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new ff~U N ME TOGETHER..part 17..pg 35 (Page 26)

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Posted: 09 June 2011 at 1:06pm | IP Logged
can u make ur update
longer
der reli short

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Posted: 10 June 2011 at 9:51am | IP Logged
plz update

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Posted: 16 June 2011 at 1:17pm | IP Logged
waitinggg...

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Posted: 20 June 2011 at 1:14am | IP Logged
part~~14


after sometime maan comes out from the washroom and found geet is still sitting in the same position and lost in her thoughts...maam waits for sometimes...then goes near her and shook her gently...


it brings geet out from her thoughts...she looks at maan questioningly...

maan-why r u still sitting here?i told you na its pretty late...so u should take rest now...then?

geet-jee...jee wo...mein...


maan-(got a bit annoyed...)tume ye jee or wo mein k alawa bhi or kuch bolna ata ha??

geet-jee...nhi...mera mtlb...kuch nhi...me washroom jau chnge krne?(and she bit her lips quickly...)nhi...wo...

maan-what???what 'nhi wo' fir se
..?tume washroom jane k lie bhi meri permission chaiye kya??if u wanna go then jst go...and plese now let me have some rest...uff...u r jst impossible...


saying this maan grab the pillow roughly from the bed and went to the couch...

geet's self thought..."inhe ab kya ho gya?ye gussa kiyu ho gye?geet...teri wajah se hi ho gye or kya...tuje kya zarurat thi ye sab bolne ki...par babaji me aur kya krti...wo tab to me soch rhi thi k thodi der pehle hmare bich me jo hua uske bare me...wo sab achanak ho gya...to me ghabra gyi thi na...isilie...

but geet ab ye sab sochna chhod...subah soch lena...warna tera dimag or khrab ho jayega or ye or bhi gussa ho jayenge..."...


geet went to the washroom and after coming back she slept to the bed...

but she was not feeling sleepy...she turns the side and saw maan was sleeping deeply in the couch...jst lik a innocent kid...

geet kept looking at him...and thought..."yeh bure nhi h...ha thode gusse me zarur rehte h...pr unhone mujpr apna hak jatane ki kosish bhi nhi ki...muje kisi bat k lie force nhi kia...yaha tak k mere lie itna bada bed chhod kar khud us couch pr so rhe h...babaji...halp kijiyega meri..taki me inhe khush rakh sakoon,,,,,''

after sometimes she slept...




in the morning...

geet slowly open her eyes as the morning rays of sun wr touching her face...it took some times to her to realise her situation...then suddenly maan's thought comes to her mind...she looks at the couch but...no one was there...she felt a bit bad...as she wanted to see his face first in the morning...but...leaving her thought she went to washroom for a bath...


after geeting ready...when she come back to their room...still there was no sign of maan...so she decides to ask the servants...

she went downstarin and ask a servant...

geet-bhaiya...aapko pta h woh...'woh' kaha h?


srvnt-bahurani aap maan saab k bare me puch rhi h na?g wo to is waqt apne gym me rehte h...but kuch hi dr me wo brekfast k lie niche aa jayenge...


geet-acha...wo brekfast me kya lete h?


srvnt-g wo to bas juice'toast or omlet lete h...aap fikar mat kijiye me abhi sab bna deta hu...



geet-nhi bhaiya...aap rehne do...aj me bna dungi unka brekfast...waise bhi aj mera pehla din h is ghar me...to ye ek shagoon bhi h na k me khana bnau...
or ha daadi ma kaha ha?


srvnt-g unki ek frnd ki tabiyat khrab h isilie unhe subah jana pda...pr unhone muje keh dia j k me aapka khyal rkho ache se...or aap ye khana bnane ki bat kr rhi h...wo bhi maan saab k lie...nhi nhi...me bna dunga na...



geet-bhaiya...mene keh dia na...to me hi bnaungi...aj kitchen se aapki chutti...bas ab muje aapki koi bat nhi sunna,,,,ap jao apna kam kro...


he went reluctantly...and geet went to the kitchen with a wide smile...




precap~~"what the hell is this??????????"ShockedShockedShockedShockedShockedShockedShockedShocked




hope u will like this update gyus...

ples leave ur cments...

love u allBig smileBig smile

urs~~~~~~~soumi...Smile

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Posted: 20 June 2011 at 1:37am | IP Logged
awsome yaar...updating afteer a long time !!!

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Posted: 20 June 2011 at 1:44am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mrk_1

awsome yaar...updating afteer a long time !!!



ya dear...bit busy for my exams...CryCryCryCry
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Posted: 20 June 2011 at 2:00am | IP Logged
awesome yaarrr
luved ittt
bt maan was a bit rude to geettt
bt wondering breakfast mein kya hai??????

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Posted: 20 June 2011 at 2:02am | IP Logged
After long tym u update
Maan n his anger baap re
Geet toh gayi paka in breakfast she did sumthg gadbad

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