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Noone can take u away..os updt pg 2

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Posted: 19 March 2011 at 4:45am | IP Logged
hello guysHug
i wanted to write an os and soo here i m ..i m rily annoyed that abhay is being helpless and is not able 2 halp it.so this os is abt how abhay cleverly saves piya from the clutches of SID,...
HOPE U ALL LIKE IT
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Chand----Abhay,yeh angoothi agar kissi galat haathon me chali gayi..toh IT CAN DESTROY THE WORLD...

Abhay--Dont worry Dad,main sid ke koi bhi chaal ko kamyaab naii hone doonga..

((thinking---Pia,main tumhe kaise bachaoo,i hope tum uss jaanwar ke saath naii hoo..plz pia door raho usse...))

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Scene shifts to restaurant---

Panchii sees them and is geetting angry...

((In her mind--U r sick pia,tumhe pata hain ki main sid ke liye kya feel karti hoon phir bhi..I HATE U PIYA))

and is abt to leave from there when pia says..P??I KNEW IT SIR..U LIKE PANCCHI..omg i m soo happy sir..m glad panchi also feels the same for u sir...

Panchi..pia i m soo sorry maine tumhe galat samjha..godd hamesha main sab kuch galat hi karti hoon..bt inoe ki sid ko chhun kar maine kuch galat naii kiya..and smiles and leaves...


SID((thinking))--panchhi?noo i dont like her..bt i dont mind,i can use her...

Pia--sir?sir?sir?

Sid--coming out if his thoughts..yess piaa...say?
Sir..i nnedd to go..its urgent..
Shall i drop you???
NOsir its f9.. ii ll goo...
I dont have any prob..let me drop u..
Sir plzz i ll leave 
Ok f9..byee

pia leaves sid who thinks..now Plan  2...

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pIA IS very happy for pancchi..
I M SOO HAPPY 4 U PANCHI..I M GLAD U CHOSE SID..hes a nice guy n wil love u alot...
and then she realises that her Schain is nt there with her...
and soo she says;;OHH NOO LAGTA HAI MUJHE WAAPIS JAANA PADEGA...
and she starts going back..bt sid's car stops her 

Sid--pia kya hua?sab theek toh hain naa?
Pia-sir,wohh--me-r-i- c-h-a-i-n...

sid takes out a chain n asks her kya yeh tumhari chain hain?
Yes sir
I ll make u wear it
Noo sor,its alrite..
OHh god pia..relax main koi bhoot nai hoon jo tumhe khaa jaonga..((he said this line very slowly\))

Pia felt wierd and soo she turned..Hr blood was attracting him bt he controlled..hold ur self sid..

Abhay saw all that and was fuming in anger..he had decided to doo something abt it..and left in a jiffy n i n anger...

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i know this was a short part..i ll cont tomoroow mrng most probablly..if u liked it i ll surely continueSmilethanks for readin..PLZ DO COMMENT..AND SORRY FOR MISTAKES..

kya karega ab abhay?kya uska kadam pia ko uske paas le aayega yaa phit adhoori reh jayegi pyaar ki ye ek kahaani..

LOVE
PALAKSmile


Edited by mohit_rockstar - 21 March 2011 at 8:51pm

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Posted: 19 March 2011 at 5:52am | IP Logged
Very Nice part PALAK.Clap Actually,I am not regular viewer of PKYEK...(Whatever,VIVIAN is lead of my FFEmbarrassed) so,no idea about current story move. But,Your This OS is really AwesomeSmile.Please,continue soon.Thanks for PM.

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Posted: 19 March 2011 at 6:02am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Joseph_A

Very Nice part PALAK.Clap Actually,I am not regular viewer of PKYEK...(Whatever,VIVIAN is lead of my FFEmbarrassed) so,no idea about current story move. But,Your This OS is really AwesomeSmile.Please,continue soon.Thanks for PM.


Thanks soo much joseph..i ll surely pm u..
thanks for commentinSmile
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Posted: 19 March 2011 at 6:40am | IP Logged
Yar palak awsm nd fantastic os yar.
agar abhi tu mre samne hoti na ,i hug u yar.
superb os.
plz plz do write mre os.
luv u
vritika

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Posted: 19 March 2011 at 8:26am | IP Logged
Hey palak, 
awesum OS yaar.........
luvd it.........
i dnt watch PKYEK regularly but sumtimes i do........
luvd it......hope abhay is able 2 save piya.......
i hate that sid.......
cont soon.....m eager 2 knw wat happens nxt.........
& plzzzz write sum OS's on SaJan as well......its been ages since u wrote an OS on SaJan......i read ur OS's on SaJan & they wer awesum.......missing SaJan like hell.......so plzzz write on them too.....

CONTINUE SOON
UPDATE ASAP
THNX 4 THE PM & DNT 4GET 2 PM ME..........

w8ing eagerly 4 nxt part......cont soon........Smile

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Posted: 19 March 2011 at 8:37am | IP Logged
Hey Palak Gr8 Os.. Do continue soon n plz do pm me wit d next part.. lolz..

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Posted: 19 March 2011 at 8:46am | IP Logged
Originally posted by karantakiar

Yar palak awsm nd fantastic os yar.
agar abhi tu mre samne hoti na ,i hug u yar.
superb os.
plz plz do write mre os.
luv u
vritika


awww thanks sweety m glad u liked itSmile
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Posted: 19 March 2011 at 8:48am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ekta_monaya




heyy ekta...Hug
that was a long comment
thanks soo much dear.. i m tryin my best..and ii ve a gallery of sajan soo i m giving u the link..hope u like it

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