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Heartbeat -An AR Mini FF *Completed* 21/3/11 (Page 48)

Aanya. IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 22 March 2011 at 9:18pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Harneetluvesksg

hiiii
da ending was so emotional :(
but alsoo gud 
and i must say u rite soo good :D

harneet <3

Awwh thanks Harneet Hug

xoxo
Aanya

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MY AR FF: LOVE IS... : Link - www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1611044
MY AR Mini FF: HEARTBEAT: Link - www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1640957

jannat4ever Goldie
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Posted: 23 March 2011 at 10:25am | IP Logged
hey dear
just finished read ur ff
its awesome
such an emotional concept
hats off.........Clap Clap Clap Clap
u wrote it so beautifully..........
though i cried at d end.......Cry....but i agree its a perfect suitable ending
nd everyone not gets a  perfect ending in love
poor armaan.............
but he took a perfect well decision in d end..........
nd riddhima's decision was toh marvelous breath taking and shocking too.....Embarrassed
do write more...............




lots of luv
jannat

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Aanya.sweetdesire

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Posted: 23 March 2011 at 10:53am | IP Logged
Awwwww seriouslyy outstanding yaar!!
u made me cryyy!!
I rarely cry on reading any FF yaar but ur Ff got tears in my eyes!!!I just love it yaar!!Hatss off to u!!!
Still couldnt stop cryingg...Lolxx!!
Butttt Awesomeee yaar!!!Keep it up!

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Aanya. IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 23 March 2011 at 10:53am | IP Logged
Originally posted by jannat4ever

hey dear
just finished read ur ff
its awesome
such an emotional concept
hats off.........Clap Clap Clap Clap
u wrote it so beautifully..........
though i cried at d end.......Cry....but i agree its a perfect suitable ending
nd everyone not gets a  perfect ending in love
poor armaan.............
but he took a perfect well decision in d end..........
nd riddhima's decision was toh marvelous breath taking and shocking too.....Embarrassed
do write more...............




lots of luv
jannat


Thank youuu Hug

Yeah...it was totally senti LOL

Imma focus on Love Is... now!!!

xoxo
Aanya


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MY AR FF: LOVE IS... : Link - www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1611044
MY AR Mini FF: HEARTBEAT: Link - www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1640957

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Aanya. IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 23 March 2011 at 10:55am | IP Logged
Originally posted by honeey_16

Awwwww seriouslyy outstanding yaar!!
u made me cryyy!!
I rarely cry on reading any FF yaar but ur Ff got tears in my eyes!!!I just love it yaar!!Hatss off to u!!!
Still couldnt stop cryingg...Lolxx!!
Butttt Awesomeee yaar!!!Keep it up!

Awwh thanks Girliee Hug

xoxo
Aanya

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MY AR FF: LOVE IS... : Link - www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1611044
MY AR Mini FF: HEARTBEAT: Link - www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1640957

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Posted: 23 March 2011 at 11:29pm | IP Logged
It was an ending worth the pain. It was a happy ending for me. It always is! Big time sucker for dysptopian conclusions...I can't help but fall in love with this ff. Although I'm not very sure if a heart can be donated by someone who's like alive alive...as in not a cadaver or anting...I'd brush that though away! I had imagined Armaan walking out of the some huge hospital as a reputed cardiologist, smiling to himself. Well..it all came rue...and the bigger the better!
I lover the letter, although heart-wrenching. And the concluding line...her heart and single heartbeat. I sat back for a few  minutes and th line kept reverberating in my head...like one of those concluding lines from my favorite novel.

Indeed, who get's lucky enough to hold the heart of a beloved for the rest of their lives. This was a job well done, in fact very well done. And I'd hope there are many more to come. In a way, if Armaan would have passed away in Riddhima's arms...it'd have been depressing but cliche, right? As in the ordinary...but the way things changed in the matter of a few minutes blew my head off!

I hope anyone and everyone who's ever been through such a  situation, lost their beloved on an operation table find peace. Life goes on, ironically. And that the sad part, even more depressing than the loss. Life's more heart-wrenching than death. For all die, only a few live!

Cheers!
PS ...I'd be eager to read more from a talented writer like you! Drop me a PM when you write next, pls, for I don't wanna miss out on any of it!

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Posted: 24 March 2011 at 1:32am | IP Logged
The end was lovely. Yes thought i was bot sad seeing the end of Ridhima but as you rightly said every lover story need not be a happy end...

Do write more on AR (A romantic and happy one this time ) .... Thnx for the PM

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Posted: 24 March 2011 at 3:37am | IP Logged
ssssshheesh!!that was seriously awesome, aanya!!!Very emotional....yet so nice ...t'was too good!!Smile

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