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new ff~U N ME TOGETHER..part 17..pg 35 (Page 18)

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Posted: 07 April 2011 at 6:25am | IP Logged
note~~~~~
guys am realy sorry for delaying to updateCryCryCryCrybut actuly am nusy with my stydies...so i promise i will give u a long update in this weekend.....Big smileBig smileBig smileBig smileBig smilelove u alll

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part~11
 
 
geet was being dressed by taiji and rajji beutifully....rano comes to her and ask the girl to leave as the baraat can come anytime......
rano-geet..me janti hu beta k tum kis dor se gujar rahi ho.....or me ma hokar bhi ye sab nhi rok skti....nhi rok skti is khilwar ko jo tumhari zindgi k sath ho rha ha.....maaf krdena muje ho ske to...(and she broke into tears,,)
 
geet-mamma plz aap ro mat...ek aap or papa hi to ho is ghar me jo muje pyaar krte ha...mujpe bharosa krte ha...or ya sab...sayad mere kismat me tha...ab jo higa so hoga...mene sab babaji k hatho chhod diya...
 
then ladies come and informed rano that barat has come....
rano went downstairs..she greets the barati...and saw maan in the mandap...
she prayed to god_he babaji meri bachi ko inke sath khush rkhna...usne boht dukh seh lia...ab or nhi babaji.....
 
after sometime panditji asked them to bring the bride.....
they bring geet and make her sit beside maan...
geet for a moment wanted to see his fece but cant...as it was covered with sehra....
maan also felt her presence but decided to ignore it...
 
all the rituals completd peacefully....
afer the bidaai geet felt very sad for mamma and papa....but at the same time she felt anxious as noe she will be alone in the car with the stranger...
but instead of that she saw daadima was waiting for her and she told her that maan went to his office for some very urgent work...inspite of her disagree...but he promised that he will come within 2 hours in the mansion....ans asked geet to comw with her.....
 
 
 
precap~the suhaagraatShockedShockedShockedShocked
 
plzz leave ur cments...
hope u will like it...
 i know its a very short one...CryCryCryCrybut plzz bear with it now....next time i will give u a long long updateSmileSmile
love u all...SmileSmile


Edited by soumimaaneetsou - 10 April 2011 at 1:03am

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now the play starts !!awsome one yaar 

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Posted: 10 April 2011 at 1:22am | IP Logged
awesome part dear...loved it.

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Posted: 10 April 2011 at 1:22am | IP Logged
hey it was a short update.............but i am sure u will do a long one next time...........
i am scared for geet............maan actually doesnt know the truth............i feel sorry for her that she trusts every one is gud and for that she had her life changed comp...........i am sure its going to be a tough ride for her

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Superb part.... loved it

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nice part!Smile

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