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Heartbeat -An AR Mini FF *Completed* 21/3/11 (Page 53)

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Posted: 26 April 2011 at 11:34am | IP Logged

@ Aanya ..

i know , m not saying that its Bad at awl !!
its Beyond Beautiful !!! the way she gave her life to save his and then the Last  Line of the FF that sed  " Her heart in His and a Single Heartbeat "  its just SO pure ..!!
but it still hurts to imagine that any one of them is not with the Other " Physically ..
so it Hurt ..
otherwise i absolutely LOVED it ! its so Sweeet ! Day Dreaming

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Posted: 26 April 2011 at 11:48am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Rishx_KSG-

@ Aanya ..

i know , m not saying that its Bad at awl !!
its Beyond Beautiful !!! the way she gave her life to save his and then the Last  Line of the FF that sed  " Her heart in His and a Single Heartbeat "  its just SO pure ..!!
but it still hurts to imagine that any one of them is not with the Other " Physically ..
so it Hurt ..
otherwise i absolutely LOVED it ! its so Sweeet ! Day Dreaming

Yeah I get u :)

Thanks once again!

xoxo
Aanya


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Posted: 19 May 2011 at 10:21am | IP Logged
Okay, so I'm finally here to comment!

Your FF literally had me in tears! Especially the last part! But the concept was BEAUTIFUL! Just mesmerizing! It actually reminded me of the saying - 

"Two hearts, beating as ONE!"

The thing is, when I was reading this, I was co-incidentally listening to 'Kaise Mujhe...' from Ghajini...Its just perfect for this song isn't it? Well, yes, so that made me cry more! 

I can't even imagine to be in Armaan's position! Touchwood, I would never want to be there! 

But yes, Riddhima had a point in her letter, very few people have the luck of actually and literally possessing the heart which loves you! 

Touching, overwhelming, sad, but at the same time, a love-story which left a mark! 

<3

Keep it up Aanya! This is one of my favorite short stories! And boy, have I read many! This just captivated me!

Thanks a lot for such a beautiful tale! 

"A Sad Ending doesn't necessarily imply an Incomplete Love-Story!" 

This quote, is my personal creation! Just something I penned down right now when I was reading your FF! 

Kudos Aanya! x

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Posted: 19 May 2011 at 10:24am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Castle-Beckett

Okay, so I'm finally here to comment!

Your FF literally had me in tears! Especially the last part! But the concept was BEAUTIFUL! Just mesmerizing! It actually reminded me of the saying - 

"Two hearts, beating as ONE!"

The thing is, when I was reading this, I was co-incidentally listening to 'Kaise Mujhe...' from Ghajini...Its just perfect for this song isn't it? Well, yes, so that made me cry more! 

I can't even imagine to be in Armaan's position! Touchwood, I would never want to be there! 

But yes, Riddhima had a point in her letter, very few people have the luck of actually and literally possessing the heart which loves you! 

Touching, overwhelming, sad, but at the same time, a love-story which left a mark! 

<3

Keep it up Aanya! This is one of my favorite short stories! And boy, have I read many! This just captivated me!

Thanks a lot for such a beautiful tale! 

"A Sad Ending doesn't necessarily imply an Incomplete Love-Story!" 

This quote, is my personal creation! Just something I penned down right now when I was reading your FF! 

Kudos Aanya! x

Oh yay!! You FINALLY graced this story with your presence ;)

Thanks so much Hug

Kaise Mujhe is perfect <3

I love your quote <3 [And that 2 hearts as one waala thingy is on my banner :D]

xoxo
Aanya


P.S - Thanks so much for taking out time and commenting! I wasn't expecting it so soon =)

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MY AR FF: Love Is.. - www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1611044
MY AR MINI: Heartbeat - www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1640957

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Posted: 19 May 2011 at 10:31am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Aanya_taanu4evr

Originally posted by Castle-Beckett

Okay, so I'm finally here to comment!

Your FF literally had me in tears! Especially the last part! But the concept was BEAUTIFUL! Just mesmerizing! It actually reminded me of the saying - 

"Two hearts, beating as ONE!"

The thing is, when I was reading this, I was co-incidentally listening to 'Kaise Mujhe...' from Ghajini...Its just perfect for this song isn't it? Well, yes, so that made me cry more! 

I can't even imagine to be in Armaan's position! Touchwood, I would never want to be there! 

But yes, Riddhima had a point in her letter, very few people have the luck of actually and literally possessing the heart which loves you! 

Touching, overwhelming, sad, but at the same time, a love-story which left a mark! 

<3

Keep it up Aanya! This is one of my favorite short stories! And boy, have I read many! This just captivated me!

Thanks a lot for such a beautiful tale! 

"A Sad Ending doesn't necessarily imply an Incomplete Love-Story!" 

This quote, is my personal creation! Just something I penned down right now when I was reading your FF! 

Kudos Aanya! x

Oh yay!! You FINALLY graced this story with your presence ;)

Thanks so much Hug

Kaise Mujhe is perfect <3

I love your quote <3 [And that 2 hearts as one waala thingy is on my banner :D]

xoxo
Aanya


P.S - Thanks so much for taking out time and commenting! I wasn't expecting it so soon =)

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MY AR FF: Love Is.. - www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1611044
MY AR MINI: Heartbeat - www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1640957

Yeah, I can't believe I'm making quotes now! Confused But, yes, quotes is going to be something I'm going to be basing my next FF on! Not giving it away, so sshhh!! Embarrassed

And ah, I had time today, and I just read the whole thing again today, so I figured I'll comment now only! Big smile

And about gracing this story with my presence, it doesn't need it actually, because its so amazing anyway! <3

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Posted: 19 May 2011 at 10:38am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Castle-Beckett

Originally posted by Aanya_taanu4evr

Originally posted by Castle-Beckett

Okay, so I'm finally here to comment!

Your FF literally had me in tears! Especially the last part! But the concept was BEAUTIFUL! Just mesmerizing! It actually reminded me of the saying - 

"Two hearts, beating as ONE!"

The thing is, when I was reading this, I was co-incidentally listening to 'Kaise Mujhe...' from Ghajini...Its just perfect for this song isn't it? Well, yes, so that made me cry more! 

I can't even imagine to be in Armaan's position! Touchwood, I would never want to be there! 

But yes, Riddhima had a point in her letter, very few people have the luck of actually and literally possessing the heart which loves you! 

Touching, overwhelming, sad, but at the same time, a love-story which left a mark! 

<3

Keep it up Aanya! This is one of my favorite short stories! And boy, have I read many! This just captivated me!

Thanks a lot for such a beautiful tale! 

"A Sad Ending doesn't necessarily imply an Incomplete Love-Story!" 

This quote, is my personal creation! Just something I penned down right now when I was reading your FF! 

Kudos Aanya! x

Oh yay!! You FINALLY graced this story with your presence ;)

Thanks so much Hug

Kaise Mujhe is perfect <3

I love your quote <3 [And that 2 hearts as one waala thingy is on my banner :D]

xoxo
Aanya


P.S - Thanks so much for taking out time and commenting! I wasn't expecting it so soon =)

_______________________
MY AR FF: Love Is.. - www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1611044
MY AR MINI: Heartbeat - www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1640957

Yeah, I can't believe I'm making quotes now! Confused But, yes, quotes is going to be something I'm going to be basing my next FF on! Not giving it away, so sshhh!! Embarrassed

And ah, I had time today, and I just read the whole thing again today, so I figured I'll comment now only! Big smile

And about gracing this story with my presence, it doesn't need it actually, because its so amazing anyway! <3

NEXT FF??????????????????????????????????? Give one tiny si...chotu si hint na!! Pleashhh :) Haha :D

Thanks :)

xoxo
Aanya


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MY AR FF: Love Is.. - www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1611044
MY AR MINI: Heartbeat - www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1640957
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Posted: 19 May 2011 at 10:41am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Aanya_taanu4evr

Originally posted by Castle-Beckett

Originally posted by Aanya_taanu4evr

Originally posted by Castle-Beckett

Okay, so I'm finally here to comment!

Your FF literally had me in tears! Especially the last part! But the concept was BEAUTIFUL! Just mesmerizing! It actually reminded me of the saying - 

"Two hearts, beating as ONE!"

The thing is, when I was reading this, I was co-incidentally listening to 'Kaise Mujhe...' from Ghajini...Its just perfect for this song isn't it? Well, yes, so that made me cry more! 

I can't even imagine to be in Armaan's position! Touchwood, I would never want to be there! 

But yes, Riddhima had a point in her letter, very few people have the luck of actually and literally possessing the heart which loves you! 

Touching, overwhelming, sad, but at the same time, a love-story which left a mark! 

<3

Keep it up Aanya! This is one of my favorite short stories! And boy, have I read many! This just captivated me!

Thanks a lot for such a beautiful tale! 

"A Sad Ending doesn't necessarily imply an Incomplete Love-Story!" 

This quote, is my personal creation! Just something I penned down right now when I was reading your FF! 

Kudos Aanya! x

Oh yay!! You FINALLY graced this story with your presence ;)

Thanks so much Hug

Kaise Mujhe is perfect <3

I love your quote <3 [And that 2 hearts as one waala thingy is on my banner :D]

xoxo
Aanya


P.S - Thanks so much for taking out time and commenting! I wasn't expecting it so soon =)

_______________________
MY AR FF: Love Is.. - www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1611044
MY AR MINI: Heartbeat - www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1640957

Yeah, I can't believe I'm making quotes now! Confused But, yes, quotes is going to be something I'm going to be basing my next FF on! Not giving it away, so sshhh!! Embarrassed

And ah, I had time today, and I just read the whole thing again today, so I figured I'll comment now only! Big smile

And about gracing this story with my presence, it doesn't need it actually, because its so amazing anyway! <3

NEXT FF??????????????????????????????????? Give one tiny si...chotu si hint na!! Pleashhh :) Haha :D

Thanks :)

xoxo
Aanya


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MY AR FF: Love Is.. - www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1611044
MY AR MINI: Heartbeat - www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1640957

Post cancelled! Smile


Edited by Castle-Beckett - 19 May 2011 at 10:53am

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Posted: 19 May 2011 at 10:53am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Castle-Beckett

Originally posted by Aanya_taanu4evr

Originally posted by Castle-Beckett

Originally posted by Aanya_taanu4evr

Originally posted by Castle-Beckett

Okay, so I'm finally here to comment!

Your FF literally had me in tears! Especially the last part! But the concept was BEAUTIFUL! Just mesmerizing! It actually reminded me of the saying - 

"Two hearts, beating as ONE!"

The thing is, when I was reading this, I was co-incidentally listening to 'Kaise Mujhe...' from Ghajini...Its just perfect for this song isn't it? Well, yes, so that made me cry more! 

I can't even imagine to be in Armaan's position! Touchwood, I would never want to be there! 

But yes, Riddhima had a point in her letter, very few people have the luck of actually and literally possessing the heart which loves you! 

Touching, overwhelming, sad, but at the same time, a love-story which left a mark! 

<3

Keep it up Aanya! This is one of my favorite short stories! And boy, have I read many! This just captivated me!

Thanks a lot for such a beautiful tale! 

"A Sad Ending doesn't necessarily imply an Incomplete Love-Story!" 

This quote, is my personal creation! Just something I penned down right now when I was reading your FF! 

Kudos Aanya! x

Oh yay!! You FINALLY graced this story with your presence ;)

Thanks so much Hug

Kaise Mujhe is perfect <3

I love your quote <3 [And that 2 hearts as one waala thingy is on my banner :D]

xoxo
Aanya


P.S - Thanks so much for taking out time and commenting! I wasn't expecting it so soon =)

_______________________
MY AR FF: Love Is.. - www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1611044
MY AR MINI: Heartbeat - www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1640957

Yeah, I can't believe I'm making quotes now! Confused But, yes, quotes is going to be something I'm going to be basing my next FF on! Not giving it away, so sshhh!! Embarrassed

And ah, I had time today, and I just read the whole thing again today, so I figured I'll comment now only! Big smile

And about gracing this story with my presence, it doesn't need it actually, because its so amazing anyway! <3

NEXT FF??????????????????????????????????? Give one tiny si...chotu si hint na!! Pleashhh :) Haha :D

Thanks :)

xoxo
Aanya


_______________________
MY AR FF: Love Is.. - www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1611044
MY AR MINI: Heartbeat - www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1640957

Okay, its going to be a sitcom kind of thing...With no specific story-line, but it will have a long term-story! Something like Friends! Big smile

I haven't dwelled much on this! Its going to be my first FF 'Dill Jahaan Dosst Wahaan', which will be altered and re-written in that form! I'm not sure if I'll actually go ahead with it! But it won't come until and unless I complete AWOTB first! I can't handle 2 FFs! That's why I put a halt on DJDW in the first place! Embarrassed


AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME :D <3

xoxo
Aanya


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MY AR FF: Love Is.. - www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1611044
MY AR MINI: Heartbeat - www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1640957

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