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Short FF Destiny EPILOGUE page 15 (Page 12)

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Posted: 21 March 2011 at 2:03am | IP Logged
 Hi, it is a beautifully written story.Smile 

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Posted: 21 March 2011 at 2:11am | IP Logged
Originally posted by prncz

hey bushy that was lovely ending ,,, you partingline was a take awa y man,,,, hey can u continue an epilogue .... hw dutta take care of her durng her pregnancy and till the baby is born... plpl
Thank u so much....Embarrassed....i am not sure about an epilogue but i would be coming with another short story....Embarrassed.hopefully it should be a bit longer than this one....LOL...hope u wud like that one as well...Embarrassed

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Posted: 21 March 2011 at 2:13am | IP Logged
Originally posted by --khushi--

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Edited :-

Yeeepppiiiiiiiii  me first again Dancing Dancing ...........................congo.....LOL
Thank you sooooooooooo  much Bushy u updated it now Hug aww only for u guys i updated it soon....Hug

wow Bushy Its simply awesome............................ So touching, emotional & beautifully written........................ thank u so much Khushi.........Embarrassed
awwwww He has their pic in his wallet.......................... Thank GOD nakku saw it................
he confessed he Loves her..................  Nakku loves him too....................
but cant confess it..................  she dunno want to cheat Abhay.............................
Neha & Abhay r tooooooo  good............................  they r angels who understads that  only TaSha  r made for each -other..............ya they were too good...................  End was super awesome...........................  the lines by Nakku  that Dutta said her 6 yrs back were
 soooooooooo  touching ................................. thanx....Embarrassed
Cry *khushi ke ansoo* LOL ............................. y aansoon? Shocked
Short but beautifull FF Bushy................................... Thanx again....Embarrassed

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Posted: 21 March 2011 at 2:14am | IP Logged
Originally posted by dg0628

Yay Happy endingsDay Dreaming
aww how sweet of Neha and Abhay ...and soo smart to realize reality soo quickly LOL
and loved the pic in wallet and the lift scene ...it was all soo cute ...
thanx for liking it.....Embarrassed
I loved how it ended too...the bridge Embarrassed such a simple beautiful  love story ... aww thank u......
well written...kinda sad it was short thou ... but short and sweet right Big smile ya something should be left the way they are....so i ended it...Smile
Great FF :-)  Thanx u so much....Big smile

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Posted: 21 March 2011 at 2:16am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Yuvika_15

nice story.thanx Yuvi..... i suppose cos it was short, u showed both neha n abhay letting go of their respective lovers so easily.ya i made it easier.. altho i wud hav expected abhay 2 b a lil upset.i told u abahy loved Nakku genuinely and he wanted her to be happy....so eh was not upset...LOL.. bt wt i liked was hw he end up sayin nakusha n nt naku jus like dutta did...ya i wanted him to say nakusha as only D cud say Nakku....Embarrassed
 
i liked the end phrase..."one meets his destiny often in the road he takes 2 avoid it..." so tru... thanx....Big smile
 
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Posted: 21 March 2011 at 2:17am | IP Logged
Originally posted by kiran255

OH Bushy !
ITs such a beautiful Love story ! Thanx kiran.....
Definitely they were each other destiny ! Ya they were each other's destiny....Embarrassed
Its beautoful how they both have effect on each other !
Love that Neha and Abhay let go of them ! 
cuz if they wont they know non of can live happily ! Exactly......no one cud have lived happily.....

very sweet FF ! aww thank u.
its gives a big lesson thing thrice before letting ur loved ones go ! 
Congo bushy u have just done with ur short FF ! Thanx again....Embarrassed
btw kab aye ge dosray FF ki bare :P That will be after my exams.....LOL
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Posted: 21 March 2011 at 2:18am | IP Logged
Originally posted by neverforget

hey bushy

awesome short love story thank u so much dear... 

love it from core of heart aww this means a lot to me....Embarrassed

what a good person both neha and abhay 
beautiful story  thanx again....

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Posted: 21 March 2011 at 2:20am | IP Logged
 
Originally posted by Lekz

Hey Bushy ...thanks for the PM.  Hug Ur welcome Lekz Hug(sorry i dunno ur name Embarrassed
 
Loved the short ff - that was just awesome....Destiny indeed....Aww thank u...... 
 
It was simple, emotional and very well written.ClapClapClap
 
Was reminded of a saying 'If you love some one set it free, its yours if it comes back to you, else it was never meant to be'. Ya tht is so true....Embarrassed
 
So true and fits your story so well... 
 
TaSha TaSha what they do to us...They make us go insane.....LOL
 
Keep writing, I keep looking forrward to read ffs and Os over the weekends...Aww will surely come up with more short stories....Embarrassed
 

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