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Heartbeat -An AR Mini FF *Completed* 21/3/11 (Page 32)

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Posted: 21 March 2011 at 5:30am | IP Logged
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Posted: 21 March 2011 at 5:31am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Aanya_taanu4evr

[QUOTE=Crazyy_Fan]Awesome part...n as much as i love ridzz.....i feel d essence n charm  of d storyy wud go awayy if u keep ridzz alive-fit n fyn typez.....Continuee wid wat u wer thinking..but but but dun make armaan a devdaas...u cud show sumthin lyk ppl cum n go...u love dem n hav dere memoriezz imprinted in ur heart forever.....hold on to d happy memories..chrish dem..dun despise dem....forget d bad memz...dey wont do ny good to u..mak him value d sacrifice ridz made so dat he cud live..dun mak him do suicide or nythin lyk dat..coz if dat happenzz ridzi's love n sacrifice wudn't exactlyy be worth it....but plz dun fix him up wid another gal....since dis izz an AR ff......
 
dis was jus a suggestion Embarrassed plzz go on wid wateva u think izz correct Embarrassed
 
p.s. other readerzz if u read dis dun kill me lolll ;)
 
&&& I love d wayy u write Aanya :D
Keep it going ;)
Continuee sooooonnn n i m eagerlyy waiting for d updt of Love is :D
 

Awwh thanks Sakshi!!!

Babe, your comment made me happiest!!! Embarrassed

I think Imma continue with what I had in mind before! 

Naah. Devdas or Armaan with someone else doesn't work for me either! LOL

I seriously love u LOL

xoxo
Aanya
 
HugUr replyy stitched a smile on mah face  Aanya :D
n remembr no thanxx n all Evil Smile
Datzz relliiii greatt Embarrassed
Lol LOL same pinch LOL
I love u too LOL 
 
Love
~Sakshi~

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Posted: 21 March 2011 at 5:34am | IP Logged

I want Ridz safe...

I read this ff yesterday and this is just awesome.
I feel so sorry for AR and the pain they've gone through.
I hope u'll twist ur story and let AR remain happily everafter.

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Posted: 21 March 2011 at 5:48am | IP Logged
OH.MY.GOD! GIRL! AANYA! your witng style just freaking blows my mind! the whole part was written so beautifully and hitting every emotional button in my body! omg wow! the way it was written was beautiful, mesmorising and had a realistic touch to it which I LOVED! gawwwwwwwwd it was incrdediably sad espically in terms of Ridhimma being his donor (wild guess hehe) I love the concept of this story, it shows the simple and un-selfish pure love shared by two common indviduals. ahhhhhhhh soo beautiful. The part where they share an itimate moment before Ridhimma starts crying saying "I am gonna miss you armaan" waas just sad and beautiful!  Oh my god armaan is going to be sooo devastated when he finds out that his "ridhhi" has been gone for "13 days now" , i still have a ray of hope that somehow the donor is not Ridhimma. Love the concept of this story and sad feeling it gives BUT i would LOVE an happy ending ehee.
 
PS; you asked where I live; I live in Australia baby! heehee :) & yea i am also a sleepy person but i am lazy one as well so i always leave my stuff tiil the end and thus pay for it at the end heehe :) 

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Posted: 21 March 2011 at 5:55am | IP Logged
Cry
Originally posted by neha2607

Hey,
gosh you made me cry so much in these 4 parts........

why do i feel that riddhima is the donor and she left him forever.
i hope everything turns out well
continue soon
tc

luv,
neha (shona)
CryCry
 rone wala ff
i also think that
like she said good bye armaan

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Posted: 21 March 2011 at 5:56am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Kajenrsmecxi

OH.MY.GOD! GIRL! AANYA! your witng style just freaking blows my mind! the whole part was written so beautifully and hitting every emotional button in my body! omg wow! the way it was written was beautiful, mesmorising and had a realistic touch to it which I LOVED! gawwwwwwwwd it was incrdediably sad espically in terms of Ridhimma being his donor (wild guess hehe) I love the concept of this story, it shows the simple and un-selfish pure love shared by two common indviduals. ahhhhhhhh soo beautiful. The part where they share an itimate moment before Ridhimma starts crying saying "I am gonna miss you armaan" waas just sad and beautiful!  Oh my god armaan is going to be sooo devastated when he finds out that his "ridhhi" has been gone for "13 days now" , i still have a ray of hope that somehow the donor is not Ridhimma. Love the concept of this story and sad feeling it gives BUT i would LOVE an happy ending ehee.
 
PS; you asked where I live; I live in Australia baby! heehee :) & yea i am also a sleepy person but i am lazy one as well so i always leave my stuff tiil the end and thus pay for it at the end heehe :) 

Awwh thanks!!! 

Gawd. you embarrass me Embarrassed But that's why I frikkin love you LOL

I have a big fat smile on my face right now because of your comment!!!! LOL

I still don't know about the ending Wink

xoxo
Aanya

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MY AR FF: LOVE IS... : Link - www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1611044
MY AR Mini FF: HEARTBEAT: Link - www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1640957

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Posted: 21 March 2011 at 6:11am | IP Logged
the part was too senti Cry
i feel like riddhima is donor
plzzzzzzzz dont do that
i want both of them together
but the way u describe the whole part was awesome
continue soon  

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Posted: 21 March 2011 at 6:34am | IP Logged
Thanks for all the comments.

I am still in two minds people. So don't expect me to update atleast for 2-3 days. Stern Smile

xoxo
Aanya


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MY AR FF: LOVE IS... : Link - www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1611044
MY AR Mini FF: HEARTBEAT: Link - www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1640957




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