New *FF* upd:"LoVE-BaCK TO BAcK":Pt 6 pg8

Posted: 13 years ago
Hey guys,
every night i sleep i see a dream
a dream of roka
a story a full tooo story
so i thought of putting it up ad a fan fiction
till today i have tried :
vmz and siggies and avis
now its turn for an ff
From time to time i'll be making vmz and siggies for my ff too
so here are the character scetches:::
 
 
Shubhangi Atre
:She is a very beautiful 19 yr old girl who lives in Delhi but actually she is from Amritsar,Punjab.She is a punjabbi.She has cum to Delhi to becum an actor.She is very lively and enthusiastic.In delhi she lives in her cousin's house who is her brother.
 
Jatin :
He is shubhangi's brother .He is already married.And lives in delhi with his wife.
 
Karan Patel:
He is also an actor.He has worked in ekta's serials like Kahani'kyonki etc etc.
He is very hot. Full fleged and rocking bindass.And he is a Playboy...
(sorry girls...)
 
Edited by Iloveroka - 12 years ago
Posted: 13 years ago
                                                Till now u just tired VM's n Siggies...
                                                             WhIcH RoCkEd
 
                                         Now you are trying writing an FF....a RoKa FF..
 
                                     All The Very Best dear...i'm sure this FF is gonna ROCK!!!
      
             I'm for sure gonna be a regular follower of all the updates...n i'm eagerly waiting for d 1st part..
 
         The Characters seem interesting n i'm very elated to see Jatin as Shubhangi's bro..so atleast one "Kabab Mein Haddi" is less😆😆.....PUJA all the best...Keep rocking this Forum...love you..
                                                                                                                                     
                                                               
                                               
Posted: 13 years ago

congo on your first ff puja i am very happy you have started one i was missing roka so much love the character sketch glad to know ranauk is married do continue you will have me as your regular reader

Posted: 13 years ago

hey guys i'll write the first part after 4 days and sum  other characters are also there.i cum here 4 only 15 mins so i got less time.

1st update will b after 4 days
Posted: 13 years ago
will be waiting for d 1st part.... 
Posted: 13 years ago
hey wow....nic concept...
would love to read the first part...pls pls continue soon....
will be waiting for ur first part...update soon
Posted: 12 years ago
OKOKOK guys This is my first ff nd the first part so sorry for the spelling mistakes...and try to understand my language...


Place-  Mumbai
Time-9 Pm
Date-1st april...

A phone is ringing-Love will find a wayyy 
                                   Janiye Hiriyeee...Love will

"Hello"
"Hello Karan...?"
"Hello yes its me..."
"ok Karan its me Ekta here ..."
"Hello Maam"
"Karan...I m starting new show named KASTURI...
Its a lov story..It'll cum on star plus...
So wud u play the lead role of Robbie???"
"Sure Maam..."
"ok so tommorow u cum to sign the show ...
Opposite to ur role is a girl named Praneeta Sahu...
DAy after tommorow we'll start the shooting...So u'll be there naa..."
"Yeah Maam...I'll be there"
"Ok bye"
"Bye"

Again A ring On Ekta's cell---"Tune mere jaannnaa kabhi nhi jana ishq mera dard                                                                                   meraaa...Haye..."

"Hello ...What  ??????
Really ...Praneeta has refused to do the show???
Oh  my god...Ok so tommorow we'll have the auditions For the lead role again..."

 
The next day at the auditiorium::::::::::::::::
Ekta nd her colleagues were vry tensed cause the auditions had finished and
they had nt finalized the Lead actress...Then suddenly they heard

"Ohe Hoye Main andar kyon nhi jaa sakti hoon???
Tum hote kaun ho mughe rokne wale...
Main yahan pe Kasturi serial ke lead role ka interview dene ayi hoon...
Dekho mughe andar jaane do..."

"Dekhiye Madam Saare auditions ho chuke hain..ap andar nhi jaa sakti hain..."

Ekta came out of the hall nd saw Shubhangi...
She was wearing a red colour patiala suit...and was luking like a typical Punjabbi girl...

"Ramdayal...use andar ane do..."

Shubhangi stepped in.

.."Hello Maam...I m a biggg fan of ur shows..
I watch all of them...Main Chandigarh se ayi hoon..."

"Bas bas bas STOP...Tum yahanauditions dene ayi ho?

"Yes Maam.."

"YOU're SELECTED!!!"

"WHattt Really???OMG OMG OMG 
Haye main mar jawan Gud khaake..."

"Nahi itni jaldi nhi mar jana...
Kal at 10am Shooting ke liye pahunch Jaana
I'll also be there So dnt b late...Ok"

"OK MaaM"
Ekta Leaves
ANd Shubhangi...Goes crazy Jumping nd dancing in front of everyone forgetting eveything...

At night Shubhangi And Her Sis(- Tannu) 
"WOW Di I m soo excited for u ...Tum tv par aogi...Amazinggg"
"Haan Tannu ...Main Khud Kitni excited hoon...Pata nhi mere opposite kaun hoga yaarrr
jst hope ki bada handsum ho..."
"Fingers crossed...Kal main bhi apke saath chalun??Pleaseee
Please please please maine kabhi shooting nhi dekhi hai""
Ok yaar...Tu bhi chalna...Aj mera sapna pura hua hai...maggi nhi khilaogi???
Ok main abhi banake lati hoon,...







 
Posted: 12 years ago
Sorry Guys This part Is vry boring I knw that btt I m really vry sorry...I'll update the next part tomorrow itself
Posted: 12 years ago
ayee hayee😉..
mast hai yaar..
d concept is so fresh n so nice⭐️..it's awesome dear..really...main toh shubhangi pe marr gayi yaar..kya character hai...
"main marr javan gudh kha ke"😆😆
very nice yaar..awesome,fantastic,fabulous...
plz next update jaldi okk..
 d 1st part was so interesting yaar that i can't wait any longer for d next😳...
KP ka toh zyada pata nahin chala😕..but shubhangi's character is too gud..loved her happy go lucky nature😉...
mind-blowinggg.. 
Edited by RoKafan4eva - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
Puja...its too gud part yaar...u put deir real name on dem...wat an idea yaar...?.i thnk u r writng deir lyf story thru ur ff.cary on...am waitn 4 nxt part.jaldi kar...i cant wait 2 c hw wil deir 1st meetng..kahi karan ko b thapad tho nahi padega na lol...

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