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new ff~U N ME TOGETHER..part 35 (Page 23)

prathyusmiling Senior Member

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soumimaaneetsou Senior Member

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geet was sitting in the room alone for some time...she was uncertain...about what to expect...about the night...about her future...

she sat there for a while lost in her thought...

then she heard a click sound on the door nob that bring her back from her thought...she covered her face with the 'ghunghat' as daadi instructed her...

maan entered in the room...and closes the door...geet becomes more stiff with that act...she curled her toes...hugging herself...

maan comes near her...sat in the bed...

both sat their...remain silent for a while...boht were hesitating to break the silence...

maan sat their wondering what may b she is expecting from him...afterall she is his wife...but...they do not know anything about each ohter...except their first of all they must need a proper intro...

maan goes near talk to her...his hand reaches to her ghunghat that was blocking his view...

geet gasps in anticipation as soon as maan touches the ghunghat...she still hasnt seen his face neither he...

maan lift his ghunghat to meet her gaze...this is the their eyes meet...she was lost in his dark chocolate eyes...that she forget to blink...

maan become dumbstruck...seems like he havent seen anyone so innocent...

he totaly forgot his motive ..that he wanted to talk tp her few time ago...rather a sudden desire overpowered him...

he touches her chin to lift her face...geet close her eyes in anticipation...both of them did not expected this sudden outburst of desire...

maan opens her plat to free her long silky hairs...the scent of her hair fills the room...he buried his face in her hair...he rubbed his nose on her nape...

geet eyes wereclosed tightly...her heart was beatingrapidly like it will burst in any moment...she cant even think from where all this desires...sudden trust,,,faith... comes...that too for a unknown person...

maan started to give wet kisses to her neck...chin...then reaches to her collar bone...his hands were caressing her back...
soon his hand find their way to the dori of her blouse...and in a rush,,,he opens the knot...

his this action make geet moan loudly...that brought maan to his senses...

he was shocked for his own action...he was ashamed...

he thought...(god what was i dong...i must made her scared...she doesnt even knows me properly...and what am doing...i heve forced myself on her...chhi...i shoukdnt have done this...but what on the earth made me do this to her...???????)

maan pushes himself away from geet...this sudden distance brought sense to geet...she opened her eyes...only to foundher husband was stand away from her...from the bed...

maan- wo...raat bohot ho chuki ha...hume so jana kal subahtumse bat krunga...thik ha?
tum yaha bed par so couch pe so jata hu...or agar kisi chij ki zarurat muje bta dena...and make yourself comfortable here...

saying this he went to washroom for change...leaving a cnfused geet...

precap~~next day...

oops...maan angry...ShockedShockedShocked

hope u will like the part guys...

plz leave cment...

love u all...

sorry cant pm today...will pm tomorrow...promise...


Edited by soumimaaneetsou - 25 May 2011 at 1:27am

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t_areeb IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 2:00am | IP Logged
and why he would be angry??

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sona-rai IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 2:14am | IP Logged
LOLlovely updateLOL

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-afsha- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 2:47am | IP Logged
Maan lost his control hehehehe
Bechara him
He is paka gonna get shock after knwing the truth
Lets c wats aage
Update soon n longer updates plz

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sanu3108 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 3:43am | IP Logged
nice update soumi
plzz continue soon

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-Veritaserum- IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 4:40am | IP Logged
Nice part... loved it

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bhanu_rekhag IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 4:59am | IP Logged
nice part

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