FF: Thori Si Wafa Chahiye{Part2 on pg6}13/7

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Posted: 13 years ago
Hola guys!
This is my first ever FF.
Do tell me guys that you like the plot and characters or not.
I must have done mistakes, still waiting for your response.

..:::::Thori Si Wafa Chahiye:::::..


:Flash-back character sketch:

Avdesh singh thakur:
He was what people called different. The average height-ed man who was immensely attractive and hot. A dark mystery to the world, he was a bad boy and girls loved him for the reason but his life was restricted to her only. He was an orphan who lived with his father's step-mother.

Arpita rai:
She was his passion, the first time he laid eyes on her, he knew that she is the only one for him. She had long jet black hair, dark brown eyes and a beautiful face. She was physically attractive for everyone around, but for him she was beautiful from inside. She belonged to a rich respectable family who had four children.

Ranvijay singh:
He was the son of arpita's father's best friend, who was in love with her since forever.

:Current character sketch:

Avdesh singh thakur:
She was gone, he knew it. But he lived for her, because of that one face he craved to see once again in his life. He devoted every single heartbeat to her.
The only person he was left with after she left him was his granny who was mentally unstable now.

Arpita ranvijay singh:
She was a mother of one beautiful daughter. Her life was colorless except for her daughter. The only thing that she never said to his husband was those three magical words.

Ranvijay singh:
Arpi's husband and a successful architect. He happens to be the ideal father figure, but he could never give her the love that she wanted.

Muskaan singh
:
Ranvijay-arpita daughter, she was an angel from heaven. She lightened the life of her mother by her sweet smile. She is now 3 years old.


:Same in both:

The Rai family:
Arpi's father: A successful businessman, who owned a bunch of industries.

Arpi's mother: She was usually found at fashion shows and kitty parties.

Chandani rai: Rai family's eldest daughter, who is well settled with her husband, having one son.

Jagat rai: Arpi's elder brother who has two twin daughters.

Chirag rai: He was the youngest one in the family, but the most clever one. He was the only well wisher of arpita from rai(s).

The rai family have little or no time for each other, everyone was stuck to their own personal affairs.

Others:
Tanmay chaudhary: Ranvijay's best friend.
Manjari: Arpita's best friend, she was arpita's only link to find out about him.


 
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Posted: 13 years ago

..::::::PLOT:::::..

-love??-
-sorrow??-
-rejection??-
-heartbroken??-
-grief??-
-lonliness??-
-tragedy??-
-miserable??-
-woefulness??-
-pained??-
-happily ever after??-
 
 
His passion for her never went away, he was always in love with her insanely but she married someone else. What was their destiny? Will they ever meet again?

First part: She-Got-Married
Second part: Part-Two
Edited by amnaM - 12 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

                             

                                                        For Your First FF!!!
 
                    
 
Looooooooooooooooooooooved The concept...πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
 
Waiting fr the next updateπŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
Edited by prash_t - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
*Edited*

My Baby πŸ€— πŸ€— πŸ€—

Congrats on your first FF πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘



you made me and ur mama sooo proud 😭 😭 😭

my baby is growing up 😭🀣

hmmm your prologue is very interesting...so we are gonna see betrayal,deception,love and trust in your FF and i know you will make Awesome FF 😳

Once Again Congratulations you are very precious for me and jess 😳


Edited by yoga23priya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hye dear,nice one
& Congo for ur 1st ff.
A very different story,looking forward to read more....

ByeEdited by Cuty16 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Congo Amna for u first FF !!!πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ₯³πŸ₯³





It is an awesome concept!!!πŸ‘πŸ‘

Different & tragic..but interesting...πŸ‘πŸΌ
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Looking forward to it!!πŸ˜ƒ
Edited by jes_jade - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey amna
 unique characters
and i know ke yeh bada mast ff hogaaaa

Edited by danno - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow, Amna, your FF is very intriguing with a really interesting plot layout. I am anxious to read your story. I am cheering for Arpi to divorce RV and pair up with Avi but it seems like it will take time for her to realize Avi's importance. Mama Rai is one fashion lover. Oh, I hope Bhauji is Avi's granny. We already witnessed how she looked as an old lady.
Edited by Sidda8 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Love you jess and prashu<3
Will update after 4th april, that's when my mocks are getting over..!
Edited by amnaM - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amna...



For ur first AvIta ff..

I loved the concept...

Send me a PM when you update next ok??