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one drink after another rolled down his throat...one for the good times, one for the bad times...one for his wife and one for ...the one that was gone...his heart was heavy though the ambience was colorful...he watched her from a far as she looked gone from the whole scene...he would give anything to see her smile again...but she won't let him in...and he can't seem to figure out how to unlock the door to where his old geet hides...he knows she is in there just crying for him to let her out...one more drink for his old geet...

the blood starts to boil inside him as he sees the rat that calls himself his brother approach the celebration with his so called dadi...another drink for the rat....and suddenly out of the corner of his eye he sees it..the one thing that would bring him back to life again...she smiled...a brilliant smile...but  it wasn't because of him...then who caused it?...was it the rat?...as the drinks started to take over his senses he makes an effort to walk toward her...to see that smile again but this time from up close...
 
if only his feet would ccoperate with him...suddenly all turns dark and the next thing he knew he wakes up on his bed with her sitting near him...apparently she was watching him sleep...just as she noticed that he was awake she made an attempt to get up...but his hand was to quick and his grip was too strong...and so she lost the advantage and was flipped over him to her side of the bed...and as his senses were still under the effects of the drink he was not holding back...
 
he heard his old geet calling him from deep inside her..."come to me"...he heard the tiny voice say...and so he got closer and closer...but the guardian of the voice fought his proximity...he would let her out no matter what it took...he heard the voice again and imagined it came from her guardians mouth...she pushed and she shoved...but he was already on top of her...making his way towards her mouth...to set his old geet free...
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SUPERB...EXCELLENT...AWESOME....AMAZING...U captured it all the torment of MAAN & his desire to c his old GEET again ...to bring her to life again....Loved it dear...Please do continue....Embarrassed

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oooh la la, that was brilliant babes, you've got to continue ClapStar
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i'm glad you liked it...i would love to see maan drunk and aggressive...Embarrassed
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one drink after another rolled down his throat...one for the good times, one for the bad times...one for his wife and one for ...the one that was gone...his heart was heavy though the ambience was colorful...he watched her from a far as she looked gone from the whole scene...he would give anything to see her smile again...but she won't let him in...and he can't seem to figure out how to unlock the door to where his old geet hides...he knows she is in there just crying for him to let her out...one more drink for his old geet...

the blood starts to boil inside him as he sees the rat that calls himself his brother approach the celebration with his so called dadi...another drink for the rat....and suddenly out of the corner of his eye he sees it..the one thing that would bring him back to life again...she smiled...a brilliant smile...but  it wasn't because of him...then who caused it?...was it the rat?...as the drinks started to take over his senses he makes an effort to walk toward her...to see that smile again but this time from up close...
 
if only his feet would ccoperate with him...suddenly all turns dark and the next thing he knew he wakes up on his bed with her sitting near him...apparently she was watching him sleep...just as she noticed that he was awake she made an attempt to get up...but his hand was to quick and his grip was too strong...and so she lost the advantage and was flipped over him to her side of the bed...and as his senses were still under the effects of the drink he was not holding back...
 
he heard his old geet calling him from deep inside her..."come to me"...he heard the tiny voice say...and so he got closer and closer...but the guardian of the voice fought his proximity...he would let her out no matter what it took...he heard the voice again and imagined it came from her guardians mouth...she pushed and she shoved...but he was already on top of her...making his way towards her mouth...to set his old geet free...
Wooooow!....ur really good...GF has so  many talented ppl...keep going

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SUPERB...EXCELLENT...AWESOME....AMAZING...U captured it all the torment of MAAN & his desire to c his old GEET again ...to bring her to life again....Loved it dear...Please do continue....Embarrassed[/QUOTE]
awww...i'm glad you like it...let me see what i can do...

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