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Posted: 27 April 2011 at 4:58pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Dr.BasketGupta

Tashuuu LOL

see i am editing on the same day itself ShockedLOL

okay amazinggg part! i love Riya Embarrassed

She was so adorable!! snooping around and hiding behind the curtain

BOTTLE CAP ROFLROFL
pleaseee tell me it's not what i am thinking it to be ROFLROFL

Alright well this was an amazing part!!! I wish there was more
like Riya actually not getting caught...I would have loved to read it
but hayyeee Riya would want to be loose her memory if she saw more of AR and their naughtinessROFL




Yay!!! :P thank u!! LOL Bottle cap as in a bottle cap from a bottle not what ur thinking dirty mind ROFLROFL Me 2 actually I was going to keep it as her not getting caught but then changed it at the last minute!! ROFLROFL yeah imagine if she saw more poor kid!!!ROFL but thank u for liking it pooja!!!

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Posted: 27 April 2011 at 5:08pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by shasha_kajen

OMG Tashuuu!!! it was so good dearClapClap nw truly i have become ur fanEmbarrassed
i jst luved reading it, i was nt at all distracted by anythng when i read it, i mean u have the talent to keep the reader involved in the story,, n i just felt i was present there when this happened, beautifully described each n everythingClap.. i must say this was something unique and interesting!!! well written girl!!, u r truly amazing Tashuuu <333333
I WILL BE WAITING FOR THE NEXT UPDATE, N UPDATE IT ASAPBig smile
thnxxx for the PM, Big smile
with luv -shasha-


Aww thank u shasha!! ur soo sweet!!!! I will update sooonnn!!!!!

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Posted: 27 April 2011 at 5:09pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by MaitreeluvKajen

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I owed you a Long Comment for seeing this SOOO Late !! Tashu,You're One Awesome Writer..Chupi Rustam! LOL I'll comment on ALL the parts!
 He he sorry even I didn't know :P
Part 1 : This was MAHA-CUTE! Firstly I loved the idea of Riddhima proposing..Its so Different,Yet so Cute<3 Loved their first meeting..LOL Armaan started flirtling from right then! So Armaan-ish! Then then SRK's Mujhse Shaadi karogi thought was Hilarious..She actually thought she was going to play SRK infront of her boyfriend! LOL !! Then her speech was SO Cute..Yeah I admit it was a Litle cheesy but it was true...From the AR sense! Loved this<3
 Aww glad u liked this part!! yeah her speech was a bit cheesy but that's all I could think of!! :P
Yeah Armaan is Armaan what can we do!!!!!! aww thanks yeah i wanted to make it a bit diff with ridzi proposing and not ammy!!
Part 2 : Loved this one too...Hugely Adorable<3 Heehheee Loved the bit where he lengthened the kiss and said," Now thats how you kiss someone" Soo ARMAAN ! Then the way she proposed and the line you added there about his expression like with a confused expression as if I had just explained a really complex math problem to him that was unsolvable.  Heeehheee!!! This was HiraliousROFL then that part when he comes back to say sorry! Awww...It took away my heart and led me to a Large Smile :) that part was adorable..Reminded me of the KaJen Cardboard/Silent Convo when Armaan decided to leave! Only this was Happier! Tee-hee! Cuteee!<3

LOL I love that line 2!! :P yeah I like the happy version of the board convo to!! but glad u liked this part 2!! even though i was not planning on it!!
 
Part 3 : This one's the BESSTT of all,I think.Riya is SOO cute,and naughty and mischevious! Armaan pe gayi hai !ROFL LOL LOL She isn't interested in anything except her Mom Dad's Love Life !! ROFL Ussko Love-letters mein interest hai ,Which is very good..Because She is SO like me! The letter was Uber-cute<3 Armaan is Sooo Adorable when he is missing his Basket LOL And Then Armaan's Diary Entry was Awww!! Heehhee the first meet Armaan was SCAARREDDD !! ROFLROFLROFL And Loved the way Miss Riya Mallick was hiding behind the curtain to save herself..AR convo made me smile ! I can imagine Dr.Mallick staring at his wifey! Sorry,Sexy Wifey! Wink Then the way Riya called her Dad 'Babe' was ROFL The look on Armaan's face must've been PRICELESS! Tee-hee! Socho agar Riya hadn't got caught Bechariii Uska Kya hotttaaa ROFL LOOVEEDD this Tashu<3
 
Next Time PM me! ILY <3
Love,
Maitree

LOL yup armaan pe gayi hai she had to learn from someone rite ;) ha ha yeah she is a very nosy child!! awww I am so glad u laughed and enjoyed ur self!! and I must say u massive comment made my day!! thank u maitree<333 yeah i was not planning on riya getting caught but then changed my mind at the last minute!! but god only knows what would have happened if she had seen more :P I will pm next time promise!! ILY2<33


Edited by CT247 - 27 April 2011 at 7:04pm
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Posted: 27 April 2011 at 6:56pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Artemis678

Great OS Tashu. Sorry I Cant Like Your Post.

Thank u nici!!!
Originally posted by gupta.aditi20



hey yaar pls continue with it...

itz awsome...

Thank u aditi!!
Originally posted by ozzy88

wow...
its gr8..
its awesome... DMG magic ...recreated..


Thank u sumita!!!

Originally posted by sanjna4

res
this is to remind me
dat i hav to read dis in morning
hope dat tashu dont mind
bt m feeking sleepy
:P
loveu tashu

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i love d way u right specially dat tym thing making things more realistic
and riya was so cute jst like armaan... and it ws so armaanish dat notty stuff just like a happy family and d way she intros dem mindblowing... i like d u write awesome
do write more

p.s- i nevr knew u r also dmg fanSmileHug

Thank u sana!! u r 2 idk that!! lol yeah it was very armaanish!!

Originally posted by Simmy003

Tashu!!! This was so cute!!! I <3 Riya!! She's adorable...tryna spy on her mom and dad lol. Armaan's love letter and his diary was too cute! Loved AR's first meeting and then loved how they didn't make breakfast for riya and were busy doing *ahem ahem* you know what ;) haha Love you Tashu!!

Simmy<333 thank u babe!!!! lol yeah AR were more interested in *ahem ahem* then making breakfast!!

Originally posted by NomaLuvsKSG

WOW Tashuuu :| i just caught up with your OS! LOL your writing is soo cutee! hehe <3 this is really good so far! keep it up hunn :)

Nomzie<333 awww thank u babe!!!!! glad u enjoyed it!!
Originally posted by rumi005



Wow Tashu...its amazing yaar...Riya is so adorable...

Thanks a lot for the pm.Hug

Thank u rumi!!! gald u enjoyed it!! yeah riya is adorable!! ur welcome!!

Originally posted by dashingtusha13

hey,
nice OS!
it was really cute!

Thank u!!

Originally posted by shaaz_91

hey
such a cute os
luvd it
tc
shaaz


Thank u shaaz!!!
Originally posted by BhartiKhushi909

its nice tashu
do write more

Thank u khushi!! I will!!

Originally posted by Aditiloveskajen

Lovely tashu<3
muwaaah continue and pm me<3

Thank u aditi<33 I will!!!!!!
Originally posted by _Meena_

nice work tashu keep it going!

Thank u meena!!!!!

Originally posted by .Mehak.

Hey tashu <333 long time since we havnt spoken anyway...
Great work and the child is a cutie... :)
Continue soon <333

Cutiepie<333 I know long time since we talked!! I will!!!!! and thankz for liking it!!

Originally posted by sejal719

cute part plz write more soon :D cant w8 for the next part lol


Thank u sejal!!


Will reply to u RES ppl laterz!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 07 May 2011 at 4:55pm | IP Logged
Oyeee sorry naan I m Emmy confused here so I can't read these os yet but if yu write a new one I'll surely m so sorry

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Posted: 07 May 2011 at 4:57pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Jen2

it's the Res time again :P

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Another awesome OS <3

I Just LOVED it!! I think the best OS i have read so far!! it's very cute and sweet <3

I loved the last part when ammy comes to ridz house and says all stuffDay Dreaming

and omg did i mention about muski?LOLL loved muski's part too...that was so cuteeLOL

beautiful writing tashu :D

that was P-E-R-F-E-C-T.

Keep writing more...would love to read more from you!!


Aww thank u jenzie<333 glad u liked it!! Lol I borrowed the card thing from dmg but made it happiees!! he he yup typical muski!! eee Madhuri's PERFECT Shocked thank u sooo much!!!!!Hug


@jaan-it's okies :)


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Posted: 08 May 2011 at 10:18am | IP Logged
Yello I'm back to annoy u :| thank you soo much for liking my last OS it means a lot!! Here is a new one for u and I hope u enjoy it!!
Note: If u reserve a spot plz edit it so I don't have to come after u :| and to those of u who still need to un reserve ur posts let me know when u do cause I really want to read them :). and I replied on the previous page and the index has been updated it's on page 1 :D

Again u can picture Kash,Kasu or Kajen whoever u prefer

Happy Reading
!! oh and Happies Mothers Day To All The Mommies :)




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Posted: 08 May 2011 at 10:46am | IP Logged

Old Habits Are Hard To Break :P

R: Where is she!!!! Muski!!!!!!!!!!! I can't wait to show her my new object of affection!!! Hurry up muski!!!!!!!!

 

*DING DONG*

 

R: Finally!!!!!!!

 

R: MUSKI!!!!!!

 

M: RI...  Where are u dragging me!!!!!!

 

R: U will see!!!!!

M: What's up with you??? u call me all of a sudden and tell me to come over ASAP cause u have to show me something very important but didn't say what??? u know I was supposed to meet Rahul in like 10 minz at the movies!!!

R: He he he I know I did and I'm not sorry and he can wait it's just a movie, and besides u went to a movie with him last week :P

M: Yeah ur rite but' Oh well I can go again!!!

 

R: Okie Okie this will only take 5 minz then u can leave to see ur darling boyfriend'.

 

M: SEXY!!!!!!

 

R: Oh sorry I mean ur SEXY boyfriend happy!!

 

M: Yes very much!! Big smile

 

M: Okay now will u plz tell me what u called me all the way here to SEE??????

 

R: Oh yeah okay look out the window!!

 

M: What??? Why??

 

R: Just do it!!!

 

M: Okay this better be good!!

 

R: Oh it will be!!

 

M: I don't see anything Ridzi all I see are kids playing, a dog running around and cars going back and fourth!! Wait... does this have anything to do with ur HABIT???

 

 

R: Ummm No...

 

M: Ridzi!!!!!!!!

 

R: Okie it does I admit it!!

 

M: OH GOD!!!!!!! Here we go again!!!!! Ridzi how many times have I told u...

 

RM: NEVER STARE AT THINGS THAT ARE OUTSIDE MY/YOUR WINDOW!!!!!

 

R: I know Muski!!!!

 

M: Then why?????

 

R: I'm sorry I had too!!

 

M: What do u mean u HAD to!!

 

R: I mean it's all HIS fault!!!!

 

M: Who is HE????

 

R: My neighbor!!  

 

M: Ur neighbor??? U mean that old man who smells like rotten eggs with the dog that keeps braking at me!! U want to stare at him!!!!! OMG RIDZI!!!!!!Shocked

 

R: Muski calm down it's not him!!! And anyways he moved!!!

 

M: Oh okay thank god!! Then who is this new neighbor of urs!!

 

R: It's this REALLY REALLY REALLY HOT GUY!!!!!!!!! EEE!!!!!!!

 

M: OMG REALLY!!!! AHHH!!!!! I want to seee!!!!!!!

 

R: Then look out the window!!!

 

M: For how long!!!!

 

R: He should be here any minute now!!

 

M: Okay here goes I'm looking out ur window'.

 

20 minz later''''.

 

M: RIDZIII!!!!!!!!!!!!! I have been looking out of ur window for the past 20 minz and there is no sign of ur REALLY REALLY REALLY HOT GUY!!!! I'm tired now and I am leaving!!!!! Good bye!!!!!!!

 

R: No Muski he will be here any minute I swear!!!!!

 

M: U have been saying that for the past 10 minz "I swear he's going to be here any minute"' It's been 20 minz and he is still not here!! I'm going GOODBYE!!!!!!

 

R: Nooo Muski Wait!!!! Look He's here!!!!!!!

 

M: Yeah rite!!!!

 

R: No I'm serious he is really here!!!!! look!!!!!

 

M: Okay... O.M.G!!!!!!!! Shocked HOW HOT IS HE!!!!!!!!!!

 

R: I KNOW!!!!!!

 

M: No matter u can't stop staring!!!!!

 

R: Exactly now do u understand why I HAD TO!!!!!!

 

M: Yes I do!! So what's his name, age, profession, have u spoken to him!! TELL ME EVERYTHING!!!!!!!!

 

R: Okay Okay one question at a time...His name is Armaan Mallik He's 25 years old He's a doctor like us and no I have not spoken to him yet...

 

M: WHAT!! U haven't spoken to him yet why???

 

R: I don't know Muski every time I get the courage to go and talk to him I always end up backing out thinking what am I going to say to him and even if I do I'm just going to end up saying something stupid!!!!!!

 

M: Oh come on Ridzi nothing will happen!! I'll help u!!

 

R: U will???

 

M: Of course I will!!! I mean u helped me with Rahul so it's the least I can do!!

 

R: Awww Muski ur the best!!!! ILY!!!!!!!

 

M: Aww ILY2 Ridzi!!!!

 

R: Okay so what do we do first!!!!

 

M: First we have to get him to come over!!!!

 

R: What no!!!!!!!

 

M: YES!!!!!

 

R: NO!!!!!

 

M: Ridzi do u like him or not!!!!!

 

R: Yes...

 

M: Then...

 

R: Okay fine but how??

 

M: Ummm Oh I know wait!!!

 

M: HELLO U OVER THERE IN THE WINDOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

R: Muski what are u doing stop yelling out the window!!!!!

 

M: Shhh Ridzi just wait!!!!!

 

M: YOU IN THE BLACK TOWEL!!!!!!!!!!

 

A: WTH?????????

 

M: OVER HERE!!!!!!!!

 

A: OH U!! WHAT CAN I DO FOR U!!!!!!!!!

 

M: MY FRIEND HERE THINKS UR HOT!!!!!!!

 

A: WHAT?????!!!!!!

 

M: YEAH SHE THINKS YOU'RE HOT AND WANTS TO GET TO KNOW U!!!!!!!

 

A: EXCUSE ME!!!!!

 

M: OH I'M SORRY WAIT!! ...Ridzi come here!!

 

R: R U CRAZY NO!!!!!!

 

M: I'm not crazy now come here'''

 

R: Owww Muski did u have to pull my arm that hard!!!!

 

M: Oh shut up ur new soon to be boyfriend is a doctor I'm sure he can make u all better!! Now look at him!!

 

R: No I'm going!!!!!

 

M: Ridzi don't make me!!!!!

 

R: Make u what???

 

M: Don't make me call NIKI!!!!!!!!

 

R: U Wouldn't!!!!!!!

 

M: I will and u know her she will tell EVERYONE!!!!!!

 

R: Okay Okay!!

 

M: Good gurl!! Now say Hi!!

 

R: Hi!!

 

M: Not. To. Me. To. Him.!!

 

R: Oh rite okay here I go ahem... HI!!!

 

A: HI!!

 

R: OMG HE SAID HI TO ME and he's only wearing a towel haayeee!!!!!!!

 

M:  I know now snap out of it and keep talking!!!!

 

R: Rite but what should I say???

 

M: How about Hru??

 

R: Rite...HRU???????

 

A: I'M FINE HRU??

 

R: He's asking me how I am??? How am I??

 

M: Ur fine!!!

 

R: I'M FINE!!!!!

 

A: THAT'S GOOD!!!! WHAT'S UR NAME!!!!!

 

R: He's asking me what my name is??? What's my name???

 

M: Riddhima Shashank Gupta!!!!

 

R: RIDDHIMA SHASHANK GUPTA!!!!!

 

A: NICE TO MEET U RIDDHIMA SHASHANK GUPTA!!!! I'M ARMAAN MALLIK!!!!!!

 

R: He's telling me his name!!!!!

 

M: Tell him that's a very nice name!!

 

R: THAT'S A VERY NICE NAME!!!!!!

 

A: THANK U!!!!! WHAT'S UR FRIENDS NAME!!!!!

 

R: He wants to know what my friends name is?????

 

M: Oye he wants to know MY name!!!!!

 

R: Oh rite...HER NAME IS MUSKAAN!!!!!!!!

 

A: TELL HER SHE IS VERY PRETTY!!!!!

 

R: He said ur really pretty'

 

M: Awww tell him thank u and that he is very sweet!!

 

R: SHE SAYS THANK U AND THAT UR VERY SWEET!!!!

 

A: TELL HER UR WELCOME!!!!

 

R: He say's ur welcome!!

 

M: Now ask him to come over!!

 

R: Fine but I need a reason first????

 

M: Oh yeah ummm... How about this'tell him that I need help with Rahul!!

 

R: That could work but what kind of help do u need with Rahul???

 

M: Umm oh tell him that Rahul's b-day is coming up and I need suggestions from a guy on what to buy him!!

 

R: Muski that's brilliant!!

 

M: I knowWink now tell him!!!

 

R: Okay...ARMAAN!!!!!!!!!

 

A: YES!!!!!

 

R: CAN U COME OVER PLZ!!!!!!

 

A: NOW!!! WHY??????

 

R: MUSKI NEEDS UR HELP!!!!!

 

A: MY HELP??? WITH WHAT????

 

R: SEE HER BOYFRIEND RAHUL'S B-DAY IS COMING UP AND SHE NEEDS A GUY'S OPINION ON WHAT TO BUY HIM!!!!!! SO CAN U????? (plz say yes plz say yes!!!)

 

A: SURE I CAN!!!!!! LET ME JUST CHANGE!!!!!! I'LL BE OVER IN 5 MINZ!!!!!

 

R: YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I MEAN OKAY!!!!!!!!!

 

R: AHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!! MUSKI HE'S COMING OVER!!!!!!! *JUMPING UP AND DOWN*

 

M: AHHH I'M SOO HAPPY 4 U!!!!!!!!!!!! *JUMPING UP AND DOWN*

 

R: OMG!!!!!

 

M: What???

 

R: He's coming over in 5 minz and I'm a flippin mess!!!!!!!!

 

M: Okay calm down!! Now quickly go and fix ur self while I keep him company!! Okay now GO!!!!!!!

 

R: Okay good idea I'm going!!

 

*DING DONG*

 

R: OMG HE'S HERE!!!!!!!!!

 

M: I'll get the door u go and change...

 

R: Okay!!!

 

M: Hey Armaan welcome come in...

 

A: Hey Muskaan and thanks!!

 

M: Actually everyone calls me Muski so u can 2!!

 

A: Okay Muski it is!!

 

M: Come have a seat Ridzi will be out in a few minz!!

 

A: Ridzi???

 

M: Oh that's Riddhima's nickname!!

 

A: Ahh that's cute I like it!!

 

M: Can I get u anything to eat or drink??

 

A: No I'm fine thank u... soo Riddhima was saying u needed some help??

 

M: Oh yeah see my boyfriend Rahul's b-day is coming up and I needed some help in deciding what to get him and for that I needed a guy to help me so'

 

A: Okay well what does he like???

 

M: He likes... Sports, Video Games, Cars, Books, Music, T.V., ME, etc'.

 

A: Well that's all very nice but why don't u take him on a romantic dinner on the beach with a tent and food and everything u know.

 

M: U know what that sounds perfect!!!! OMG RIDZI IS GOING TO BE SOOO LUCKY!!!!!!

 

A: Huh?? What do u mean Ridzi is going to be soo lucky??

 

M: Ooopsss... I mean nothing!!!!!!

 

A: No something is up and I want to know what???

 

M: I can't tell u!!

 

A: Muskaan!!!

 

M: Ridzi will tell u!!  Bye!!!!!

 

A: Muskaan I. Want. To. Know.

 

M: Okay fine...See Ridzi has this bad habit of staring at things that are outside her window which she calls "HER OBJECT OF AFFECTION" sometimes it's a bird, sometimes it's a flower, sometimes it's a car. But this time her OBJECT OF AFFECTION is...

 

A: Is...

 

M: Is well... U!!!!

 

A: ME!!!!!

 

M: Yeah U!!!!

 

A: U mean... She has been staring at me through the window????

 

M: Yes...She has...Ouch

 

A: OMG!!!!!

 

M: I'm sorry I've told her so many times to stop but she never listens to me, everyone has tried even her parents but she still won't!!

 

A: HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA!!!!!!!!!!!

 

M: Why are u laughing this is serious!!!!!!

 

A: I'm laughing because I've been doing the same thing!!!! :P

 

R: WHAT!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

AM: RIDZI/RIDDHIMA!!!!!!

 

R: I CAN'T BELIEVE U!! MUSKI U TOLD HIM!!!!!!!!

 

M: I'm sorry Ridzi I had to he made me!!

 

R: AND U GAVE IN!!!!!!

 

M: Yeah... I'm sorry Unhappy

 

A: Riddhima...

 

R: WHAT!!! GO HEAD WHY DID U STOP LAUGHING KEEP GOING!!!!! I KNOW I'M AN IDIOT AND STUPID AND A DUFFER AND A MORON AND...

 

A: The most beautiful woman that I have ever seen in my life who I would like to get to know more if she says's yes..???

 

R: HUH???????? Are u asking me out???

 

A: Yes Basket I am!! So...YES OR NO'???

 

R: Basket???

 

A: Yes Basket as in U cause ur a BASKET CASE!!!!!

 

R: BASKET CASE!!!!! I'M NOT A BASKET CASE!!!!!!

 

A: Yes u are cause u have been staring at me through the window for god knows how many days now and didn't even have the guts to come up to me and talk so yes ur a BASKET CASE!!

 

R: I... U... Urgghhh!!! Fine ur rite I'm a Basket Case I'm sorry... Unhappy

 

A: Why are u saying sorry I'm actually very excited to know that I have my very own stalker Wink

 

R: WHAT!!!!

 

A: God Basket just answer the question will u go out with me yes or no!!

 

M: JUST SAY YES WOMAN!!!!!!!!

 

R: Uff YES!!!!!!!

 

M: THANK GOD!!!!!!

 

A: Good I'll pick u up at 8:00 be ready..  I g2g it was nice meeting u Muski!!

 

M: Bye Armaan and same here it was nice meeting u 2!!

 

A: Bye Basket Wink

 

R: Bye Armaan...

 

A: Oh and btw u looked really sexy that day in the red dress Wink...

 

R: Thank... U...

 

A: Bye Ladies!!!!!

 

RM: AHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

R: OMG I can't believe this is happening!!!!!!!

 

M: I know neither can I!!!!!!

 

R: Okay I only have 5 hrs to get ready!! What am I going to wear, how should I do my hair, what shoes should I wear!!!!!

 

M: Oye calm down woman!! I'll help u let's go!!!!!

 

8:00pm

 

*DING DONG*

 

R:OMG OMG OMG He's here!!!!!!!!

 

M: Would u calm down plz!! Wait here I'll get the door!!

 

M: Hey A...RAHUL???????? What are u doing here?????

 

Ra: I'm here because I have been trying to call u for the past 3 hours from the movie theater where we were supposed to see a movie together but u never showed up nor did u answer my calls so I had to come here!!!!!!

 

M: Ohhh I'm sooo sorryyy!!!!!!!!!! It's all Ridzi's fault!!

 

Ra: Ridzi what did she do???

 

M: One word "HABIT"

Ra: OH GOD!!!!! not again!!!!!!!

 

M: Yes AGAIN!!!!!

Ra: What is it this time??

 

M: Armaan!!

 

Ra: Armaan who's Armaan???

 

A: Me!!!!

 

RaM: OHHH DON'T DO THAT!!!!!

 

A: Do what??

 

RaM: SCARE THE CRAP OUT OF PPL!!!!!!

 

A: Oh sorry didn't mean to!!

 

Ra: It's okay dude anywayz I'm Rahul Grewal.

 

A: Nice to meet u Rahul I'm Armaan Mallik.

 

Ra: Oh so ur the new "OBJECT OF AFFECTION"

 

A: Yeah I am.. Oh ur Rahul Muski's boyfriend!!

 

Ra: Yup I am!!

 

M: Okay can we plz sit down now or do u want to continue this convo at the door???

 

RaA: No we can sit!!!

 

M: Good cause my feet hurt!!!

 

A: So where's Basket I mean Riddhima??

 

M: She's in her room let me just go get her!!

 

A: Sure.

 

*Knock Knock*

 

R: Come in!!

M: Wooohooo someone is looking SEXY<333333

 

R: Muski stop!!

 

M: What stop I'm telling u that u look sexy and instead of saying thank u ur telling me to stop!! Oh I get it u would rather hear ARMAAN Wink say it to u rather then me hold on I'll just go get him...

 

R: NO MUSKI PLZ DON'T GET HIM!!!!!!!

 

M: Okay I was just joking!! Anywayz he's here and waiting for u so I came to get u!!

 

R: Oh okay...  let's go!!

 

~4 Years Later~

 

R: Mmm stop!!!!

 

R: I'm trying to stare...

 

R: Baby stop ur ruining my concentration!!!!!

 

A: How am I ruining ur concentration, I'm just standing here holding u in my arms and kissing ur neck...

 

R: Of course u are, everytime u kiss me I move.. now will u plz stop!!!

 

A: No!!

 

R: Why??

 

A: Because U have been staring at that new guy who moved next door for the past 45 minz and ur totally ignoring me Unhappy

 

R: Awww I'm sorry Armaan I didn't mean to ignore you.

 

A: It's okay I know how can u ignore UR HOT HUBBY Wink

 

R: Ur rite how can I ignore my hot hubby and u know what I've had enough of staring at the new neighbor.. I think I'll stare at my new OBJECT OF AFFECTION!!

 

A: Thank...U,,,,, WHAT!!!!! WHAT IS IT THIS TIME!!!!!!!!

 

R: Well it's this REALLY REALLY RELLY HOT and SEXY guy!!!

 

A: Who is he?? What's his name?? Where does he live???

 

R: Well he's married to me, his name is ARMAAN and he lives with me and from the look on his face I'm a gonerrr...

 

A: Of course u are...ur soo goneee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

R: Owww did u have to drop me on the bed that hard!!!!!

 

A: Sorry Unhappy

 

R: It's okay!!

 

A: U know who would have ever thought that ur silly habit would be the reason for us meeting, falling in love and getting married and that to for 4 beautiful years and I hope u never stop with it!!!

 

R: Of course I'm not going to stop...U know what they say "OLD HABITS ARE HARD TO BREAK" Tongue

 THE END Smile

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