"PYAAR KI YE EK NAYI KAHANI"(THE LAST PART) - Page 5

Posted: 13 years ago
Wndrful part yar.
totaly amazing ,superb part.
haye!!!!!!!
Luv all abhiya scenes.
BUT.......
WHY U HV NOT PM ME??????????
Plz do pm me yar.
i realy realy luv ur ff.
plz cnt wid nxt part soon nd dun 4get to pm me......
luv u
vritika
Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing part.. Misha-Panchi n Kabir-Vishal talk was Nice.. I want Abhiya Love Story 2 start soon.. U didnt pm me.. Not fair.. Plz do pm me when u update d next part.. Continue soon.. lol..
Posted: 13 years ago
nice part๐Ÿ‘
so misha also feels something for kabir๐Ÿ˜ณ
and panchi and vishal also๐Ÿ˜ณ
piya and abhay as always๐Ÿ˜ณ
thanks for the pm๐Ÿ˜‰
update soon๐Ÿ˜Š
Posted: 13 years ago
hello frnds...maine sab ko pm kiya tha bt donno wat happened..sryy 4 this....๐Ÿ˜Š
PART:-6(Abhay ki taklif)
COLLEGE:-
PANCHI:mish tujhe piya kahin nazar aarehi hain kaya?
MISHA:no yaar..where's she?
KABIR:hey  sweeties kaya hua?
MISHA:piya kaya aaj college nehi ai?
VISHAL:kyun bohot miss karrehe hoon piya ko?
PANCHI:yaa..missing her..where's she?kuch hua to nehi coz bo kabhi bhi college miss nehi karti...๐Ÿ˜•
ABHAY:tum logoka kaya aur koi kam nehi k kisi fizul baat paar soch rehe hoon...huh...(gone)
PANCHI:how....๐Ÿ˜ก
VISHAL:choro na basket bo aysahi hain
MISHA:ok chalo class mein nehi to humari tanushree maam...๐Ÿ˜†
VISHAL:wat a maam yaar...
PANCHI:๐Ÿ˜ก
ABHAY THINKING:-
ABHAY:piya aaj ai kyun nehi..bo thik to hogi na.....
HOSTEL:-
ABHAY ENTERED PIYA'S ROOM:-
PIYA:koun hain....koun hain...abhay......!!!!!!!!!!
ABHAY:bo....
PIYA:abhay tum yahan?!
ABHAY:haan bo..tum college kyun nehi ayi?
PIYA:oh bo mujhe thoda sa bukhar ho geya issiliye...(feeling weak)
ABHAY:piya...tumhe to bohot bukhar hain....
PIYA:nehi main thik hoon...
ABHAY:baithoon yahan....ye lo pani..
PIYA:๐Ÿ˜ณ
ABHAY:so jaou..tumhe aram ki jarurath hain..
PIYA:abhay...
ABHAY:shhhh


PIYA:(in mind)kitna fikar hain mira..kaya hain yea abhay..kuch samajh mein nehi ata...
ABHAY:(in mind)kaya karu piya..tumhe taklif mein nehi dekh sakhta main...
COLLEGE:-
MISHA:chalo hostel chalte hain piya ko dekhne kaya hua..
PANCHI:chalo
VISHAL:mujhe kuch kam hain tumlog jaou...
KABIR:chalo..
HOSTEL:
MISHA:piya!
PIYA:misha,kabir,panchi tumlog yahan..
MISHA:bohan hum college mein tumhe miss karrehe hain or tum yahan aram se soo rehi hoon
PANCHI:tumhe to bukhar hain.
MISHA:kaya..oh sorry
PIYA:its ok..abhay...
MISHA;wat abhay uska to naamhi maat lo....kharush kahika..
PIYA:(in mind)abhay yehinto tha..meri aakhn lagi aur bo kahan geya....(shock)
PANCHI:acha choro bo saab..kaal vishal ka b'day hain gyssss!
KABIR:oh shit man.main aapne bhai ka b'day hi bhul geya..
MISHA:oh yaa..vishal's b'day..kaya plane hain?
PIYA:haan?
PANCHI:hum ek party denge kalblue moon restaurant mein....maine sara intezam kardiya
PIYA:ok panchi surprise party!
MISHA:good
KABIR:acha hain...usse wohan lana mera duty!
PANCHI:paar abhay ko invite kare...
MISHA:no...
PIYA:kaya hua misha...college k saab ayenge...to abhay kyun nehi..
MISHA:tumhe bohot fikar ho rehi hain usska
KABIR:thiki to hain mish..abhay ko invite karenge...
PANCHI:ok.
MISHA:okk..
DROBRIALS:-
PANCHI:(in mind)koi kami nehi hona cahiye party mein...waise vishal ko acha to lage gana...๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ
ARNAB:hmmm...panchi beta manhi maan muskura kyun rehi hoon....?
PANCHI:nehi papa kuchbhi to nehi...
ARNAB:kal vishal ka b'day hain na...
PANCHI:haan papa๐Ÿ˜ณ
ARNAB:to kaya plan kiya hain?
PANCHI:told everything..
ARNAB:good..bohothi bariya plan hain...
PANCHI:haan papa..hope he lyks it...ok papa bye..mujhe bohot kaam hain
ARNAB:haan jaou..
MADHU:kaya hua arnab?
ARNAB:madhu vishal keysa hain?
MADHU:kisk liye?
ARNAB:humhari panchi k liye..bo dono bach paan k dost hain ...aur vishal k papa mera acha dost hain to kyun na yea dosti rishtedari mein badal de?
MADHU:haan thik to hain paar yea dono to humesha larte rehte hain...
ARNAB:are ye to bachpana hain...shaddi k bad sab thik ho jayega...
MADHU:thik hain paar panchi se baat karni paregi..
ARNAB:haan...
HERE:-
PIYA:kal vishal k 'day party mein main abhay ko bol dungi..jobhi hoon...aab aur dil main daba k nehi rakh sakhti...๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ
HERE:-
ABHAY:keyse piya ko roku...keyse usse khudko door karu...bohot bholi hoon tum piya...nehi seh paogi sach ko...fir keyse sahunga tumhari judai ko...


Posted: 13 years ago
thanks 4 pm and plz inform me next tym also
Posted: 13 years ago
Gr8 part Dear.. Oh m sooo happy dat Abhay Cares so much for piya.. Waiting for d next phase in Vishal-Panchi relationship.. Continue soon.. Thanx for d pm..lol..
Posted: 13 years ago
Hey dear updt ws just awsm nd fantastic.
realy dear u rock!!!!!!!!
It ws an superb part.
totaly outstanding.
luv abhiya scene.
thnx for d pm.
plz cnt wid nxt part soon nd dun 4get to pm me ur luvly - luvly updts.
luv u
vritika
Posted: 13 years ago
hei ria,
it was a wonderful update..u put up nice n apt pictures in between..that is too good..chota update..write a bigger one..continue soon..
Posted: 13 years ago
yaar awseum part ! aww so jaanu abay!
Posted: 13 years ago
that was a very good part๐Ÿ‘
loved abhay and pia as always๐Ÿ˜ณ
loved the conversation between madhu and arnab๐Ÿ˜Š
yipeee another party๐Ÿ˜†
poor abhay he does not know what to do๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
thanks for the pm
update soon
 

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