Wndrful part yar. totaly amazing ,superb part. haye!!!!!!! Luv all abhiya scenes. BUT....... WHY U HV NOT PM ME?????????? Plz do pm me yar. i realy realy luv ur ff. plz cnt wid nxt part soon nd dun 4get to pm me...... luv u vritika
Amazing part.. Misha-Panchi n Kabir-Vishal talk was Nice.. I want Abhiya Love Story 2 start soon.. U didnt pm me.. Not fair.. Plz do pm me when u update d next part.. Continue soon.. lol..
hello frnds...maine sab ko pm kiya tha bt donno wat happened..sryy 4 this....๐ PART:-6(Abhay ki taklif) COLLEGE:- PANCHI:mish tujhe piya kahin nazar aarehi hain kaya? MISHA:no yaar..where's she? KABIR:hey sweeties kaya hua? MISHA:piya kaya aaj college nehi ai? VISHAL:kyun bohot miss karrehe hoon piya ko? PANCHI:yaa..missing her..where's she?kuch hua to nehi coz bo kabhi bhi college miss nehi karti...๐ ABHAY:tum logoka kaya aur koi kam nehi k kisi fizul baat paar soch rehe hoon...huh...(gone) PANCHI:how....๐ก VISHAL:choro na basket bo aysahi hain MISHA:ok chalo class mein nehi to humari tanushree maam...๐ VISHAL:wat a maam yaar... PANCHI:๐ก ABHAY THINKING:- ABHAY:piya aaj ai kyun nehi..bo thik to hogi na..... HOSTEL:- ABHAY ENTERED PIYA'S ROOM:- PIYA:koun hain....koun hain...abhay......!!!!!!!!!! ABHAY:bo.... PIYA:abhay tum yahan?! ABHAY:haan bo..tum college kyun nehi ayi? PIYA:oh bo mujhe thoda sa bukhar ho geya issiliye...(feeling weak) ABHAY:piya...tumhe to bohot bukhar hain.... PIYA:nehi main thik hoon... ABHAY:baithoon yahan....ye lo pani.. PIYA:๐ณ ABHAY:so jaou..tumhe aram ki jarurath hain.. PIYA:abhay... ABHAY:shhhh
PIYA:(in mind)kitna fikar hain mira..kaya hain yea abhay..kuch samajh mein nehi ata... ABHAY:(in mind)kaya karu piya..tumhe taklif mein nehi dekh sakhta main... COLLEGE:- MISHA:chalo hostel chalte hain piya ko dekhne kaya hua.. PANCHI:chalo VISHAL:mujhe kuch kam hain tumlog jaou... KABIR:chalo.. HOSTEL: MISHA:piya! PIYA:misha,kabir,panchi tumlog yahan.. MISHA:bohan hum college mein tumhe miss karrehe hain or tum yahan aram se soo rehi hoon PANCHI:tumhe to bukhar hain. MISHA:kaya..oh sorry PIYA:its ok..abhay... MISHA;wat abhay uska to naamhi maat lo....kharush kahika.. PIYA:(in mind)abhay yehinto tha..meri aakhn lagi aur bo kahan geya....(shock) PANCHI:acha choro bo saab..kaal vishal ka b'day hain gyssss! KABIR:oh shit man.main aapne bhai ka b'day hi bhul geya.. MISHA:oh yaa..vishal's b'day..kaya plane hain? PIYA:haan? PANCHI:hum ek party denge kalblue moon restaurant mein....maine sara intezam kardiya PIYA:ok panchi surprise party! MISHA:good KABIR:acha hain...usse wohan lana mera duty! PANCHI:paar abhay ko invite kare... MISHA:no... PIYA:kaya hua misha...college k saab ayenge...to abhay kyun nehi.. MISHA:tumhe bohot fikar ho rehi hain usska KABIR:thiki to hain mish..abhay ko invite karenge... PANCHI:ok. MISHA:okk.. DROBRIALS:- PANCHI:(in mind)koi kami nehi hona cahiye party mein...waise vishal ko acha to lage gana...๐ณ๐ณ๐ณ๐ณ ARNAB:hmmm...panchi beta manhi maan muskura kyun rehi hoon....? PANCHI:nehi papa kuchbhi to nehi... ARNAB:kal vishal ka b'day hain na... PANCHI:haan papa๐ณ ARNAB:to kaya plan kiya hain? PANCHI:told everything.. ARNAB:good..bohothi bariya plan hain... PANCHI:haan papa..hope he lyks it...ok papa bye..mujhe bohot kaam hain ARNAB:haan jaou.. MADHU:kaya hua arnab? ARNAB:madhu vishal keysa hain? MADHU:kisk liye? ARNAB:humhari panchi k liye..bo dono bach paan k dost hain ...aur vishal k papa mera acha dost hain to kyun na yea dosti rishtedari mein badal de? MADHU:haan thik to hain paar yea dono to humesha larte rehte hain... ARNAB:are ye to bachpana hain...shaddi k bad sab thik ho jayega... MADHU:thik hain paar panchi se baat karni paregi.. ARNAB:haan... HERE:- PIYA:kal vishal k 'day party mein main abhay ko bol dungi..jobhi hoon...aab aur dil main daba k nehi rakh sakhti...๐ณ๐ณ๐ณ๐ณ HERE:- ABHAY:keyse piya ko roku...keyse usse khudko door karu...bohot bholi hoon tum piya...nehi seh paogi sach ko...fir keyse sahunga tumhari judai ko...
Gr8 part Dear.. Oh m sooo happy dat Abhay Cares so much for piya.. Waiting for d next phase in Vishal-Panchi relationship.. Continue soon.. Thanx for d pm..lol..
Hey dear updt ws just awsm nd fantastic. realy dear u rock!!!!!!!! It ws an superb part. totaly outstanding. luv abhiya scene. thnx for d pm. plz cnt wid nxt part soon nd dun 4get to pm me ur luvly - luvly updts. luv u vritika