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Mayur~defination of love~New MN os on pg 69 (Page 8)

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Posted: 21 March 2011 at 5:14am | IP Logged
ridi ...sorry late comment
nice OS...yaar...i love ur writing....
u r a superb writer and this is all abt true love...
i loved itClapClapClap

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Posted: 21 March 2011 at 7:33am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ruchi89

ridi ...sorry late comment
nice OS...yaar...i love ur writing....
u r a superb writer and this is all abt true love...
i loved itClapClapClap


thnx dear........Tongue
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Posted: 21 March 2011 at 4:02pm | IP Logged
Nice OS RidiClap

short mein sweet si happy storyEmbarrassed

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Posted: 21 March 2011 at 11:16pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Payal-15

Nice OS RidiClap

short mein sweet si happy storyEmbarrassed


thnx dear..........Tongue

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Posted: 22 March 2011 at 12:31am | IP Logged
hey frnds i'm updating my os....actually first i thought that i finished my os in one part...then my dearest priya di (priya_27_23) nd my guidy ( cutiepie12) requested me to write the next part.......so here I'm to write the next part of my os........i hope u'll like it nd plz forgive me for my mistakes.........

                         
Said Unsaid


'Nupur'

 

'Mayank'

 

He takes my name in his heart but I can hear it. Because I know his heart only belongs to me. I can see an immense happiness on his face. He is continuously staring me. I go and seat beside his mother. She asks me some general question and I try to answer those questions. During this time I can feel his gaze on me. Suddenly my mom tells me to show him our house.

 

She takes my name in her heart but I can heart it. After all, her heart only belongs to me.She sits beside my mom and talks with her. I don't hear what they are talking. I'm only staring her. Suddenly her mom tells her to show me their house.

 

 

Nupur takes Mayank to show their house. They don't talk to each other. Actually they are so happy that they don't find the appropriate words to express their happiness. Nupur shows him whole house. Finally they reach the roof. The most beautiful place of this house and the most favorite place of Nupur. Today is full moon'..the roof is fulfilled with moonlit'.They both stare at moon. Suddenly Mayank starts talking'.

 

Mayank: unbelievable''

Nupur: hm'..

Mayank: kaise ho?

Nupur: kaise dhik rahi hoon''.

 

Mayank is smiling hearing her answer. He is expecting this type of answer'.so Nupurish.

 

Mayank: tum bilkul nehi badle'..

Nupur: nehi'aj se pehle badal gaya tha'..par aj phirse khudko dhoond payi..

 

They look at into each other eyes. They can feel the same love which they can feel five years back. They again stare at the moon. Suddenly Mayank hold Nupur's hand. Nupur hold his hand back. Their fingers are entangled with each other. A slight shiver is running down through their spines. They have been standing there for several moments. Suddenly they start talking concurrently'''

 

"I love you Nupur"

 

"I love you Mayank"

 

Finally they express their feelings in words. They said those unsaid words which they have been waiting to hear for many years. Today when they hear those unsaid words they feel they are complete'..today their heart are telling to each other'''.

 

              "WE ARE MEANT TO BE TOGETHER"




love

ridi




Edited by ridi_onasis - 22 March 2011 at 12:32am

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Posted: 22 March 2011 at 12:42am | IP Logged
vowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww totally out of world ridiHug

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Posted: 22 March 2011 at 12:42am | IP Logged
Ridi meri jaan this is great part...
Thank God priya di and cutiepie requested u 2nd part...
Now they are complete..
They are Really meant to be together...
very Nice yarr..
i am waiting 4 ur next OS...
Love u jaan

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Posted: 22 March 2011 at 12:45am | IP Logged
haayyyeee ridi...
lovely update...
loved it to the core....
aa gale lag jaa....Hug

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