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FF-5-REMORSES- THREAD 5 (part 54 page 140) (Page 41)

bhabha Goldie
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Posted: 21 March 2011 at 9:35am | IP Logged
Hello,
 Maan and Geet both hindus dont eat  beef .
 
Change beef to goat meat in line "I want beef as well!"

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Posted: 21 March 2011 at 9:36am | IP Logged
 change line  I want beef as well!. to  I want mutton as well!.
Maan and Geet both hindus dont eat  beef

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Posted: 21 March 2011 at 9:37am | IP Logged
Originally posted by FIRESafiReFIRE

Originally posted by zaara25

Hey dear, first of all i wanna fly dwn to your place and give you a HUGE WARM hug for being such a sweetheart.. Even in your busy times, you are updating.. You are great dear.. I wonder how you could squeeze so many things on your brain? Your studies and these updates and plus your own life.. Hats off to you dear.. And yes congrats on your new thread.. Anyways dear i been busy lately, took leave to take care of grandma.. One of the reasons why im commenting late.. Read both updates.. Great.. Simply awesome..
Part 44-omg whats this? Keyama how can you write so beautifully? All those words are haunting.. Standing ovation to you.. Aww dear maan has fever? Its so obvious she cares for maan.. She cant hide this fact.. And she is sweet.. Taking care of maan.. Loved how maan says don go away.. And thanks keyama because of you i just made a big fool out of myself.. The part where geet ordered maan to fix this and that, and maan was like why don you tell me fix the whole house? Haha, i laughed so hard that i woke up my sleeping folks.. Was reading it at midnight dear.. And yes i got scolding for that! Made myself looked so foolish.. And thats another reason why im commenting late.. the best? Of course maan's agony which he showed while cutting the wood.. Favourite lines was from maan: why didnt you kill me? Why didnt you stop me? Why didnt you run away? Im a monster! I no worthy of you! I never was, why you loved me selflessly! Why did you let me kill my own child, i killed my own child.. Wow what words.. Simply great.. And that picture, 5 stars keyama!
Part 45-My favourite part so far.. Got many lines i fell in love with.. Those lines have so much depth and feel in it.. 'to feel her, to love her back, to talk to her, to.......everything!', 'staying away is more painful than staying close to her', 'why you are not angry with me? Why you are not screaming? I want you to shout, kill me your words, torture me' and 'but still he felt happy somewhere, her cold attitude was same, yet somewhere in her cold attitud he started to find love'.. These are some lines i fell in love with.. I loved maan in the market with geet, asking her to buy all stuff just to get her to talk to him.. Munda is definitely trying hard to please.. Just love maan.. Wish someone tell him that he has to try much harder to melt geet.. I love geet too, but im annoyed with her.. For how long is she gonna deny that she has always been hopelessly in love with maan and the hatred is just a fake facade.. Geet's monologue was fabulously written.. What else more proof needed? The monologue itself shows her love for maan.. And maan was so sweet so awesome when he was worried for geet when she went missing..'where were you? Do you know how worried i was? Do you have any idea? I was wondering round the whole jungle!'... Aw maan i know worried you were for her.. But again annoying geet could only ask why! But super loved her answer though..'i used to see you once every 5/8 months a year, never seen you that worried before, why now?'... Kya answer.. Shabaash! And now comes the analysis for the most hated part.. Keyama can you get nakul or someone to rape savetri instead? Or get someone to burn her alive? What she is? A woman? Ya Allah, even a prostitute has better heart than her.. Ask her to rot in hell.. And i don even want to start anything abbott that b******.. A chicken is always a chicken.. How dare this chicken call maan that?! He sure will get fried by maan one day or another.. Just a request keyama, don you let dev chicken to touch my geet.. She only belongs to maan.. Sirf aur sirf maan ki geet..

overall, two fantastic update.. Well what else can we expect from you other than just stunning updates after updates.. Lovely precap.. Cant wait dear, update more, as usual will wait patiently.. There, i have given a long comment as you wanted.. So i demand a happy, sweet, passionate, hot scene in the nxt update.. Thanks for the pm dear.. Love you.. And sorry for such a detailed analysis.. Hope you loved it..

*sorry for mistakes, posting it from mobile..*



<font color="#ff0000" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">OMG i love you for this analysis.... analyise much as you like... i always love to read them... it helps me to imagine what type of image i create... Muskaan_cuty19... i love her for that... & now you.. it helps me to keep track as well.... even i have a guide line.. but still... oh i love you...
& hahaha nakul rapes dadi.. LOLROFL
let me see if i can make that serious... lol
love you... & that is so sweet u looking after ur gran... :D
love you... & don't worry... you read my rubbish ff thats enough... xxxxxx
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haha, dear im like crying and screaming here because im using my mobile internet since my lappie is under repair and i CANT LIKE YOUR COMMENTS.. Its super annoying.. And worse is, sometimes ill be half way reading all your ff at one go, and then my damn phone gets switched off due to dead battery.. I cant even press the emoticons to express my feelings.. Keyama pls come to singapore stay in my house.. So i get to read your updates directly from you.. Then i can give you jabbis here itself.. I love you for all your ffs dear.. And im off to read your current updates.. And yes i still haven read paradox and aroma!*tears rolling dwn my cheeks* im off to read that also.. Urgh! Keyama pls come here na?! After your exams?! Ill stick with you everywhere just to hear your updates.. And come on dear, i talk nonsense all the time.. Haha come over singapore we shall talk nonsense together..

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Posted: 21 March 2011 at 9:40am | IP Logged


haha, dear im like crying and screaming here because im using my mobile internet since my lappie is under repair and i CANT LIKE YOUR COMMENTS.. Its super annoying.. And worse is, sometimes ill be half way reading all your ff at one go, and then my damn phone gets switched off due to dead battery.. I cant even press the emoticons to express my feelings.. Keyama pls come to singapore stay in my house.. So i get to read your updates directly from you.. Then i can give you jabbis here itself.. I love you for all your ffs dear.. And im off to read your current updates.. And yes i still haven read paradox and aroma!*tears rolling dwn my cheeks* im off to read that also.. Urgh! Keyama pls come here na?! After your exams?! Ill stick with you everywhere just to hear your updates.. And come on dear, i talk nonsense all the time.. Haha come over singapore we shall talk nonsense together..[/QUOTE]

heheh i loved to... but its like 8 hours flight from UK... i  get so bad jet lag... are you ready to put up with 3 whole day of me sleeping like a dead body... lolROFL
heheh & not to worry.. i am glad you read my ff :D thats enough
xxxxxx
xxxxxx

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Posted: 21 March 2011 at 9:40am | IP Logged
very good keep it up

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Posted: 21 March 2011 at 9:51am | IP Logged
Originally posted by bhabha

 change line  I want beef as well!. to  I want mutton as well!.
Maan and Geet both hindus dont eat  beef


they are not hindu babe.... i changed there religion... do you read my ffConfused
i swear i have explained this before... Confused
please do reread the old parts....

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Posted: 21 March 2011 at 9:58am | IP Logged
nice update. maan dont know how to cook, but still trying to do it. wondering wht will happen in their relation. now dev will be in their life. really want to see wht he will do. continue soon.......

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Posted: 21 March 2011 at 10:11am | IP Logged
Originally posted by FIRESafiReFIRE



haha, dear im like crying and screaming here because im using my mobile internet since my lappie is under repair and i CANT LIKE YOUR COMMENTS.. Its super annoying.. And worse is, sometimes ill be half way reading all your ff at one go, and then my damn phone gets switched off due to dead battery.. I cant even press the emoticons to express my feelings.. Keyama pls come to singapore stay in my house.. So i get to read your updates directly from you.. Then i can give you jabbis here itself.. I love you for all your ffs dear.. And im off to read your current updates.. And yes i still haven read paradox and aroma!*tears rolling dwn my cheeks* im off to read that also.. Urgh! Keyama pls come here na?! After your exams?! Ill stick with you everywhere just to hear your updates.. And come on dear, i talk nonsense all the time.. Haha come over singapore we shall talk nonsense together..

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heheh i loved to... but its like 8 hours flight from UK... i get so bad jet lag... are you ready to put up with 3 whole day of me sleeping like a dead body... lolROFL
heheh & not to worry.. i am glad you read my ff :D thats enough
xxxxxx
xxxxxx
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[/QUOTE]
keyama, i want to kill you for being more funnier than me.. Showed one of your updates to my student.. And guess what she said? She said you are better than me at humour.. How could you be more funnier? Urgh.. Anws dear, if you don mind my non-stop talking, then you can come over here.. Because i absolutely don mind your sleeping.. I think im worse than you.. Im known to the sleeping beauty.. Dead sleeping beauty.. Yes*high five* i too sleep like a pig.. My poor mum even had to get scolding from her boss because she called me to wake up while she was working.. And yes im reading your ff now, in preparation of my special bonus long long comments for you.. Its just upsetting i cant like your updates.. Super annoying.. And i hope*fingers crossed* i don laugh like yst and kill myself for being a dumb ass.. And for you info, my bed is the world's most cosiest bed in the world.. So now you know why i sleep like pig? Right now at grandma place, and im badly missing my royal bed..*screams in heart because cant even press the angry emoticon, UFF* OH YEA, IM SURELY A DRAMA QUEEN TOO.. But im sure you wont mind na, i bet you are equally one.. Wait for my long comments dear.. Hopefully i don fall asleep like you.. Halfway while writing.. We do share lots of crazy qualities?! I rmb the first time you mentioned you fell asleep on your laptop.. From then on, i know, whenever you go updating status, ill be like, im sure keyama fell asleep on her lappie again.. And again you did.. Haha.. You really do torture your readers.. But sweet torture.. Make us here go all red and mad, yearning for your update..

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