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ff: love can change ur world(chapter- 14) (Page 22)

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Posted: 23 March 2011 at 8:38am | IP Logged
wow!!!!!!!!! simply superb yaar Clap i wanna give u a big Hug for not showing abhay rude...he's such a sweetheart...i love him & now you too as you have shown chand,haseena also nice Smile and yaar how can u write the dialogues of misha so perfectly?its like anisha(perfect blend of anvesha from remix and misha from pkyek) but please yaar it wud be perfect if d guy wud be named yuvi,bt abhi is also a nice name as my best friend is also abhishek and he's also the same LOL anyhow,this is just superb but i m wondering who did black magic on piya?and u know i think i know who the kunwars are Wink but waiting eagerly for your update...so pretty please update it asap Smile 
 
p.s. -> I read the 3rd & 4th episode together that is why giving their comments also together

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Posted: 23 March 2011 at 9:45am | IP Logged
awwwsome update
sorry the like butten is not workingConfused
abhay-pia part was aborable
mish-abhi omg omgLOL
cont soon
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Posted: 23 March 2011 at 12:20pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Gals1110

Hey Dear Firstly M Sorry.. D reason for dat is.. I had read ur update last night bt was not able 2 comment as I was in a bit hurry..
Cuming back 2 ur updt it was Mindblowing.. D way u hav described Abhay's Concern towards Piya n how he was not able 2 C her loneliness was gr8.. Again how he made her feel gud in d last 15 mins of her Bday was soooo sweettt... I think d ring whch he gav her was 2 protect her..
Misha-Abhi part was too rocking.. Gud entry wit Kabir.. Story is getting more intresting wit d Dark Magic Shield n Prophecy.. Whoz Neha..?? Let it b a suspense bt reveal it soon.. Continue soon.. Thanx for d pm.. lol..

hey its k u dont need to feel sorry, u liked it and last left d comment dat matters
thanx alot likin different abhay dat is nt like show wala abhay
ya in next update u will no more about d ring and it will protect her from dark magic
in next update u will meet another chatacter neha 
i jst hope u people like her
cz no 1 has seen her face
she is all new character
and thanx alot 4 likin itBig smile
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Posted: 23 March 2011 at 12:21pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by beb018

hey
it was awsum update looking forward to da precapSmile



hey thanx alot 4 likin it
and i will try to update soon
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Posted: 23 March 2011 at 12:28pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Coeur2PsychoFMS

Darling mujhe pehle parne toh do... roko na roko na mujhe thora waqt toh do... 
Sorry yaar yesterday par nahi saki... saka... Ermm sorry confused... LOL

Par liya... 
Waouhhhh partner kya chapter hai Clap loved it... 

Sooo dreamy the Abhiya scene Day DreamingDay DreamingDay Dreaming
Abhay so sweet... why is he not so romantic in PKYEK... CV's and Ekta ji sikhiye Sanju baby se... 
Ohhh gooooooooood Abhay maar dala LOL

Misha ROFL tussi great ho 
OMG loved her and Abhi bhi kuch kam nahi hai... LOL

Kabir is Abhi's bro Shocked Pia and Kabir so cute together... Smile
Lekin Abhay Cry bechara.... hayyyyyyyyyyyyye Cry so sad the last part. 

Sanjna awesome update... eagerly waiting for the next chapter... 

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k u need hindi classes from meTongue it is saki nt saka
thanku yr 4 comparing me to ek and her chamcheLOL
dnt worry abt kabir
dis jealousy thing will make dem realise what they feel foe each other
thanx alot 4 likin itBig smile
and i will try to update soon
and tumhein aaj yahaan se abhiya ka dose mil gya kya
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Posted: 23 March 2011 at 1:06pm | IP Logged
its from begining ryt
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Posted: 23 March 2011 at 1:08pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by mangona

its from begining ryt
ya it is frm beg strt reading from frst page
and dere u will get all links

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