Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee


Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee

-truly magical- maaneet ff THREAD 17 (Page 97)

Lakshmi86 Goldie

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Posted: 21 March 2011 at 10:32pm | IP Logged


amazing update!!!!!!!!!
Geet was so strong and stubborn.........
I wonder if Geet got to get some suspect crazy like Geet herself, then how she would have made to take out the details from that person......
hmmmm sochne waali baat hai.....hai na........
Well, the most amazing part of this update was after so long time, Maan is actually using brain, i think this was due to hit on his head,
he could realise all the facts without even proper discussion.........bhai wah............we should celebrate the intelligence and braveness of Maan...........
But I loved the action...........hey you wrote the scene very well.......amazing...........
And kiss............i dont want to say it, but kya kare Geet deserves care n happiness...........and she only wants it from that ullu Maan..........
So 151th episode mein, kya Maan yeh jaan payega ki MK ussi ki beti hai.............
hmmmm i think I love you is said to Maan by MK.
coz Maaneet will never tell that to each other...............

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heermeher IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 21 March 2011 at 10:40pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by PrithviSanyo1

Mini Tm:-


Next Part:-

Both went to hospital and meet with doctor .Dcotor check mk and said thisis just viral fever, she need to take rest. No ice cream, cold drinks and gives some mdcne for mk.

Mk is just sit in her dadda's lap and placed her head on his shoulder.

Geet:- doctor, what about her food in break fast, lunch and dinner, cause yesterday she puke up full food and don't want  to eat anything.

Doctor:- well it's happen in fever, just give her simple food, soup, plain rice and with simple curry, no spicy things for her now and make her eat horlicks and buiscuits .

Geet nodded in  yes.

Then they take leaves from there.

In the car, geet said maan mujhe jara head quarter pe chor dijiye.

Maan nodded but mk who is sitting in geet's lap said no.

Both maaneet look at her and geet said kya hua/

Mk:- a.ap.'and hugged geet.

Geet look at maan then maan said darling, look at me, aapke mom uha jake kuhc le aayenge aapke liye. Isliye toh ja rehe hain, aur aap aapne dadda ke sath nehi rehena chathe ho kya.

Mk looks at geet then to maan said paa.r..

Geet kissed her cheeks and said mein jaldi aaungi paaka promise.

Mk twisted her lips like geet done in past and said uummmm.

Maaneet look at mk then at each other.

After geet reached head quarters. Maan try to cheer mk up.



At the evening, mk wake up from her sleep and found her dadda doing some work in laptop. And she just goes close to her and try to look at him but she remembered her mama's word when her dadda doing work don't disturb him.

She wants to pull his sleves but sat there but withing a min maan noticed her and said how r u sweet heart? And then take her in his lap .

Mk still feel sad and said aap ' ..ho. wo..rk'na''

Maan looks at mk with confusion when mk said mama dis..turb u .. when u do 'work'

Maan smiles and remember how he scold geet in past but that tiem geet just want to spend some time with him..

Maan said no dear, actually m doing this , see it then he turn the laptop towards mk and then mk noticed this and said mama'.

Maan smiled and said yes ur mama, look how beautiful she is?

Mk clapped and her face fell and she  said yes then said

 Maan also noticed it and said hmmm, ok me and u'll be take care of ur mama.

Mk smiles and nodded her head then maan call nanny to bring horlick and some buiscuits for mk .

After feeding mk , maan called geet is standing behind them and said maan, m inside the house.

Maan turns and see her.he smiles and said good, now fresh hoke jaldi aajao.

Geet nodded but before leaving she asked mk how ru dear?

Mk smiles and kissed geet's cheek and said good. Aa..p ja..ldi 'se ..ha

Geet surprised and look at maan who smirked and said jaan come soon.

Geet nodded and left from  there and maangive mdcne to mk and then  check her temperature which is below 100now.still maan carried her and take her in study toom and instructed nanny to call geet to here.




After changing the dress , geet went to down stairs when nanny told her maan's instruction.

Geet shocked to hear it but goes to meet maan in study.

Geet enter the study and see mk is sleeping in single bed with a pink teddy bear.

Geet smiles then think iye bed toh pehele iha nehi tha.

Maan :- tumahre jaane ke baad meine iye bed iha lagai, karne ko toh tab zindegi mein kuch tha hi nehi ,sirf tumhe dhoond na, tumhara iyaad mein rehena aur kaam, , so iha hi so jata tha .

Geet looks at him when maan said but oh sajaa bhi kaam hain tumhe  khone ka dard se, then maan held her hand and said  tumhe jo dard mein dia usse kam mere saaja hain geet, aur tum toh mujhe saaja dene se rehe, dekho abhi gussa ho rehe ho saaja ke naam se, then he hold her face in between his plams and said kyuon geet itna paayar karte ho , kyuon khud ko saaja de rehe ho jab bhi iye saaja toh mujhe pana chaiye.

Suddenly geet cover mouth by her palm and said maan .

Maan:- geet,pls aapne aapko aur dard maat do, don't u know after see u like this it's break  my hearts into million pieces. Geet, I want to see u happy, pls geet, aapne maan ki baat bol do.

Geet just stood there .maan left her and turns and see the pics of geet in the wall , maan:- oh dekho mere geet toh uha hain , jo mujhse gussa karta haq se, naraj hota haq se, khush hota mujhse, rota mere seene mein saar rakh ke, oh dekho kaise haas raha hain bilkul bacchi ajise, oh dekho kaise ro raha hain bilkul bacchi .

Maan turns and hold geet's hand and said pls give me geet, my old geet, my bubbly geet who can fight with me , angry on me, held her head in my chest and cry there , laugh there, tell her every tiny things . pls geet, give me that geet again.

I beg u.

Here geet can't take it any more and just hugged him and said maan, pls''''

Both hugged each other and stood there for some time .

After some time maan sat on the floor when geet placed her head on his shoulder and said maan , meine aapko chor ke kahi nehi jana chathi thi, par kya akrti kisse bolti ,koi nehi janta tha humara shaadi ke baarein  mein aur tab mein pregnant thi,

Maan shocked and surprised and then said it means  that time u came there and mujhe bolne aayi mk ke baarein mein.

Geet nodded when maan said aur meien aapne hathon aapne khihsiya ko dur kar dia and try to hit his hand when geet caught it and said maan pls.

Maan :- tum itni sab ke baad bhi aksie itni shant rehe sakte ho, y geet, y punish me, I'm failed as husband , as father, but again geet closed his mouth and said shhh, aap bahut acche pati ho, abhut aache dadda ho, pata hain ek din baramulla mein , mein na gusse mein mk ko kehe dia aap baap beti bilkul same ho, gussa jaise nose pe baithe reehte hain  aur mk in anger said hmm, mein aapni dadda ke beti hoon, uska gusse oh bilkul aapki tarah hain maan.

Maan weakly smiles and said ummm, oh hum dono ka beti hain, gussa toh hum dono ki tarah hain.

Then after some moments of silence maan asked geet hwo she handle  little mk when she feared about little baby.

Geet smiles  and said

After mk's birth nurse give her to me and I just wonder to see her there, she is replica of ur maan, I just kissed her and want to tell u , I just want to give u , ur daughter, ur dream. But I' anyway, then nurse and doctor helped me about feeding, bathing, changing cloths of mk, first I feared  and cried there then I loved ot do them .I just want to do everything for mk.

Maan :- those things , I promised u help u but'

Geet:- maan, u know  when mk is 4yr old, one day she is crying lots  kisibhi tarah nehi khaiyegi nehi baar bolne par bhi nehi, danta phir bhi nehi then when I give her ur pics ,she just start to eat her fact every lunch and dinner and bed story is full of ur story, our frist meeting, our every moments.I shared our life with her maan.

Maan heard and feel proud of geet , cause the way she handle everything and feel sad for them cause they want to be with him but.. maan feel angry on himself for his anger , he almost ruined everything.

Then maan noticed geet is smiling little and some sperk on her eyes when she told about this.she is so lost in there then suddenly tears falls from her eyes and she said but maan , mk missed u there.I try my level best to give ur love but still she missed u.

Maan just hugged her tightly and said I'm sorry geet, I'm really sorry from now ,I'll be with u and our daughter .

That was really magicall so finally geet opened up

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heermeher IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 21 March 2011 at 10:41pm | IP Logged
Muskan intial part was quite tensed but the kissed made it all hope that precap maan says to geet 

But forgot to add Finally Maan behave like a maan and saved his lady luv.  Dont worry One i luv u will heal geet's wound but i want to see maan's face when he comes to know GK is none other then Geet Khurana the DCP delhi.

Edited by heermeher - 21 March 2011 at 11:41pm

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Posted: 21 March 2011 at 11:07pm | IP Logged
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viny_queen IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 21 March 2011 at 11:46pm | IP Logged
ASAP plz update its really imteresting

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teju2292 Goldie

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Posted: 21 March 2011 at 11:49pm | IP Logged
waiting for ur update eagerly..

plz update soon....SmileSmileSmileSmileSmileStar

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deejagi IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 21 March 2011 at 11:58pm | IP Logged
Hi Muskan, you have stollen my heart with that beautiful, banging update. Please return that fast with an awesum update.
Please dear...................................

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gunjar Goldie

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Posted: 22 March 2011 at 12:03am | IP Logged
Muskaan really love u..................
soooooooooooo much.................
there are no words to discribe about u
really lovely.............
waiting for ur next update
soon.......... plssssssssssss..................

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