hemlata is happy.KS {nivi father} goes to dadaji and blame for everything what happend with nivi.. Viren is sad and sidharath console him..divya is also worried...vandana is sad...

nivi in her room sitting on bed thinking about her marriage and remembers all the sequences of marriages with viren.. she is in tears.. dadi come to nivi 

dadi: nivi kya baat hai beta, itna bada faisla achanak sey kaisey ley liya tumney...

nivi: dadi zindagi humey kai baar badey badey faisley leney pe majboor kar deta hai dadi.. mainey apna vaada pura kar diya dadi...us ghar mey sab khush hai, mera kaam khatam ho gaya hai...toh mey waha rukar kya karti....

dadi: mey janti hu meri bachi tu kis dard sey gujar rahi hai...lakin tu toh viren sey pyar karti hai na...phir...

nivi: ha dadi mey viren sey pyar karti hu bahut pyar karti hu lakin yeh jaruri toh nahi ki hum jisey pyar karey woh bi aapsey pyar karey..pyar mey koi sharat nahi rakhi jaati dadi, viren merey bina khush hai, toh mey bi unki khushi mey khush hu...

dadi hugs nivi and nivi cries a lot...viren is looking at nivi picture...sid comes to viren...

sid: viren mey janta hu ki tu bahut dukhi hai is waqt. lakin ab tumhey yeh sochna chahiye ki nivi ko wapas kaisey lekar aaya jaaye...

viren:bhaiya woh wapas nahi aayegi, mainey usey bahut dukh diye hai...itney dukh deney ke baad mey toh usey maafi ki umeed bi nahi kar sakta...

sid: par tum nivi sey pyar kartey ho...kya tum nahi chahtey ki woh wapas is ghar pe aa jaaye...

viren looks at sid and hugs him...

viren: ha bhaiya mey chahta hu ki woh wapas is ghar pe aa jaaye, mey usey woh saari khushi du jiski woh haqdhar hai....

sid smiles and says "hum sab tumarey sath hai...aur hum nivi ko wapas lekar aayengey.."

hemlata is talking to herself๐Ÿ˜•
ab yeh ek aur nayi musibat aa gayi is ghar mey, chalo acha hai divya ka rasta saaf ho gaya kyunki aisey toh woh ladhki kuch sun nahi rahi thi...ab mujhe bas ek hi kaam karna hai aur woh mey achey sey janti hu... {she smiles and nodes her head}..

chanchal, sushma ar sitting in a hall with dadaji and all are in thinking mode...

dadaji: humhey bahu  ko is ghar mey wapas lekar hi aana hoga, usney is ghar ki khushi ke liye bahut tayag kiya hai, ab humari baari hai hum kuch karey....

viren, sidharath also comes there and join them.

viren: nivi ko is gahr mey kaisey wapas lekar aaana hai yeh mey bahut achey sey janta hu.."

chanchal" lakin tum karney kya waaley  ho.."

viren smiles...




Edited by stary_kajal - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wonderful start Kajal, looking forward to see how Nivren story shape up. Please continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks gmann, i really appreciate your comment...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hieee Kajal!!! ๐Ÿค— This is Payal. Glad to make your acquaintance, dear!! OMG, I cannot thank you enough for starting this FF. You have no idea what a bunch of NivRen psychotics thrive here on this forum. ๐Ÿ˜† We are huge huge fan of FFs and are always very encouraging to whoever who writes them. Thanks, Kajal sweets for beginning this FF. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ I don't think we can thank you enough for doing this.

Loved your Part-1. It was a good introductory chapter. Now, anxiously waiting to read how your story unfolds and what does Viren have in mind for bringing Nivedita back into his life.

imkt thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks payal for the warm welcome and wishes..... ya i can understand hw nivi-viren fans are going through trauma....but dont worry...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi Kajal Im Sofna...n i 2nd wat Payal said..thmk u for strting this FF.....waiting for the nxt part...tc
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi Kajal. Welcome to the forum and thank u so much for thinking to write an FF for us.. The introductory chapter is quite exciting. Waiting to see what this witty Viren is upto now..

Really glad that ur FF Viren has not gone into a shell like the show Viren๐Ÿ˜‰