WILL YOU BE MY HERO OS DELETED - Page 4

wow....that was a simple story beautifully put......

lovely.....

just one word....AWESOME...👏

it was a different maan from ur type of maan i mean to say that usually he lusts after woman and here its diff its geet and usually maan is the one offering geet to maary and here its geet.............well its true wat u said...........love the oneshot..............

Awe loved the concept totally different from you ff's and awe geet fell in love with his modest and sincere behaviour where his self esteem matters and awe maan finally fell in love with geet and he became successful in the end and they both made their own world anyways great update and can't wait to read more 😊

nice shot.........................

vry nice os....:)
geet has got her love within a fortnight!!!