ff: love can change ur world(chapter- 14) - Page 28

Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by dishu8


i m still not sure if massi is good or bad. ๐Ÿ˜•

let it be suspense u will get to knw in next update๐Ÿ˜Š
Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by PKYEK-Abhiya


Wouaouuuuu ๐Ÿคข I'm faint yaaar !!
Kya chapter hai i loved it and it's hilarious also  ๐Ÿ˜
Well done Sanjna ๐Ÿ‘

hey dont get faint den who will read next update๐Ÿ˜‰

and thax alot 4 likin it๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by heena_mehta


just a superb duperb part

hey dear
i m gng out  f station for nxt 5 days...
i wl come n post ma comments for ur nxt update!!

for this one.....just awesome
u write beautifully!!

luv
heena!1


thanx alot heena
and dere is no prob 
read according to ur convenience๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by missglam


hey...sorry for late reply...
anyways...the update was awesome lyk always๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ..but the abhiya moments at the lake were the HIGHLIGHTS๐Ÿ˜...plz update next part ASAP...coz i'm dying to know that to whom piya resembles from abhay's past...continue soon

hey thanx  alot........... and next part is updated๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Edited by sanjna4 - 13 years ago
Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by mansim


hey that was a very good update๐Ÿ‘

abhay and piya as usual were awesome๐Ÿ˜ณ 

and loved misha for her brains very nice๐Ÿ˜†

misha and abhi in a room for three hours OMG๐Ÿ˜ฒ

thanks for the pm๐Ÿ˜Š

update soon๐Ÿ˜‰



hey thanx alot misha and abhi are goin to rock in dat room๐Ÿ˜‰
Edited by sanjna4 - 13 years ago
Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by aiyesha


hey i like your ff can u pls pm me


ya sure i will and thanx 4 likin๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Edited by sanjna4 - 13 years ago
Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by 00123trisha


very nice sana
wel done๐Ÿ‘
cont soon

thanx alot trish๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Edited by sanjna4 - 13 years ago
Posted: 13 years ago

Chapter-7

This update is dedicated to aprajeeta๐Ÿ˜Š

Raichand mansion


Neha comes in her room and throws her bag at the bed. She opes her cupboard . she opens her cupboard and draws a wooden and beautifully carved box. She strt swifting the cards and haseena enters in the room.

Haseena: (putting her hand on neha shoulder) what happened ? why are u looking cards?

Neha: mom today I met a girl to whom bhai is getting close and . and both of them shares strong emotional connection, which even if I want to break cannot be broken

Haseena: (happily) then why are you worried. It's a happy news finally abhay has also got someone  and now he will be not left lonely. And why would you want to break that connection?

Neha:  (worried) mom that girl belong to family of maithali. And maithali is lost love of abhay. And moreover pia resembles to maithali. I fear if my magic will break and den again he will be gloomy and strts hating himself again. And he is still unaware of prophecy.

Haseena; don't worry I guess now right tym is cumin up and I want that grl and abhay to be together coz den abhay can share his lonely worls wid her. And regarding prophecy let him fall in love wid her and den u can break dat magic and tell him abt prophecy.

Neha; (happily hugs her) why I didn't thought this earlier ad mom you saved me doing a sin again. I was thinking to make dem hate each other.

Haseena: no let them be together(neha draws a card from pack and is shocked) now what didi you saw in cards?

Neha: mom you know maithali was witch, I fear pia soul doesn't have those powers?

Mount college

Misha and abhi stop fighting and look at the direction from where voice was coming.

A girl wid 3 files in her hand and a stern look on her face walks towards dem.

Kabeer: (mutters) abhi now u r gone. She is strict trustee of d college,panchi and now only garbage can save you.

Panchi: u people have made dis college as fish- market with your fights. Now I want both of u in detention room for 1 hour, that will teach you how to get friendly with each other

Misha: hey listen dis was''''.

Panchi: 2 hours

Abhi: but we''''''''.

Panchi: 3 hours

Both of dem gets idea dat it is better to keep their mouth shut.

Panchi: and ur punishment starts now follow me

Both of dem gets freed by strong clutches of abhay and kabeer. And den look at each other like they will kill each other.

Canteen

Pia: I know she will kill him

Abhay: (holds her hand) don't worry she will be fine.i know she can handle any situation.

Pia: we need to do something

Abhay: okay lets go. I know what to do

Detention room

Abhi: you dumbhead, see what happened. Its all cz of u I hav landed here.

Misha: no its cz of u. u shud hav not made that idiotic plan. D-uh now I hav to spend my 3 hrs with this brainless creature.

Abhi: ya as if u hav brain due to you only we hav one hour extra detention

Misha: ha see who is saying that as if u were quiet' looser

Abhi: shut up you looser. I don't knw how dis college can give entry to bitc like you

Misha: how dare you fattuchand?

Aftr that both of them were scratching each other's heads. While fighting  they fell down on ground bt still dey were fighting. After some time both of them get into senses and stopped fighting.

Den aftr 3 mins silence. Misha is lookin at window with her devil smile.

Abhi: look can we try not to kill each other in these three hours (aftr watching misha smilling) what are u lookn at am talking to u mad grl?

Misha; no we cant try we can break this jail you jerk.

Abhi: what are you talking about?

Misha: now come on you looser put your muscles into some use.

Then misha and abhi breaks down the window. Abhi steps out from the window first and den he gives his hand to misha to help her out but out of arrogance she ignores it and herself tries to get out but she loose her balance and falls down but abhi saves her from falling. Then for the frst tym they stare at each other with different look.

Misha: are you taking me to parking lot while holding me. by d way I don't mind cz I am too lazy to walk to my car.

Then abhi puts her down.

Abhi: by d way, I never expected that you can use your non-existing brain

Misha: now I don't need any  intelligent certificate from you.

Dehradoon road

Abhay and pia are going together to some place. Abhay senses someone following them. Abhay stops the car.

Abhay: pia I guess there is some pron in d car. You don't move from here.

Pia: okay

Den pia puts some music on whike abhay looks after stalker but he finds no one. When he returns he finds pia's leg injured and she is lying on road and blood is flowing. Abhay urges to drink her blood. Then he goes near the tree. And control himself and then he draws frst aid kit from car and dresses pia's injury.

Abhay: (angrily) how does this happen and why you moved out when I told u to stay in?

Pia: (crying out as abhay puts anticeptic) abhay no its paining.no no no noooooooo nooooooo

Abhay: shhhhhhhhhhhh look at me'. nothing will happen'.. hold my hands tight

Aftr lookin at  him and holding him she forgets everything

Pia: actually there was knock at the door and I thought it is u and u need help and when I stepped out somebody pushed me very hard from back.

Den abhay tries to sense someone's scent but he is not able to sense it. then pia tries to stand up bt she is not able to stand.

Abhay: lemme carry you

Pia: no I can'''''.

Den abhay without listening to her carries her to the car and they drive away..

Then they reach at office  and bahy knocks at some one's office. A voice comes  "come in"

Abhay: bhai I need ur help

Sid: you shud hav called me ? what happened abu?

Abhay: bhai one of my frnd got detention in college by panchi. So I want you to being trustee of d college cancel her detention

Sid: how pitty, panchi and her cote anger on her nose. Okay lets go. I knw how to handle  that tough lady and I love to handle tough lady.

Precap

Sid is shocked to see pia in car.

Neha breaks d magic on abhay and he decides to leave pia

Stalker is revealed



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Edited by sanjna4 - 13 years ago
Posted: 13 years ago
Res

Hahahaaaaaa first to comment partner... ๐Ÿ˜Š

OMG Maithali = witch ??? ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ
Don't tell me Piya is also a witch ? 

Hahahaaaa Panchi punished them.... great fighting they are hilarious.... 
But yeh kya hai they helped each other... ๐Ÿ˜ฒ

Ufffff ๐Ÿ˜ก kaun hai yeh stalker ??? And Piya ke piche kyun para hai ??? ( para pari don't know ๐Ÿ˜† )
Bechari Piya.... loved the way Abhay controlled himself. ๐Ÿ˜
How romantic they are... Specially Abhay ๐Ÿ˜
Loved their scene... 

Sid seems sweet but kya pata kya hoga.... loved to see them like that... 
But he is shocked to see Piya... ๐Ÿค”... Hmmmm... ab yeh kya hai ??? 

Loved it dear... please update soon... ๐Ÿค—
Edited by Coeur2PsychoFMS - 13 years ago

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