Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee

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Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by: undisclosed


Marvellous ⭐️

Particularly the ending ☺️

thanks πŸ˜†...it was fun to write after you provided the inspiration...can't wait to read the next parts of your drunk maan take...πŸ‘πŸΌ [/QUOTE]

feel free to post any other ideas you might have πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†
you have talent for writing my lovely 😊

Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by: ninand

omg... u believe in slow-poisoning!!☺️ succinct and sweet... yet yearning and addictive... make the parts a bit longer hun, so your fan base can survive to read more🀣



I seem to have made a name for myself as a tease...
so i thought why not live up to it πŸ˜‰πŸ€£

Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by: swan20

@Undisclosed & Nadia.......fantastic parts....if only the writers of this show were as imaginative as you...😳😳


@Nadia.....Annie's timing is bad.....the useless girl only knows how to spoil the fun.....πŸ˜†....wanna know what MSK does next....☺️☺️.....update fast...πŸ˜›



Swan, come on girl, I'm sure you have some wicked ideas running through your head,
so post them πŸ˜†

Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by: muniza75

@ Nadia - Uff kya baat hai, pur yeh kalmuhi Annie ko bhi abhi aana tha😑...Chalo koi gal nahin.....Maan will not gonna leave her, and i wanna know how wild he would beπŸ˜‰.....



Muniza



Muniza, i can't believe you backed out of our deal 😲😑
jaldi jaldi post some of your ideas right now missy πŸ€“

Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by: -pixie-

Way to go Nadz and Undisclosed! Whatay lovely Holi....



Shradha oh Shradha πŸ˜† havn't spoken to you in ages....
now i know if there's one person with unholy holi ideas it's you 🀣
so please share your thoughts babes....
how would a intoxicated Maan romance Geet ???? πŸ€“

im eager to know, what's going on in that head of yours πŸ˜†
Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by: aditi123_78

i am not gud at FF....never tried my hand at it....but i am enjoying every bit here....thanx for the pm...



it's ok hun, just post some random sentences or express your ideas in bullet point form πŸ˜›
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Posted: 13 years ago
i just read undisclosed parts..!!!
it was sooo damn sexyyyyy!!!
loved loved loved it..!!
esp how man wanted his old geet back.. and
in the end how she cheekily put color on his cheeks and attempted to run away loooll... awesome !!
 
 
READING NADIA'S NOW :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nadzy: How about Maan wishing Geet happy Holi in the shower- early in the morning...before anyone else can wish them πŸ˜‰

Is that unholy enough for Holi??? I agree its been a loooong time! How have you been?
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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG nadia you have to continue you cant just give small updates and run away LOL
awesome, sexy and hott..!!
loved the way sexual tension was created through geet waiting and searching for maan
and annie's entry was hilarious LOL..
and loved loved how maan kept on staring at her while drinking..!! goosebumps times lol
dont forget your dialogue 'oh sweet babaji'
update sooooonnn :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
hahaha what if nakul sees them and drops a tray LMAO tht would be hilarious LOL