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Short FF Destiny EPILOGUE page 15 (Page 7)

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If u promise to update today then i will edit my comments right now.Tongue

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Khushi i have no plans of extending this FF......hope u like the last chapter which will be updated tomorrow inshallah.....Smile.....and i already have another story running in my mind....so i will come up with it later after i am free from my exams....Embarrassed

Sachi only last chapter................  oh dear m waiting for it..........................
plz  post it soon na...........................  
Ok so one more story...............will wait  for it..............................
Do well in ur exams Thumbs Up...........................

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Ok as many of u were forcing me to update my last chapter..i am doing it....and it was started by Sophia.....someone even promised me that she will post a part of her FF if i do it and someone even promised me that she will edit her comment......so guys better keep ur promises....LOL
I am afraid as i may not live upto ur expectations....Embarrassed

Chapter 3


Nakku was lying on her bed thinking about Dutta's words...his questions.....his behaviour..."Why did he behave like that....why did I see that old Dutta...the possessiveness in his voice...the anger in his eyes'..'it was you who asked me to pursue my ambition....it was you who asked me to move on with my life..it was you and only you Dutta" a tear rolled down from the corner of her eye...

She cried to sleep.....he was asleep too...after he removed his frustration for hours....


Next morning Nakku bid a goodbye to Abhay as he had to leave for his work...he would return after 2-3 days...After he left she got ready and left to Dutta's house where she had to carry her work...

To her surprise he behaved normally....'Hi....i hope your fine now....?' she asked him...not showing her concern....'Yeah I am fine....how are you? And How is your fianc?' he chose not to take his name...' 'Abhay...his name is Abhay...and he is fine...he is out of town for a couple of days..'

'Oh I am sorry...couldn't recall his name....' he said not showing his annoyance...

'That's ok....i know it takes time for you to get used to the names....' she said sarcastically..

She started working on the interiors of his house....he didn't had work as it was Sunday...he lingered around her...'You work even on Sundays?' ..he asked making a stupid face.'Not always...but if I have no plans then I choose to work...to make myself busy...' she smiled

'Aha...plans? Like what?'

She moved her head sideways ' Dutta...my plans are as boring as me....i plan to sleep....or have a coffee while reading a book..But today I didn't feel like sleeping or reading a book....so I thought of finishing this work before 30 days...' she joked...

'Hmm..so that u can get rid of me...soon..? Nice!'...he laughed...'I'll get some coffee' he got up to go to the kitchen...

Nakku looked at him....'I never wanted to get rid of you...But it were you who got rid of me..' she thought to herself...she got back to her work....She tried to take the stationery from the desk when she dropped the stuff on the desk....Dutta's wallet also fell open....her eyes fell on the pic....of his and Neha....together....she took it in her hands...She smiled at the pic...she was about to put it down when she saw another pic hidden under it....she looked at the kitchen door to see if Dutta was watching....he was busy with his coffee....she slowly took that pic out and her jaw dropped when she saw that pic...It was hers and Dutta's...hugging each other looking at the camera...smiling heartily...

She was shocked..."Why did he keep this pic...he still had their pics...?'

She soon slipped the pic in the wallet as it was when she heard Dutta's footsteps....She wiped her tears....and made herself busy with the work....

'Coffee'...he placed the mug in front of her....she looked at him..she was confused as she had one question in her mind....'what was that pic doing in his wallet?'

'Hello??..where are you lost?' Nakku was brought back from her trance.."Nothing...i was just thinking about the interiors....' Dutta sat on the couch....and started talking....Nakku was feeling uncomfortable as that pic of theirs was running in front of her eyes....'I need to go to the wash room' she stood up.... Dutta looked at her....he got up...'yeah....that way' he pointed towards the wash room....Nakku walked in and closed the door...she opened the tap...splashing water on her face..she sighed 'Why? Why does he still makes me go weak in my knees...? Why does my heart still races when he comes close to me....? Why does he still have the same effect on me like he had before? WHY? Why do I feel attracted to him.?' she held her head in frustration...She thought of Abhay ' No...i can't be doing this....I am engaged to Abhay...and he is my future. Yeah I have moved on..I have moved on with Abhay....and now Dutta is only my friend...nothing else' she convinced herself....

She came out and got back to her work... Dutta was lost in her beauty....the hair strand which was troubling her.....he wanted to push it back of her ear but he couldn't gather the courage.....Nakku ignored him and his talks....she made him feel that she is busy....soon the sun had drowned making way for the moon to shine....the lights falling from the huge buildings made the sea golden...

It was late...they both didn't realize the time....It was only after Nakku finished her work that she realized how late it was.... she got up in a hurry "Its late...i need to go...' Dutta woke up as he fell asleep an hour back...he looked at Nakku..."Yeah..its late...i will drop you' he stood...

'No..its ok...i will go by myself' she said hesitantly...'I have got my car...i can go...You dont' need to worry...' She looked at him and soon looked away avoiding any eye contacts...He came close to her....'Still I can escort you till your car..' he opened the door for her....she walked slowly... he locked the door behind her...they both got into the lift..she stood at a distance with her hands folded....Suddenly the lift stopped...They both looked around....He looked at Nakku who was scared..he held her hand tightly..."Don't worry......it will get fixed soon' The lights went off as well...

She ran up to him..and hugged him tight...clenching his shirt, Dutta tried to calm her 'Don't worry am here...with you...someone will fix it soon don't worry'

'I am scared...' she said in a trembling voice..He felt as if someone punched him in his heart...he couldn't see her scared....or sad....

'You are still scared of darkness' he said in a lighter tone....trying to divert her attention...'remember once we got stuck in the lift like this...you hung on to me for 30 minutes...wetting my shirt...and then after the lift got working you went straight up to the security guard and scolded him...he was scared of you after that day....' she chuckled....'You still remember?'...she asked in an innocent voice... 'yes I do...' she remained silent for a few seconds 'You still have that pic of us in your wallet?' she asked still hugging him...Dutta was shocked to know that she saw that pic...'Yes...i do" he could only say that at the moment..'why?' she asked like a kid...'Because.....' he paused...she broke the hug and looked at him...there was little light which was coming from the ventilator which was enough for them to see each other...He looked into her eyes...moved the strand of hair from her face which was blocking his sight...he palmed her face 'Because...i still love you...' Nakku felt as if her heart was racing she rested her head on his chest softly while his chin rested on her head...' she closed her eyes...

The lift started working and the lights were on....the lift stopped on the ground floor....she opened her eyes...she pushed him back....as she came back to reality....she covered her mouth with her hand....and ran away from there...'Nakku...? Nakku...wait....listen to me..stop" he ran back of her...She opened the car's door....'Stop' he shouted....she stopped...and looked at him...

'Wait...i said I love you...i still love you...and I know you love me too'

She banged the door making a loud noise....' Why are you doing this to me...? Why do you still have the same effect on me? Why do you still make me feel your essence...? Why can't I control my feelings when you are around? Why?' She asked demandingly "Because you still love me' he said calmly...She knew he was right but she didn't wanted to give in....because the thought of Abhay pulled her back....'It were you who asked me to move on.....It were you who asked me to think practically...It were you who asked me to choose ambition over love...it were you who decided to get rid of me...it were you and only you Dutta. I waited for you to come back but you never came back....i took your advice seriously and moved on....i moved on with Abhay....he loves me' she said sternly...'But do you love him?' he asked her looking straight into her eyes, he knew the answer... 'That's none of your business' she screamed...'i am engaged to him and this is enough information for you..You have no right to ask me anything...' she sat in the car and drove away....while he stood there until the car blurred in front of his eyes...He turned only to see Neha standing there with tears in her eyes...it seemed she had listened the whole conversation....Dutta looked at her...and then walked in to his flat...

He opened the door..went in to his room dropped on his bed...he wanted to cry out loud....wanted to hit himself for letting her go....he felt a hand on his....he knew it was Neha...he moved his hand...entwined fingers of both his hand...'I am sorry....but I love her...i only love her, i tried moving on but I couldn't.' he didn't look at her...."You know what Dutta.....whenever you told me U love me, i knew you didn't mean it..you didn't say it genuinely....and I hoped that one day you would say I love you and that would be straight from your heart...Today is the day....though its not for me but for Nakusha....you truly love her.....its written all over your face...and I can only see her face in your eyes...I was never made for you...Nakusha is made for you....only she is made for you...' she said...pushing her tears back...'I hope she realises that she still loves you and comes back to you...'

He looked at her...."you are a nice girl Neha...i wish you all the best in your life' he hugged her....She hugged him back...closing her eyes...letting the tears off her eyes...she broke the hug....'you take some rest...' I'll go...' she went away closing the door slowly behind her....she stood there crying....but she still prayed for his happiness....


Nakku came home....wiping her tears...she closed the door and rested her head on to the door....

She felt a hand on her shoulder...she shrieked....'hey...where have you been?' It was Abhay...he was back...so soon she thought ' You are back...so soon?' she asked 'Hmm yeah..i finished my work soon so came back early... But what happened to you...seems like you cried.?' she just shrugged 'no I wasn't crying.....my eyes are hurting as I have been working since morning...she dropped herself on the couch....' You went to Dutta's house..you college mates must have had fun remembering those old days of college huh?'

'Lets not talk about it now Abhay..i am tired" she sighed looking sideways...

Did u guys had a fight' he asked worriedly....'Are we kids to pick up a fight with each other' she asked irritatingly...

She walked up to the window...looked outside, feeling the cold breeze..she was having a flashback of Dutta picking her in his arms and twirling her while the cool breeze hit their faces... Just then she felt Abhay's hands on her waist...she smiled 'stop it Dutta' she looked back...she was shocked to take Dutta's name when it was Abhay... she moved back...'Abhay...i am sorry, i am so sorry..i was thinking of Dutta'

'You love him don't you?' he asked calmly...she was quiet...'You love him Nakusha...i can see that...its plainly written in your eyes' he said smiling faintly....she looked down...'Yes ' I love ' I love him -' she stammered...she closed her eyes and let it go in one sentence ' I love Dutta' she looked at Abhay.....'He loves you too?' he asked looking straight into her eyes.. 'yes he does' she said hesitantly 'Then what are you doing here.....go tell him that you love him...go before its too late...' Nakku couldn't believe Abhay just let her go....she ran only to be stopped by him...."Nakku....' she turned "You can throw away the ring...i don't want anything from your past to stop you when you enter into your future.'

Nakku came forward and hugged him 'Abhay...you are a darling...you will definitely find someone better than me...' she nodded her head...removed the ring and placed it on the table beside...she went away....'there is no one better than you Nakku...Nakusha' he said to himself....he took the ring and looked at it...releasing a big sigh....

Nakku sat in her car.....she came to his house only to find it empty..she asked the guard, he told her that Dutta had gone out....he didn't say anything but he was looking worried....Nakku sat in the car hurriedly.....she called Neha to ask her whether she knew where he was...but she didn't knew too...

She was crossing by the bridge when she stopped the car.....drove backwards....she saw a man walking away....she looked at him closely...it was him...yes it was him..she came out of the car...

"Dutta....Dutta stop....' she cried.....He stopped as he could hear someone call his name....he turned to look from where the voice came...it was her...she was running towards him wiping away her tears....'what is she doing here...? why was she crying? Did something happen?' these questions were running in his mind when she stood in front of him....Looking straight into his eyes..she was breathing hard...'I promise I will never ever leave you alone...I promise I will always be by your side even in the worst situations....i promise I will always Love you till my last breath' Dutta felt the words echo in his ears which she said to him...when he proposed her 6 years back when they were in college, these were the same words which she said..when he first time expressed his feelings to her and today after so many years she echoed the same words...he thought that some things never really change.'i Love You and only You' she said smiling like a kid. He felt as if has got his life back..he hugged her tightly...he lifted her up holding her by her waist while she held onto his neck..he turned her around....he placed her down carefully...he kissed her on her forehead softly...placing his forehead on hers....smiling at each other while the tears simply rolled down...Their friends were right...they both were indeed made for each other....and It was a pair made in heaven....


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          One meets his destiny often in the road he takes to avoid it.

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This is it! Its a simple love story with simply romance and simple emotions....I hope I have lived upto ur expectations...

Thank u everyone who have liked my short story and who even were kind enough to write few words of appreciation...This means a lot to me...Thank u everyone....Embarrassed

                                                  

Please read it and press the 'like' button...and leave ur comments...Embarrassed

I am unable to send the pm's as my net is playing a spoil sport..........I ahve sent few Pm's.....sorry those who couldn't receive my pm....Ouch

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Edited by Bushy_92 - 20 March 2011 at 9:29am

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Yeeepppiiiiiiiii  me first again Dancing Dancing ...........................
Thank you sooooooooooo  much Bushy u updated it now Hug

wow Bushy Its simply awesome............................ So touching, emotional & beautifully written........................ 
awwwww He has their pic in his wallet.......................... Thank GOD nakku saw it................
he confessed he Loves her..................  Nakku loves him too....................
but cant confess it..................  she dunno want to cheat Abhay.............................
Neha & Abhay r tooooooo  good............................  they r angels who understads that  only TaSha  r made for each -other..............................  End was super awesome...........................  the lines by Nakku  that Dutta said her 6 yrs back were
 soooooooooo  touching ................................. 
Cry *khushi ke ansoo* LOL ............................. 
Short but beautifull FF Bushy...................................



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Reserved..
 
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Chali Aaye Chali Aaye Chali Aaye.. Ayi Ayi Ayi Main Chali AayeLOL
Hmmm tit for tat eyyy.. U got me back for reserving a place on yours... LOL
See now.. I will only update when you *unreserve* ur spotWinkLOL *Laughs Evilly*LOL
Ok.. To the update... Right from the top.. no not the top but the top top! Like before the update..!! Ahh See now everyone should thank me for making u update earlyLOL
Now to the real update aka Chapter number 1..2...3 yh i mean 3LOL..
 
Awwww She saw a her old Dutta Ouch.. his possesiveness for her and his love.. awww he was jealousLOL But everything is fair in love and warWink Ejjaacttllyyy... He was the one who literally pushed her out of his life.. stoooopid boi i tell you phewLOL.. Love is greater than anything else! So he should have chosen her over his career.. things like that come and go.. true love comes only onceEmbarrassed *Sophie's goes in Ali/Baaji dreamland*LOL Ok maybe sometimes love can come twiceLOL ok i should stop chatting rubbishLOL..
Yaay Abhay going... Is he gonna have an accident? To know more, read ahead sophieLOL... I hope when she bid him goodbye, she didnt kiss himLOL.. Awww Dutta acting normalOuch... I know he's really hurt and trying to supress all his feelings initCry.. How can someone stay like that infront of someone they love and not break downCry... *Sophie controls her tears*LOL.. HA he didnt remember Abhay's name.. Well i cnt blame him, i dnt remember that guy's name as wellLOL.. I thought it was Aadhi den Aabhi and then it was Abhay... LOL
OMG... OMG...ShockedShocked All these years he kept a picture of her?Shocked Well there a similar track like this in Ehsaas.. but nuffin to do with wallet.. Ahh u sneaked into my head didnt you?WinkLOL ... Im jokin.. my bit is different but has something to do with picturesEmbarrassed.. Anyway.. that was very sweet of him to keep a pic of them hugging.. he loves her.. he loves herEmbarrassed..
Awwww he still makes her go weak.. that like my nakku in my story...i so understand her ryt nowCry she loves him tooooooEmbarrassed
Awww D cant control himself.. aw aw aw aw.. but bby u gtta control.. Ouch..YAY lift stopped.. wooohooo lol normally thats a bad thing.. but hey .. they are together and thats great..hum tum ek lift mein bandh ho aur lift stop hojayeLOL Okay that was weirdLOL...Huggie shuggie *Sophie whistles* Oiii Hoiii... main marjawaaaaaaaan..!! Shocked She asked him??? About the pic??? HailaaaaShocked Awww he confessed.. he still loves her.. Cry < Khushi ki aansooCry.. Haww... humein tumse pyar kitna.. yeh hum nahin jaante.. magar jee nahin sakte.. tumhare binaaaaLOL..lol.. excuse my bad singing..LOL.. She hugged him when he said it?Embarrassed HailaaaaaaaaaaBig smile.. Yahh she has a point.. but he was stupid back then.. he didnt have a brain.. oops he still doesnt have one but still.. jaane do na yaar.. pyar karta hai tumseTongue.. Well she cant say she loves Aa..watever his name is .. cause her heart beats for DSP! Wink.. Aww Neha.. bby .. sweetheart.. you go console whats his name.. because he will need someone soonEmbarrassed..  Neha is nice.. i like herTongue very sweet girl.. yes .. Dutta loves Nakku.. she got the message.. Wohoo *Sophie opens champaigne*LOL... HailaaShocked Whats his name is back? Already? I thought he was going for some days..weeks..months and will have an accident?LOL Sorry... Embarrassed.. Aww Nakku said Dutta when that guy hugged herShocked.. Zor ka jhatka hai zoro se laga haan laga LOL bechara Nakku ka x-fiance lolLOL Well.. Yes he is ryt as well.. she still loves Dutta.. she sud go get himEmbarrassed.. GO GRAB HIM!!!!!TongueLOL..  What the hell is Dutta doing on a bridge?Shocked Suicide????? HailaaaaaaLOL... But Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww the ending was the besttttt!!!!! *jumps with excitement* Omgg.. She told him she told him .. she loves him.. wooo.. They finally got each otherrrr.. *drinks champaigne*LOL I opened my champaigne earlier but was waiting for the end to drink itWinkLOL..
 
 One meets his destiny often in the road he takes to avoid it.
Woooooow .. That is one beautiful quote!! So trueeee.. Goes very well with this FF!.. Ohhh and at the end she met him on the roadLOL LOL.. ok i sud shut upLOL
See see see.. I wrote some loooong comment... Phew..!! I'm so tired now!! *Vents self* .. Now u hop into my Ehsaas thread... Edit ur reserved spot and write a long comment to make me happyLOL..
Okk.. Bye bye.. Ohh before i go... How bout you write an epilogue for this? Like 5 years later? Tongue LOL.. Ok im giving u more work to do lol.. just edit ur spot first Big smile...
Ohh before i forget.. This short FF was... Beautifully written.. with a great story and I loved it!!! Embarrassed... Ok bye bye againTongue


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U guys better edit ur comments soon as i dont like seeing those reserved spots....OuchLOL

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Yay Happy endingsDay Dreaming
aww how sweet of Neha and Abhay ...and soo smart to realize reality soo quickly LOL
and loved the pic in wallet and the lift scene ...it was all soo cute ...
I loved how it ended too...the bridge Embarrassed such a simple beautiful  love story ...
well written...kinda sad it was short thou ... but short and sweet right Big smile
Great FF :-)

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Originally posted by Bushy_92

U guys better edit ur comments soon as i dont like seeing those reserved spots....OuchLOL

I edited mine ........................
see i only reserve when i knw m gonna be the first one LOL
coz u guys hardly give me the chance to be first , specially U, Sophie and Naina LOL

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