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"PYAAR KI YE EK NAYI KAHANI"(THE LAST PART) (Page 5)

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Posted: 23 March 2011 at 5:32am | IP Logged
oh its a very nice update dear !

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Posted: 23 March 2011 at 6:17am | IP Logged
hei ria,
u took some time to update but its too short...however loved the update..tho maya ko koi partner nahi mili?is she not in the party?u paired up everyone in the game..waiting to read how their story is going to start..update soon yaar..

P.S:pls include page no too along with the part no in the title..it'll be easier to get to the update..


Edited by RB81 - 23 March 2011 at 6:18am

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Posted: 23 March 2011 at 6:49am | IP Logged
Wao dear wat an awsm updt.
it ws vry beautifuly writen.
it ws superb,fantastic.
realy realy luv d part .
plz cnt wid nxt part soon.
luv u
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Posted: 23 March 2011 at 7:43am | IP Logged
wwwwoooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhwwwwwwwwwwwww.........!!!!!!!
osum wrk dear, outstndng.....!!!!!! Smile

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Posted: 23 March 2011 at 10:37am | IP Logged
that was a good partClap
thanks for the pmWink
update soonSmile

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Posted: 23 March 2011 at 11:07am | IP Logged
Wow.. Nice part.. Mish-Kabir together.. Dance partner thing was gr8.. Waiting for more Abhiya scenes.. Continue soon.. Thanx for d pm..lol..

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Posted: 24 March 2011 at 12:33am | IP Logged
hello everyone..thnxx 4 all comments.i can't right so long coz words r limited u knw tht...Smilen intro mein main always part n pg no likhdeti hoon....

PART:5(Feelings)

EVERYONE IS DANCING....
ABHAY:excuse me...
PIYA:abhay...
PANCHI:yea abhay ko kaya hua..
VISHAL:choro usse..bo aysahi hain.
PARTY IS OVER:-
PANCHI:party bohothi amazing tha na?
MISHA:kaya khakh amazing tha..boring dance yuck!
KABIR:mish tumbhi na...it was romantic... Embarrassed
MISHA: ....
PANCHI:ok piya chalo hostel chor deti hoon..
PIYA:meri hostel yehi hain panchi 5 mins main pouch jaoungi tumog jao
PANCHI:sure?
PIYA:haan sureLOL
PANCHI:ok bye piya
MISHA:bye piya see u tomorrow!
PIYA:ok bye
KABIR:bye piya ,misha,panchi..
PIYA IS WALKING:-
PIYA:abhay....abhay yahan kaya kar raha hain..
PIYA:abhay?
ABHAY:not listening
PIYA:abhay tum party se ayse kyun chale aye?
ABHAY:mujhe tumhare sath dance karna acha nehi lagraha tha...
PIYA:Confusedpaar abhay(piya girgei)_
ABHAY:caught piya!

ABHAY:piya!tum thik hoon?
PIYA:haan...aouch!
ABHAY:kaya hua?
PIYA:nehi bo sahid peir mein mouch aagei!
ABHAY:dikhaou...
PIYA:nehi thik hain main chal paoungi...(after walking)ahh(fell)
ABHAY:tumhari hostel yahin hain na.
PIYA:haan
ABHAY:main chor deta hoon tumhe.....

PIAY:(in mind)kyun tumhare paas aatehi sara dard chala jata hain abhay....kyun tumhare karib aakar sari duniyako bhul jati hoon main.....kyun yea jante huea bhi k tum mujhse payar nehi karte sirf tumhise payar karna cahta hain yea dil....
ABHAY:(in mind)maat karo mujhse itna payar piya....baad mein tumhiko daard hoga....jitna tumse door rehna cahta hoon tum utnahi mere karib aajati hoon piya...keyse karu tumhe khudhse door....
ABHAY:yelo tumhari hostel..
GUARD:are piya bitiya kaya hua...
PIYA:nehi kuch nehi..abhay..are abhay kaha geya..yahain to tha..Shocked
GUARD:chalo main tumhe tumhari room taak chor deta hoon ..chalo
PIYA:haan....
DROBRIAL HOUSE:-
PANCHI:(in mind)aaj vishal k sath dance karte kuch ajib sa feel hua..main jaab usse larai karti hoon ya baat karti hoon taab aysa feel to nehi hota tha..aajhi aysa feel kyun hua...ya keysa feeling hain...aur main to usse nafrath karti hoon na sadu ..to aaj uske sath dance karne mein mujhe itna acha kyun lagraha tha...
MISHA:hey panchi kahan khoi hoon?
PANCHI:haan..aabbb....nehi kuch nehi..tum bolo keysa laga kabir k sath...
MISHA:yuck!
PANCHI:haan..kabir keysa hain na?..
MISHA:haan...keysa hain matlab..
PANCHI:dance karte waqt baki larkio ko dekh raha tha...(joking)
MISHA:kaya! no panchi tumhari akhon ko kuch problem hain...
PANCHI:nehi maine dekha....
MISHA:ayse keyse dekha maine dekha usse bo dance karte ty sirf aur sirf mujhe dekhraha tha aur kisi ko nehi...samjhi!
PANCHI:o..o....LOL
MISHA:nehi bo...Embarrassed
PANCHI:ok ok...kabir sirf aur sirf tumhei dekhraha tha thik hain...LOLLOL
MISHA:tumbhi na..Embarrassed
RATHODE:-
KABIR:hey vis...tujhe misha keysi lagi?
VISHAL:thik thak hain..
KABIR:hey..wat do u mean thik thak hain....???
VISHAL:ok baba bohot achi hainLOL
KABIR:haan meri choice hain na..achi to hogihi..LOL
VISHAL:haan..LOL
KABIR:wayse panchi bhi thik thak hain..Wink
VISHAL:kaya..aabbbb..
KABIR:haaan...mujhe dikh raha tha dance karte tym keyse panchi ko tuk tuk dekhraha tha..
VISHAL:kaya baat karraha ..ja sone jaa..GOOD NIGHT!
KABIR:hmmm dal mein kuch kala hain......
RAICHANDS:-
CHAND:abhay?
ABHAY:haan dad?
CHAND:kahan se arehe hoon?
ABHAY:bo college mein part tha...
CHAND:mujhe acha laga k tum saab se ghul mil kar reh rehe hoon!..paar jara dhayan se..kisi se kuch jeyadahi ghul mil maat jana...u r understanding na ......
ABHAY:Confusedhaan....

 ...........THE END OF THE PART:5........................



Edited by hreeyaa - 24 March 2011 at 12:33am

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Posted: 24 March 2011 at 1:08am | IP Logged
awesum part!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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