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New FF: Still You. Part 3/Page 6 (Page 4)

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Posted: 18 March 2011 at 3:55pm | IP Logged
Please continue.. It's really really good

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Posted: 18 March 2011 at 8:36pm | IP Logged
loved it....waiting for the next update

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Posted: 18 March 2011 at 9:22pm | IP Logged
Yuks  you are so right - But I think ahem is on the rag all the time - even on the show.   Love chapter 1 it just flowed into chapter 2 - what great writing .   But you stopped  - I wanted to read moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.   Update update

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Posted: 19 March 2011 at 1:57am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mridhu


Aham smiled, he adored the kid. She was a beautiful baby. Everyone at home had been elated when Aabha Modi was born ' obviously!  

Baa had been so happy to see the next generation. Kaka and Kaki ' he'd never seen Kaka and Kaki so happy earlier, neither had he seen them behave like children themselves, which they did when they were around the baby.

Jigar, Aham chuckled as he thought of Jigar, his younger brother had been ecstatic. And that would be the understatement of the century.

And papa and mom ' they'd been '

Don't go there Aham

He pursed his lips together, enough of reminiscing - he needed to shut out everything. 


now that line caught my attention...ahem describes everyone's feelings in the house towards the baby...but what stops him when it comes 2 koki n parag ?? could it be possible that koki n parag are sad that they could not be grandparents yet?? i'll try 2 wait patiently for the next part...

a lovely update mridhu....good flow in the story...keep us entertainedSmile


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Posted: 19 March 2011 at 5:08am | IP Logged
fantastic update.. eager to know why gopi is goin to MM.???

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Posted: 19 March 2011 at 7:01am | IP Logged
Oh! beautiful mridhu! Loved both the updates. Looking forward to more.

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Posted: 21 March 2011 at 12:55pm | IP Logged
@ Yuks - Thank you so much, babe - Hormonal Woman?! Like I told you, this was exactly what that kept me from writing the FF - I did not want to go too much off character, that the character is no longer recognizable!! But you said Aham is also like this in the show - I'm gonna take your word for it, cause sometimes I just do not understand the dude! 

Thanks for reading and commenting

@ Shilpa - Thanks Shilpa - I was hoping the baby moment will bring about some tenderness, hope the required effect was projected

@ Suk - Thanks, but my name is Mridhu! Smile

@ Rubina - Thank you for reading

@ FsgtsaraKhan - Thanks a lot for your kind words

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please update soon.

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