"PYAAR KI YE EK NAYI KAHANI"(THE LAST PART) - Page 10

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Posted: 13 years ago
superb part!!!!!!!!
plz abhay ko mila dou ab 

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Posted: 13 years ago
evry tym mish calls shanky BRO im sooooooooooooo happy and relieved
and btw cud u pls aage badofy mishka story plssssssssssssss

gud going till now very gripping story
but pls i wanna see sum cute moments between mish and kabir

<3
mishu4eva
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update yaarπŸ‘
bechaari piya😭
so her mind is finally working now πŸ˜†
put yourself in danger and abhay will surely comeπŸ˜†
oh the next update is surely going to be goodπŸ˜‰
well panchi is already feeling something for vishal😳
thanks for the pm😊
update soonπŸ˜‰
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Posted: 13 years ago
Gr8 update Dear.. Poor Piya.. Hope everything 'll b 5in.. Carry on.. Thanx for d pm..lol.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks guysssssssss 4 all the cutie cutie n lovely lovely comments.........Heart
PART:-13
COLLEGE:-
PANCHI:hey mish vish aya kaya?
MISHA:no panch..y u r so bechain haan...!i mean u don't lyk him na..?
PANCHI:no actually bo college nehi araha tabiaat to thik hain na..
MISHA:thik hi hoga ...aur kuch hua bhi to..
PANCHI:stop mish!😑
MISHA:wat?
PANCHI:kisi k barein mein aysa nehi bolte...😑
KABIR:hey wat happened?
PANCHI:kabir vish kaysa hain..bo thik to hain na?
KABIR:bo panchi actually vish thik nehi hain
PANCHI:kaya hua usse?
KABIR:bohot bukhar hain chal bhi nehi paraha bechara issiliye college nehi araha...
PANCHI:aur tum usse akele chor k chale aye...???keyse bhai ho tum kabir...!😑
KABIR:aab kaya karu college to anahi paregana..
PANCHI:huh..😑
KABIR:are panchi suno..πŸ˜†
MISHA:hey kabir kaya hua vish ko?
KABIR:are kuch nehi thik hi hain maine to baas yea acting kiya dekho aab panchi kaya karti hain..πŸ˜†
MISHA:wow nice haan..πŸ˜‰
KABIR:haan.kabi kabi tum bhi to thoda sa nice ho lo mere sath..
MISHA:😳keyse..
KABIR:dikhaou keyse...πŸ˜‰
MISHA:choro....😳
KABIR:kyun kyun..dekhna nehi hain..
MAAM:kabir?misha?😑
MISHA:yaa maam
KABIR:haan maam
MAAM:class mein chalo..😑
MISHA&KABIR:ok maam..

DROBRIALS:-
PANCHI:kaya karu...vish itni taklif mein hain aur yea kabir bhi na...ekdam akela hain...kuch cahiye hoga to...keysa hoga...aammm milne jaou kaya...
MADHU:panchi..kaya hua itbi pareshan kyun hoon?
PANCHI:nehi mama kuch nehi
MADHU:beta tum mujhse share kar sakhte hoon
PANCHI:bo mama vishal ki tabiyat bohot kharab hain hain aur uske paas koi nehi hain khayal rakhne k liye
MADHU:kyun kabir?
PANCHI:bo loser aapne bhai ko iss halat mein chor k college mein hain..koi fikar nehi usko..😑
MADHU:to aab tum kaya sochti hoon?
PANCHI:mama main chali jaou usse milne..akhir frnd hi to frnd k kaam ata hain na..
MADHU:haan jaou...
PANCHI:thankssss mama..πŸ˜ƒmain abhi taiar hokar ayi.
MADHU:haan beta frnd hi frnd k kaam ata hain paar yahan kaya sirf frnd hain yaar fir usse kuch barhkar hain....!!!!

HERE:-
PIYA:haan yea jagai thik hain main wait karti hoon koi car to ayegi...
AFTER A WHILE..
PIYA SAW A CAR COMING..
PIYA:abhay ayega..(scared)
MISHA COMES:-
MISHA:wat's wrong with  u piya???????😑
PIYA:bo..bo..
MISHA:tum suicide karne ja rehi thi..wat...tumhari dimaak to thik hain na..??😑
PIYA:nehi misha main suicide nehi karrehi thi...
MISHA:ok...just stop chalo hostel!
PIYA:(mind)oh misha tum kyun agei...saab garbaar kar diya!πŸ˜•
RATHODES:-
PANCHI:knocking the door
VISHAL:(opened the door)panchi?
PANCHI:hi..😳
VISHAL:hi..(mind)yea yahan keyse ayi...
PANCHI:main ya andaar...
VISHAL:oh srry aou..
PANCHI:tum baithon aram karo...tumhari tabiyat thik nehi hain na
VISHAL:(mind)tabiyaat ...mujhe kaya hua hain...
PANCHI:haaan mujhe kabir ne bataya k tumhe bohot bukhar hain..boto buddhu college chala geya..😳
VISHAL:(mind)oh karbi...beta terahi kaam hain yea na..tu aa fir dekhta hoon tujhe..
PANCHI:kaya hua?
VISHAL:nehi..hehe kuch nehi...hehe
PANCHI:aab main chai banakar leaati hoon haan..
VISHAL:ok..ok.hehe....
HOSTEL:-
MISHA:piya tum yahan beithoon..aab bataou kaya hua hain..
PIYA:nehi misha kuchbhi nehi hua hain
MISHA:piya main tumhari dost hoon na.?
PIYA:haan of course misha!
MISHA:to bataou mujhe wat happened..dekho main janti hoon its related with abhay!
PIYA:😭
MISHA:akhir kaya kiya hain ussne jo uska naam suntehi tumhari akhon mein asoon aajata hain..
PIYA:😭
MISHA:acha thik hain maat rou aur bata na nehi hain to maat bataou..paar agar kissi bhi tym kuch share karna caho to humesha mujhe aapne sath paougi..bye..
MISHA SAW THE LOCKET:-
MISHA:(mind)yea bohi locket hain na jo abhay ne mujhe diya tha piya ko dene k liye...dekhu jara..abhay n piya ki pic..iska matlaab..!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😲
RATHODES:-
PANCHI:yea lo chai
VISHAL:haan thanks
PANCHI:keysi bani hain?
VISHAL:haan its very nice!
PANCHI:😳
AFTER DRINKING TEA:-
PANCHI:yuck!!!!!yea tumhe achi lagi....?
VISHAL:tumne jo itne payar se banaya hain...
PANCHI:😳😳😳
VISHAL:panchi..kaya tumhe kuch feel nehi hota
PANCHI:kaya😳
VISHAL COMING CLOSE:-
VISHAL:kaya..
PANCHI:kaya😳oh no current chala geya...main candles lekar aati hoon
VISHAL:panchi...

RAICHAND:-
CHAND:abhay?
ABHAY:yes daad?
CHAND:tumhe dehradhoon jana hoga
ABHAY:wat? paar kyun????
CHAND:bohan k trusty ne tumhe bulaya hain kuch imp hain
ABHAY:ok.(mind)no main keyse jaou bohan..aur bobhi us college mein..piya bhi hogi..agar usne mujhe dekh liya to..main uska aur uske sawalon ka samna nehi kar paounga..bo nehi kaar payegi mere iss cehre se payar aur main uski yea nafraat nehi seh paounga.!

   kaya hoga jaab abhay boha jayega...kaya hoga jaab hoga abhay aur piya ka amna samna................

..............THE END.................

Edited by hreeyaa - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Gr8 update Dear.. Vishal-Panchi part was Nice.. Poor Piya.. So Abhay is coming.. Wat 'll happen now.. Eagerly waiting.. Carry on.. Thanx for d pm..lol.
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Posted: 13 years ago
hei ria,
kuch acha moments hoga tab abhay-pia meet..make them meet..waiting desperately for them to meet..continue soon..

edit the one marked in red as kabir..

VISHAL:bo panchi actually vish thik nehi hain
PANCHI:kaya hua usse?
VISHAL:bohot bukhar hain chal bhi nehi paraha bechara issiliye college nehi araha...

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Posted: 13 years ago
Gr8 dear,awsm nd fantastic.
jus too gud.
thnx for d pm.
plz cnt soon nd do pm me.
luv u
vritika
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Posted: 13 years ago
acha tha lekin precap tha laast tym ka abiya mileney gay yar plz jaldi inhe mila do
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Posted: 13 years ago
superbbb part!
fantastic