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Lust/Love? || AR/KaJen OS || For Sahar <3 (Page 2)

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Posted: 16 March 2011 at 10:26pm | IP Logged
Firstly am not sure what I need to write to you about the OS Stern Smile I am out of words .
You are so amazing with words Phatty ,one cant help get drawn into the story Embarrassed 

I lovee the story Phatty the whole concept is so different,We'd normally read something totally opposite where Riddhima is the victim ,simple and family oriented and Armaan the one who doesnt believe in it.But this was a suprise and I think thats what it makes the OS so different and beautiful to read !.

You've written and expressed evverything so beautifullyy .It sooo freakin HOTT Blushing And since we're always having KaJen on our mind,especially when we read this it makes it all even more HOT LOL

The bit where she coldly leaves him ,and he is so shocked ,one really feels bad for him and knowing later that he got divorced and what Riddhima did to him wasnt his first ,makes you feel even worse about it ! 
Awww Armaan's a single father Stern Smile the bit where he answers back to her ,you just know she is going to feel bad and guilty at once for what she did .

I like how their life moves a full circle getting them to face each other again and this time only for good !  

Loved the OS 
I am going back to read it once again !! 


Edited by Ankita.M - 16 March 2011 at 11:02pm

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Posted: 16 March 2011 at 10:50pm | IP Logged
Live commentary?! You betcha :P So like I just got done with first half you can say :| OMFG YOU PORTRAYED their characters JUST THE WAY I WANTED MAN! The dialogues everything :| :| :| HAILA I love you!

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Posted: 16 March 2011 at 10:50pm | IP Logged
It was amazing
Loved it

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Posted: 16 March 2011 at 11:06pm | IP Logged
"I wouldn't expect a heartless bitch like you to understand the responsibilities of a single father, now would I?" 

OMFG OMFG OMFG OMFG OMFG OMFG OMFG OMFG OMFG OMFG OMFG OMFG YOU USED MY SUGGESTED LINE :| :| :| :| :| AHHHHHHHHHHHH it sounds hotter in the context *yahoo* I love this! I am in loveeeeeeeeeeeeee with this Armaan tehe

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Posted: 16 March 2011 at 11:12pm | IP Logged
I know I could save all these comments for erm my huge comment but W T H it's my birthday OS :P OMFG YOU MADE MUSKI AND ARMAAN have a heart to heart /whoo I love you and do I sense Riddhima finally turning a new leaf tehe

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Posted: 16 March 2011 at 11:22pm | IP Logged
"Well then, there's a mutual feeling. I love you too, Ridhima." 

OH MY GOD I love that :| :| :| BEST come back after a confession hayeeeeeeeeee :| :| :| I am melllllllllting and I aint even the wicked witch of west :P LOL

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Posted: 16 March 2011 at 11:32pm | IP Logged
O.M.G PHATTY<3 Psshhhhhhhhhhttttttttt!!!!!! OMG<3Star this was like the best AR OS I have ever read<3 seriously it was sooooooooo hawwwttttttt!!!!!!! I could soo picture everything in my head as I was reading!!! I was soo glued to it I didn't want it to end!! Miss.Sary ur soo lucky!!!!!!! Wink Phatty u have to leep writing OS's and FF's!!!!!!!!!! Ur sooo amazing!!!!!!!!!! Okay I better stop before this get's way tooo long!!!!!!!!! ILY Phatty!!!!!! <3 Pssshhhhhtttttttttttt<3


Edited by CT247 - 17 March 2011 at 10:39am

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Posted: 16 March 2011 at 11:36pm | IP Logged
wow!!
that was hot!

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