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BTLOO II ArSh FF link to next thread page 150 :) (Page 55)

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Posted: 21 May 2011 at 7:44am | IP Logged
hey nice part Ridu
I wish both dey can understand deir luv soonerSmile

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Posted: 21 May 2011 at 8:00am | IP Logged
finally Rida!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!u made us wait a lot...
but the update worth the wait...Smile
it was awesome...
poor Shilpa...She cant help her feelings towards Arman but even cant accept them...
and Arman is totally obsessed!!!!!!!!!!!!truly its beyond the limit of obsession...
I love how Arman firmly believe that Shilpa is only his...and only he has the right on her...
u did a great job in portraying ArSh' feelings...Shilpa's dillema and struggle againstr her own feeling, and Arman's anger, obsession but above all their unspoken love...
keep up the good work...
cont super soon...and and i guess its time to update the other 2 fics...Wink
luv
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Posted: 21 May 2011 at 9:52am | IP Logged
Rida you are BACK!!!!
finally updateTongue
LOL! awesome update like always
love Armaan & Shilpa ka kitchen romance<3
precap is nice too
continue soon & we want regular updates :p
Thanks for PM
Love 
                             -Pranjali 


Edited by -Pranjali- - 23 May 2011 at 7:02am
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Posted: 21 May 2011 at 11:20am | IP Logged
omg rida u r back with bang...awesome part Big smile... arsh romance is as usual killer Blushing and loved jealous armaan Tongue can't wait to read next part...continue soon Smile
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Posted: 21 May 2011 at 11:29am | IP Logged
Wow your ff is rocking, thanks for itBig smile

im gald i started to read it...will read it all soonBig smile
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Posted: 21 May 2011 at 12:25pm | IP Logged
Hey Rida how r u?SmileTongueTongue
 
 
 
Ab itna hairaan aur pareshaan hone ki bhi zarurat nahi hai yaar,...i know mera ye comment bohot hi zyada unnatural aur  unexpected tha 
 
 
 
 
 
first of all i m really really sorrry for not commenting alomont for a month...i know u must be very angry on me..
 
 
 
 
 
but sweetheart belive me i was very  wanted to comment on ur fic but ALAS i met with a very fatal aciident for which i had to stay almost for a month  in hoopital...recently i  got discharge...
 
 
 
 
...u know i was really feeling guilty that i didnt comment on my Friend fic from a long time.but i promise to do it in a future ..on a time.
Well come to the part...
 
 
 
 
.yaar tune to kamaaal hi kardiyaaa
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Evrything was sooo awsomeee
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
i   mean words , emotion, .love and fight and everything   was superbbb and so awsomereee yaar
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
OHH goDDD i just loveee armaan possesivness.. he look sooo hhhooottt
 
 t
 
 
 
 
 
 
..the way he alway claim shilpa only his...shilpa bhi kam nahi hai use aur betaab akrne main lolll
 
 
 
 
 
 
 ttt
 
So rahul and atul are to play a cupid in thier love story...
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
i hope they met soon yaar...main armaan aur shilpa aur door nahi dekhsakti ..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
GODDD Ridaaa yaar tu kitna kiss karwati hai lolll but i just love the hottt  ness in ur fic...
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Whever i read the kiss part ...mujhe nahi pata unka kya hota hoga byt mera muh unka dard mehsoos karnelagta lolll
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Ohhh kistchen part was awsome yaar, armaan kahin chance nahi chodta  hehehehe...alway  after shilpa...hmm well hame yahi to chahiye ..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Vivek bechara faltu main mukka kha liya...waise he deserved it yaar...chalo uska muh kuch dino keliyen to band hoga lolll
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
when muski seeing them almost kissing each othwer.hell that was embarassing...i can understand yaar how u feel when u caught while doing this.and feel more embarrsed when it was some one from ur own family hehehehe./
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
oye hoyeee wah ar,maan ka gussa sunny deol se bhi zyada khatrnaat hai yaar...mujhe dar lag raha hai ke kahi jaise sunny deol ne gaddar movie main barma ( handpump) ukhada  tha kahin wo us bechare sid na ukhad de lol bechra sid phaltu main ek history bajayega.lolll
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
But really yaar i just loveee armaan ka hot hottt gussaaa yaar. he look sooo hottt..are yaar hamari kismat shilpa jaisi kyun nahi hai lolll
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Aur jab o aur bhi gusse main hota hai to wo hamre liyen benefit hair par shilpa ke liye unbenefit...kyunki agar use isitarha harbaar gussa ayega tohame aek aur hottt.ttt scene milega lolll
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Well jab sid ne shilpa ko kiss to armaan se ziyada gussa mujhe aya tha really man...yaar sid kisi aur ki dish pe apna muh laga sakta hai...well thank god sid chala gaya warna wo bechra bina muh ke ghar jaat...
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
...god that would be hillariouse to see..
 
 
I m overwhelmed to see that armaan slowly slowly excepting his feeling towards shilpa
 
 
and i hope shilpa will too except her feeling...bechari riddhima...i feel sad for her
 
itna hot munda haat se nikal gaya
 
 
par ek cute hai uske liye lol usise kaam chlana padega lolll
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
All over the parts was superbbb , marvelouseee, hottt, sensualll, and lovelyyy yaar
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Ab plzzz jaldi se update karde yaar...i m dying to read more of it...i just cant get over of it...
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
and yeah the most and last important thing is that
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
CONGRACTULAION
For SECOND THREAD OF BTLOO
hehe i like this pet name
 
 
 
 
 
 
I wish this fic touch the third thread soon..
 
 
 
 
 
 
Love u
and plz pm me the next part
 
 
 
 
 
love u
salinaSmile
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Controll Rida control janti hun tere muh main paani arah hai..hehe i hope  u lke it
love u
salinaSmileSmileSmileSmileSmile
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 


Edited by salinashah - 21 May 2011 at 12:38pm
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Posted: 21 May 2011 at 1:40pm | IP Logged
hey dear awesum ff plzz ad me to pm list !
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Posted: 21 May 2011 at 8:27pm | IP Logged
hey really nice update sorry 4 late commt thanks 4 pm .
waiting 4 more .

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