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Short FF Destiny EPILOGUE page 15 (Page 15)

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Posted: 22 March 2011 at 10:30am | IP Logged
It is just amazing written darling....sorry for being late...i just loved the end....so apna dusra FF bhi upload kardo....**hugs*

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Posted: 22 March 2011 at 10:32am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Naina_Mishal

It is just amazing written darling....sorry for being late...i just loved the end....so apna dusra FF bhi upload kardo....**hugs*
Thanks Naina....Hug...thank u so much.....and i will update my other FF after my exams..have to work on it a lil so it will take time.....hope u understand......Embarrassed

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Posted: 24 March 2011 at 6:59am | IP Logged

Ok as many of my reader's wanted me to write an epilogue and give this story a good ending..i thought of giving it a try....i think its a rushed one...i am sorry if anyone doesn't like it....Embarrassed

Epilogue:

It had been three years since Dutta and Nakku got married....after their one year of blissful marriage...Nakku gave birth to handsome baby boy...an exact copy of Dutta barring the green eyes...which belonged to Nakku...

After their marriage Nakku still continued to work as an interior decorator....as Dutta wanted her to continue with her job...they lived peacefully and happily in their new house which was beautifully decorated by Nakku...Dutta had to bear the tantrums of Nakku when she was pregnant with their first child....it was tough but it was pleasant journey for both of them altogether....because when they held their baby in their arms for the first time they forgot all the problems...the pain...they had to go through for nine whole months....After the birth of their child Nakku gave up her job as she only wanted to be around her son and her husband...

Nakku sat on the carpet spread on the green grass.....while Dutta relaxed beside her....they were in Mauritius for their vacation....Their son was playing around...and Nakku was busy with her work..she was arranging the food items she bought for themselves...when she was disturbed by a whistling sound....she looked at Dutta thinking he must have whistled...'Why are you whistling?' she asked suspiciously...'Who me? Whistling? I wasn't whistling..' he said in a defensive tone...'I heard someone whistling...' she said looking around...'And?...you asking me?'...he said sitting up...when their son came forward...'It was me who whistled...not Dad' he said innocently...Tasha looked at Dhruv...their son....' Dhruv? Where did u learn whistling?'..asked his mother with a surprised look...'Err Dad taught me' he said smiling...making Dutta startle...' I taught you? When?' he asked not looking at Nakku, 'Dutta you taught Dhruv how to whistle?' Nakku asked with anger in her voice...making Dutta all sweaty...'No, I didn't. I swear'..he had that kiddish look when he said that..'Mom, Dad didn't teach me...actually I saw Dad whistling at a lady and I copied Dad' he said smirking...'You were whistling at a lady?'...she turned red, her tone rising high..'I swear I didn't....i was just whistling at myself...' looking at his little monster...'Dhruv....tell mama that I wasn't whistling at a lady' he said pouting...'ok Dad'...he turned to look at Nakku..'Mom....I was lying....Dad didn't whistle at anyone...he loves you and only you...promish'...he said holding his throat and twinkling his eye lashes .'Aww my baby...come here...i know your Dad loves me...i was just pulling his leg...' she winked at her little son...and hugged him..Dutta looked at the duo..'I feel left out...' he pouted...and opened his arms..Nakku and Dhruv smiled and hugged him..Nakku rested her head on his chest while Dhruv wrapped his tiny arms around his father's well built shoulders...Dutta smiled and planted a kiss on his lovely wife's forehead and he kissed his little monster's cheek and whispered in his ears "Badmaash, one day I will land in a big trouble because of your badmashis' he patted his back...smiling heartily....


I don't like this epilogue.Ouch..i think it is rushed.Ermm...i wrote it in a hurry...But would love to read your views on this one...Embarrassed

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Edited by Bushy_92 - 24 March 2011 at 7:49am

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Posted: 24 March 2011 at 7:05am | IP Logged
so quite.......................

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Posted: 24 March 2011 at 7:08am | IP Logged
thanks for the sweet ending.....

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Posted: 24 March 2011 at 7:08am | IP Logged
Oye chulbul Padhai nahi karni...AngryLOL
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Edit:
Oye chulbul Padhai nahi karni...AngryLOL
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Oye...Bacche-kacche bhi aa gayeShocked...LTL walo ko batao koi ke aise kaam karte hai, rumours phailane se Football team nahi bantiTongueLOL
But very sweet sweet epilogue...
Oye...group hugging ho raha tha Bushy, hume kisi ne invitation bhi nahi diyaOuchLOL
and why dont you like the epilogue Chulbul, tujhe maar khani hai ya phir goliyaan khake tera pet bhar gayaTongueLOL
Fantoo epilogue hai re...The end to fab tha hi but the end ka the end bhi mast tha re...
ye le Hug aur ab padhai karne lag...paper mein Tasha and PS ki kahani mat likhnaTongue




Edited by -Srushti- - 24 March 2011 at 7:26am

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Posted: 24 March 2011 at 7:10am | IP Logged
Jumps excitedly **Me First**Wink
This special jadoo ki jappi HugHugHug only for bringing some fresh air & positivity today on our forum which apparently is looking so gloomyOuch
I thought of asking u for epilouge,but then u have ur exams naa, still u managed to write it only for us,thanks dearSmile
The epilouge is as sweet & beautiful as ur story & the couple -TASHA.
I liked the name Dhruv-which means a star.
How naughty he is,like father like sonWink
BTW ,if not in LTL,thanks to all u wonderful FF writers,
ab tak Dutta ki football team ban gayi hogi naaROFL
 
Thanks once again & all the best for ur exams.
PoojaSmile
 

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Posted: 24 March 2011 at 7:10am | IP Logged
awww bushy the epilog is really good...they've got a baby boy...awwww.....so cute na......! tahnks for this beautiful FF

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