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FF-Aankhon Mein Teri (Part1:Ch.1-15) (Page 52)

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Posted: 09 May 2011 at 2:11am | IP Logged
i love ur writing ..but could u write everything in english ? the dialogues in hindi are mostly  wrong and dont make any sense. for me they only break the flow of the lovely peice.
dont take me wrong, its just a suggestion. 

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Posted: 09 May 2011 at 2:13am | IP Logged
Loved the update
Gud dat Rajji saved Geet warna she wuld hav been in prob
Loved Dadi'd love n care
Rano was sho shweet
Hop Maan is safe really as he myt hav lied Dadi thnking abt her health
Still no Maaneet moments
6 updates mein se in jus 2 we got them baki nahiCryCry
Kab we will get them togther 
 
 
sunshine94 IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 09 May 2011 at 2:18am | IP Logged
no msk in this update...i wuld luv 2 see maneet together...
bt stil luvd 2 know abt geet concern for maan 
n also likd geet gonna continue her studies...
thanks for d PM
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Posted: 09 May 2011 at 2:19am | IP Logged
The case of the missing husband- it gets curiouser and curiouser ... Maan's total unwillingness to even acknowledge Geet's presence in his house and life and Geet's unwillingness to change status quo!

I am waiting for Maan to make a more prominent appearance in the updates now so that we can see the story unfold!

Great update..
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Posted: 09 May 2011 at 2:30am | IP Logged
awesome ... nice update ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 09 May 2011 at 3:13am | IP Logged
next time
 
please update soon
Janakivallav IF-Addictz
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Posted: 09 May 2011 at 3:14am | IP Logged
beautiful part.
loved it.
 continue soon.
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Posted: 09 May 2011 at 3:22am | IP Logged
awesome continue soon!!1

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