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Lust/Love? || AR/KaJen OS || For Sahar <3 (Page 6)

TheMelody. IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 17 March 2011 at 10:40am | IP Logged
Hey there beautiful! ;) Finally back to edit my post. :$ 

Firstly, I seriously envy you for how beautifully you write. It's just...amazing. I don't think I can put it into words how well you write, seriously. I know I sound cheesy but IDC I'm being honest. I don't even know if my comment will do any justice to your OS but anyway ~

I was SO into the OS that I didn't realise when it ended. It was just so HOT. :| I didn't want it to end, especially with they way you had written it out, it was so gripping and kept me till the edge of my seat till the very end. I LOVE Ridhima's character in your OS. I was really tired of reading/writing about the oh-so-innocent Ridhima and bad boy Armaan. This was something different, which just added to my interest in the OS. I wouldn't have been able to imagine Ridhima in such a character had you not portrayed her so well. <3

 I seriously loved how they both had a past which sorta drew them closer! The passionate scene was described so well, I had butterflies in my stomach :| LOL. It was so unexpected but I loved it tehe :$ ARmaan's character was just WOW. I love reading about Armaan more than Ridhima in FF's/OS's to be honest..I always look forward to his entrance. It was nice to see how both of them noticed each to such a great extent. It was as if just one sight was enough for them to look forward to their next meeting/interaction. I hope I'm making sense. :$ Anywhooooo, Phatty you did a GREAT job! Seriously, I am in awe of your writing and this is the hundredth time I'm saying it but I DO mean it. =) Pleaseee write more often, we need flawless writers like you! <3 Muaaah!

- Mel. 

PS: I LOVED Armaan and his daughter, I would've loved to see their interaction but it's all good, hehe! I can imagine him as a father! <3


Edited by TheMelody. - 19 March 2011 at 5:51pm

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Posted: 17 March 2011 at 11:21am | IP Logged

This was f**kING HOTTongueloved it PhattyWinkRead an OS after so long, school is boring but this OS bought life 2 it for a whileLOLthanks 4 the pm nai to mujhe pata bhi na hotaStern SmileAwesomeClap



Edited by Mona1993 - 17 March 2011 at 11:52am

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Posted: 17 March 2011 at 12:39pm | IP Logged
OMG..............WOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
really this is one of BEST OS i've ever read...:) completely cute...hot....romantic.....lovable....passionate......sweet and above all KAJENIOUS....<3
really Phatty it is amazing..... i've read one of ur os before as well long time but this beats that one too....:)
really amazing work....love how u write n excited to see ur work with Sary n Rabia...:) will look forward to it...:)
btw completelyy fell in love with ARR/KAJEN once again.......<3
Thanx to Sary for posting the link on her os thread....:)

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Posted: 17 March 2011 at 1:05pm | IP Logged
awesome phatty... the whole story is very well written. I am so happy to meet this hot n sexy Ridhima... Never thought she can  go for   a one night stand and cool about it..Wink

Do write more and thnx for the PM..

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Posted: 17 March 2011 at 2:05pm | IP Logged

that was sooooooooo amazing....

simply beautiful...

loved the concept alot..........

marvelous...........

thnx for the pm.................

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Posted: 17 March 2011 at 8:21pm | IP Logged
~Edited~

Hey PhattyyyyyyyHeart
its sooooooooooo good 2 see u here wiv an OS aftr a lonnnnnnnnng tym....n ur patchin wiv Sahar n Rabia????? woohooooBig smile apparently u'll stay longer dis tymLOL their awesummm btw....hope u guyzzz giv us sum new HAWT KaJen OS's sooonnn...
now cummin 2 ur awesummm OS...LOL it was freakkkkiiiiiinnnnn GoooodddWink lovedddd every bit of it...though i neva imagined Ridz 2 b such a BIT*H!!!!LOL buh i cud totally imagine ma KAJEN in ur words....plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz do wite more.....
n thanx alot 4 da PM...tc
love u loadssssss....
JIAHeart


Edited by pinkss - 18 March 2011 at 1:18pm

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Posted: 18 March 2011 at 4:53am | IP Logged
hey
dat was amazing
i just can't find wordz 2 express myself
it waz a high dose of passion
totally luvd it
tc
shaaz

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Posted: 18 March 2011 at 6:57am | IP Logged
AMAZINGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG OSSSSSSSSSSSSS phattyyyyyyyyyyyyyHeart

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