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Heartbeat -An AR Mini FF *Completed* 21/3/11 (Page 51)

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Posted: 27 March 2011 at 3:47pm | IP Logged
okay i dont normally comment on mini fics, i just press like n skip to the next one unless it is from one of my favourite fanfic writers! but darling, this is the first ever fic i've read from you and trust me i think this is by far one of the BEST mini fics i've read on this entire forum n trust me i've read ALOT! the reason i'm counting this among the few best mini fics is just one "YOUR ENDING"! you know how writers normally give the fic a cliche happy ending even if it's not logical just to make the readers happy? i'm not saying that's wrong, i can be one of those readers at times too but i actually believe that an ending should be what the STORY requires and what fits the concept the best logically and emotionally both. Your ending to this fic has that factor, you did total justice to your concept and i salute you for that! you have amazing writing skills too but ur instinct and ur decision to give the story the RIGHT ending is what i respect the most! you did a briliant job with this fic and i love it even more for the beautiful ending you've given it! 

if ridhima had not been the donor i would have actually been disappointed because this story in particular demanded her sacrifice! and not to forget, your fic actually made me cry and not just cry but the way you have portrayed armaan's illness and riddhima's support, it actually took me down memory lane and i actually remember a death a witnessed a year back of a VERY dear family member! your writing held such emotion that i couldnt help relatin myself to it! thank you 

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Posted: 27 March 2011 at 11:47pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by UreebaluvsKSG

jux luved ittt Heart

Thank you Hug

xoxo
Aanya


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MY AR FF: LOVE IS... : Link - www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1611044
MY AR Mini FF: HEARTBEAT: Link - www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1640957

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Posted: 27 March 2011 at 11:51pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sonia_92

okay i dont normally comment on mini fics, i just press like n skip to the next one unless it is from one of my favourite fanfic writers! but darling, this is the first ever fic i've read from you and trust me i think this is by far one of the BEST mini fics i've read on this entire forum n trust me i've read ALOT! the reason i'm counting this among the few best mini fics is just one "YOUR ENDING"! you know how writers normally give the fic a cliche happy ending even if it's not logical just to make the readers happy? i'm not saying that's wrong, i can be one of those readers at times too but i actually believe that an ending should be what the STORY requires and what fits the concept the best logically and emotionally both. Your ending to this fic has that factor, you did total justice to your concept and i salute you for that! you have amazing writing skills too but ur instinct and ur decision to give the story the RIGHT ending is what i respect the most! you did a briliant job with this fic and i love it even more for the beautiful ending you've given it! 

if ridhima had not been the donor i would have actually been disappointed because this story in particular demanded her sacrifice! and not to forget, your fic actually made me cry and not just cry but the way you have portrayed armaan's illness and riddhima's support, it actually took me down memory lane and i actually remember a death a witnessed a year back of a VERY dear family member! your writing held such emotion that i couldnt help relatin myself to it! thank you 

Aww thank youuu Hug
Haha I'm honoured that you chose my fic to comment on! I'd started writing with the concept of sacrifice! The thought of Riddhima donating her heart came to me first and then I wrote the story backwards :D 

Anyway, I'm glad you loved it!

xoxo
Aanya


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MY AR FF: LOVE IS... : Link - www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1611044
MY AR Mini FF: HEARTBEAT: Link - www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1640957

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Posted: 28 March 2011 at 6:36am | IP Logged

u really made me cry yaar..

sooo awsum...

loved it..........

do write more..........

thnx for the pm................

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Posted: 28 March 2011 at 10:51am | IP Logged
awesome part! loved it Big smileBig smile
Big smileBig smileBig smile

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Posted: 29 March 2011 at 10:40am | IP Logged
Originally posted by pujalovesAR

awesome part! loved it Big smileBig smile
Big smileBig smileBig smile

Thank  youu Hug

xoxo
Aanya


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MY AR FF: LOVE IS... : Link - www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1611044
MY AR Mini FF: HEARTBEAT: Link - www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1640957

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Posted: 29 March 2011 at 10:41am | IP Logged
Originally posted by anumeha_rajat

u really made me cry yaar..

sooo awsum...

loved it..........

do write more..........

thnx for the pm................



Thank  youu Hug

xoxo
Aanya


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MY AR FF: LOVE IS... : Link - www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1611044
MY AR Mini FF: HEARTBEAT: Link - www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1640957

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Posted: 01 April 2011 at 4:21am | IP Logged
I loved the last part....it was so well portrayed !!!!Clap



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